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fixes

Text fixes for trinkets being called drugs and a couple of text
corrections.
KevinSmarts 9 жил өмнө
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+ 1 - 1
locations/bedrPar

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ else
 
 	dynamic $d_read_book
 
-	if tovarL > 0:'You currently have <<tovarL>> grams of drugs. The maximum you can keep in your room is 30 grams.'
+	if tovarL > 0:'You currently have <<tovarL>> trinkets to sell at the station. The maximum you can carry with you is 30.'
 
 	if card > 0:
 		act 'Look at your deck of cards':gt 'card'

+ 1 - 1
locations/father

@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if TorgVokzalTimes>0 and YouCanGar=0:
 		'You ask your stepfather if it is okay for you to store some things in his garage.'
 		if father+dom>=80 or TouchedByFather=1:
 			YouCanGar=1
-			'Your stepfather reluctantly agrees to let you store some things in his garage. You can hide some of your drugs there now.'
+			'Your stepfather reluctantly agrees to let you store some things in his garage. You can hide some of your trinkets there now.'
 		else
 			'Your stepfather shook his head and said "Sorry <<$nickname>>. The garage already has more stuff in it than I would like, there''s simply no room."'
 		end

+ 7 - 7
locations/gargazel

@@ -27,36 +27,36 @@ if father_go=1 and hour>=20 and hour<21:
 end
 
 if YouCanGar > 0:
-	'You have stored <<GarTorgItem>> grams of drugs in the garage currently. Not wanting your stepfather to find it, you don''t think you can get away with storing more than 100 grams in various hiding places in the garage without him finding out. The garage is not very easily accessible; if you want to sell the drugs, you will have to bring it back home first.'
+	'You have stored <<GarTorgItem>> trinkets in the garage currently. Your stepfather allowed you to store some things in his garage but doesn''t want you taking up all his space, he has allowed you to store up to 100 trinkets here. The garage is not very easily accessible; if you want to sell the trinkets at the station, you will have to bring them back home first.'
 
 	if tovarL >= 30:
-		'You already have too much stored at home and do not have any more hiding spots. You can''t bring home more, someone might find it.'
+		'You already have too much stored at home and do not have any more space.'
 	elseif tovarL < 30:
 		perenGarTov = 30-tovarL
-		'You can bring <<perenGarTov>> grams home and hide it somewhere there.'
+		'You can bring <<perenGarTov>> trinkets home and store them somewhere, until you have time to collect and sell them at the train station.'
 
 		if GarTorgItem > 0:
 			if GarTorgItem >= perenGarTov:
-				act 'Move <<perenGarTov>> grams to your home':
+				act 'Move <<perenGarTov>> trinkets to your home':
 					cls
 					minut += 60
 					tovarL += perenGarTov
 					GarTorgItem -= perenGarTov
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You spend an hour gathering your drugs from various hiding spots, bringing it home and hiding it there.'
+					'You spend an hour gathering your trinkets from various places, bringing them home and hiding them there.'
 
 					act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 
 			if GarTorgItem < perenGarTov:
-				act 'Collect <<GarTorgItem>> grams to take with you':
+				act 'Collect <<GarTorgItem>> trinkets to take with you':
 					cls
 					minut += 30
 					tovarL += GarTorgItem
 					GarTorgItem = 0
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You spend half an hour gathering your drugs from various hiding spots.'
+					'You spend half an hour gathering your trinkets from various places in the garage, putting them in a bag so you can go sell them at the station.'
 
 					act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 				end

+ 1 - 1
locations/glake

@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if temper >= 20 and month>=5 and month<=9 and hour>=6 and hour<=20:
 	end
 end	
 
-act'Go to the nudist beach':gt'gLakeNude'
+act'Go to the secluded beach':gt'gLakeNude'
 
 !winter
 if month = 12 or month = 1 or month = 2:

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool2

@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 		if rand(1,6) = 1 and tanga = 1 and vagina > 12 and mesec <= 0:
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/uroc/boysex_tualet.jpg"></center>'
 			'When you enter the class, you feel someone moving up behind you and pulling up your skirt. Then you feel their hand pawing at your panty-clad ass. When you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there: all looking in different directions inconspicuously, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you.'
-			gt 'gschool3', 'rand_scoolboy'
+			act 'Identify the perpetrator':gt 'gschool3', 'rand_scoolboy'
 		end
 		act 'Go to afternoon lessons': gt 'gschool2', 'afternoon'
 	end

+ 1 - 1
locations/korrPar

@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ if blockBedrPar = 0:
 	end
 end
 
-act 'Go to my parents'' room':gt 'bedrPar2'
+act 'Go to your parents'' room':gt 'bedrPar2'
 act 'Go to the living room':gt 'sitrPar'
 act 'Go to the bathroom':gt 'vanrPar'
 act 'Go to the kitchen':gt 'kuhrPar'

+ 2 - 2
locations/krutishi

@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ if grupTipe[numnpc] = 3:
 	elseif npcPol[numnpc] = 0 and hapri > 0 and $loc = 'gdkin' and grupNPC[numnpc] >= 40:
 		if glamur > 0 or ski > 0:
 			cla
-			'<<$npcName[numnpc]>> - Can dance?'
+			'<<$npcName[numnpc]>> - Care for a dance?'
 
 			act 'Dance':
 				cls
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if grupTipe[numnpc] = 3:
 				if numnpc = 1:Mud = totminut + 120
 
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You danced to the old hit the dance floor with a guy.'
+				'He takes you by the hand and leads you onto the dance floor, an old classic is playing and you dance together.'
 
 				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka