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      locations/gopsex
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      locations/lesbidomhouse
  3. 99 92
      locations/lesbimistress
  4. 102 204
      locations/party_girls
  5. 178 178
      locations/pod_ezd

+ 120 - 105
locations/gopsex

@@ -78,33 +78,10 @@ npc_orgasm_txt = rand(1,5)
 		'<<$npc_orgasm_txt>>'
 	end
 }
+
 !Text orgasm years:
-horny_orgasm_text = RAND(0,11)
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 0:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You are stronger than you asked for <<$gop_sextext1>>, I am trying to finish.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 1:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You started quickly podmahivat, I am trying to finish.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 2:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You were at the peak of orgasm, asked to push deeper dick.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 3:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You tried to finish, We asked what would have become <<$gop_sextext1>> faster.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 4:$horny_orgasm_text = 'Do you want to finish strong, They began to try to beat podmahivat.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 5:$horny_orgasm_text = 'Would you like to finish, They began to actively nasazhivatsya on dick.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 6:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You tried to finish, We began to ask a partner to accelerate.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 7:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You asked <<$gop_sextext1>> You tougher.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 8:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You asked for you to handle tougher, I am trying to finish.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 9:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You prayed for a partner that would he <<$gop_sextext1>> you stronger.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 10:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You yelled obscenities, You say what you promiscuous slut, podzadorilo partner and trying to finish.'
-	if horny_orgasm_text = 11:$horny_orgasm_text = 'You are strongly overexcited and want to finish. I implore you to actively partner <<$gop_sextext1>>.'
-orgasm_text = RAND(0,11)
-	if orgasm_text = 0:$orgasm_text = 'Overexcitation you moaned loudly and finished.'
-	if orgasm_text = 1:$orgasm_text = 'Your body began to shake violently and you finished.'
-	if orgasm_text = 2:$orgasm_text = 'From your mouth broke out a loud groan, and at this moment you are caught orgasm.'
-	if orgasm_text = 3:$orgasm_text = 'You huddled in convulsions and began to finish.'
-	if orgasm_text = 4:$orgasm_text = 'You excitedly breathed and soon finished.'
-	if orgasm_text = 5:$orgasm_text = 'On the skillful your partner, You embraced strong orgasm.'
-	if orgasm_text = 6:$orgasm_text = 'From feelings overwhelm you, you violently ended.'
-	if orgasm_text = 7:$orgasm_text = 'You managed to catch the strongest orgasm, You shook a couple of minutes.'
-	if orgasm_text = 8:$orgasm_text = 'Have you finished, experienced an incredible feeling.'
-	if orgasm_text = 9:$orgasm_text = 'You moaned loudly and obkonchalsya by skillful actions of your partner.'
-	if orgasm_text = 10:$orgasm_text = 'Then the room nanoWell lnilasenskim cryom. You are inonchaDo grouo, Nickogo ne Articleesnyayas.'
-	if orgasm_text = 11:$orgasm_text = 'The abundance of surging emotions you with a loud groan finished.'	
+
+
 !orgasm years:
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gg_sex_orgasm':
@@ -114,27 +91,71 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gg_sex_orgasm':
 		manna = manna - 10
 		willpower = willpower - 10
 		'<font color = red><b>You have monthly and while yet a member of the rams you, vaginal blood flows slowly.</b></font>'
-	elseif mesec <= 0 and horny >=50:
-		'<<$horny_orgasm_text>>'
-		if horny >=70:
+	elseif mesec <= 0 and horny >= 50:
+		horny_orgasm_text = RAND(0,11)
+		if horny_orgasm_text = 0:
+			'Frustrated, you say, "Fuck me softly, I''m close to having an orgasm."'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 1:
+			'You started quickly podmahivat, I am trying to finish.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 2:
+			'You were at the peak of orgasm, asked to push deeper dick.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 3:
+			'You are try to orgasm, but he is going too slow and you are finding it hard to focus.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 4:
+			'Do you want to finish strong, They began to try to beat podmahivat.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 5:
+			'Would you like to finish, They began to actively nasazhivatsya on dick.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 6:
+			'You tried to finish, We began to ask a partner to accelerate.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 7:
+			'You ask him to fuck you harder.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 8:
+			'You asked for you to handle tougher, I am trying to finish.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 9:
+			'You pray for your partner to fuck you harder.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 10:
+			'You yelled obscenities, You say what you promiscuous slut, podzadorilo partner and trying to finish.'
+		elseif horny_orgasm_text = 11:
+			'You are strongly overexcited and want to finish. You implore your partner to fuck you more actively.'
+		end
+		if horny >= 70:
 			orgasm += 1
 			horny = 0
 			manna += 25
-			willpower +=10
+			willpower += 10
 			hapri = 0
-			'<<$orgasm_text>>'
+			orgasm_text = RAND(0,11)
+			if orgasm_text = 0:
+				'Overexcitation you moaned loudly and finished.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 1:
+				'Your body began to shake violently and you finished.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 2:
+				'From your mouth broke out a loud groan, and at this moment you are caught orgasm.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 3:
+				'You huddled in convulsions and began to finish.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 4:
+				'You excitedly breathed and soon finished.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 5:
+				'On the skillful your partner, You embraced strong orgasm.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 6:
+				'From feelings overwhelm you, you violently ended.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 7:
+				'You managed to catch the strongest orgasm, You shook a couple of minutes.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 8:
+				'Have you finished, experienced an incredible feeling.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 9:
+				'You moaned loudly and obkonchalsya by skillful actions of your partner.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 10:
+				'Then the room nanoWell lnilasenskim cryom. You are inonchaDo grouo, Nickogo ne Articleesnyayas.'
+			elseif orgasm_text = 11:
+				'The abundance of surging emotions you with a loud groan finished.'
+			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 !masturbation years(when spying):
 if $ARGS[0] = 'masturb_gg':
-
-rnd_masturb_text = rand(1,3)
-	if rnd_masturb_text = 1:$rnd_masturb_text = 'You this picture of a little excited, you have got a hand into her panties and began to pull at the clitoris.'
-	if rnd_masturb_text = 2:$rnd_masturb_text = 'You are greatly excited by what he saw, and you wanted to take the stress. Running his hand in his pants, you started to rub her pussy.'
-	if rnd_masturb_text = 3:$rnd_masturb_text = 'Watching you`re really excited, lowered his pants, put his hand into her panties began to masturbate'
-
 	if mesec > 0:
 		!periods, orgasm is not possible
 		horny = 0
@@ -143,7 +164,16 @@ rnd_masturb_text = rand(1,3)
 		'<font color = red><b>You this picture of a little excited, but since you do not get monthly masturbate...</b></font>'
 	elseif mesec <= 0:
 		!no monthly, orgasm is possible
-		if horny >=50:'<br><<$rnd_masturb_text>>'
+		if horny >=50:
+			rnd_masturb_text = rand(1,3)
+			if rnd_masturb_text = 1:
+				'You this picture of a little excited, you have got a hand into her panties and began to pull at the clitoris.'
+			elseif rnd_masturb_text = 2:
+				'You are greatly excited by what he saw, and you wanted to take the stress. Running his hand in his pants, you started to rub her pussy.'
+			elseif rnd_masturb_text = 3:
+				'Watching you`re really excited, lowered his pants, put his hand into her panties began to masturbate'
+			end
+		end
 		if horny >=60:'Your excitement increased, you have to quickly start rubbing her pussy, deeper poking fingers, pull at the clitoris.'
 		if horny >=70:
 			orgasm += 1
@@ -647,7 +677,7 @@ poza_txt = RAND(0,17)
 !=============!
 !Cooney:
 $text_sex_cun = {
-txt_sex_cun = RAND(0,5)
+	txt_sex_cun = RAND(0,5)
 	if txt_sex_cun = 0:$txt_sex_cun = 'You put his hand into his hair and pulled his head down. He kissed your pussy.
 	You are more forward thrust out his pussy, and <<$gopsex_name_npc>> She fell to her lips.
 	- You know, it you beautiful.
@@ -741,7 +771,7 @@ txt_sex_bjt = RAND(0,2)
 !-------------------------	
 !cancer pussy
 $text_sex_doggy = {
-txt_sex_doggy = RAND(0,6)
+	txt_sex_doggy = RAND(0,6)
 	if txt_sex_doggy = 0:$txt_sex_doggy = '<<$gopsex_name_npc>> I was delighted with you. He jumped up, I put your cancer, She pulled up her skirt, open your ass prilesnuyu, and thrust member in the pussy from behind. 
 	You would not expect such drastic action, However, he fucked you ten minutes, almost without reducing the pace, occasionally stopping, to take a breath. 
 	You thought, he here-Now out of steam, but it turned out to be tougher, than expected. The last five minutes you forget, where you are, and shouted in all throat. 
@@ -778,7 +808,7 @@ txt_sex_doggy = RAND(0,6)
 !-------------------------	
 !cancer in the ass
 $text_sex_doggy_anal = {
-txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
+	txt_sex_doggy_anal = RAND(0,8)
 	if txt_sex_doggy_anal = 0:$txt_sex_doggy_anal = '<<$gopsex_name_npc>> I put a dick to your anus and drove it into the narrow hole with one push on the eggs. You had only to twitch and «oyknut», when his big dick pierced your ass.
 	After a couple of minutes, you`re used to and started to moan: - Mmm... daaaaa... gluuuuubzhe... mmmm...
 	He grabbed you by the waist and began to peck, increasing the tempo. You diligently podmahivat, I am wanting to get even deeper in his gun. You were incredibly excited and happy to give him.'
@@ -1048,30 +1078,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex':
 		'<font color = red><b>You tell them that you are saving her virginity, so no pussy for them.</b></font>'
 	end
 
-	act 'Masturbate': dynamic $shgopsex_hj
-	act 'In the mouth': dynamic $shgopsex_bj
+	act 'Masturbate': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_hj'
+	act 'In the mouth': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_bj'
 	if throat >= 20:
-		act 'Deep in her mouth': dynamic $shgopsex_throat
+		act 'Deep in her mouth': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_throat'
 	end
 	if mesec <=0 and vagina >=1:
-		act 'The pussy': dynamic $shgopsex_vag
+		act 'The pussy': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_vag'
 	end
-	act 'In the ass': dynamic $shgopsex_anal
-	act 'Pomatsat chest': dynamic $shgopsex_tits
+	act 'In the ass': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_anal'
+	act 'Pomatsat chest': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_tits'
 	if mesec <=0:
-		act 'Mutual affection': dynamic $shgopsex_69
-		act 'Get lick': dynamic $shgopsex_lick
+		act 'Mutual affection': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_69'
+		act 'Get lick': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_lick'
 	end	
 	if dom >= 5: 
 		act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 	end
 end
 !ending sex
-$shgopsex_end = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_end':
 	cla
 	gs'stat'
-	!'<<shgopsex_count>>'
-	!if wanker, sucking, fucked tits cum in: mouth, face or body
 	if sh_bjandhj_cum >=1:
 		act 'In the mouth': dynamic $shgopsex_swallow
 		act 'On the face': dynamic $shgopsex_cumface
@@ -1084,11 +1112,11 @@ $shgopsex_end = {
 		act 'The pussy': dynamic $shgopsex_cumvag
 		act 'In the ass': dynamic $shgopsex_cumanal
 	end
-}
+end
 
 !===============================================================!
 !lick years
-$shgopsex_lick = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_lick':
 	cls
 	minut += 1
 	gs'stat'
@@ -1124,11 +1152,10 @@ $shgopsex_lick = {
 	'- And what`s wrong with that?, zapadlo you do me nicely?'
 	'- Yes, I zapadlo davalki pussy licking, dick knows how many there are today visited cocks... So go ahead, do not fuck my brain, substitute your whorish holes, I am going to fuck!'
 	end
-	act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-	!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
-}
+	act 'Sex selection': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
+end
 !mutual affection, posture 69
-$shgopsex_69 = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_69':
 	cls
 	minut += 1
 	gs'stat'
@@ -1147,17 +1174,16 @@ $shgopsex_69 = {
 			gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 			dynamic $npc_orgasm
 			if shgopsex_count > 0:
-				act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-				!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
+				act 'Sex selection': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
 			elseif shgopsex_count = 0:
-				dynamic $shgopsex_end
+				gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 			end
 		end		
 	elseif $gopsex_n_npc = 0:
 		'- "No, <<$gop_name_gg>> lick pussy, I will not"'
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
 	end
-}
+end
 !===============================================================!
 !sucking boobs
 $shgopsex_eattits = {
@@ -1184,14 +1210,14 @@ $shgopsex_fucktits = {
 	'<<$gopsex_name_npc>> He wants to drive your dick between boobs, and you do not mind.'
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		!act 'Finish': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 !play with breasts
-$shgopsex_tits= {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_tits':
 	cls
 	horny += 5
 	minut += ''+rand(1,4)+''
@@ -1203,10 +1229,10 @@ $shgopsex_tits= {
 	act 'Sucking boobs': dynamic $shgopsex_eattits
 	act 'To urge member between boobs': dynamic $shgopsex_fucktits
 	act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-}
+end
 !===============================================================!
 !work with your hands
-$shgopsex_hj = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_hj':
 	cls
 	horny += 5
 	minut += ''+rand(3,7)+''
@@ -1218,16 +1244,15 @@ $shgopsex_hj = {
 	dynamic $text_sex_hj
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		act 'Sex selection': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
-}
+end
 !===============================================================!
 !suck
-$shgopsex_bj = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_bj':
 	cls
 	bj +=1
 	horny += 10
@@ -1242,15 +1267,14 @@ $shgopsex_bj = {
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
-}
+end
 
 !deep in her mouth
-$shgopsex_throat = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_throat':
 	cls
 	throat += 1
 	horny += 10
@@ -1264,17 +1288,16 @@ $shgopsex_throat = {
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
-}
+end
 
 !vagina!
 !===============================================================!
 !vagina!
-$shgopsex_vag = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_vag':
 	cls
 	horny += 10
 	sex += 1
@@ -1293,12 +1316,11 @@ $shgopsex_vag = {
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_vag2
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_vag3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
-}
+end
 $shgopsex_vag1 = {
 	cls
 	horny += 10
@@ -1311,14 +1333,13 @@ $shgopsex_vag1 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_vag
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_vag'
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_vag2
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_vag3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 $shgopsex_vag2 = {
@@ -1333,14 +1354,13 @@ $shgopsex_vag2 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_vag
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_vag'
 		act 'Change position: missionary': dynamic $shgopsex_vag1
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_vag3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 $shgopsex_vag3 = {
@@ -1355,20 +1375,19 @@ $shgopsex_vag3 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_vag
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_vag'
 		act 'Change position: missionary': dynamic $shgopsex_vag1
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_vag2
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 !anal!
 !===============================================================!
 !anal!
-$shgopsex_anal = {
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_anal':
 	cls
 	horny += 5
 	minut += ''+rand(3,7)+''
@@ -1391,12 +1410,11 @@ $shgopsex_anal = {
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_anal2
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_anal3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
-}
+end
 $shgopsex_anal1 = {
 	cls
 	horny += 5
@@ -1414,14 +1432,13 @@ $shgopsex_anal1 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_anal
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_anal'
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_anal2
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_anal3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 $shgopsex_anal2 = {
@@ -1441,14 +1458,13 @@ $shgopsex_anal2 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_anal
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_anal'
 		act 'Change position: missionary': dynamic $shgopsex_anal1
 		act 'Change position: sideways': dynamic $shgopsex_anal3
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 $shgopsex_anal3 = {
@@ -1468,14 +1484,13 @@ $shgopsex_anal3 = {
 	gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'
 	dynamic $npc_orgasm
 	if shgopsex_count > 0:
-		act 'Change position: cancer': dynamic $shgopsex_anal
+		act 'Change position: cancer': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_anal'
 		act 'Change position: missionary': dynamic $shgopsex_anal1
 		act 'Change position: horsewoman': dynamic $shgopsex_anal2
 		act 'Sex selection': gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex'
-		!act 'Finish': dynamic $shgopsex_end
 	end	
 	if shgopsex_count = 0:
-		dynamic $shgopsex_end
+		gs 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_end'
 	end
 }
 

+ 2 - 0
locations/lesbidomhouse

@@ -577,6 +577,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW4':
 					minut += 4
 					horny += 10
 					subdom = 2
+					lesbiQW = 2
 					dom += 2
 					gs'stat'
 					
@@ -595,6 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW4':
 					'Natalya says nothing, but nods eagerly. There''s a certain look of desperation in her eyes.'
 					'"I will decide on what to do with you, based on what happens during my next visit. So... dazzle me." You make it sound firm, but benevolent.'
 					'Having said your piece, you walk to the hallway and put your clothes back on there, probably for the last time. Next time you''re here things will be very, very different.'
+
 					act '"Leave Natalya''s apartment"':gt'street'
 				end
 			end

+ 99 - 92
locations/lesbimistress

@@ -1,6 +1,14 @@
 # lesbimistress
+!'severe_n', 'punish_n', 'neutral_n', 'treat_n', 'amazing_n'
+!MistressObedience 1-5
+!MistressAdoration 0-100
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
+	if mistressqwest > 12:
+		gt 'lesbimistress', 'gholefinish'
+	elseif mistressqwest > 0:
+		gt 'lesbimistress', 'gholepunish'
+	end
 	if mistresscontract <= 0:
 		gt 'lesbimistress', 'renewal'
 	else
@@ -124,9 +132,75 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	end
 end
 
-!'severe_n', 'punish_n', 'neutral_n', 'treat_n', 'amazing_n'
-!MistressObedience 1-5
-!MistressAdoration 0-100
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gholefinish':
+	minut += 5
+	horny += 20
+	MistressAdoration += 2
+	MistressObedience += 2
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
+	'It''s been a little while since you went to see Mistress, but you finally serviced twelve cocks in the gloryhole like she demanded. A bit nervously you step through the doorway, and find Mistress already waiting for you by the entrance.'
+	'You meekly smile at her, and after thinking for a second, you say: "I umm... I did as you asked, Mistress."'
+	'"I know", Mistress smiles proudly at you. She laughs at your surprised expression and continues: "What, you thought I wouldn''t keep tabs on my precious slave girl? My precious little slave girl, out on her quest to tame large cocks in the wild, just to please her Mistress?"'
+	'She looks at dreamily at you for a second. "Peter told me all about you. You''re such a good girl!" Mistress beams at you. "Come on, good girl... why don''t you show your Mistress how much you love her?"'
+
+	act 'Show her':
+		cla
+		*clr
+		mistressqwest = 0
+		minut += 15
+		horny += 30
+		lesbian += 1
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img src="images/picQW/Mistress/sub13.jpg"></center>'
+		'You immediately drop to your knees and crawl towards Mistress, and ask her with a begging look: "Mistress, may I please lick your pussy to show you how much I love you?"'
+		'Mistress smiles sweetly at you and hikes up her skirt: "Yes you may, darling."'
+		'Her snatch is soaked, and you eagerly service Mistress with your mouth. Those dicks were okay, even pleasant at times... but this is where you belong. Between your Mistress'' legs, licking her cunt as if your life depended on it. Mistress orgasms in no time at all, and pushes your face away once she catches her breath again.'
+		'"You haven''t lost your touch, that was amazing..." she gasps. "You may go now, slave. But do come back soon. I have a lot of fun things planned for us! One of the things Peter promised me is letting me borrow one of his playthings. If you''re good, maybe I''ll let you play with her too!"'
+
+		act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gholepunish':
+	minut += 5
+	MistressAdoration -= 3
+	MistressObedience -= 2
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
+	'Mistress looks surprised to see you when she opens the door, but allows you to come in. She raises her eyebrow and asks: "Did you do what I told you to do?"'
+	'You can''t lie to your Mistress. You shake your head apologetically while you look at the ground, not daring to look her in the eye. "No, Mistress", you whisper.'
+	'Mistress puts her hand under your chin and makes you look up, locking her piercing gaze onto your eyes. She asks angrily: "Was I not clear? Why are you here, slave?"'
+	'"I''m sorry Mistress, I wi-" you sniffle, tears forming in your eyes. This was a huge mistake.'
+	'"You stupid whore!" Mistress shouts, and slaps you in the face. "I told you not to come back until you suck twelve cocks! Take off your damn clothes, I''ll teach you a lesson you will never forget!"'
+	
+	act 'Further':
+		cla
+		*clr
+		horny = 0
+		manna = 0
+		sub += 5
+		health = 20
+		minut += 40
+		spank += 1
+		spanked += 3
+		spankedtime = totminut
+		fingal = 1
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img src="images/picQW/Mistress/sub44.jpg"></center>'
+		'Mistress hasn''t even lifted a finger yet, and you''re already crying. You shouldn''t have come here before finishing your assignment, that was so stupid!'
+		'Once you take off your clothes, Mistress grabs you roughly by the hair and throws you down on the floor in the living room, where she begins to whip you with a belt.'
+		'She''s not holding back at all. She keeps beating and beating you, besides herself with rage. Between slaps she mutters through her teeth things about humility and obedience, and that she really thought you were better than this.'
+		'After half an hour, she''s finally too tired to keep beating you, and tells you to get up.'
+		'You''ve been crying and screaming this whole time, and feel exhausted. Nevertheless, you try to get up to your feet as quickly as you can despite your shaky legs, and don''t object when Mistress grabs you by the hair again and guides you back to the front door.'
+		'"Put those on and leave, slave", she says nodding at your clothes. "Your assignment still stands. Do not disappoint me again!"'
+		'Mistress walks off before you can say anything. You wallow in self-pity while you carefully put your clothes back on, wincing whenever the fabric touches one of the countless welts on your body.'
+
+		act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
+	end
+end
+
+
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'severe_1':
 	mistsevere[1] = 1
@@ -963,95 +1037,28 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_7':
 	mistneutral[7] = 1
-	if mistressqwest = 0:
-		minut += 5
-		horny += 20
-		mistressqwest = 1
-		gs'stat'
-		'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mistress greets you when you enter the hallway. She''s wearing her everyday attire today; you haven''t seen her like this in a while.'
-		'She has you undress, making you follow her into the living room once you''re done.'
-		'"I''m sorry Madam, this will only take a minute", she says... but not to you. Mistress has another guest you failed to notice until now. It''s a slightly older woman, fully dressed in leather. You''re fairly sure you''ve seen her before.'
-		'When you meekly wave at the other woman, she barely acknowledges you but gives you an amused little smirk. She has definitely seen <b>you</b> before.'
-		'Mistress waits impatiently until you assume a proper position befitting a slave, before she continues.'
-		'"So, slave... you remember the sex shop in the city center, yes? Your little cocksucking adventure?" she asks, raising an eyebrow. Then she laughs: "People have been asking for you non-stop there, and Peter begged me to have you return. Business had never been better for him."'
-		'You blush while Mistress praises the first time you sucked twenty dicks there, right in front of her guest.'
-		'Mistress continues: "He made me a good offer, so... you''re going back there. I told him you will service twelve cocks this time. He begged for more, but I gave him twelve. I don''t want to go without you for too long."'
-		'Your face is a deep red by now. She''s talking about you pleasing more dicks with your mouth... in front of this stranger! As if that''s a regular everyday thing for you! This is so embarrassing!'
-		'Still, you nod despite yourself. If that''s what Mistress wants, you will do it.'
-		'Mistress continues undisturbed: "Same deal as before. Enter one of the booths there and service twelve dicks in the gloryhole. You can take as long as you need, but you''re not welcome here until you finish your task. And you don''t want to keep me waiting too long... do you?"'
-		'She must be testing your devotion to her! You really do want to come back and keep doing what you were doing.'
-		'You shake your head: "N-no Mistress, I''ll do it. I''ll do it as soon as I can."'
-		'Mistress gives you a confident nod and reassures you: "I know you''ll make me proud, slave. Come, I''ll let you out."'
-		'"Good luck, slave!" the other woman grins, as you walk by her on your way out. Damn, she overheard everything... what must she be thinking of you?'
-		
-		act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'	
-	elseif mistressqwest > 12:
-		minut += 5
-		horny += 20
-		MistressAdoration += 2
-		MistressObedience += 2
-		gs'stat'
-		'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-		'It''s been a little while since you went to see Mistress, but you finally serviced twelve cocks in the gloryhole like she demanded. A bit nervously you step through the doorway, and find Mistress already waiting for you by the entrance.'
-		'You meekly smile at her, and after thinking for a second, you say: "I umm... I did as you asked, Mistress."'
-		'"I know", Mistress smiles proudly at you. She laughs at your surprised expression and continues: "What, you thought I wouldn''t keep tabs on my precious slave girl? My precious little slave girl, out on her quest to tame large cocks in the wild, just to please her Mistress?"'
-		'She looks at dreamily at you for a second. "Peter told me all about you. You''re such a good girl!" Mistress beams at you. "Come on, good girl... why don''t you show your Mistress how much you love her?"'
-		
-		act 'Show her':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			mistressqwest = 0
-			lesbiQW = 11
-			minut += 15
-			horny += 30
-			lesbian += 1
-			gs'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/picQW/Mistress/sub13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You immediately drop to your knees and crawl towards Mistress, and ask her with a begging look: "Mistress, may I please lick your pussy to show you how much I love you?"'
-			'Mistress smiles sweetly at you and hikes up her skirt: "Yes you may, darling."'
-			'Her snatch is soaked, and you eagerly service Mistress with your mouth. Those dicks were okay, even pleasant at times... but this is where you belong. Between your Mistress'' legs, licking her cunt as if your life depended on it. Mistress orgasms in no time at all, and pushes your face away once she catches her breath again.'
-			'"You haven''t lost your touch, that was amazing..." she gasps. "You may go now, slave. But do come back soon. I have a lot of fun things planned for us! One of the things Peter promised me is letting me borrow one of his playthings. If you''re good, maybe I''ll let you play with her too!"'
-
-			act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
-		end
-	else
-		minut += 5
-		MistressAdoration -= 3
-		MistressObedience -= 2
-		gs'stat'
-		'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mistress looks surprised to see you when she opens the door, but allows you to come in. She raises her eyebrow and asks: "Did you do what I told you to do?"'
-		'You can''t lie to your Mistress. You shake your head apologetically while you look at the ground, not daring to look her in the eye. "No, Mistress", you whisper.'
-		'Mistress puts her hand under your chin and makes you look up, locking her piercing gaze onto your eyes. She asks angrily: "Was I not clear? Why are you here, slave?"'
-		'"I''m sorry Mistress, I wi-" you sniffle, tears forming in your eyes. This was a huge mistake.'
-		'"You stupid whore!" Mistress shouts, and slaps you in the face. "I told you not to come back until you suck twelve cocks! Take off your damn clothes, I''ll teach you a lesson you will never forget!"'
-		
-		act 'Further':
-			cla
-			*clr
-			horny = 0
-			manna = 0
-			sub += 5
-			health = 20
-			minut += 40
-			spank += 1
-			spanked += 3
-			spankedtime = totminut
-			fingal = 1
-			gs'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/picQW/Mistress/sub44.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mistress hasn''t even lifted a finger yet, and you''re already crying. You shouldn''t have come here before finishing your assignment, that was so stupid!'
-			'Once you take off your clothes, Mistress grabs you roughly by the hair and throws you down on the floor in the living room, where she begins to whip you with a belt.'
-			'She''s not holding back at all. She keeps beating and beating you, besides herself with rage. Between slaps she mutters through her teeth things about humility and obedience, and that she really thought you were better than this.'
-			'After half an hour, she''s finally too tired to keep beating you, and tells you to get up.'
-			'You''ve been crying and screaming this whole time, and feel exhausted. Nevertheless, you try to get up to your feet as quickly as you can despite your shaky legs, and don''t object when Mistress grabs you by the hair again and guides you back to the front door.'
-			'"Put those on and leave, slave", she says nodding at your clothes. "Your assignment still stands. Do not disappoint me again!"'
-			'Mistress walks off before you can say anything. You wallow in self-pity while you carefully put your clothes back on, wincing whenever the fabric touches one of the countless welts on your body.'
-
-			act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
-		end
-	end
+	minut += 5
+	horny += 20
+	mistressqwest = 1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/picQW/lesbi.jpg"></center>'
+	'Mistress greets you when you enter the hallway. She''s wearing her everyday attire today; you haven''t seen her like this in a while.'
+	'She has you undress, making you follow her into the living room once you''re done.'
+	'"I''m sorry Madam, this will only take a minute", she says... but not to you. Mistress has another guest you failed to notice until now. It''s a slightly older woman, fully dressed in leather. You''re fairly sure you''ve seen her before.'
+	'When you meekly wave at the other woman, she barely acknowledges you but gives you an amused little smirk. She has definitely seen <b>you</b> before.'
+	'Mistress waits impatiently until you assume a proper position befitting a slave, before she continues.'
+	'"So, slave... you remember the sex shop in the city center, yes? Your little cocksucking adventure?" she asks, raising an eyebrow. Then she laughs: "People have been asking for you non-stop there, and Peter begged me to have you return. Business had never been better for him."'
+	'You blush while Mistress praises the first time you sucked twenty dicks there, right in front of her guest.'
+	'Mistress continues: "He made me a good offer, so... you''re going back there. I told him you will service twelve cocks this time. He begged for more, but I gave him twelve. I don''t want to go without you for too long."'
+	'Your face is a deep red by now. She''s talking about you pleasing more dicks with your mouth... in front of this stranger! As if that''s a regular everyday thing for you! This is so embarrassing!'
+	'Still, you nod despite yourself. If that''s what Mistress wants, you will do it.'
+	'Mistress continues undisturbed: "Same deal as before. Enter one of the booths there and service twelve dicks in the gloryhole. You can take as long as you need, but you''re not welcome here until you finish your task. And you don''t want to keep me waiting too long... do you?"'
+	'She must be testing your devotion to her! You really do want to come back and keep doing what you were doing.'
+	'You shake your head: "N-no Mistress, I''ll do it. I''ll do it as soon as I can."'
+	'Mistress gives you a confident nod and reassures you: "I know you''ll make me proud, slave. Come, I''ll let you out."'
+	'"Good luck, slave!" the other woman grins, as you walk by her on your way out. Damn, she overheard everything... what must she be thinking of you?'
+	
+	act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_8':

+ 102 - 204
locations/party_girls

@@ -7,88 +7,58 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
 	i = rand(1,18)
 	if i = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I am dating a man, parted. Now, the biggest fear of life is, that I will not find the same vulgarity as it.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I am dating a divorced man. He is very kinky and I''m afraid I can not keep up with it.'
 	elseif i = 2:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I have a very childish voice , and I `ll, as a Japanese schoolgirl. The guy says,, what does he like, but I`m still a terrible complex.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I have a very childish voice. I sound like a Japanese schoolgirl. The guy I''m dating says he likes it, but I''m still insecure about it."'
 	elseif i = 3:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I am dating a man, all perfectly, communication, sex, We can discuss with him everything.. 
-		So he sent me a video, where he was fingering my photo... I do not want it anymore(( I remember, it fills my face on a photo... brrrr'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I am dating a perfect man. Everything is great. The communication between us, the sex,...I can discuss everything with him...But now he sent me a video, where he cums on a photo of me. The whole photo was covered in his cum... brrrr. Now I don''t want him anymore."'
 	elseif i = 4:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I came home from a guy, knees red. Mom saw and seriously asks:
-		"That you so bitten by mosquitoes, allergy gone?" I `m nod, and ashamed)'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I came home from a guy with my knees all red. When my mom saw it she seriously asked, if it was mosquito bites or allergies. I just nodded ashamed."'
 	elseif i = 5:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		Week blowjob during menstruation - for wimps! Give us a week anal!!'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them says, "Blowjob week during menstruation is for wimps! I want anal week!!"'
 	elseif i = 6:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		A friend broke up with a girl,I asked to come,talk and soothe. I made him a blowjob in the car, He calmed called.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "A friend of mine broke up with a girl so I asked him to come and talk. I gave him a blowjob in the car to help him get over her."'
 	elseif i = 7:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		It feels, that virginity is not lost 2 years ago, and when told about it to my mother.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I felt so bad when I had to tell my mother that I lost my virginity over two years ago."'
 	elseif i = 8:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		After a day out with my boyfriend in bed, on the pillow remains his cologne :3 
-		In the evening, lying one, I embrace this same pillow and masturbating :3 Its godlike!'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "After spending a day with my boyfriend in bed, his pillow always smells of his cologne. When he is not here I hug the pillow and masturbate. It feels amazing!"'
 	elseif i = 9:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		Christ, how I adore, when during sex, my boy moans in my ear. 
-		His sighs - what`s this-incredible. I specifically I substitute my ear to his lips, to hear the sighs.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I love when, during sex, my boyfriend moans in my ear. His sighs really turn me on. I often hold my ear near his mouth on purpose just to hear him moan."'
 	elseif i = 10:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I like the wild, when I put the shorts Man.
-		From this I passionately excited. And starts to provide, I have it in all positions:3'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I like how men go wild, when I touch them through their shorts. It really excites me and I do it as often as I can."'
 	elseif i = 11:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		One and a half years living with an attractive neighbor through the wall. 
-		Constantly seducing me with your views. Terrible want it, But sex has not been. I`m afraid to go.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "Since one and a half years I have an attractive neighbor. I really want to fuck him and constantly try to seduce him with my outfits, but we haven''t had sex yet. I''m afraid he will move out soon.'
 	elseif i = 12:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		Strongly infuriates, when you feel the approaching orgasm, and then your favorite posture changes. And so all the time.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "It really infuriates me, when I feel close to orgasm and then the guy wants to change position. It happens to me all the time."'
 	elseif i = 13:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		Adore, When I caress cock, and finger massaging his ass.
-		Then I move the tongue in there and start licking greedily...'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "The guys really love it when I caress their cocks and use my fingers massaging their ass. Then I move the tongue in there and start licking greedily..."'
 	elseif i = 14:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I love to kiss with a loved during sex, grabbing his ass, clawing back, mrrr:3'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I love to passionately kiss during sex, grab the guys ass and claw his back, mrrr."'
 	elseif i = 15:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		Life is pain, when you wear out to such a degree Man,he does not let you to its members.
-		A he`s so sweet and so beckons, to get it in her mouth...'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "Life becomes a pain, when you wear a man out to such a degree, that he doesn''t want to have sex anymore. I love it when they almost beg you to wrap your lips around their cock..."'
 	elseif i = 16:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		I met a guy and immediately invited me to, So I agreed to.
-		Like all good, romance, We have kiss and undress each other, and saw his small penis , I broke down and laughed out loud.
-		That guy does not hurt, I sucked it quick, and toppled home, so the more we have not seen.'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "I met a guy once who immediately invited me to his home. I agreed and just like in every good affair we start kissing and undressing each other. But then I saw his small penis and broke down, laughing out loud. The guy didn''t seem hurt so I quickly sucked him off and went home. I haven''t seen him since."'
 	elseif i = 17:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		My childhood dream - to become an astronaut is not, and sleep with an astronaut.
-		Right in space, and experience the cosmic orgasm!'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "My childhood dream was to become an astronaut. Now I not only want to be one, but have sex with one too. Right there in space. I want to experience a cosmic orgasm!"'
 	elseif i = 18:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sit and chat cute, one of the girls says:
-		My former member was so big, as my whole hand.
-		At first it was strange to him fucking, but then I got used'
+		'You sit and chat with a couple of cute girls. One of them tells you, "My former boyfriend''s member was as big, as my whole arm. At first it felt strange fucking him, but then I got used to it."'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
@@ -101,10 +71,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke':
 	if girls_smoke = 0:
 		girls_smoke = 1
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_3_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'-Girls, See what I have. Stolen from worthless brother addict.
-		-nichrome Statement, yes you crazy, with interest said girls.
-		-So, you will long to stare at me like that , or have fun begin?'
-		act 'smoking Allowed':gt'party_girls','smoke'
+		'"Girls, look what I stole from my worthless, addicted brother.", one of the girls says, showing you two bags of marijuana. "So, do you want to keep staring at me, or do you want to have fun?"'
+		act 'Start smoking':gt'party_girls','smoke'
 		act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 	else
 		girls_smoke += 1
@@ -112,29 +80,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke':
 		horny += 30
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_3_' + rand(2,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'You poured into a bowl of marijuana, and filled with liquid bulbulyator. Then press a finger hole and burned, drawing in smoke.
-		After some time to relax and have embraced mild euphoria.'
-		act 'Kajfovat':
+		'You pour some of the marijuana into the bowl, and fill water into the bong. Then you press a finger on the hole while using a lighter to burn the weed, drawing in smoke. After some time you begin to relax and embrace the mild euphoria.'
+		act 'Chill':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_4_' + rand(1,7) + '.jpg"></center>'
 			i = rand(1,5)
 			if i = 1:
-				'For a moment, you are almost chopped off from the outside world. Your body has found the general state of calm and relaxation
-				Did you feel the feeling of relaxation and is going well,  comes the slight excitement aggravated sensation.'
+				'For a moment, you feel almost cut off from the outside world. Your body has found a general state of calm and relaxation. After a while the relaxing feeling goes away and you feel excitement wash over you.'
 			elseif i = 2:
-				'Almost instantly increased sensitivity to touch, sharpened vision, hearing and smell.
-				You hear the voices of others are much clearer, see <<$name>> much brighter and feel the whole range of odors.'
+				'Almost instantly you feel an increased sensitivity to touch as well as an enhanced vision, hearing and sense of smell. You hear the voices of others much clearer, see <<$name>> much brighter and feel the whole range of odors.'
 			elseif i = 3:
-				'You much marijuana acts, you lose the ability to sense of the passage of time, if everything stood still.
-				All speak very slowly and move, It seems a few minutes stretch, like a few hours...'
+				'When you feel the effect you lose all sense of time as if everything stands still. Everyone speaks and moves very slowly and it seems like minutes are stretched into hours...'
 			elseif i = 4:
-				'Everything seemed to go into oblivion, if you are ready to fly, You absorb the sense of feeling of unreality.
-				Your attention is greatly increased, of the field of view does not slip any detail.'
+				'You feel like you can fly, entering a state of nirvana. You absorb the feeling of unreality. Your attention to details is greatly increased, nothing can escape your view.'
 			elseif i = 5:
-				'Smoke in your head makes you positive emotional changes.
-				You are able to carelessness and relaxation, - happy, pleased, delighted, euphoric.'
+				'The smoke makes you feel good, letting you focus on positive emotions. You are able to feel all kinds of effects, - happy, pleased, delighted, euphoric.'
 			end
 			act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 		end
@@ -146,8 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_5_' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Grass you greatly affect, greatly improves mood and wildly aroused.
-	- Well girls, and we sit here and have fun begin?'
+	'The weed affects you greatly. It improves your mood and you become wildly aroused. "Well girls, why don''t we have some fun?"'
 	act 'Rejoice':
 		fun_rand = rand(1,3)
 		if fun_rand = 1:
@@ -155,19 +116,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_1_' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'With girls , you have decided to hold a contest for the best ass.
-			To call a couple of guys, They turned to him backwards, sticking out of their butts appraising glance.
-			Discouraged drunk guys, very impressed, it is difficult to make the only choice.'
-			if Rex_Love = 1:'You turned her ass right in front of Rex.'
-			act 'Vilani booty':
+			'You and the girls decide to have a contest for the best ass. You call over a couple of guys and stick out your butts for them to appraise. The drunk guys are all very impressed and it is difficult for them to settle on only one of the choices.'
+			if Rex_Love = 1:'You show off your ass right in front of Rex.'
+			act 'Shake your booty':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_1_' + rand(7,11) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'You seductive wag her ass.
-				It suits you ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'one boy','Rex') + ' and firmly compresses the buttocks in his palms.
-				-Boys,  I think I already know who the coolest ass.
-				So uncomplicated way you won the competition.'
+				'You seductively wag your ass. ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'One boy','Rex') + ' is standing right in front of you and you firmly press your buttocks in his palms. He exclaims, "Boys, I think I already know the winner!" You win the competition easily.'
 				act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 			end
 		elseif fun_rand = 2:
@@ -175,17 +131,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You become very curious to know and examine the chest each groomsmen.
-			With the girls laid bare and looked considering breast, estimating the size and shape, making each other compliments.'
+			'You become very curious and tell they girls it would be fun to compare your boobs. They agree and you all lift your shirts and look at each others breasts, estimating the size and shape, making each other compliments.'
 			act 'Further':
 				if rand(1,2) = 1:
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_6_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'As long as you show each other enthusiastically boobs, and burst into the room a couple of guys.
-					And the idea is born to evaluate the breast male hands, and you call them to his close.'
-					iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Guys fun matzah your boobs.','By Rex is right for you and gently squeezes your breasts in his hands.')
+					'You enthusiastically examine each others breasts, when a couple of guys burst into the room. You decide that the guys should evaluate your boobs with their hands and call them closer.'
+					iif(Rex_Love = 0,'The guys have fun touching your boobs.','Rex is right in front of you and gently squeezes your breasts with his hands.')
 					act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 					if horny > 50 and (rex>=80 or Rex_Love = 0):
 						act 'Moan':
@@ -194,10 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 							horny += 10
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_6_' + rand(6,7) + '.gif"></center>'
-							'petting ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Man','Rex') + ' brought much, you can not hold back the moans.
-							Noticing this, ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'guy','Rex') + ' More insistently began digging caress you and licking your nipples.
-							-Oh, baby, do you like, so I will continue.
-							Farther ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'guy','Rex') + ' I grabbed you by the waist...'
+							'Getting touched by ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'one of the guys','Rex') + ' you can''t help but to start moaning. When ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'the guy','Rex') + ' notices he begins to caress you even more insistently, grabbing your breasts firmly and licking your nipples. "Hey baby, if you like it so much, maybe we should go further."	Then ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'the guy','Rex') + ' grabs you by the waist...'
 							act 'Surrender':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
@@ -210,18 +161,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 								if rexSex = 0: rexSex = 1 & guy += 1
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_6_8.jpg"></center>'
-								'Put you on the penis and began to rhythmically fuck in front of the girls.
-								The girls cheered fervently you, filming happening on the phone...
-								-Come on <<$name>>, move your ass faster.
-								Inside the heavily swollen member, and you will soon realize that he is ready...'
-								act 'Come':
+								'You climb onto his cock and the two of you begin to rhythmically fuck in front of the others. The girls cheer you on fervently, filming everything on the phone..."Come on <<$name>>, move your ass faster." You feel his hard member inside of you, and soon realize that he is about to come...'
+								act 'Let him come on you':
 									cls
 									minut += 5
 									horny += 10
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_6_9.jpg"></center>'
-									iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Guy','Rex') + ' quickly pulled out a member and ends streaks on your chest and abdomen, and left the room.
-									The girls sat and fun you licked all the sperm from your body.'
+									iif(Rex_Love = 0,'The guy','Rex') + ' quickly pulls his dick out of you and finishes, leaving streaks of semen on your chest and abdomen, before he leaves the room. Afterwards the girls sit next to you and are having a lot of fun as they lick all the sperm off of your body.'
 									act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 								end
 							end
@@ -232,9 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 					minut += 5
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_7_' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'This fun with the girls you greatly fascinated.
-					One of the girls, could not resist, your hard nipples licked, gently sucking and teasing tongue.
-					Caresses you feel uneasy.'
+					'You are having fun and get very excited. One of the girls, can''t resist and starts to lick your erect nipples, gently sucking on them and teasing them with her tongue. You enjoy it, but feel a bit uneasy.'
 					act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 					if horny > 50:
 						act 'Moan':
@@ -247,12 +192,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 							gs'stat'
 							if rand(1,2) = 1:
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_7_6.jpg"></center>'
-								'Your girls moan spread more, in unison and began to lick your sweet holes.
-								From the double pleasure you will quickly finished.'
+								'You can''t help but start to moan and the girls quickly spread you legs an begin to lick your holes in unison. You quickly come from the sensation of having your every hole licked and caressed.'
 							else
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_7_7.jpg"></center>'
-								'Your girls moan spread more, and they laid you on the back, starting to caress your tongue.
-								The girls took turns kissing you and lick you pussy, quickly bringing to orgasm.'
+								'You start to moan and the girls quickly lay you down on your back an start to caress you with their tongues. They take turns kissing you and licking your pussy, quickly bringing you to orgasm.'
 							end
 							act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 						end
@@ -264,19 +207,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fun':
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_8_' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'You guys called, I decided to check, whether the member be so great.
-			Excite your kids with a stunning view of not difficult.'
-			iif(reksMeet = 1,'You have a member of the Rex and compared it with the hand.','One of the persistent guys came up to you and you have compared his penis with his hand.')
+			'You call in the guys and announce that you and the girls want to check out the contents of their pants. Excitedly they unzip their pants and pull out their dicks.'
+			iif(reksMeet = 1,'You have Rex'' member in front of you and compare it with your arm.','One of the more persistent guys comes up to you and you compare his penis with your arm.')
 			act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 			if horny > 50:
-				act 'to suck':
+				act 'Suck him':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					bj += 1
 					if Rex_Love = 1: bja += 1
 					gs'stat'
 					$party_suck = {
-						act 'Cum':
+						act 'Make him cum':
 							cls
 							minut += 5
 							spafinloc = 12
@@ -286,23 +228,20 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 							facial += 1
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_8_' + rand(6,12) + '.jpg"></center>'
-							'You desire to open her mouth and stuck out tongue.'
-							iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Guy','Rex') + ' roughly finished, Fill out your mouth and face smeared with sperm.'
+							'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue.'
+							iif(Rex_Love = 0,'The guy','Rex') + ' cums hard, filling up your mouth and smearing sperm all over your face.'
 							act 'Move away':gt'sbReksHome','party_home'
 						end
 					}
 					if rand(1,2) = 1:
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_8_4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Strong desire clouded your head, and you grabbed the member ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Man','Rex') + ' in full view of all the girls.
-						Gently masturbate in his hand, We took it in her mouth and began to suck the head.'
-						iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Guy','Rex') + ' a long time could not resist and started...'
+						'Strong desire clouds your head, and you grab ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'the guy''s','Rex''') + ' member in full view of all the girls. You gently masturbate it with your hand, then take it in your mouth and begin to suck on it''s head.'
+						iif(Rex_Love = 0,'The guy','Rex') + ' can''t resist for long and starts...'
 						dynamic $party_suck
 					else
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_home_fun_2_8_5.jpg"></center>'
-						'One of the girls took a moment and took the dick in your mouth.
-						You have decided to support it, and grabbed his dick ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Man','Rex') + '.
-						Gently masturbate in his hand, We took it in her mouth and began to suck the head, having time to see how your girlfriend sucks.'
-						iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Guy','Rex') + ' a long time could not resist and started...'
+						'One of the girls takes the dick in front of her in her mouth. Feeling encouraged ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'the guy''s','Rex''') + ' dick and gently masturbate it with your hand. Soon you put it in your mouth and begin to suck on it''s head, watching the other girl giving head at the same time.'
+						iif(Rex_Love = 0,'The guy','Rex') + ' can''t resist for long and starts...'
 						dynamic $party_suck
 					end
 				end
@@ -319,8 +258,7 @@ $party_girls_drunk ={
 	i = rand(1,2)
 	if i = 1:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_3_1.gif"></center>'
 	if i = 2:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_3_' + rand(2,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You had another, for a moment you have lost touch with reality.
-	Strongly dizzy, you become very ill...'
+	'You have another drink, and start to loose touch with reality. You feel dizzy and very sick...'
 	act 'bran':dynamic $Party_sleep
 }
 $party_girls_rex ={
@@ -328,11 +266,7 @@ $party_girls_rex ={
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_7.jpg"></center>'
-	'Rex dragged you to the toilet, while in the got wild state.
-	And momentary sat on his lap, eagerly plunging into his mouth purple head.
-	Rex immediately excited:
-	-Wow what you have me unpredictable, for that I love you and love.
-	With that, he fucks you in the mouth, you squeeze the sponge passionately, and he is here now ready...'
+	'Rex drags you to the toilet, sporting a huge erection. You quickly squat down and eagerly plunge your mouth onto the purple head. Rex exclaims excitedly, "Wow, you are really unpredictable, and for that I love you." With that, he fucks you in the mouth, while you suck on him passionately. Soon he is ready to...'
 	act 'Come':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
@@ -346,9 +280,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 gs 'cum_manage'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You eagerly open mouth and instantly stream hit the palate of your love.
-		Rex passionate shouts, and gets his head on your language.
-		-Ooh, Babe, it was super.You`re here to bring myself up, and I will go to guests.'
+		'You eagerly open your mouth and instantly get hit by a stream of semen. Rex groans passionately as he finishes. "Ooh, babe, that was fantastic. You know how to get me in a good mood. You clean yourself up and I will go back to the guests."'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'sbReksHome','party_toilet'
 	end
 }
@@ -358,20 +290,18 @@ $party_girls_bra ={
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_5_' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'Yielding to the general madness, you shoot with girls bras, a frantic cries of boys.
-	In this state clearly your dancing will look much more spectacular.'
-	if Rex_Love = 1: 'For us closely watching Rex, but says nothing.'
+	'Yielding to the general madness, you take of your bra to the frantic shouts of the boys. In this state your dancing clearly will look much more spectacular.'
+	if Rex_Love = 1: 'Rex watches you closely, but says nothing.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
-	act 'Dancing topless':
+	act 'Dance topless':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_6_' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'Under the general merry shouts of boys and girls you light in the form of a half-naked.
-		Enjoying your figure closer to you fit more and more guys.'
-		if Rex_Love = 1: 'It suits you , Rex "May be enough? I this is not very nice to look at."'
+		'Under the merry shouts of the boys and girls you dance half-naked. A lot of the guys come closer trying to enjoy the view.'
+		if Rex_Love = 1: 'You enjoy yourself when Rex shouts "Maybe thats enough? This isn''t very nice to look at."'
 		act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
-		if Rex_Love = 1: act 'Dragged him to the restroom':dynamic $party_girls_rex
+		if Rex_Love = 1: act 'Drag him to the restroom':dynamic $party_girls_rex
 		act 'Undress':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
@@ -379,17 +309,14 @@ $party_girls_bra ={
 			i = rand(1,2)
 			if i = 1:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_9_1.jpg"></center>'
 			if i = 2:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_9_2.gif"></center>'
-			if Rex_Love = 1:'You completely ignored the guy Rex. He glared at you and turned away.'
-			'Undress completely ventured only a few girls.
-			You all give way to the middle of the room and make the sound louder, and regardless of the surrounding, you have shared in your naked dance.
-			To you we approached by several drunk guys, because sin not to use such related bitch.'
-			act 'To go with the guys':
+			if Rex_Love = 1:'You completely ignore Rex. He glares at you and turns away.'
+			'You undress completely and only a few girls follow your example. You all get into the middle of the room and make the sound louder. Ignoring the surrounding people, you dance together, naked. Several drunks guys approach you, and tell you it would be a sin to not use such a fine bitch like you.'
+			act 'Go with the guys':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_10.jpg"></center>'
-				'Boys briefly put you in the bathroom and sat on her knees, pulling its bolts.
-				Even in such a drunken state, you can still guess, what to do.'
+				'The boys take you to the bathroom and put you on your knees, unzipping their pants. Even in such a drunken state, you can still guess, what they want you to do.'
 				act 'Suck':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
@@ -399,8 +326,7 @@ $party_girls_bra ={
 					sex += 1
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_11.jpg"></center>'
-					'You confessed awkwardly suck provided on your service Dicks.
-					In a drunken state you get little, and seeing this guys told you...'
+					'You try to service them both awkwardly. One of the guys tells you to just use your mouth and since you won''t get anything from them in their drunken state...'
 					act 'Remove hands':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
@@ -408,9 +334,7 @@ $party_girls_bra ={
 						i = rand(1,2)
 						if i = 1:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_12_1.gif"></center>'
 						if i = 2:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_12_3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You dutifully removed the hand, instinctively began to fondle her pussy.
-						The guys take turns to attach to lustful mouth and furiously wrote their hoses.
-						Your mouth brought them to the peak, and they are ready...'
+						'You dutifully remove your hands and instinctively begin to fondle your pussy. The guys take turns fucking your mouth while the other masturbates. Soon you bring them both to the point where they are ready to come.'
 						act 'Come':
 							cls
 							minut += 5
@@ -423,9 +347,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 gs 'cum_manage'
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_13.jpg"></center>'
-							'Barely holding still squatting, You grabbed the inflamed members.
-							Few of their masturbate, you splashed a wave of male seminal fluid.
-							Boys cut you the last drop of limp dick and cackling left you alone'
+							'Still squatting and barely able to stay in this position you grab their hard dicks and masturbate them until you get splashed with their semen. The boys wipe off the last drop of cum from their limp dicks onto your face and cackle as they leave you alone in the room.'
 							act 'Move away':gt 'sbReksHome','party_toilet'
 						end
 					end
@@ -448,14 +370,12 @@ $party_girls_drink = {
 	if i = 1:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_2_1.gif"></center>'
 	if i = 2:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_2_' + rand(2,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'The girls brought booze directly here, you will be happy to agree to their proposal.
-	You and the girls drink directly during dance, a drunk and screams, drowning out the music.
-	Girls offer more fun...'
-	if alko >= 7:'Strongly dizzy, you become very ill.'
-	if alko >= 7: act 'bran':dynamic $Party_sleep
+	'The girls have some booze with them and you are happy to share a drink with them. You and the girls keep drinking during dancing. Your drunk yelling drowns out the music, as the girls tell you they want to have even more fun...'
+	if alko >= 7:'You are dizzy, and feel very ill.'
+	if alko >= 7: act 'Sleep':dynamic $Party_sleep
 	if alko < 7: act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
 	if alko < 7: act 'Drink more':dynamic $party_girls_drunk
-	if alko < 7: act 'Remove a bra':dynamic $party_girls_bra
+	if alko < 7: act 'Remove your bra':dynamic $party_girls_bra
 }
 
 $party_girls_boys ={
@@ -474,17 +394,11 @@ $party_girls_boys ={
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_19.jpg"></center>'
-		'Boys not long after you have seen , and unable to withstand your sexual charisma joined you..
-		Unable to overcome the excitement, as if by agreement, briefly delaying, the guys in front of you unbuttoned his pants.
-		With pretty girls looked at each other and started for the pleasant thing.
-		You sit down in front ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'Man','Rex') + ' and happily began to suck it has already become a member.
-		You get with the girls made ​​their guys finish,and then continue the fun.'
+		'The guys soon see you and, unable to withstand your sexual charisma, decide to join the fun. Unable to overcome the excitement, as if they planned it, the guys in front of you unbutton their pants. You and the other pretty girls look at each other and decide to go with it. You sit down in front of ' + iif(Rex_Love = 0,'one of the guys','Rex') + ' and happily begin to suck his already rock hard member. After you and the girls make your guys finish, you continue the fun.'
 		act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
 		elseif i = 2:
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_20_' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'Boys not long after you have seen , and unable to withstand your sexual charisma joined you..
-		Soon in unison you began to kiss and caress each other.
-		Rex took you under safe custody, without giving any of you guys to touch.'
+		'The guys soon see you and, unable to withstand your sexual charisma, decide to join the fun. Soon you kiss and caress each other in unison. Rex closely keeps you to himself, not letting any of the other guys touch you.'
 		act 'Further':
 			cla
 			*clr
@@ -504,11 +418,7 @@ $party_girls_boys ={
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_21_' + rand(1,6) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'Soon, you do not notice how your adult game turned into a raging orgy.
-			All were divided into pairs and are not ignoring the other passionately fucked.
-			Some guys still are not enough girls, and you notice how they are connected to your sister with Roma, Anya and gladly accepts new members.
-			The apartment reigned depraved atmosphere wild sex, groans and cries of bellowing.
-			Time seems to have stopped, They fuck you until you run out of all forces.'
+			'You don''t really recall how your adult game turned into a raging orgy. Everyone is divided into pairs who passionately fuck each other. There are not enough girls for every guy and you notice how they are huddling around your sister with Roma as Anya gladly accepts any member that is put in front of her. The apartment is dipped into an atmosphere of wild and depraved sex, groans and cries of pleasure coming from every corner. Time seems to have stopped and everyone is just fucking each other until they run out of energy.'
 			if knowpreg = 0 and thinkpreg = 0:
 				if tabletkishot ! 0: '"I''m glad I got my birth control shot." you think to yourself.'
 				if tabletkishot = 0 and pillcon > 2000: '"Good thing I''m on the pill." you think to yourself.'
@@ -522,18 +432,16 @@ $party_girls_boys ={
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_kuh_6_' + rand(1,9) + '.jpg"></center>'
-				'After everything that happened , you fall asleep instantly, falling into a sweet dream.
-				You went to all smeared with sperm, but you do not care.
-				After lying, some time, you begin to awaken, screams and slaps force...'
+				'After everything that happened, you fall asleep instantly, plunging into a sweet dream. You went to sleep all smeared with sperm, but you do not care. After some time you are woken up by someone shouting at you and slapping your face.'
 				act 'Wake up':
 					cls
 					minut += 90
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_kuh_7.jpg"></center>'
-					'Anya will have zealously, all battered,  you slowly wake up.
-					-Well today we had fun, How are you feeling?
-					-Everything hurts, dizzy, Give me a little more sleep.
-					-Get up rather stupid, We parents are killed, if you do not spend the night at home.'
+					'You slowly wake up as Anya keeps slapping you in the face.'
+					'"Well that was fun. How are you feeling?"'
+					'"Everything hurts, I''m dizzy. Give me a little more sleep." you answer with a weak voice.'
+					'"Get up stupid. Our parents are going to kill us, if we don''t spend the night at home."'
 					act 'Going home':gt 'bedrPar'
 				end
 			end
@@ -547,8 +455,7 @@ $party_girls_girls ={
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_16_' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You wanted to be alone with the girls in a small room.
-	Close, and making,that none of you boys will not interfere, We choose...'
+	'You decide that you want to be alone with the girls. You close the door, making sure that none of the boys will disturb you.'
 	act 'Proceed':
 		cla
 		*clr
@@ -557,28 +464,24 @@ $party_girls_girls ={
 		i = rand(1,2)
 		if i = 1:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_17_' + rand(1,3) + '.gif"></center>'
 		if i = 2:'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_17_' + rand(4,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'And you continued their lesbian play.
-		In this insane lesbian orgies you caress each other, lick every hole to shine.
-		enjoying caresses, fuck all holes friends gentle fingers.
-		So time flies, you are bringing each other to orgasm, in sweet convulsions ready..'
+		'You continue your lesbian play. It is an insane orgy as you caress each other, using your tongues and gentle fingers on every available hole. Time flies as you bring each other to orgasm, convulsing from the pleasure.'
 		act 'Fall asleep':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_18_' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-			'So embracing, covered nectar each other you will quickly fall asleep.
-			After lying, some time, you begin to awaken, screams and slaps force...'
+			'Covered in each others juices and warm embraces you quickly fall asleep. After some time you are woken up by someone shouting at you and slapping your face.'
 			act 'Wake up':
 				cls
 				*clr
 				minut += 90
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_kuh_7.jpg"></center>'
-				'Anya will have zealously, all battered,  you slowly wake up.
-				-Well today we had fun, How are you feeling?
-				-Everything hurts, dizzy, Give me a little more sleep.
-				-Get up rather stupid, We parents are killed, if you do not spend the night at home.'
+					'You slowly wake up as Anya keeps slapping you in the face.'
+					'"Well that was fun. How are you feeling?"'
+					'"Everything hurts, I''m dizzy. Give me a little more sleep." you answer with a weak voice.'
+					'"Get up stupid. Our parents are going to kill us, if we don''t spend the night at home."'
 				act 'Going home':gt 'bedrPar'
 			end
 		end
@@ -590,24 +493,20 @@ $party_girls_dirty ={
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_14_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'You light the fun with the girls under the deafening music.
-	During the dance you are pressed against each other, Girl paw you in all sorts of places.
-	Girls bare your ass, lowered panties and kiss and lick you.'
-	if Rex_Love = 1:'Rex watching with interest as you have fun with the girls.'
-	'Girls only warmed up and offer you more...'
+	'You have a lot of fun as you dance with the girls under the deafening music. During the dance you are pressed against each other and the other girls touch you in all sorts of places. Suddenly a pair of hands pull up you skirts and bare your ass. One of the girls pulls down your panties and starts to kiss and lick you.'
+	if Rex_Love = 1:'Rex watches you with interest as you have fun with the girls.'
+	'The girls are only getting warmed up and offer you more.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
-	act 'Rejoice':
+	act 'Give in':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_15_' + rand(1,8) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'-Come on <<$name>>, take off all unnecessary, we rest or?
-		You give in general madness, ruining all the extra covers, and dive headlong into the abyss of insane fervor.
-		As if losing your head you come off wildly with the girls in full.'
+		'"Come on <<$name>>, lets take off all the unnecessary clothing, shall we?" You give in to the general madness, taking off all your clothes, and diving headlong into the abyss of insane fervor.'
 		i = rand(1,2)
 		if i = 1: act 'Have fun with the guys':dynamic $party_girls_boys
-		if i = 2: act 'Go into the room':dynamic $party_girls_girls
+		if i = 2: act 'Go into another room with the girls':dynamic $party_girls_girls
 	end
 }
 
@@ -617,11 +516,10 @@ $party_girls_dance ={
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/reksParty_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,7) + '.gif"></center>'
-	'Grab the rhythmic sounds and indulge in unrestrained dance with the crowd.
-	you jump, Eagle and twist booty, completely merging and absorbing general merriment.'
-	if dance >= 50:'Your curves and movements to the music of others excite, that makes you even more pleasure'
-	if dance < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance does not bother anyone, You dance badly, but you do not care and you cool anneal.'
-	act 'Breather':gt $locM,$metkaM
+	'You are grabbed by the rhythmic sounds and indulge in unrestrained dancing with the crowd.	You jump and twist your body, completely merging and absorbing yourself in the fun atmosphere.'
+	if dance >= 50:'Your curves and movements to the music make you a pleasure to watch. The others stare at you excitedly.'
+	if dance < 50:'Your ridiculous movements during the dance don''t bother anyone. You dance badly, but you do not care.'
+	act 'Take a breather':gt $locM,$metkaM
 	act 'Dance more':dynamic $party_girls_dirty 
 }
 
@@ -632,16 +530,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'party_girls':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Girls</font></b></center>'
 	if $metkaM = 'party_home':
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		*nl
 	else
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/sisterQW/ReksHome/Party_girls_party_gost_1_' + rand(1,4) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		*nl
 	end
-	'Former classmate of your sister, you are not familiar with them.'
+	'Some former classmates of your sister. You are not familiar with them.'
 	act 'Move away':gt $locM,$metkaM
 	if $metkaM = 'party_gost': act 'Drink':dynamic $party_girls_drink
-	if $metkaM = 'party_gost': act 'dance together':dynamic $party_girls_dance
-	if $metkaM = 'party_home' and alko < 6: act 'propose a toast': gt'sbReksHome','party_drink'
+	if $metkaM = 'party_gost': act 'Dance together':dynamic $party_girls_dance
+	if $metkaM = 'party_home' and alko < 6: act 'Propose a toast': gt'sbReksHome','party_drink'
 end
 --- party_girls ---------------------------------
 

+ 178 - 178
locations/pod_ezd

@@ -332,13 +332,13 @@ $pod_sex_ev3 = {
 !mini game events on 2 floor
 !boys smoking
 $etaj2_smoke_r = {
-cls
+	cls
 	manna += 100
 	wipo += 100
 	if energy < 80:energy += 4
 	smoker += 1
 	minut +=5
-gs'stat'
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/smoke'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	'The guys greet you and offer you a cigarette, which you gladly accept. You spend the next 5 minutes smoking a cigarette with them, talking about trivial things.'
 	if GorSlut >= 3 and GorSlut < 6:
@@ -385,11 +385,11 @@ gs'stat'
 
 !Misha smokes, second floor
 $etaj2_smoke_misha = {
-cls
-minut +=5
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/misha.jpg" ></center>'
-'Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him, warning you that he used to be a local crime lord, and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and kind to you.'
+	cls
+	minut +=5
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/misha.jpg" ></center>'
+	'Your neighbor''s name is Mikhail, though everyone calls him uncle Misha. He lives in the other apartment on the same floor as yours. Your mother always forbade you to talk to him, warning you that he used to be a local crime lord, and that you shouldn''t get involved with him. However, he has always been polite and kind to you.'
 	if GorSlut >= 3 or dyadyamishaevent >= 1:
 		misha_smoke_rnd = RAND(1,3)
 		if misha_smoke_rnd = 1:
@@ -443,9 +443,9 @@ gs'stat'
 !game events 3 floor
 !Event Julia Milova, 3rd floor stairwell
 $etaj3_juliamil = {
-cls
-minut +=5
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	minut +=5
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
 	'You run into Julia in the stairwell. Having some time to spare, the two of you stop and sit down to have a quick chat for a few minutes, catching up on the latest events.'
 	if JulMilBestFrend >= 50:
@@ -539,13 +539,13 @@ gs'stat'
 
 !boys smoking
 $etaj3_smoke_r = {
-cls
+	cls
 	manna += 100
 	wipo += 100
 	if energy < 80:energy += 4
 	smoker += 1
 	minut +=5
-gs'stat'
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/smoke'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
 	'The guys greet you and offer you a cigarette, which you gladly accept. You spend the next 5 minutes smoking a cigarette with them, talking about trivial things.'
 	if GorSlut => 3 and GorSlut < 6:
@@ -590,26 +590,26 @@ gs'stat'
 }
 !Event suction Shulga
 $bj_smoke_shulga = {
-cls
-minut +=3
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
-'You see Vasily standing in the stairwell, smoking a cigarette. You approach him and ask: "Hi Shulga, do you have a cigarette for me? I would really use a smoke right now."'
-'Vasily shakes his head, but gives you a horny grin: "Sorry <<$name>>, I''m just finishing my last one. I do have something else you can put your lips around though..."'
-'He idly runs his hand over his groin, and you can see the outline of his hard cock through the fabric of his pants quite clearly.'
-'You look at him with some doubt: "I don''t know Shulga, people might see."'
-'He reassures you: "Don''t worry <<$nickname>>, you''ll be fine. I''ll keep an eye out, and there''s no one here now right? Just take it in your mouth. I know you''re good at it, you can finish me off quickly."'
-rnd_orkaz_bj = RAND(0,100)
-if rnd_orkaz_bj < 20 or GorSlut <3: 
-	act 'Refuse': 
-	cla
-	minut +=1
-	dom +=1	
+	cls
+	minut +=3
 	gs'stat'
-	'You adamantly shake your head: "Sorry Shulga, but it''s not gonna happen. See you around."'
-		act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_3'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
+	'You see Vasily standing in the stairwell, smoking a cigarette. You approach him and ask: "Hi Shulga, do you have a cigarette for me? I would really use a smoke right now."'
+	'Vasily shakes his head, but gives you a horny grin: "Sorry <<$name>>, I''m just finishing my last one. I do have something else you can put your lips around though..."'
+	'He idly runs his hand over his groin, and you can see the outline of his hard cock through the fabric of his pants quite clearly.'
+	'You look at him with some doubt: "I don''t know Shulga, people might see."'
+	'He reassures you: "Don''t worry <<$nickname>>, you''ll be fine. I''ll keep an eye out, and there''s no one here now right? Just take it in your mouth. I know you''re good at it, you can finish me off quickly."'
+	rnd_orkaz_bj = RAND(0,100)
+	if rnd_orkaz_bj < 20 or GorSlut <3: 
+		act 'Refuse': 
+		cla
+		minut +=1
+		dom +=1	
+		gs'stat'
+		'You adamantly shake your head: "Sorry Shulga, but it''s not gonna happen. See you around."'
+			act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_3'
+		end
 	end
-end
 	act 'Suck him off quickly':
 		cls
 		$boy = 'Shulga'
@@ -630,13 +630,13 @@ end
 }
 !Shulga smokes
 $etaj3_smoke_shulga = {
-cls
+	cls
 	manna += 100
 	wipo += 100
 	if energy < 80:energy += 4
 	smoker += 1
 	minut +=5
-gs'stat'
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/smoke5.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Vasily standing in the stairwell, smoking a cigarette. You approach him and ask: "Hi Shulga, do you have a cigarette for me? I would really use a smoke right now."'
 	'He nods and offers you one. You happily take it and light it up.'
@@ -654,18 +654,18 @@ gs'stat'
 		act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_3'
 	end	
 	
-smoke_bj = RAND(0,100)
-if smoke_bj <= 50 and GorSlut >=3 or smoke_bj <= 50 and vasya_shulgin>=100: dynamic $bj_smoke_shulga
+	smoke_bj = RAND(0,100)
+	if smoke_bj <= 50 and GorSlut >=3 or smoke_bj <= 50 and vasya_shulgin>=100: dynamic $bj_smoke_shulga
 }
 !Shulga and Dan smoke
 $etaj3_smoke_shulga_den = {
-cls
+	cls
 	manna += 100
 	wipo += 100
 	if energy < 80:energy += 4
 	smoker += 1
 	minut +=5
-gs'stat'
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/smoke4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You see Vasily and Dan standing in the stairwell, smoking a cigarette. You approach them and ask: "Hi guys, do you have a cigarette for me? I would really use a smoke right now."'
 	'Vasily nods and offers you one. You happily take it and light it up.'
@@ -695,13 +695,13 @@ gs'stat'
 
 !game events in the attic (fifth floor)
 $etaj5_cherdak_ev1 = {
-cls
-minut +=5
-horny +=5
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/cherdak/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
-'When you walk up the stairs to the fifth floor, you see some unfamiliar boys fucking one girl. Currently, one guy is fucking her while the other one films everything with his camera.'
-gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
+	cls
+	minut +=5
+	horny +=5
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/cherdak/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
+	'When you walk up the stairs to the fifth floor, you see some unfamiliar boys fucking one girl. Currently, one guy is fucking her while the other one films everything with his camera.'
+	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 	act 'Hide and keep watching':
 		cls
 		minut +=5
@@ -724,10 +724,10 @@ gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
 }
 
 $etaj5_cherdak_ev2 = {
-cls
-minut +=2
-horny +=5
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	minut +=2
+	horny +=5
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/cherdak/ev2_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you walk up the stairs to the fifth floor, you see a guy and a girl having sex. Currently, the girl is giving him an enthusiastic blowjob while a second guy films everything with his camera.'
 	act 'Hide and keep watching':
@@ -806,10 +806,10 @@ gs'stat'
 }
 
 $etaj5_cherdak_ev3 = {
-cls
-minut +=5
-horny +=5
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	minut +=5
+	horny +=5
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/cherdak/ev3_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you walk up the stairs to the fifth floor, you see a girl giving two guys an enthusiastic blowjob at the same time. One of the guys is filming everything with his camera.'
 	act 'Hide and keep watching':
@@ -853,10 +853,10 @@ gs'stat'
 }
 
 $etaj5_cherdak_ev4 = {
-cls
-minut +=5
-horny +=5
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	minut +=5
+	horny +=5
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/cherdak/ev4_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'When you walk up the stairs to the fifth floor, you see an unfamiliar girl showing off her boobs to two guys. One of them is holding a camera. You''re fairly sure you have never seen any of them before.'
 	act 'Hide and keep watching':
@@ -909,10 +909,10 @@ gs'stat'
 
 !game events with spying on different floors	
 $pod_event_1 = {
-cls
-horny += 5
-minut += 2
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	horny += 5
+	minut += 2
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk around a corner in the stairwell, you''re suddenly looking straight at a woman''s bare pussy! She''s sat on some stairs and is casually smoking a cigarette. Her partner chats her up, while he has a great look at her naked pussy and her widely spread legs.'
 	act 'Keep watching':
@@ -927,10 +927,10 @@ gs'stat'
 	end
 }
 $pod_event_2 = {
-cls
-minut += 10
-horny += 10
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	minut += 10
+	horny += 10
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev3.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk around a corner in the stairwell, you run into two boys fucking some random girl dressed in lingerie and a coat. She looks familiar...'
 	'You hide for a second and try to look if you can recognize her in some way, but she''s squeezed between the boys and her face is hidden the whole time.'
@@ -939,53 +939,53 @@ gs'stat'
 	act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 }
 $pod_event_3 = {
-cls
-horny += 5
-minut +=3
-gs'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk around a corner in the stairwell, you see Yelena Kotov, a girl from your class. She''s taking off her panties in front of several guys. If her brother Vitek could see this, he''d probably be beating the crap out of them right now... he''s really protective of his sister.'
-	act 'Hide and watch them':
 	cls
 	horny += 5
 	minut +=3
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Lena turns her back to the guys next, and pulls up her skirt slightly. She shows off her well-toned ass, slowly wagging it as she asks seductively over her shoulder: "Do you like what you see, boys?"'
-		act 'Continue':
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_1.jpg"></center>'
+	'As you walk around a corner in the stairwell, you see Yelena Kotov, a girl from your class. She''s taking off her panties in front of several guys. If her brother Vitek could see this, he''d probably be beating the crap out of them right now... he''s really protective of his sister.'
+	act 'Hide and watch them':
 		cls
 		horny += 5
 		minut +=3
-		gs'stat'	
-		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_3.jpg"></center>'
-		'One of the guys has a lewd grin on his face as he gets an idea, and tells Lena to strike a pose as he pulls his phone out of his pocket. He begins to take photos of Lena, while the other guys encourage her to show more.'
-		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Continue':
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_2.jpg"></center>'
+		'Lena turns her back to the guys next, and pulls up her skirt slightly. She shows off her well-toned ass, slowly wagging it as she asks seductively over her shoulder: "Do you like what you see, boys?"'
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			horny += 5
 			minut +=3
-			gs'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Lena really gets into it, posing seductively for the camera now while she lets her skirt ride up a little more. You can tell the stares of the guys turn her on a lot, and you realize Vitek''s little sister is not as innocent as she looks.'
+			gs'stat'	
+			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_3.jpg"></center>'
+			'One of the guys has a lewd grin on his face as he gets an idea, and tells Lena to strike a pose as he pulls his phone out of his pocket. He begins to take photos of Lena, while the other guys encourage her to show more.'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-				act 'Continue':
+			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				horny += 5
 				minut +=3
-				gs'stat'	
-				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_5.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lena spreads her legs further, really showing off her pussy to the camera now. The guys are getting quite aroused now, and a few of them are rubbing their groins uncomfortably.'
+				gs'stat'
+				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_4.jpg"></center>'
+				'Lena really gets into it, posing seductively for the camera now while she lets her skirt ride up a little more. You can tell the stares of the guys turn her on a lot, and you realize Vitek''s little sister is not as innocent as she looks.'
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-					act 'Continue':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					horny += 5
 					minut +=3
-					gs'stat'
-					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_6.jpg"></center>'
-					'Lena turns her back to the guys again, her skirt pulled up so far now that she''s showing off all her holes to the camera.'
+					gs'stat'	
+					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_5.jpg"></center>'
+					'Lena spreads her legs further, really showing off her pussy to the camera now. The guys are getting quite aroused now, and a few of them are rubbing their groins uncomfortably.'
 					gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-					'Then she decides the photo shoot is over, and asks them: "So boys, who wants to go first?"'
-					'While the guys enthusiastically gather around her you realize you should probably go, before someone notices you.'
+					act 'Continue':
+						cls
+						horny += 5
+						minut +=3
+						gs'stat'
+						'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev4_6.jpg"></center>'
+						'Lena turns her back to the guys again, her skirt pulled up so far now that she''s showing off all her holes to the camera.'
+						gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
+						'Then she decides the photo shoot is over, and asks them: "So boys, who wants to go first?"'
+						'While the guys enthusiastically gather around her you realize you should probably go, before someone notices you.'
 						act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 					end	
 				end
@@ -994,66 +994,66 @@ gs'stat'
 	end	
 }
 $pod_event_4 = {
-cls
-horny +=5
-minut +=3
-gs'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_1.JPG"></center>'
-	'You see a cute girl in a nightie standing on a flight of stairs, in the stairwell, doing several poses for a strong looking man holding a camera.'
-	act 'Hide and watch':
 	cls
 	horny +=5
 	minut +=3
 	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_2.JPG"></center>'
-	'You can tell they''re both quite aroused by the thought they might get caught, not even realizing that they''re actually being watched. The man is clearly calling the shots and tries to get a nice photo shoot. He orders her: "That looks nice baby. Now put your leg on the railing... yes, beautiful! This will be a great shoot."'
-	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-		act 'Continue':
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_1.JPG"></center>'
+	'You see a cute girl in a nightie standing on a flight of stairs, in the stairwell, doing several poses for a strong looking man holding a camera.'
+	act 'Hide and watch':
 		cls
 		horny +=5
 		minut +=3
-		gs'stat'	
-		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_3.JPG"></center>'
-		'He continues: "Okay, now raise your nightie, I want some photos of your body too. Excellent babe, you''re doing great."'
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_2.JPG"></center>'
+		'You can tell they''re both quite aroused by the thought they might get caught, not even realizing that they''re actually being watched. The man is clearly calling the shots and tries to get a nice photo shoot. He orders her: "That looks nice baby. Now put your leg on the railing... yes, beautiful! This will be a great shoot."'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Continue':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			horny +=5
 			minut +=3
-			gs'stat'
-			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_4.JPG"></center>'
-			'The girl seems slightly nervous: "We should hurry up! What would our neighbors say if they find me here, half nude in the hallway!"'
-			'The man just grins: "They''d say you look great! Maybe they''d even want to join us later. Relax babe, we''ll be fine. Now turn around and show me your ass."'
-			'She scoffs playfully: "Easy for you to say, you''re not the one they would be looking at."'
-			'Nevertheless, you can tell the thought of maybe getting caught turns her on. She turns around and leans over ever so slightly, sticking out her ass for him. The camera clicks several times.'
+			gs'stat'	
+			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_3.JPG"></center>'
+			'He continues: "Okay, now raise your nightie, I want some photos of your body too. Excellent babe, you''re doing great."'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-				act 'Continue':
+			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				horny +=5
 				minut +=3
-				gs'stat'	
-				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_5.JPG"></center>'
-				'He encourages her further: "Wow, that''s hot. Bend over babe, show me your pretty ass."'
-				'She leans over and pulls her nightie up, showing the camera her bare ass cheeks and pulls one to the side a bit with her hand to show off her holes more: "Like this?"'
-				'He nods and keeps making photos: "Just like that."'
+				gs'stat'
+				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_4.JPG"></center>'
+				'The girl seems slightly nervous: "We should hurry up! What would our neighbors say if they find me here, half nude in the hallway!"'
+				'The man just grins: "They''d say you look great! Maybe they''d even want to join us later. Relax babe, we''ll be fine. Now turn around and show me your ass."'
+				'She scoffs playfully: "Easy for you to say, you''re not the one they would be looking at."'
+				'Nevertheless, you can tell the thought of maybe getting caught turns her on. She turns around and leans over ever so slightly, sticking out her ass for him. The camera clicks several times.'
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-					act 'Continue':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					horny +=5
 					minut +=3
-					gs'stat'
-					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_6.JPG"></center>'
-					'He walks up a bit closer to her: "Almost done babe, I just need a few close-ups. Just bend over and show me your ass."'
+					gs'stat'	
+					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_5.JPG"></center>'
+					'He encourages her further: "Wow, that''s hot. Bend over babe, show me your pretty ass."'
+					'She leans over and pulls her nightie up, showing the camera her bare ass cheeks and pulls one to the side a bit with her hand to show off her holes more: "Like this?"'
+					'He nods and keeps making photos: "Just like that."'
 					gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-						act 'Continue':
+					act 'Continue':
 						cls
 						horny +=5
 						minut +=3
 						gs'stat'
-						'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_7.JPG"></center>'
-						'He takes a few more close-ups of her tight holes, and then puts his hand on her ass as he puts the camera away. He grins at her: "Damn, I don''t think I can last any longer! Let''s go, babe."'
-						'She happily purrs: "I thought you''d never ask... I''ve been dripping for half an hour already!'						
-						'They quickly enter an apartment, leaving you alone in the stairwell.'						
+						'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_6.JPG"></center>'
+						'He walks up a bit closer to her: "Almost done babe, I just need a few close-ups. Just bend over and show me your ass."'
+						gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
+						act 'Continue':
+							cls
+							horny +=5
+							minut +=3
+							gs'stat'
+							'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev5_7.JPG"></center>'
+							'He takes a few more close-ups of her tight holes, and then puts his hand on her ass as he puts the camera away. He grins at her: "Damn, I don''t think I can last any longer! Let''s go, babe."'
+							'She happily purrs: "I thought you''d never ask... I''ve been dripping for half an hour already!'						
+							'They quickly enter an apartment, leaving you alone in the stairwell.'						
 							act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
 						end
 					end	
@@ -1063,10 +1063,10 @@ gs'stat'
 	end	
 }
 $pod_event_5 = {
-cls
-horny += 5
-minut += 5
-gs'stat'
+	cls
+	horny += 5
+	minut += 5
+	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/ev2.jpg"></center>'
 	'You greet aunt Luda in the stairwell, she''s on her way back up after throwing away some garbage. She greets you back, but says she has no time to chat and it looks like she''s in a hurry to get back to her apartment. When you look up, you see she''s not even wearing any pants or underwear! She can be so slutty sometimes...'
 	act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_2'
@@ -1106,16 +1106,16 @@ pod_ev_rnd = RAND(0,100)
 !================================================================================================!
 !housemates
 $housemates = {
-cls
-minut +=1
-gs'stat'
- '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/housemates.jpg"></center>'
-'Floor 1 - Apartment number 2: Artem Chebotarev'
-'Floor 2 - Apartment number 5: your parents								Apartment number 7: Uncle Misha'
-'Floor 3 - Apartment number 11: Sergey and Vasily Shulgin	 	Apartment number 12: Julia Milova'
-'Floor 4 - Apartment number 14: Natasha Belova						Apartment number 16: Aunt Luda'
-'Floor 5'
-act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
+	cls
+	minut +=1
+	gs'stat'
+	 '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/housemates.jpg"></center>'
+	'Floor 1 - Apartment number 2: Artem Chebotarev'
+	'Floor 2 - Apartment number 5: your parents								Apartment number 7: Uncle Misha'
+	'Floor 3 - Apartment number 11: Sergey and Vasily Shulgin	 	Apartment number 12: Julia Milova'
+	'Floor 4 - Apartment number 14: Natasha Belova						Apartment number 16: Aunt Luda'
+	'Floor 5'
+	act 'Leave': gt'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 }
 !!locked in Pavlovsk, floor 1
 if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_1':
@@ -1150,25 +1150,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_1':
 end
 !floor 2
 $etaj2_paint = {
-cls
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/etaj2_whore.jpg"></center>'
-'You look at the graffiti and sigh: "Maybe I should get some paint and cover that up, it''s attracting a lot of people to our home..."'
-if paint_blue <= 0: 'If you want to cover up the graffiti, you should go buy some paint.'
-if paint_blue >= 1: 
-	'You paint: <<paint_blue>>'
-	act 'Cover it up': 
-		cls
-		pod_whore_countQW = 0
-		minut +=40
-		paint_blue -= 1
-		gs'stat'
-		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/etaj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend about 40 minutes covering up the graffiti. When you''re done, you walk back and admire your work. Much better! Hopefully people won''t bother you as often now.'	
-		act 'Escape': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+	cls
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/etaj2_whore.jpg"></center>'
+	'You look at the graffiti and sigh: "Maybe I should get some paint and cover that up, it''s attracting a lot of people to our home..."'
+	if paint_blue <= 0: 'If you want to cover up the graffiti, you should go buy some paint.'
+	if paint_blue >= 1: 
+		'You paint: <<paint_blue>>'
+		act 'Cover it up': 
+			cls
+			pod_whore_countQW = 0
+			minut +=40
+			paint_blue -= 1
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/etaj2.jpg"></center>'
+			'You spend about 40 minutes covering up the graffiti. When you''re done, you walk back and admire your work. Much better! Hopefully people won''t bother you as often now.'	
+			act 'Escape': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+		end
 	end
-end
-act 'Shake your head and leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+	act 'Shake your head and leave': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 }
 if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_2':
 		cls
@@ -1306,31 +1306,31 @@ end
 !================================================================================================!
 !broken elevator
 $pod_lift_ev1 = {
-cls
-minut +=1
-liftnotwork_day = daystart
-liftnotwork_count -= 1
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/liftnotwork.jpg"></center>'
-'The building supervisor put a sign on the elevator: "Dear tenants, the elevator is out of order for today. Don''t worry, I should have it working again by tomorrow!'
-act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+	cls
+	minut +=1
+	liftnotwork_day = daystart
+	liftnotwork_count -= 1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/liftnotwork.jpg"></center>'
+	'The building supervisor put a sign on the elevator: "Dear tenants, the elevator is out of order for today. Don''t worry, I should have it working again by tomorrow!'
+	act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 }
 !naked woman in the elevator
 $pod_lift_ev2 = {
-cls
-minut +=1
-gs'stat'
-'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/elevator'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-'When the elevator door opens, you see a naked woman standing in it! She looks at you in panic and is frantically pressing all the elevator buttons. You''re too baffled to do anything until it''s too late. The door is already closed again, and the elevator is moving away from you.'
-act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+	cls
+	minut +=1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/event/elevator'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
+	'When the elevator door opens, you see a naked woman standing in it! She looks at you in panic and is frantically pressing all the elevator buttons. You''re too baffled to do anything until it''s too late. The door is already closed again, and the elevator is moving away from you.'
+	act 'Leave':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 }
 !he lift
 if $ARGS[0] = 'lift':
-		cls
-		minut +=1
-		gs'stat'
-		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/elevator.jpg"></center>'
-		'<center>The elevator in the apartment building is quite old. The building supervisor does his best to keep it running, but it breaks down a lot. Someone put up a <a href="exec:GT ''pod_ezd'',''elev_objava''">notification</a> in the elevator.</center>'
+	cls
+	minut +=1
+	gs'stat'
+	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/elevator.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center>The elevator in the apartment building is quite old. The building supervisor does his best to keep it running, but it breaks down a lot. Someone put up a <a href="exec:GT ''pod_ezd'',''elev_objava''">notification</a> in the elevator.</center>'
 	act 'Push button: floor 1': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 	act 'Push button: floor 2': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 	act 'Push button: floor 3': gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'