s4n vor 8 Jahren
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Commit
551ebd4370
7 geänderte Dateien mit 28 neuen und 30 gelöschten Zeilen
  1. 3 3
      locations/billiard
  2. 3 3
      locations/bordel
  3. 3 3
      locations/lesbidomhouse
  4. 4 6
      locations/lesbimistress
  5. 5 5
      locations/parkivent
  6. 6 6
      locations/paysex
  7. 4 4
      locations/stwork2

+ 3 - 3
locations/billiard

@@ -117,9 +117,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'randwin':
 	elseif billwin <= 10 and billvar = 2:
 		'You lose, open those legs.'
 		dynamic	$clrboy
-		dynamic $CatName 'Billiard player'
-		dynamic $CatName 'Billiard player', '$boy1'
-		dynamic $CatName 'Billiard player', '$boy2'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'Billiard player'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'Billiard player', '$boy1'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'Billiard player', '$boy2'
 		$boy[1] = $boy1
 		$boy[2] = $boy2
 		act 'Pay':gt 'paysex', 'var'

+ 3 - 3
locations/bordel

@@ -176,9 +176,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 
 			guy += 3
 			dynamic	$clrboy
-			dynamic $CatName 'Bordel client'
-			dynamic $CatName 'Bordel client', '$boy1'
-			dynamic $CatName 'Bordel client', '$boy2'
+			dynamic $CatName, 'Bordel client'
+			dynamic $CatName, 'Bordel client', '$boy1'
+			dynamic $CatName, 'Bordel client', '$boy2'
 			$boy[1] = $boy1
 			$boy[2] = $boy2
 			gt 'paysex', 'start'

+ 3 - 3
locations/lesbidomhouse

@@ -595,7 +595,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW4':
 					'Natalya says nothing, but nods eagerly. There''s a certain look of desperation in her eyes.'
 					'"I will decide on what to do with you, based on what happens during my next visit. So... dazzle me." You make it sound firm, but benevolent.'
 					'Having said your piece, you walk to the hallway and put your clothes back on there, probably for the last time. Next time you''re here things will be very, very different.'
-					act: '"Leave Natalya''s apartment"':gt'street'
+					act '"Leave Natalya''s apartment"':gt'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -2111,7 +2111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW12':
 					'She continues: "However... you have to see things from my point of view as well. If you have doubts, maybe my time is better spent on finding someone more willing. Until you sign this contract, this will be our last session. My time is precious, and I can''t afford to waste it."'
 					'"That''s fair", you nod. "I will get back to you soon."'
 					'With nothing left to say, you stand up and get ready to leave Mistress'' apartment.'
-					act: 'Get dressed and leave':gt 'street'
+					act 'Get dressed and leave':gt 'street'
 				end
 				act 'Refuse to sign a contract':
 					cla
@@ -2127,7 +2127,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'QW12':
 					'She finally breaks it, saying: "You know, I wasn''t lying when I said I see potential in you. There''s a BDSM club near the city, where people with interest in our lifestyle can go to explore their interests. I think you would enjoy going there."'
 					'She offers you a luxurious black business card with a gold trim. "If you''re interested... this will get you in."'
 					'Then she stands up, and signals for you to do the same. She says: "I guess this is where we part ways, then. Take care, <<$nickname>>."'
-					act: 'Say goodbye to Mistress and leave':gt 'street'
+					act 'Say goodbye to Mistress and leave':gt 'street'
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 4 - 6
locations/lesbimistress

@@ -10,11 +10,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			'"You have become quite the obedient slave, <<$nickname>>. I often get compliments on how well behaved you are", she says.'
 			'"Thank you, Mistress", you smile. You really do try to please her as much as you can, and you''re happy she notices.'
 			'"I was looking through our paperwork the other day", she continues, "and I noticed that our contract has expired. Would you like to renew it and serve me for another year?"'
-		end
 		elseif MistressAdoration > 30 and MistressAdoration <= 60:
 			'"I was looking through our paperwork the other day," she says, "and I noticed that our contract has expired. Would you like to renew it and continue your training?"'
-		end
-		else MistressAdoration <= 30:
+		elseif MistressAdoration <= 30:
 			'"I was looking through our paperwork the other day," she says, "and I noticed that our contract has expired."'
 			'When you want to say something, she interrupts you: "I''m not finished. I have to say... I''m not satisfied with your performance. Your obedience is very lacking. I''m not sure if we should consider renewing it."'
 		end
@@ -50,8 +48,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'Mistress is disappointed of course, but to your surprise she does not object.'
 				'She simply sighs: "Get up, then. I had a feeling you would say no."'
 				'When you get up to your feet, Mistress walks over to you and gives you a tender kiss on your forehead. "Take care, <<$nickname>>... maybe I''ll see you again at the club one day."'
-				act 'Say goodbye to Mistress and leave':
-			end			
+				act 'Say goodbye to Mistress and leave': gt 'street'
+			end
 		!Mistress is underwhelmed with your performance, and fears she might be wasting her efforts on you. You will have to beg her to allow you to stay, or you can agree and just leave. If you beg, MistressObedience = 2 will be set and you will play through an 'unpleasant' scene, but you can renew.
 		else
 			act 'Beg her for another chance':
@@ -73,7 +71,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'You do as she says, noticing how Mistress'' demeanour suddenly changed a lot. It''s as if she completely lost interest in you, the moment you didn''t speak up when she expressed her doubts.'
 				'You chat for a few more minutes, reminiscing to the good times of your service. Then she walks you to the door and says: "I guess this is where we part ways, then. Take care, <<$nickname>>."'
 				'"Farewell, Mistress", you mutter, feeling a bit sad despite knowing it was the only choice.'
-				act 'Leave her apartment':
+				act 'Leave her apartment':gt'street'
 			end
 		end
 	else

+ 5 - 5
locations/parkivent

@@ -239,12 +239,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 				end
 
 				if fotoparkrand = 0:
-					'You hide behind the tree and start to take pictures of what is happening. Somehow you get carried away and one of the notice you. One of them slowly walks up behind you and grabs you, taking you to the others.'
-					'"Look what I''ve found. We''ve got ourselves a stalked." the guy holding you tight says.'
+					'You hide behind the tree and start taking pictures. Somehow you get carried away and one of the perpetrators noticed you. He slowly walks up behind you, grabs you and takes you to the others.'
+					'"Look what I''ve found. We''ve got ourselves a stalker" says the guy while holding you tightly.'
 					dynamic $clrboy
-					dynamic $CatName 'guy caught you taking pictures'
-					dynamic $CatName 'guy caught you taking pictures', '$boy1'
-					dynamic $CatName 'guy caught you taking pictures', '$boy2'
+					dynamic $CatName, 'guy caught you taking pictures'
+					dynamic $CatName, 'guy caught you taking pictures', '$boy1'
+					dynamic $CatName, 'guy caught you taking pictures', '$boy2'
 					$boy[1] = $boy1
 					$boy[2] = $boy2
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/paysex

@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> fucks you in your pussy.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 			cumprecheck = 1
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $temp2[j]
@@ -51,33 +51,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'var':
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> fucks you in your ass.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 		elseif j = 2:
 			if paysxbj = 0:bj += 1 & paysxbj = 1
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> fucks you in your mouth.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 		elseif j = 3:
 			if paysxhj = 0:hj += 1 & paysxhj = 1
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> uses one of your hands to masturbate.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 		elseif j = 4:
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> uses one of your hands to masturbate.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 		elseif j > 4:
 			if $paysextext[j] = '':
 				'<<$temp2[j]>> masturbates above your body, waiting for his turn to your body.'
 			else
-				'<<<$paysextext[j]>>'
+				'<<$paysextext[j]>>'
 			end
 		end
 		j += 1

+ 4 - 4
locations/stwork2

@@ -320,10 +320,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pr1':
 		gang += 1
 		guy += 4
 		dynamic $clrboy
-		dynamic $CatName 'guy from private striptease'
-		dynamic $CatName 'guy from private striptease', '$boy1'
-		dynamic $CatName 'guy from private striptease', '$boy2'
-		dynamic $CatName 'guy from private striptease', '$boy3'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'guy from private striptease'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'guy from private striptease', '$boy1'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'guy from private striptease', '$boy2'
+		dynamic $CatName, 'guy from private striptease', '$boy3'
 		$boy[1] = $boy1
 		$boy[2] = $boy2
 		$boy[3] = $boy3