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Text and arousal updates from Blatte

KevinSmarts vor 8 Jahren
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5588f4656e
4 geänderte Dateien mit 188 neuen und 199 gelöschten Zeilen
  1. 15 12
      locations/metro
  2. 88 87
      locations/metro_events
  3. 77 92
      locations/train
  4. 8 8
      locations/train_incidental

+ 15 - 12
locations/metro

@@ -95,10 +95,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	
 	if pusher = 1 and dealer = 0:
 		dealer = 1
-		'You see a tall, emaciated man leaning against the wall next to tracks. Looking very shady.<br>He notices you looking and beckons you closer.'
+		'You see a tall, skinny man leaning against a wall next to tracks, looking very shady.<br>He notices you eyeing him and beckons you to come closer.'
 		act 'Talk to the man':gt 'metro', 'dealer'
 	elseif dealer ! 0:
-		'You see dealer lurking around the station.'
+		'You see the same dealer lurking around the station. He''s looking around for his next customer.'
 		act 'Buy drugs':gt 'metro', 'shop'
 	end
 end
@@ -144,13 +144,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vagon':
 
 	if metro_busy = 0:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metroempty.jpg"></center>'
-		'The car is almost completely empty, one or two other passengers are in the car with you. It seems a bit odd and a little creepy seeing the car this empty. You have practically the whole car to yourself and pick the cleanest spot to sit.'
+		'The car is almost completely empty, one or two other passengers are in the car with you. It seems a bit odd and a little creepy seeing the car this empty. You have practically the whole car to yourself and pick the cleanest spot to sit on.'
 	elseif metro_busy = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metro.jpg"></center>'
-		'The car is mostly empty, leaving you a choice of seats. You easily find a place for yourself, leaving you plenty of room to get comfortable. The few other people on the car, mind their own business, leaving you to your own thoughts.'
+		'The car is mostly empty, leaving you to a choice of seats. You easily find a place for yourself, leaving you plenty of room to get comfortable. The few other people on the car, mind their own business, leaving you to immerse in your own thoughts.'
 	elseif metro_busy = 2:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metrofull<<rand(1,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'The car is full of people, all of the seats are taken, but only a few people are forced to stand. You easily find a place for yourself, at least it is not packed, leaving you plenty of room to get comfortable.'
+		'The car is full of people, all of the seats are taken, and only a few people are forced to stand. You easily find a place for yourself in a corner, at least I can breath here you think to yourself, as you get some room to get comfortable.'
 	else
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/metropacked.jpg"></center>'
 		'The car is packed with people, most of them are forced to stand, as there is not enough seats. It is so tightly packed that people are crammed tight up against each other either in the seats or standing up. You manage to squeeze yourself in among the people, you can feel other bodies pressed up tightly against yours, it is very uncomfortable and hot.'
@@ -167,7 +167,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vagon':
 	if spdirtyc > 0 or spdirtyv > 0:
 		if hour >= 7 and hour <= 21:
 			pcs_mood -= 10
-			'Several passengers are shocked, looking at the cum smears on you.'
+			'Several passengers are shocked, noticing the cum stains on you.'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -185,23 +185,26 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 	cls
-	'<b>What''s it gonna be?</b>'
+	'<b>What''s it gonna be?</b> he asks you as he opens his coat, showing the wares.'
 
-	'Small box filled with red and blue pills. There is about two dozen of each pill inside.'
+	'You see a small box filled with red and blue pills. There are about two dozen pills in the box.' 
+	'"These pills will make your brain perform at 100 percent, trust me." he says looking seriously.'
 	if money >= 1000:
 		'<a href="exec:money - 1000 & mentats_have += 20 & gt ''metro'', ''shop''">Buy neuroboosters</a> 1000 <b>₽</b>'
 	else
 		'Buy neuroboosters 1000 <b>₽</b> (You do not have enough money)'
 	end
 	'Uses left: <<mentats_have>>'
-	'Nondescript box with 10 orange pills inside.'
+	'A pillbox with 10 orange pills inside, the description is removed from the box.' 
+	'"They''re good for your muscles, I''ve got a connection with a bodybuilder, he knows his stuff." he keeps reassuring you.'
 	if money >= 1000:
 		'<a href="exec:money - 500 & steroid_have += 10 & gt ''metro'', ''shop''">Buy steroids</a> 500 <b>₽</b>'
 	else
 		'Buy steroids 500 <b>₽</b> (You do not have enough money)'
 	end
 	'Uses left: <<steroid_have>>'
-	'Paste tube with two pictures of a woman. In latter one she sports enormous bust.'
+	'An ointment tube with two pictures of a woman. It looks like a before and after picture where the latter picture sports the woman with an enormous bust.'
+	'"My former girlfriend was using this ointment and her breasts got really big." You see him drift away as he probably reminisces his former girlfriend.'
 	if money >= 1000:
 		'<a href="exec:money - 500 & bcream_have += 5 & gt ''metro'', ''shop''">Buy breast cream</a> 500 <b>₽</b>'
 	else
@@ -210,6 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 	'Uses left: <<bcream_have>>'
 	if MagikDostup = 0:
 		'Packet of pink chewing gums. There are 10 in one package.'
+		'"There is something magical about these chewing gums, they make you horny as fuck."'
 		if money >= 1000:
 			'<a href="exec:money - 200 & aphrodisiac_have += 10 & gt ''metro'', ''shop''">Buy aphrodisiacs</a> 200 <b>₽</b>'
 		else
@@ -222,8 +226,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dealer':
 	cls
-	'He sizes you up with suspicion.<br><b>"Hey miss, saw you buying Lady in the park."</b> <br>He clears his throat and spits onto the tracks.<b> "That shit will mess you up."</b><br>He opens his coat and you flinch thinking he is going to flash you, but instead you see he is wearing a business suit beneath.<br>He gestures at numerous pockets lining insides of his coat. They are filled to bursting with various packages, pills and ampules.<br><b>"Here, my product is much better. Great times and guaranteed not to kill you."</b>'
-
+	'He sizes you up with suspicion.<br><b>"Hey miss, I saw you buying White Lady in the park."</b> <br>He clears his throat and spits onto the tracks.<b> "That shit will mess you up."</b><br>He opens his coat and you flinch thinking he is going to flash you, but instead you see he is wearing a business suit beneath.<br>He gestures at numerous pockets lining insides of his coat. They are filled to bursting with various packages, pills and ampules.<br><b>"Here, my products are of a much better quality. I guarantee that they''re all organic, I take pride in having the most clean stuff of all the dealers in the city."</b>'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'metro','shop'
 end
 

+ 88 - 87
locations/metro_events

@@ -18,27 +18,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'a':
 	spot = 500*rand(16,24)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frot.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel something solid pressing against your ass, after a few moments, you realize the hardness you feel pressing against you, is someones rock hard dick.'
+	'You feel something solid pressing against your ass. A few moments pases by, as you realize what the hardness you feel pressing against you is, it''s someone''s rock hard cock!'
 	act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 	act 'Disregard':
 		cla
 		*clr
-		pcs_horny += 10
-		sub += 1
 		clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frot1.jpg"></center>'
-		'The guy standing behind you, with no regard for other passengers, grabs your butt with his hand, and rubs his crotch against your ass.'
+		'The guy standing behind you, disregarding the other passengers, grabs your butt cheek with his hand, while rubbing his crotch against your ass.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 		act 'Disregard':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			pcs_horny += 10
-			sub += 1
 			clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frot2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You feel the rock hard cock; rubbing against your ass, by the way it is moving, you are sure he has taken it out of his pants. His hands continue to cling on to you, and squeezing your buttocks.'
+			'You feel his rock hard cock more clearly now; and by the way it is moving, you are sure he has taken it out of his pants and is rubbing it against your ass. His hands continue to cling on to you, squeezing your buttocks.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 			act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 			act 'Disregard':
 				cla
@@ -52,6 +50,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'a':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotc'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
 				'The man jerks back, and stops molesting you. A few moments later, you can feel something wet seep through you clothes. After a few more seconds, the guy moves away.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 			end
 		end
@@ -66,27 +66,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'b':
 	spot = 500*rand(16,24)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You feel the man standing behind you. The man begins playing with your skirt.'
+	'There is a man standing behind you. He begins playing with your skirt.'
 	act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 			act 'Disregard':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			pcs_horny += 10
-			sub += 1
 			clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frota1.jpg"></center>'
-			'The man lifts your skirt then begins caressing your buttocks with his strong hands.'
+			'The man cautiously lifts your skirt and begins caressing your buttocks with his strong hands.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 			act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 			act 'Disregard':
 				cla
 				*clr
-				pcs_horny += 10
-				sub += 1
 				clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frota2.jpg"></center>'
-				'The man pull your panties down to your knees, then lets your skirt fall back into place. He slides his hand between your thighs to caress your pussy. After a couple of minutes of this, he pulls your hand back, and places it on his dick.'
+				'The man pulls your panties down to your knees, then lets your skirt fall back into place. He slides his hand between your thighs, caressing your clit. After a couple of minutes of pleasuring you, he pulls your hand back, placing it on his cock.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 				act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 				act 'Pull Hand Away':
 					cla
@@ -101,47 +99,45 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'b':
 					clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pull your hand away from him, and he lets you pull away. a few moments later, you can feel the head of his dick, and hand, bumping against your ass check, as he jerks off. Minutes later you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished, he pulls your panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+					'You angrily pull your hand away, which he allows you to do. A few moments later, you can feel the head of his cock, and hand, bumping against your ass check, as he jerks off. Minutes later you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheeks. Once he is finished, he pulls your panties back up over your sperm covered ass, patting you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 				end
 		        act 'Stroke his cock':
 			        cla
 					*clr
-					pcs_horny += 10
-					stat['hj'] += 1
 					gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'stranger on the metro', 0, 0, spot, svol
-					sub += 3
 					frot += 1
 					clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd.jpg"></center>'
-					'With your hand on his dick, you grip it firmly, and start stroking it. As he seems to really start enjoying it, he reaches up then places his hands on your shoulders, and tries to push you down to your knees.'
+					'With your hand on his cock, you grip it firmly, and start stroking. As he seems to really enjoy it, he reaches up then places his hands on your shoulders, trying to push you down to your knees.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 					act 'Resist and keep jerking him off':
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd1.jpg"></center>'
-						'He stand firm, and shake your shoulders a bit, he stops trying to push you down, and just relaxes as you keep jerking him off. When he moans into your ear, you start stroking it more vigorously, a couple of minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished he pulls your panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+						'He stands firm, and once again tries to push you down, but you won''t budge. As he can''t convince you, he relaxes instead, letting you go on as you keep jerking him off. When he moans into your ear, you start stroking it more vigorously, a couple of minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished he pulls your panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
 						act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 					end
 					act 'Squat':
 						cla
 						*clr
-						pcs_horny += 10
 						clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You give into his demands, and squat down in front of him, he grabs your head then turns your face to his crotch. Where you find his rock hard cock; waiting for you. He starts rubbing his dick against your face, and lips.'
+						'You give into his demands, and squat down in front of him, he grabs your head then turns your face to his crotch. His rock hard cock is waiting for you. He starts rubbing his cock against your face, and lips, teasing his cock.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 						if pcs_dom > 0:act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 						act 'Suck it':
 							cla
 							*clr
-							pcs_horny += 10
-							stat['bj'] += 1
 							guy += 1
-							sub += 2
 							frot += 1
 							clr
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You obediently start sucking his hard cock. You are sitting on your haunches; in the middle of a crowded subway car, and sucking a strangers dick.'
+							'You obediently open your mouth and begin sucking his hard cock. You are sitting on your haunches; in the middle of a crowded subway car, sucking a strangers cock.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'unknown'
 							act 'Continue to suck':
 								cla
 								*clr
@@ -152,7 +148,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'b':
 								clr
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote3.jpg"></center>'
-								'The man pulls his cock out of your mouth, and hot cum splatters across your cheek and chin. Once he has milked the last drop of sperm from his dick; into your face, he tucks his dick into his pants then moves away. Forcing his way through the crowd before disappearing, leaving you alone with his cum; all over your face.'
+								'The man pulls his cock out of your mouth, and hot cum splatters across your cheek and chin. Once he has milked the last drop of sperm from his cock onto your face, he tucks his cock into his pants and moves away. He forces his way through the crowd before disappearing, leaving you alone with his cum all over your face.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 							end
 						end
@@ -171,38 +169,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'c':
 	spot = 500*rand(16,24)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotp.jpg"></center>'
-	'The man standing behind you; shoves his hand down the back of your pants.'
+	'An unknown man nears you from behind and without any hesitation shoves his hand down the back of your pants.'
 	act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 	act 'Disregard':
 		cla
 		*clr
-		pcs_horny += 10
-		sub += 1
 		clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotp.jpg"></center>'
-		'You enjoy the nice sensation of the stranger caressing your ass; under your pants, with his other hand; he reaches around and starts fondling your breasts.'
+		'You enjoy the nice sensation while the stranger caresses your ass. With his other hand, he reaches around and begins fondling your left breast under the shirt.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
+		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 		act 'Disregard':
 			cla
 			*clr
-			pcs_horny += 10
 			clrbelo -= 1
-			sub += 1
 			clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotp2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few moments of the dual attention, your ass, and boobs feel, he pulls his hand out of your pants then uses both hands to massage your breasts.'
+			'After a few moments of the playing with your pucker, he pulls his hand out and instead grabs your second breast. He''s now fondling both of your breast while his cock is pushing against your behind.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
+			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 			act 'Enjoy':
 				cla
 				*clr
-				pcs_horny += 10
-				sub += 1
 				clr
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once he hears you moan, he pulls his hands away from your breasts, he slides them down the front of your body; to the waist of your pants. He unbuttons your pants then pulls them; along with your panties, down to your knees, leaving you; exposed from the waist down, in a crowded subway car, he takes your hand then places it on his rock hard cock.'
+				'Once he hears you moan, he pulls his hands away from your breasts, he slides them down the front of your body; to the waist of your pants. He unbuttons your pants then pulls them down; along with your panties, down to your knees, leaving you; exposed from the waist down, in a crowded subway car. He takes your hand and places it on his rock hard cock.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown', 'exhibitionism'
+				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 				act 'Pull Hand Away':
 					cla
@@ -217,24 +215,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'c':
 					clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You pull your hand away from him, and he lets you pull away. a few moments later, you can feel the head of his dick, and hand bumping against your ass check, as he jerks off. Minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished, he pulls your pants, and panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+					'As soon as you feel his in cock in your hand, you get spooked and pull away the hand. A few moments later, you feel the head of his cock, bumping against your ass check, as he jerks off. Minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished, he pulls your pants and panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, disappearing in the crowd.'gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 				end
 		        act 'Stroke his cock':
 			        cla
 					*clr
-					pcs_horny += 10
-					stat['hj'] += 1
 					gs 'cum_call', 'butt', 'stranger on the metro', 0, 0, spot, svol
-					sub += 3
 					frot += 1
 					clr
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd.jpg"></center>'
-					'With your hand on his dick, you grip it firmly then begin stroking it. As he seems to really start enjoying it, he reaches up then places his hands on your shoulder, and tries to push you down to your knees.'
+					'With your hand on his cock, you grip it firmly, and start stroking. As he seems to really enjoy it, he reaches up then places his hands on your shoulders, trying to push you down to your knees.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'hj', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 					act 'Resist and keep jerking him off':
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frotd1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You stand firm, and shake your shoulders a bit, he stops trying to push you down, and just relaxes, as you keep jerking him off. As he moans into your ear, you start stroking it more vigorously, a couple of minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished, he pulls your pants, and panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+						'He stands firm, and once again tries to push you down, but you won''t budge. As he can''t convince you, he relaxes instead, letting you go on as you keep jerking him off. When he moans into your ear, you start stroking it more vigorously, a couple of minutes later, you feel spurts of hot cum splashing against your ass cheek. Once he is finished he pulls your panties back up over your sperm covered ass then pats you on the butt, before moving away, and disappearing in the crowd.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 					end
 					act 'Squat':
@@ -244,20 +243,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'c':
 						clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You give into his demands, and squat down in front of him, he grabs your head then turns your face to his crotch. Where you find his rock hard cock; waiting for you. He starts rubbing his dick against your face and lips.'
+						'You give into his demands, and squat down in front of him, he grabs your head then turns your face to his crotch. His rock hard cock is waiting for you. He starts rubbing his cock against your face, and lips, teasing his cock.'
+						gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub', 'unknown'
 						if pcs_dom > 0:act 'Move away':gt 'metro_events', 'fin'
 						act 'Suck it':
 							cla
 							*clr
-							pcs_horny += 10
-							stat['bj'] += 1
-							guy += 1
-							sub += 2
 							frot += 1
 							clr
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You obediently start sucking his hard cock. You are sitting on your haunches; in the middle of a crowded subway car, sucking a strangers dick.'
+							'You obediently open your mouth and begin sucking his hard cock. You are sitting on your haunches; in the middle of a crowded subway car, sucking a strangers cock.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'sub', 'unknown', 
 							act 'Continue to suck':
 								cla
 								*clr
@@ -268,7 +265,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'c':
 								clr
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/grop/frote3.jpg"></center>'
-								'The man pulls his cock out of your mouth then hot cum splatters across your cheek and chin. Once he has milked the last drop of sperm from his dick; into your face, he tucks his dick into his pants then moves away. Forcing his way through the crowd, he disappears, leaving you alone with his cum all over your face.'
+								'The man pulls his cock out of your mouth, and hot cum splatters across your cheek and chin. Once he has milked the last drop of sperm from his cock onto your face, he tucks his cock into his pants and moves away. He forces his way through the crowd before disappearing, leaving you alone with his cum all over your face.'
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs 'stat'
 								act 'Finished':gt 'metro_events', 'fin2'
 							end
 						end
@@ -287,7 +286,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'fin2':
 	cla
-	'Now that he is gone, and your are covered in his cum, you notice the other passengers staring at you. You should likely clean up before your stop.'
+	'Now that he is gone, and you are covered in his cum, you notice the other passengers staring at you. You should likely clean up before your step outside.'
 	act 'Get out of the car':gt 'metro', 'start'
 end
 
@@ -296,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 	metrorand = rand(1,13)
 	if metrorand = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/aflash1.jpg"></center>'
-		'After your ride on the metro, you leave the station, following several people up the stairs, towards the street. The backside of a women''s skirt keeps lifting up; from the draft of air. Each time it lifts up, it shows off her firm tightly ass, which draws the attention of several men and a few women.'
+		'After your ride on the metro, you leave the station, following several people up the stairs, towards the street. The backside of a women''s skirt keeps lifting up; from the draft of air. Each time it lifts up, it shows off her firm tightly ass, which draws the attention of several men and even a few of the females.'
 
 		act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 2:
@@ -344,7 +343,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 		end
 	elseif metrorand = 4:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/flashd1.gif"></center>'
-		'As you leave the metro car, you, and nearly everyone else, notice two African men walking. One of them has a huge bulge in the front of his pants. When he catches you looking, he stops, and pulls his pants down. As he does a massive black dicks springs free, which causes a lot more people to look.'
+		'As you leave the metro car, you, and nearly everyone else, notice two African men walking. One of them has a huge bulge in the front of his pants. When he catches you eyeing them, he stops, pulling his pants down. As he does that a massive black cock springs free, which causes a lot more people to look in shock.'
 
 		act 'Hurry away':minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		!!act 'Smile':
@@ -353,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 			!!'text'
 	elseif metrorand = 5:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/flashus'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you notice a pretty young woman, she keeps lifting her skirt; flashing her pussy at various strangers. As you get closer she smiles at you then flashes you her pussy.'
+		'As you head through the metro station, you notice a pretty young woman, she keeps lifting her skirt; flashing her pussy at various strangers. As you get closer she smiles at you and then flashes you.'
 
 		act 'Hurry away':minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		!!act 'Smile':
@@ -367,20 +366,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 7:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/nakedg2.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you see a naked woman, she is huddle down on her knees; against one of the pillars. She is using her arms to cover up her body, as best she can; clearly ashamed.'
+		'As you head through the metro station, you see a naked woman, she is huddled down on her knees; against one of the pillars. She is using her arms to cover up her body, as best she can; clearly ashamed.'
 
 		act 'Ignore Her':minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		!!act 'Help Her':
 			!!'text'
 	elseif metrorand = 8:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/nakedm1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you see a naked man, the only thing he is wearing is a huge grin. He seems rather proud at the attention he is getting, though you have no idea why. After a quick check he is nothing special in the manhood department. He continues on his way, just as you do.'
-
+		'As you head through the metro station, you see a naked man, the only thing he is wearing is a huge grin. He seems rather proud at the attention he is getting, though you have no idea why. After a quick check you notice he packs nothing special in the manhood department. He continues on his way, just as you do.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 9:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/nakedp1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you see two couples; two men, and women. All four of them are naked, only wearing shoes, and carrying bags with them. They act normal, as if walking through the metro completely naked is a perfectly normal thing to do. They garner a lot of attention from the other people in the station, but they just head towards one of the metro trains.'
-
+		'As you head through the metro station, you see two couples looking a bit strange... All four of them are naked, only wearing shoes, carrying bags with them. They act normal, as if walking through the metro completely naked is a perfectly normal thing to do. They garner a lot of attention from the other people in the station, but they just head towards one of the metro trains.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 10:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/seethru1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -389,28 +388,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'station':
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 11:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/sex/jerkoff1.gif"></center>'
-		'As you walk past one of the pillars, you see a man with his pants around his knees jerking off, just as you walk past, he starts cumming. He starts hooting his sperm out onto the floor, barely missing a woman that happened by at the wrong moment. Once he stops cumming, he pulls his pants up, and goes about his business.'
+		'As you walk past one of the pillars, you see a man with his pants around his knees jerking off, just as you walk past, he starts cumming. He starts hooting his sperm out onto the floor, barely missing a woman that happens to go by at the wrong moment. Once he stops cumming, he pulls his pants up, and goes about his business.'
 
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 	elseif metrorand = 12:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you see a woman sitting on one of the benches in the station. Her skirt is pulled up, she has no panties, her legs are pulled up, and spread wide. Leaving plenty of room for the girl down on all fours in front of her to eat her pussy, who''s skirt is also pulled up and not wearing panties, giving everyone walking by a perfect view of her pussy.'
-		'The one sitting fends off anyone trying to join in while her friend eats her out. Many people stop to watch the pair, several people pull out their smart phones, and start recording it.'
+		'As you head through the metro station, you see a woman sitting on one of the benches in the station. Her skirt is pulled up, wearing no panties, with her legs stretched out, leaving plenty of room for the girl down on all fours in front of her to eat her pussy, who''s skirt is also pulled up, not wearing panties, giving everyone that are walking by a perfect vision of her pussy.'
+		'The one sitting fends off anyone trying to join in while her friend eats her out. Many people stop to watch the pair, several people pull out their smart phones, recording the show.'
 
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		act 'Record them':
 			cla
-			'You pull out your phone as well then start recording them. The one on all fours really is going at it, soon her friend is moaning loudly, and clutching at her hair. Moments later, she gasps loudly, and withers against her friends face, obviously having an orgasm. Once she recovers from her orgasm, she passionately kisses her friend, then the two of them get up then straighten up their clothes, before heading out.'
-			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
+			'You pull out your phone as well then start recording them. The one on all fours is going at it, and has her friend quickly moaning loudly, clutching at her hair. Moments later, she gasps loudly, and withers against her friends face, obviously having an orgasm. Once she recovers from her orgasm, they passionately kiss, then get up and straighten their clothes, before heading out.'act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	elseif metrorand = 13:
 	!!random images 1-2
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/station/sex/fuck'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you head through the metro station, you see a couple leaning against one of the walls, their clothes are pulled away just enough to let them fuck. The woman is standing bent over at the waist while the man is behind her, hammering her for all he is worth. Several people gather around the couple to watch them fuck, many of them pulling out their smart phones to record the couple fucking. A couple of men are trying to join in, but are quickly shooed away.'
+		'As you head through the metro station, you see a couple leaning against one of the walls, you see the woman struggling to keep her moans as quiet as possible as she''s bent over at the waist while the man behind her is hammering her for all he is worth. Several people gather around the couple to watch them fuck, many of them pulling out their smart phones to record the couple fucking. A couple of men are trying to join in, but are quickly shooed away.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		act 'Record them':
 			cla
-			'You pull out your phone as well then start recording them. He pounds her with out mercy, but by the sounds of her moans, she is loving every moment of it. They fuck for several more minutes until he starts to grunt, and then buries himself; balls deep in her for a moment, as he is obviously cumming. Once he pulls out of her, they both quickly get dressed then move to catch a train.'
+			'You pull out your phone as well then start recording them. He pounds her without mercy, but by the sounds of her moans, she is loving every moment of it. They fuck for several more minutes until he starts to grunt, and then buries himself; balls deep in her for a moment, as he is obviously cumming. Once he pulls out of her, they both quickly get dressed then move to catch a train.'
 
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt $loc, $metka
 		end
@@ -421,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 	metrorand = rand(1,18)
 	if metrorand = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/annoyed.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you take a seat on the metro, you hear a huff. You glance up to see a woman giving you a dirty look, like you took her seat, or something. She moves over to sit across from you, and for the rest of the ride, gives you a dirty look. You really have no idea what you did, but what ever it was it pissed her off.'
+		'As you take a seat on the metro, you hear a huff. You glance up to see a woman giving you a dirty looks, like you took her seat, or something. She moves over to sit across from you, and for the rest of the ride, gives you a dirty look. You really have no idea what you did, but whatever it was it pissed her off.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 2:
@@ -432,39 +431,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 3:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/flasha'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyones attention, and you soon learn why. She repeatedly lifts her skirt up, flashing her ass to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention that she is getting, as she maintains a very please smile.'
+		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyone''s attention, and you soon learn why. She repeatedly lifts her skirt up, flashing her ass to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention that she is getting, as she maintains a very please smile.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 4:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/flashb'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyones attention, and you soon learn why. She repeatedly lifts her shirt up, flashing her boobs to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention she is getting, as she maintains a very please smile.'
+		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyone''s attention, and you soon learn why. She repeatedly lifts her shirt up, flashing her boobs to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention she is getting, as she maintains a very pleased smile.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 5:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/flashd1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young man. As you are watching, he reaches into his pants then pulls out his dick, and stares at it. Occasionally bouncing it in place as if, playing with it.'
+		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young man. As you are watching in his direction, he reaches into his pants then pulls out his cock, and stares at it. Occasionally he''s bouncing it in place as if he''s playing with it.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 6:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/flashg'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyones attention and you soon learn why. She is repeatedly pulling her clothes away, flashing her naked body to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention she is getting, as she maintains a very please smile.'
+		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. She seems to have almost everyone''s attention and you soon learn why. She is repeatedly pulling her clothes away, flashing her naked body to the other passengers in the car. She seems to love the attention she is getting, as she maintains a very pleased smile.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 7:
 		if hotcat < 7: gt 'metro', 'vagon'
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/flashus'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman. When she sees you looking at her, she gives you a wicked grin, and winks. She then spreads her legs, showing off her pussy from under her skirt. She sticks out her tongue, and flicks it at you, as if mimicking eating pussy.'
+		
 		act 'Ignore her': gt 'metro', 'start'
 		!!act 'Smile':
 			!!'text'
 	elseif metrorand = 8:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/girlcat.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you ride the metro, you notice a young woman sitting across from you, she is playing on her phone. But that is not what draws your attention to her, it is the large black cat sitting in her lap. The cat seems surprisingly calm, and happy considering the strange people around, and movement of the train. Occasionally she reaches down to pet the cat while playing on her phone. Once the metro comes to a stop, she lifts the cat then carries it in her arms, as she leaves the train.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 9:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/kilt.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you ride the metro, you notice a man wearing a kilt. You over hear several other men commenting on him wearing a skirt, which he just ignores. He is likely use to such comments, if he has been in Russia long.'
-
+		'As you ride the metro, you notice a foreign man wearing a kilt. You overhear several other men commenting on him wearing a skirt, which he just ignores. He is likely used to such comments, as he has lived in Russia for a long time.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 10:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/manasleep.jpg"></center>'
@@ -473,8 +474,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 11:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/nakedg'+ rand(1,5) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, and notice a woman, well she is wearing shoes, but other than that she is naked. She is sitting in one of the seats, as if riding the metro naked was the most normal thing in the world. At the very next stop she gets off, leaving you wondering why she was naked, and where she was going.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman, she is wearing shoes, but other than that she is naked. She is sitting in one of the seats, as if riding the metro naked was the most normal thing in the world. At the very next stop she gets off, leaving you wondering why she was naked, and where she was going.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 12:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/nakedm'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
@@ -483,34 +484,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 13:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/nakedgm1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice several naked men. They are laughing, and talking, and also appear to be a little drunk. They seem to be aware of all the looks that they are getting, but find it more funny, than anything. Often winking at any of the women that look there way. At the very next stop, they get off, leaving you wondering why they was naked, and where they were going.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice several naked men. They are laughing, and talking, they appear to be a little drunk. They seem to be aware of all the looks that they are getting, finding it amusing, than anything. They often wink at any of the women looking their way. At the very next stop, they get off, leaving you wondering why they were naked, and where they were going.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 14:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/3some1.gif"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman half naked kneeling in one of the seats. A man behind her is fucking her hard, while she sucks the dick of another man in front of her. This goes on for some time until finally both of the men; cum inside of her respectively in each of the holes that they was fucking. Once done, they get dressed, and sit together then start talking among themselves. At your stop, you leave, as they remain on the train.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman half naked kneeling in one of the seats. A man behind her is fucking her roughly, while she sucks the cock of another man. This goes on for some time until both of the men cum inside of her in each of the hole they were using. Once done, they get dressed, and sit together then start talking among themselves. They remain on the train, as you get off at your stop.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 15:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/anal1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman naked from the waist down, on all fours in the middle of the car. She does seem to have a collar around her neck with a leash attached. Another woman is squatting in front of her, reaching back to pull her butt checks apart. While a man behind the kneeling woman pounds her ass, the sounds of her cries makes it hard to tell, if she is enjoying the experience or not.'
-		'Once he finishes, the squatting woman reaches down, and grabs the leash then tightly pulls on it, almost choking the other girl. She and the man, talk for a bit, while the leashed girl stays on her knees, still naked from the waist down, but with cum running down her thighs. After their talk the man goes to take a seat, while the woman holding the leash, walks over to another spot to sit. Tugging on the leash to pull the other girl along, after a few more minutes, she leans over and whispers something to the leashed girl, who then gets dressed again, but remains kneeling at the feet, of what can only be, her mistress.'
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman naked from the waist down, on all fours in the middle of the car. She seems to have a collar around her neck with a leash attached. Another woman is squatting in front of her, reaching back, pulling her butt checks apart. All while a man behind the kneeling woman grabs his cock and begins pounding her ass, the sounds of her cries makes it hard to tell, if she is enjoying the experience or not.'
+		'Once he finishes, the squatting woman reaches down, and grabs the leash then tightly pulls on it, almost choking the other girl. She and the man, talk for a bit, while the leashed girl stays on her knees, still naked from the waist down, but with cum running down her thighs. After their talk the man goes to take a seat, while the woman holding the leash, walks over to another spot to sit. Tugging on the leash to pull the other girl along, after a few more minutes, she leans over and whispers something to the leashed girl, who then gets dressed again, but remains kneeling at the feet, of what can only be, her dominatrix.'
 
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 16:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/fingering1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman with her skirt pulled up, and panties pushes aside being finger banged by a man in a suit. Her cries of ecstasy get louder, and louder, as he keeps it up until they finally reach a crescendo, leaving her legs to buckle. Forcing the man to catch her before she crumples to the floor. She leans against him, as he holds her tight, pulling her clothes back in place. You can hear them laughing at the attention they got, she is blushing, and they quickly exit at the next stop.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a woman with her skirt pulled up and panties pushed aside being finger banged by a man in a suit. Her cries of ecstasy get louder, and louder, as he keeps it up until she finally climaxes, leaving her legs to buckle, forcing the man to catch her before she crumples to the floor. She leans against him, as he holds her tight, pulling her clothes back in place. You can hear them laughing at the attention they got, she is blushing, and they quickly exit at the next stop.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 17:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/fuck'+ rand(1,3) +'.gif"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a couple with just enough clothes removed to let them fuck. Which they are doing with some gusto. Many people are watching them, some even pull out smart phones then begin recording it. They switch to several positions during the ride. The man seems to have a lot of stamina, as they are still going at it hard, and heavy when your stop arrives.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a couple having intercourse in the car. They are going at each other like animals. Many people are watching them, some even pull out their smart phones, recording them. They switch between several sex positions during the ride, getting more and more turned on. The man seems to have a lot of stamina, as they are still going at it hard, as you leave the car at your end station.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 18:
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has a orgasm, once she does she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. They share several french kisses, for the rest of the ride, exiting at the next stop.'
-
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has an orgasm, once she’’s finished, she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. For the rest of the ride, they keep making out, leaving the car at the next stop.'
+		
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	end
 end

+ 77 - 92
locations/train

@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'village':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadyukino is not far from here.'
+	'A fairly non-descript railway platform. The small village of Gadyukino where your grandparents reside is not far from here.'
 
 	act 'Return to the road':minut += 15 & nroad = 10 & gt 'road'
 
@@ -192,7 +192,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldtown':
 !!image needs to be random 1-3
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
 			'You pay for the ticket and board the next train going to Pavlovsk.'
-			'After 5 minutes, you see the town of Pavlovsk approaching. Pavlovsk Castle is an impressive sight, even from a long distance. The train stops at its final destination, a platform in Pavlovsk station.'
+			'After 5 minutes, you see the town of Pavlovsk approaching. Pavlovsk Castle is an impressive sight, even from a long distance. The train stops at its final destination, a platform at Pavlovsk station.'
 
 			act 'Get off the train at this station':minut += 20 & nroad = 20 & gt 'vokzalperG'
 		end
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldtownN':
 	if train_dest < 4 and train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 10: gt 'train_incidental', 'events'
 !!image needs to be random 1-3
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at another station. The village of Gadyukino is not far from here.'
+	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at another station. The small village of Gadyukino where your grandparents reside is not far from here.'
 	act 'Get off the train at this station':
 		$metka = 'village'
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'villageN':
 	if train_dest < 3 and train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 10: gt 'train_incidental', 'events'
 !!image needs to be random 1-3
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/oldplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at an old platform. The communal cottages are in this area along with some fields and not much else.'
+	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at an old platform. The communal cottages are in this area along with some wide open fields streching as long as your eyes can see.'
 	act 'Get off the train at this station':
 		$metka = 'old_platform'
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'industrialS':
 	if train_dest > 3 and train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 10: gt 'train_incidental', 'events'
 !!image needs to be random 1-3
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/oldplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at an old platform. The communal cottages are in this area along with some fields and not much else.'
+	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at an old platform. The communal cottages are in this area along with some wide open fields streching as long as your eyes can see.'
 	act 'Get off the train at this station':
 		train_dir = 0
 		$metka = 'old_platform'
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'communalS':
 	if train_dest > 4 and train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 10: gt 'train_incidental', 'events'
 !!image needs to be random 1-3
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/gadplat.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at another station. The village of Gadyukino is not far from here.'
+	'After 10 more minutes, the train stops at another station. The village of Gadyukino where you grandparents reside is not far from here.'
 	act 'Get off the train at this station':
 		$metka = 'village'
 		if train_event = 0 and rand(1, 100) <= 5: gt 'train_incidental', 'end'
@@ -404,13 +404,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 	gs 'stat'
     '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
     '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/pavplat.jpg" ></center>'
-    'When you bought your ticket, they told you that you had just missed the train. A little miffed at this, you take a seat on one of the benches on the platform to wait for the next train to the city to one to arrive.'   
+    'After you bought your ticket, they told you that you had just missed the train. A little miffed at this, you take a seat on one of the benches on the platform to wait for the next train to the city to one to arrive.'   
     act 'A man approaches you with an offer':
 		*clr
 		cla
         '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
         '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weed.jpg" ></center>'
-		'Only a few minutes have passed when you hear someone walk up right behind you and stop. You know they must be mere inches away, so you turn to look. Standing there is a young man, smiling at you, holding up a self-rolled cigarette... that looks suspiciously like a joint. The guy doesn''t seem too concerned about somebody catching him with that in public, though, and focuses entirely on you:'
+		'Only a few minutes have passed when you hear someone walk up behind you and stop. You know they must be mere inches away, so you turn to look. Standing there is a young man, smiling at you, holding up a self-rolled cigarette... that looks suspiciously like a joint. The guy doesn''t seem too concerned about somebody catching him with that in public, though, and focuses entirely on you:'
         *nl		
 		'"Hey beautiful, I couldn''t help but notice you sitting here all by yourself. Guess you missed the train, too, huh?" He looks around, as if he only just noticed that he was walking around a public place with a joint in his hand, then leans down and whispers conspiratorially: "How about we blaze one while we wait?"'
 
@@ -492,28 +492,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedhorny.jpg" ></center>'
 				'If you were simply horny, you might not have accompanied him, but the XTC had fully taken effect by now, your mind was in a rush and you felt like you could trust the guy who just drugged you, so you went with him, looking forward to some ''fun''. He leads you across the tracks to the less-used side of the platform and takes you behind one of the roofed waiting areas. Once there, he starts kissing you and pulling your top aside enough to bare your breasts, squeezing and caressing them as you make out, and you groan into his mouth in response.'
 				*nl
-				'You are turned on beyond reason and badly want to fuck him, or anybody else, as long as you just get to have a cock inside you. The XTC tells you that he is a great guy, that you can feel safe with him, that nothing you do here will backfire. Your hands undo his pants, you pull out his dick and start stroking him with one hand while your other hand is rubbing your pussy through your clothes.'
+				'You are turned on beyond reason and badly want to fuck him, or anybody else, as long as you just get to have a cock inside you. The XTC tells you that he is a great guy, that you can feel safe with him, that nothing you do here will backfire. Your hands undo his pants, you pull out his cock and start stroking him with one hand while your other hand is rubbing your pussy through your clothes.'
 				gs 'boyStat', 72
-				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
-				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'unknown'
 				act 'Suck him':
 					cls
 					'<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedbj.jpg" ></center>'
-					'He gently pushes down on your shoulders and that is all the encouragement you need. You squat down in front of him at once, taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your mouth and start sucking him. Your tongue is giving every bit of his cock it can reach its attention and you bob your head back and forth, your <<$liptalk>> wrapped tightly around his shaft.' 
+					'He gently pushes down your shoulders and that is all the encouragement you need. You squat down in front of him at once, taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth and start sucking him. Your tongue is giving every bit of his cock it can reach its attention and you bob your head back and forth, your <<$liptalk>> wrapped tightly around his shaft.' 
 					*nl
 					'Then you take him as deep into your mouth as you can, keeping him there until you start to gag and have to come up for air, but after two, three heavy breaths to recover, you take him inside again, now rapidly moving your head, sucking and deepthroating him for all your worth.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat'
-					gs 'stat'
-					act 'fuck him':
+					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'deepthroat', 'unknown'
+					act 'Fuck him':
 						cls
                         '<center><h4>Pavlovsk Station</h4></center>'
                         '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedvag.jpg" ></center>'
-						'He is having the time of his life, but all your blowjob does is making you hornier, and you can''t take it any longer: You start taking your clothes off while you keep blowing him, removing every item below your waist. Once your pussy and ass are bare, you pull him down and get him to lay down on his back.'
+						'He is having the time of his life, but all your blowjob does is making you hornier, and you can''t take it any longer: You start removing your clothes bit for bit while you keep blowing him, until every item below your waist is removed. Once your pussy and ass are bare, you pull him down and get him to lay down on his back.'
 						*nl
-						'He has barely even touched the ground when you have already straddled him, facing his legs, and lowering yourself down until you feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock stretch out your wet cunt. You moan out loud as you impale yourself on his shaft, going all the way down on the first stroke. You lift yourself up again and, again, take his entire length, faster this time. Then again, and again, riding him harder and faster with every stroke, his dick feeling as big as that of a prized stallion.'
-                        gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom'
-                        gs 'stat'
+						'He has barely even touched the ground when you have already straddled him, facing his legs, and lowering yourself down until you feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock stretch out your wet cunt. You moan out loud as you impale yourself on his shaft, going all the way down on the first stroke. You lift yourself up again and, again, take his entire length, faster this time. Then again, and again, riding him harder and faster with every stroke, his cock feeling as big as that of a prized stallion.'
+                        gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'dom', 'unknown'
 						act 'Take his cum':
 							cls
                             spafinloc = 12
@@ -524,14 +521,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'weed':
                             '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/weedcum.jpg" ></center>'
 							'You give him the fuck of a lifetime, feeling your orgasm approaching fast, so close, so very close... but he lifts you off and quickly stands up. "I''m about to cum!"'
 							*nl
-							$orgasm_txt = 'You have half a mind to say the same but you are too turned on to speak. You squat down in front of him again, and start jerking him off as you open your mouth and stick out your tongue. It only takes a few strokes before he shoots most of his load into your mouth, with a few stray squirts landing on your chin.'
-							gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'deepthroat'
-							if $orgasm_txt ! '': 'You squat down in front of him again, and start jerking him off as you open your mouth and stick out your tongue. It only takes a few strokes before he shoots most of his load into your mouth, with a few stray squirts landing on your chin.'
-							$orgasm_txt = ''
+							'You have half a mind to say the same but you are too turned on to speak. You squat down in front of him again, and start jerking him off as you open your mouth and stick out your tongue. It only takes a few strokes before he shoots most of his load into your mouth, with a few stray squirts landing on your chin.'
 							*nl
-							'With your mouth still open, you show him his sperm on your tongue before you swallow it down, then start sucking his dick again. He was getting soft, but you feel him getting hard again in your mouth and you are already looking forward to another go so you can have your own orgasm.' 
+							'With your mouth still open, you show him his sperm on your tongue before you swallow it down, then start sucking his cock again. He was getting soft, but you feel him getting hard again in your mouth and you are already looking forward to another go so you can have your own orgasm.' 
 							*nl
-							'That''s when you hear the train coming. "The train''s here; we have to stop", he states, with a hint of regret, as he pulls his dick out of your mouth. Without another look at you, he quickly pulls up his pants and rushes over to the train as it comes to a stop. You hurriedly get dressed as well and then rush after him to get on the train. You make it just in time - the doors close almost as soon as you are in.'
+							'That''s when you hear the train coming. "The train''s here; we have to stop", he states, with a hint of regret, as he pulls his cock out of your mouth. Without another look at you, he quickly pulls up his pants and rushes over to the train as it comes to a stop. You hurriedly get dressed as well and then rush after him to get on the train. You make it just in time - the doors close almost as soon as you are in.'
                             gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
                             act 'Board the train to the city':
@@ -570,7 +564,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 		cla
 	    '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
 		'After the first stop you are walking past the open door of one of the private compartments, you hear a man''s voice call out to you: "Hello there, young lady! Would you care to join me?"'
-		'You stop and look inside, finding a man sitting there with a clean-shaved face and a select few wrinkles that accentuate his angular features; you estimate that he''s in his late thirties or early forties. The expensive suit he''s wearing and the hints of cologne tickling your nose speak volumes of his wealth and his self-confident, even smug expression tells the rest of the story. He motions for you to sit with him. "It''s alright, there''s plenty of room in here. Why don''t you come in and close the door?"'
+		'You stop and look inside, finding a clean-shaved man sitting there with a select few wrinkles that accentuate his angular features; you estimate that he''s in his late thirties or early forties. The expensive suit he''s wearing and the hints of cologne tickling your nose speak volumes of his wealth and his self-confident, even smug expression tells the rest of the story. He motions for you to sit with him. "It''s alright, there''s plenty of room in here. Why don''t you come in and close the door?"'
 		*nl
 		'You hesitate - he is undressing you with his eyes and not even trying to hide it, so you doubt that all he wants is a conversational partner and, sure enough, when he notices your pause, he pulls 500<b>₽</b> out of his wallet and puts it on the seat next to him. "If you come in and close the door, we can have a very enjoyable trip together... and you can get off with a little pocket money."'
 		act 'Refuse him':
@@ -594,11 +588,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 			end
 			'You bite your lower lip as you consider his offer. You could use the money... and the thought of having sex on the train is exciting in itself, too. With your mind made-up, you step inside, close the door behind you and pull the privacy blinds down. When you turn back to him, you see that he already has his cock out and is looking at you with a strange, self-satisfied smile.' 
 			*nl
-			'Unfazed by his boldness, you kneel down in front of him and lick up and down his length a few times before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth, noticing that even it smells of that nice cologne. Your tongue moves around the head as you suck his dick and you start bobbing your head up and down while your hands take turns playing with his shaved balls. It''s hard for you to decide whether you want to move slow and tease him or speed up to avoid getting caught, but what you are doing seems to be to his liking.'
+			'Unfazed by his boldness, you kneel down in front of him and lick up and down his length a few times before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth, noticing that even it smells of that nice cologne. Your tongue moves around the head as you suck his cock and you start bobbing your head up and down while your hands take turns playing with his shaved balls. It''s hard for you to decide whether you want to move slow and tease him or speed up to avoid getting caught, but what you are doing seems to be to his liking.'
 			*nl
-			'"Good girl", he whispers, "I knew you could suck cock as soon as I saw you." His praise causes you to smile a little around his dick and you take him a little deeper in response.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'exhibitionism'
-			gs 'stat'
+			'"Good girl", he whispers, "I knew you could suck cock as soon as I saw you." His praise causes you to smile a little around his cock and you take him a little deeper in response.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'prostitution', 'sub', 'unknown'
 
 			act 'First stop':
 				cls
@@ -607,20 +600,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 				*nl
 				'The train leaves the station without incident, however, and at that point, the man motions for you to stop and get up with him. He turns you around and bends you over, pulling your clothes aside just enough to expose your pussy which, by this point, is dripping wet from the immense thrill of your risky actions. In one smooth stroke, his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock is inside you, the full length buried to the hilt, the feeling so intense that you have to keep yourself from moaning too loud; and the sensations multiply when he starts to move.' 
 				*nl
-				'He is not gentle with you, by any means, but the truth is that you wouldn''t have wanted gentle "love-making" in this situation - you are having sex on a train, for crying out loud! And all it would take would be one curious passenger brave enough to peek inside to expose you as the slut you are, but that is what makes it so wonderful, so depraved and exciting, and it is exactly why, at that moment, you want to be fucked hard, and he is more that happy to give you the pounding you crave.' 
+				'He is not gentle with you, by any means, but the truth is that you wouldn''t have wanted gentle "love-making" in this situation - you are having sex on a train, for crying out loud! And all it would take would be one curious passenger brave enough to peek inside to expose you as the slut you are, but that is what makes it so wonderful, so depraved and exciting, and it is exactly why, at that moment, you want to be fucked hard, and he is more than happy to give you the pounding you crave.' 
 				*nl
 				'The man keeps going for a while until he starts breathing harder. You faintly notice that the train is slowing down and coming to a halt. People are getting off and on the train, surely somebody could discover you at any moment, and the blinds on the window aren''t fully closed either! But you cannot think straight and your lover chooses this particular moment of half-awareness to stop and lay you down on the seat.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'exhibitionism'
-				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'prostitution', 'sub', 'unknown'
 
 				act 'Second stop':
 					cls
 				    '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/rideanal.jpg" ></center>'
-					'Once he has you laying on your back, bedded on dusty seat cushions and your nether parts fully exposed to him and anybody who might enter, he moves up and slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass without warning. It enters surprisingly easily and even though you are unprepared, you manage to relax enough to avoid any pain. It certainly helps that he is taking it slow, giving your plenty of time to adjust to his dick while your mind is racing, running hot as it tries to comprehend how a simple train ride ended up with you having anal sex, on the train, with a complete stranger!' 
+					'Once he has you laying on your back, bedded on dusty seat cushions and your nether parts fully exposed to him and anybody who might enter, he moves up and slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass without warning. It enters surprisingly easily and even though you are unprepared, you manage to relax enough to avoid any pain. It certainly helps that he is taking it slow, giving your plenty of time to adjust to his cock while your mind is racing, running hot as it tries to comprehend how a simple train ride ended up with you having anal sex, on the train, with a complete stranger!' 
 					*nl
 					'Honestly, it makes relaxing difficult because your muscles are twitching around him in excitement and you can barely contain your moans. He goes a little deeper and a little faster, but your ass is too much for him and he can''t last much longer. You feel the first spurt of sperm deposited in your ass a second later and, as he continues to cum, he pulls out of you.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'exhibitionism'
-					gs 'stat'
+					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'prostitution', 'sub', 'unknown'
 
 					act 'Finished':
 						cls
@@ -630,14 +621,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 						spafinloc = 4
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 	                    '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/ridecum.jpg" ></center>'
-						'As he does, several spurts shoot all over your ass and you can feel more of his spunk leaking out of your gaping anus. With a final grunt and spurt, he sits down opposite you, giving you and the state he left you in an appreciative look before he puts his dick away and hands you the 500<b>₽</b>... And then, he simply pulls out a newspaper and starts reading it. The switch from ravaging your asshole to perusal is so sudden that you are confused for a moment. You soon realize, however, that he is really no longer paying attention to you and you are laying around with cum dripping out of your backdoor, so you quickly get up and get yourself cleaned up.'
+						'As he does, several spurts shoot all over your ass and you can feel more of his spunk leaking out of your gaping anus. With a final grunt and spurt, he sits down opposite you, giving you and the state he left you in an appreciative look before he puts his cock away and hands you the 500<b>₽</b>... And then, he simply pulls out a newspaper and starts reading it. The switch from ravaging your asshole to perusal is so sudden that you are confused for a moment. You soon realize, however, that he is really no longer paying attention to you and you are laying around with cum dripping out of your backdoor, so you quickly get up and get yourself cleaned up.'
 						
 						act 'Your stop':
 							cls
 						    '<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/pantyup.gif" ></center>'
 							'Once you are dressed again and have removed most off the sperm, you sit down and quietly study the man you had sex with who seems content to spend the rest of the ride in silence and feigned obliviousness to your presence. After a bit, you pull out your phone and amuse yourself with it until the train finally reaches your destination. "Well, this is my stop", you tell him.'
 						    *nl
-						    'He looks up from his newspaper for the first time since he came. "I wish you a safe trip. And thank you for making this ride a bit less dull", he adds with a wink before returning to the headlines. You leave the compartment, the strange and naughty events fresh on your mind, and make your way to the closest exit.'
+						    'He looks up from his newspaper for the first time since he came. "I wish you a safe trip. And thank you for making this ride a bit less dull." he adds with a wink before returning to the headlines. You leave the compartment, the strange and naughty events fresh on your mind, and make your way to the closest exit.'
 						    gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						    gs 'stat'
 
@@ -688,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':
 		*clr
 		cla
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride2.jpg" ></center>'
-		'You feel sorry for him but you really don''t have time for this, especially since you think this won''t be just a quick walk - after all, accepting a handful of nuts from him turned into storytime! You inform him, with audible regret, that you just don''t have the time to accompany him; he nods sadly but understandingly and, once you''ve disembarked the train, you both go your seperate ways.'
+		'You feel sorry for him but you really don''t have time for this, especially since you think this won''t be just a quick walk - after all, accepting a handful of nuts from him turned into story time! You inform him, with audible regret, that you just don''t have the time to accompany him; he nods sadly but understandingly and, once you''ve disembarked the train, you both go your separate ways.'
 !!which of these acts show up depending on where Sveta was going when the act triggered obviously.
 		act 'Continue': gt $loc, $metka
 	end
@@ -712,23 +703,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'oldman':
 			gs 'boyStat', 72
 			gs 'pain', 3, 'vaginal', 'ache'
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/oldvag.jpg" ></center>'
-			'"Poor guy", you think to yourself. After all he''s been through, his request doesn''t seem like too tall an order; he really looks like he could use a little love, so you nod your head and are halfway down on your knees when he stops you: "I am very grateful you want to help me, Miss, but my wife didn''t believe in oral sex and I think she rubbed off on me. Maybe you could just... take off your bottoms?", he asks in a pleading and hopeful tone. You raise an eyebrow - you actually kinda hoped that a quick blowjob would be the extent of it and he must be the first man you''ve met who actually turned one down - but you agreed to "sex", after all. You wordlessly strip from the waist down and watch as he does the same, feeling a little uneasy now that you''re half-naked in this strange place. It doesn''t help that the old man''s look is a lot more lecherous now, but who would blame him in this situation?'
+			'"Poor guy", you think to yourself. After all he''s been through, his request doesn''t seem like too tall an order; he really looks like he could use a little love, so you nod your head and are halfway down on your knees when he stops you: "I am very grateful you want to help me, Miss, but my wife didn''t believe in oral sex and I think she rubbed off on me. Maybe you could just... take off your bottoms?", he asks in a pleading and hopeful tone. You raise an eyebrow - you actually kind of hoped that a quick blowjob would be the extent of it and he must be the first man you''ve met who actually turned one down - but you agreed to "sex", after all. You wordlessly strip from the waist down and watch as he does the same, feeling a little uneasy now that you''re half-naked in this strange place. It doesn''t help that the old man''s look is a lot more lecherous now, but who would blame him in this situation?'
 			*nl
-			'He turns you around and has you put one foot up on the gate blocking the door, spreading your legs as you face the door. The elderly guy comes up behind you and, without warning, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your vagina. He didn''t even check if you were wet, roughly boring through any resisting tissue. You grit your teeth to stifle a cry of pain, but it escapes you anyway when he begins to roughly fuck you, holding you by your hips and pulling your ass back against him. You endured, sure that he wouldn''t last long, but he ends up fucks you for quite a while before he pulls out. By this point, you were somewhat lubricated and a little numb to the pain, but you were still glad it was over... except it wasn''t.' 
+			'He turns you around and has you put one foot up on the gate blocking the door, spreading your legs as you face the door. The elderly guy comes up behind you and, without warning, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your vagina. He didn''t even check if you were wet, roughly boring through any resisting tissue. You grit your teeth to stifle a cry of pain, but it escapes you anyway when he begins to roughly fuck you, holding you by your hips and pulling your ass back against him. You endure, sure that he wouldn''t last long, but he ends up fucking you for quite a while before he pulls out. By this point, you were somewhat lubricated and a little numb to the pain, but you were still glad it was over... except it wasn''t.' 
 			*nl
-			'The old man simply pulls you down to the ground, laying you on your side in a spoon position, he right behind you, and slips his dick back into you. A second later, he has resumed pounding your pussy as hard as he physically can.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'rough'
-			gs 'stat'
+			'The old man simply pulls you down to the ground, laying you on your side in a spoon position, he right behind you, and slips his cock back into you. A second later, he has resumed pounding your pussy as hard as he physically can.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 15, 'rough', 'unknown'
 
 			act 'Surprise buttsex':
 				cls
 				gs 'pain', 3, 'asshole', 'ache'
 				'<center><im  src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/oldanal.jpg" ></center>'
-				'He keeps this up for a while and it is almost starting to feel okay when he pulls out and pauses. Again, you briefly think that he is done and only have a second to realize that, actually, he is rubbing the tip of his dick against you anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his dick as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering your ass. "My wife loved anal", he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh, "I hope you don''t mind."'
+				'He keeps this up for a while and it is almost starting to feel okay when he pulls out and pauses. Again, you briefly think that he is done and only have a second to realize that, actually, he is rubbing the tip of his cock against you anus. Before you can even protest, his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock has already painfully penetrated your ass. You instinctively want to flinch away but he grabs your hips with surprising strength and forces his cock as far into your ass as he can... before he starts hammering your ass. "My wife loved anal", he informs you between slaps of flesh against flesh, "I hope you don''t mind."'
 				*nl
 				'You can merely groan in response as he violates your little asshole. His wife must have really liked rough sex, if this was the norm for them. He lifts your leg up and props your foot on the wall to keep your legs spread, which thankfully puts you at an angle where it hurts a little less. Still, you are really starting to regret that you wanted to help him out.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough'
-				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'rough', 'unknown'
 
 				act 'Take his cum':
 					cls
@@ -784,26 +773,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fit':
 	act 'Accept his offer':
 		cls
 		'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/fit.jpg" ></center>'
-		'You consider his offer; it doesn''t exactly sound like a smart idea to go on a walk along the train tracks with a complete stranger. But somewhere between his charming compliments and the hard abs he let you feel, you lost all sense for what is smart and now that he asks you to go with him, you throw caution to the wind because it could be fun.' 
+		'You consider his offer; it doesn''t exactly sound like a smart idea to go on a walk along the train tracks with a complete stranger. But somewhere between his charming compliments and the hard abs he let you feel, you lose all sense for what is smart and now that he asks you to go with him, you throw caution to the wind because it could be fun.' 
 		*nl
 		'You let him know you would love to go for that walk and, once you''ve reached your destination, you disembark the train together and wait for it to pull out of the station. He then takes you by the hand and leads you down the tracks, talking to you about how pretty you are, his flirting amped up to eleven.'
 		*nl
 		'The two of you end up walking further than you expected, well out of sight of the station, when he finally stops and starts kissing you so abruptly are momentarily stunned. Your friend doesn''t lose any time, however, and his hands are, piece by piece, removing your clothes as you passionately kiss him back. He has you half-naked in no time, right here out on the tracks, and you feel thrilled at the idea someone could very easily happen by and see you like this.'
 		*nl
-		'While you are making out, his fingers find your clit and... you don''t really know what he''s doing or how he''s touching you, but there is no doubt that he knows <b>exactly</b> what he has to do to please you: Every move of him feels like jolts of electricity are running through your body, waves of relish going up and down your spine. Half the town could be watching you right now, for all you cared, as long as he didn''t stop.' 
+		'While you are making out, his fingers find your clit and... you don''t really know what he''s doing or how he''s touching you, but there is no doubt that he knows <b>exactly</b> what he has to do to please you: Every move of him feels like jolts of electricity are running through your body, waves of relish going up and down your spine. Half the town could be watching you right now, for all you care, as long as he doesn''t stop.' 
 		*nl
 		'But, of course, he does once he has you good and wet and he gently pushes you down by your shoulders so you can reciprocate.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 5, 'exhibitionism'
-		gs 'stat'
+		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 15, 'unknown'
 
 		act 'Give him a blowjob':
 			cls
 			gs 'boyStat', 72
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/fitbj.jpg" ></center>'
-			'As much as you would have liked to feel his heavenly fingers some more, you drop to your knees and waste no time in taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep into your mouth, immediately feeling his hand on back of your head. You wrap your lips tightly around the shaft of his dick and bob your head, sucking hard on him to give him an idea of the intense stimulation he gave you. Occasionally, he uses his hand to force you deeper down on him so you would gag a bit on his dick, but he seems mostly content with letting you pleasure him at your own pace.'
+			'As much as you would have liked to feel his heavenly fingers some more, you drop to your knees and waste no time in taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock deep into your mouth, immediately feeling his hand on back of your head. You wrap your lips tightly around the shaft of his cock and bob your head, sucking hard on him to give him an idea of the intense stimulation he gave you. Occasionally, he uses his hand to force you deeper down on him so you would gag a bit on his cock, but he seems mostly content with letting you pleasure him at your own pace.'
 			*nl
 			'You stay on your knees, blowing him, for quite a while - if the sore jaw muscles are anything to go by - and even with your discarded clothes to kneel on, you''re probably going to have sore knees after this.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'exhibitionism'
+			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'deepthroat', 'unknown'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'legL', 'ache'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'legR', 'ache'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -811,11 +799,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fit':
 			act 'Let him fuck you':
 				cls
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/fitvag.jpg" ></center>'
-				'He pulls you up, back on your feet, and turns you around. You expect him to bend you over the next moment but instead, he lifts one of your legs off the ground and you feel him rubbing the head of his dick against your pussy lips, teasing you and himself and getting you all worked up again. Once he his tip is nice and wet, he slides his <<dick>>cm cock into you, filling your pussy with his <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
+				'He pulls you up, back on your feet, and turns you around. You expect him to bend you over the next moment but instead, he lifts one of your legs off the ground and you feel him rubbing the head of his cock against your pussy lips, teasing you and himself and getting you all worked up again. Once he his tip is nice and wet, he slides his <<dick>>cm cock into you, filling your pussy with his <<$dick_girth>> cock.'
 				*nl
 				'Holding one of your legs up with one hand, his other wraps around your waist to help you keep your balance and you have to reach back, around his shoulders, as well to support yourself, but it is easy in the face of the pleasure you''re feeling. He strokes the length of his cock inside you, giving you a passionate fuck right there on the train tracks. You moans come loud and unrestrained; you don''t care if anyone is nearby, if anybody can hear you, or see you. He completely fills you, both physical and emotionally, and every rational thought is washed away by waves of pleasure.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism'
-				gs 'stat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'unknown'
 
 				act 'Take his cum':
 					cls
@@ -823,9 +810,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fit':
 					spafinloc = 12
 					gs 'cum_manage'
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/fitcum.jpg" ></center>'
-					'His hard breathing turns into moans and, the next moment, he pulls out of you, letting go of your leg and body. You squat down in front of him, rubbing your clit and opening your mouth. Before he can even get his dick back into your mouth, the first jet of cum spurts across your lips; the following ones end up shooting into your now fully-opened mouth.'
+					'His hard breathing turns into groans and, the next moment, he pulls out of you, letting go of your leg and body. You squat down in front of him, rubbing your clit and opening your mouth. Before he can even get his cock back into your mouth, the first jet of cum spurts across your lips; the following ones end up shooting into your now fully-opened mouth.'
 					*nl
-					'He squeezes the last few drops of sperm into your mouth and then sticks his dick in your mouth. You swallow his cum obediently and then suck his dick clean, licking every tasty inch of it you can reach. Once he is going soft in your mouth, he pulls back and the two of you start getting dressed.'
+					'He squeezes the last few drops of sperm into your mouth and then sticks his cock in your mouth. You swallow his cum obediently and then suck his cock clean, licking every tasty inch of it you can reach. Once he is going soft in your mouth, he pulls back and the two of you start getting dressed.'
 					*nl
 					'Naturally, he is the first to be back in order but he waits until you are cleaned up and presentable again and then walks you back to the station. The walk back is anything but awkward: He flirts with you, just like he did at the very start, and you are getting the sense that he might be genuinely interested in you. Or, at the very least, he''s not the kind of ass who just wants to fuck you and forget you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -853,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'young':
 		$metka = ''
 	end
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride1.jpg" ></center>'
-	'You are sitting in an empty seat by the window and looking outside, lost in thought, as others board the train and it eventually departs. Most of the train ride passes in silent daydream and the scenery outside blurs together. It''s not until someone heavily sits down next to you that you snap out of it. You turn to see a good looking young guy in his early to mid twenties, greeting you with a bright smile. "I''ve gotta say: I''ve walked from one end of this train to the other and you are by far the most beautiful girl on it."' 
+	'You are sitting in an empty seat by the window, looking outside, lost in thought, as others board the train and it eventually departs. Most of the train ride passes in you silently daydreaming with the scenery outside blurring together. It''s not until someone heavily sits down next to you that you snap out of it. You turn to see a good looking young guy in his early to mid-twenties, greeting you with a bright smile. "I''ve gotta say: I''ve walked from one end of this train to the other and you are by far the most beautiful girl on it."' 
 	*nl
 	'You blush slightly at his compliment. "Thank you, you''re not so bad looking yourself", you reply as you look him over. He is well groomed, with a nice suit jacket over a button-up shirt. His pants are patched but you suppose it is done intentionally, for style - still, it clashes with the nice jacket and makes it look like he is trying to look his best but hasn''t quite figured out all the tricks yet.'
 	*nl
@@ -877,42 +864,42 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'young':
 		'You look him over and bite your lower lip as you consider his suggestion. You don''t even know him but, somehow, that makes it an even bigger turn on. You know exactly what he wants and, to your own small surprise, you find yourself wanting it too.' 
 		*nl
 		'"Okay", is all you say to him but, really, that is all he needs to hear.' 
-		'"Great! I''ll get you off in no time, or money back!", he says with a laugh.'
-		'When the train stops at the final station, he leads you off the car and you wait with him as people leave the platform and new passengers get on. When the train has left and there''s nobody around anymore, he motions for you to follow him and takes you on a walk along the tracks.'
+		'"Great! I''ll get you off in no time, or money back!", he says laughing.'
+		'When the train stops at the final station, he leads you off the car and the two of you wait as people leave the platform and new passengers get on. When the train has left and there''s nobody around anymore, he motions for you to follow him and takes you on a walk along the tracks.'
 
 		act 'Follow him':
 			cls
 			gs 'boyStat', 72
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/youngvag.jpg" ></center>'
-			'You keep looking back towards the station as you walk, making sure that nobody sees where you''re headed. Your male companion, on the other hand, seems to be a lot more interested in your anatomy than potential observers: He puts his arm around your waist as you walk together and somehow manages to worm his way into your panties, rubbing your clit as you move. You somewhat lose interest in looking back after that, focusing entirely on the fingers playing with your pussy and dipping inside you. As soon as he has you good and soaking wet - and has put enough distance between you and the station that you''re no longer in plain sight - he pulls down his pants and sits on the tracks, his erect cock an unmistakable invitation.' 
+			'You keep looking back towards the station as you walk, making sure that nobody sees where you''re headed. Your male companion, on the other hand, seems to be a lot more interested in your anatomy than potential observers. He puts his arm around your waist as you walk together and somehow manages to worm his way into your panties, rubbing your clit as you move. You somewhat lose interest in looking back after that, focusing entirely on the fingers playing with your pussy and dipping inside you. As soon as he has you good and soaking wet - and has put enough distance between you and the station that you''re no longer in plain sight - he pulls down his pants and sits on the tracks, his erect cock an unmistakable invitation.' 
 			*nl
-			'Your need seems to explode at the sight, and you urgently pull your clothes aside enough to reveal your pussy and tits, squat down on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick and guide him inside. You can feel it filling you up as you impale yourself on his hard shaft.'
+			'Your need seems to explode at the sight, and you urgently pull your clothes aside enough to reveal your pussy and tits, squat down on his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock and guide him inside. You can feel it filling you up as you impale yourself on his hard shaft.'
 			*nl
 			'You start riding him, completely controlling the action and taking him at the exact depth and speed you want. The power over the situation is intoxicating but it pales in comparison to the knowledge that you are fucking a stranger out in the open where anybody could find you at any moment; unsurprisingly, your moans are getting louder and louder and you feel yourself building up to a strong orgasm, every thrust getting you closer to the peek... but before you can reach it, he pulls you off and stands back up. You are confused and groan in protest, but he pulls you up with him. "Don''t come yet, not yet. That was just the warm up", he promises. You have half a mind to scream at him for yanking you back so close to the edge, but you are too horny to be angry. All you wanna do is fuck right now.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom', 'exhibitionism'
+			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown'
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			act 'See what he has in mind':
 				cls
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/youngbj.jpg" ></center>'
-				'He takes your hand and walks you down the tracks a bit more, his dick back in his pants but you''re completely exposed - he insisted on it and, really, you don''t mind; it is thrilling, even with nobody around. As you pass two electricity sub-stations for the trains, he stops and pulls you between them, a mischievous grin on his face. "I saw a track worker, just a few hundred meters away", he whispers with a chuckle and pulls down his pants. "I wonder how he''d react if he found you, sucking my dick."' 
+				'He takes your hand and walks you down the tracks a bit more, his cock back in his pants but you''re completely exposed - he insisted on it and, really, you don''t mind; it is thrilling, even with nobody around. As you pass two electricity sub-stations for the trains, he stops and pulls you between them, a mischievous grin on his face. "I saw a track worker, just a few hundred meters away", he whispers with a chuckle and pulls down his pants. "I wonder how he''d react if he found you, sucking my cock."' 
 				*nl
-				'You are not sure if he''s being serious about having seen somebody or not, but you are not thinking straight anymore; the notion that somebody might be close-by who could catch you raises the stakes in an exciting way, so you don''t think twice before squatting down in front of him and taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You can taste your own pussy juices on his dick as you suck him, a subtle reminder of your "warm-up". With your <$liptalk> lips wrapped tightly around his shaft, you start bobbing your head, while one of your hands fondles his balls: If somebody''s gonna find you, he''s gonna get an eyeful, that''s for sure!'
+				'You are not sure if he''s being serious about having seen somebody or not, but you are not thinking straight anymore; the notion that somebody might be close-by who could catch you raises the stakes in an exciting way, so you don''t think twice before squatting down in front of him and taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You can taste your own pussy juices on his cock as you suck him, a subtle reminder of your "warm-up". With your <$liptalk> lips wrapped tightly around his shaft, you start bobbing your head, while one of your hands fondles his balls: If somebody''s gonna find you, he''s gonna get an eyeful, that''s for sure!'
 				*nl
-				'After a few minutes, he pulls his dick out of your mouth and then lays down on his back again, his legs peeking out from between the sub-stations - either the track worker was imaginary or your friend is too horny to care anymore. His eyes are burning with desire, so both options are possible.' 
-				'"Lower yourself down on me again, baby... but this time, I want you to take my dick up your ass."'
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'exhibitionism'
+				'After a few minutes, he pulls his cock out of your mouth and then lays down on his back again, his legs peeking out from between the sub-stations - either the track worker was imaginary or your friend is too horny to care anymore. His eyes are burning with desire, so both options are possible.' 
+				'"Lower yourself down on me again, baby... but this time, I want you to take my cock up your ass."'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown'
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Do as he says':
 					cls
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/younganal.jpg" ></center>'
-					'You are too desperate for sex to say no, even if you''d wanted to. Without hesitation, you spread a little bit of your secretions around your puckered hole and you lower yourself on him. You can feel the head of his dick rubbing against your asshole; the pressure builds, your sphincter resisting the penetration... until the head pops inside. You gasp softly, pain and pleasure both vying for your attention, and you slowly lower yourself further, taking more and more of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick into your ass.'
+					'You are too desperate for sex to say no, even if you''d wanted to. Without hesitation, you spread a little bit of your secretions around your puckered hole and you lower yourself on him. You can feel the head of his cock rubbing against your asshole; the pressure builds, your sphincter resisting the penetration... until the head pops inside. You gasp softly, pain and pleasure both vying for your attention, and you slowly lower yourself further, taking more and more of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass.'
 					*nl
-					'Once you have as much of his cock in your ass as you comfortably can on the first go, you start moving your hips, rising up and lowering yourself again, taking a tiny bit more of him into you each time. As you''re riding his dick with your ass, his hands come up to grab your waist - not to wrest control from you, as you first thought, but to support your weight, allowing you to focus on getting into a rhythm and enjoying yourself as much as he audibly does, with a little help from your hand on your clit.'
+					'Once you have as much of his cock in your ass as you comfortably can on the first go, you start moving your hips, rising up and lowering yourself again, taking a tiny bit more of him into you each time. As you''re riding his cock with your ass, his hands come up to grab your waist - not to wrest control from you, as you first thought, but to support your weight, allowing you to focus on getting into a rhythm and enjoying yourself as much as he audibly does, with a little help from your hand on your clit.'
+					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 					$orgasm_txt = 'You are incredibly turned on, by him, by this situation, by having his cock in your ass, moaning loudly and riding him harder and faster. You barely even realize that you''re taking him balls deep into your ass with each thrust. Your body shudders and your moans come to a crescendo as you orgasm, falling back against him as the wave after wave of ecstasy shakes you. You moans turn into screams when he picks up the pace and thrusts up into you, fucking you hard from below and extending the climax.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'dom', 'exhibitionism'
-					$orgasm_txt = ''
+					gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown'
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Take his cum':
@@ -920,7 +907,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'young':
 						spafinloc = 12
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/youngcum.jpg" ></center>'
-						'He lifts you off him and stands up beside you, jerking his dick. You know what he wants and you don''t mind opening your mouth for him. Maybe two seconds later, the first jet of hot, sticky sperm flies into your mouth; most of those that follow hit their target too - only one or two miss and end up on your lips.' 
+						'He lifts you off him and stands up beside you, jerking his cock. You know what he wants and you don''t mind opening your mouth for him. Maybe two seconds later, the first jet of hot, sticky sperm flies into your mouth; most of those that follow hit their target too - only one or two miss and end up on your lips.' 
 						'When the torrent of semen has run dry, your lover pulls up his pants while you swallow his load, the salty reward for an incredible experience. He waits for you to get dressed and cleaned up, then he walks you back to the platform, flirting and chatting amicably with you along the way, right up until you''re inside the station and it''s time to part ways.'
 						'"I''m glad that we''ve met today, <<$pcs_nickname>>. This has been one of the best days of my life; I''m not exaggerating. You are an amazing girl... and I hope to see you again some day." Honestly, you are a bit overwhelmed by this, but in a good way... in a great way, actually.'
 						'"Yeah, I... I had a lot of fun with you", you say lamely and give him an awkward smile as you try to find the right words, "and I hope we run into each other again, too. Who knows, maybe we''ll meet on the train again?"' 
@@ -951,7 +938,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 		$metka = ''
 	end
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride3.jpg" ></center>'
-	'You are sitting in an empty seat by the window and looking outside, lost in thought, as others board the train. A gopnik boy sits down next to you, but you try to ignore him and keep staring outside. Unfazed by that, he gives you once-over, a lewd grin you only see from the corner of your eyes, and leans in close, putting his arm around you. You turn your head to tell him off but your mouth is immediately covered by his! And, not content with just kissing you, the gopnik''s hand starts roaming across your breasts.'
+	'You are sitting in an empty seat by the window, looking outside, lost in thought, as others board the train. A gopnik boy sits down next to you, but you try to ignore him and keep staring outside. Unfazed by that, he gives you once-over, a lewd grin you only see from the corner of your eyes, and leans in close, putting his arm around you. You turn your head to tell him off but your mouth is immediately covered by his! And, not content with just kissing you, the gopnik''s hand starts roaming across your breasts.'
 	act 'Stop him':
 		*clr
 		cla
@@ -968,6 +955,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 		*nl
 		'Once the train stops at your destination, you get off the train with him but barely make it off onto the platform before he pulls you into another kiss. He is actually a pretty good kisser, and while his pawing hands might drive most innocent girls away, he seems to mostly know where he has to grope, too. Breaking the kiss and finding you breathing as heavily as him, he suggests: "Let''s go for a walk; you know, somewhere a little more private."'
 !!Comment by JulienJaden: Shouldn''t making out with a boy in public like this, on a train that other students and people from her town might be riding, get Sveta a reputation hit in Pavlovsk?
+		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'unknown', 'exhibitionism'
 		act 'Decline':
 			*clr
 			cla
@@ -981,7 +969,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 			'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gopnikwalk.jpg" ></center>'
 			'He takes you to the skyway over the tracks, holding your hand and pointing out different buildings and things. You already know almost everything he is talking about, but you let him talk for one very simple reason: He is surprisingly charming and sweet now, compared to the pawing weirdo you met on the train. He throws a lot of compliments your way, telling you how "the sun pales in comparison to your beauty" and the like. You consider telling him he really doesn''t have to try this hard, but some exaggeration funny exaggerations aside, you genuinely enjoy flirting with him and let him go on.'
 			*nl
-			'Once the train has left the station and all who disembarked with you are gone, he carefully inspects your surroundings to see if anybody else is around. When he doesn''t see anyone, he stops and turns towards you. Back to his train persona, your gopnik friend decides to take this to the next level or three, unbuttons his pants and pulls them down to his knees. His dick springs free, already hard and proudly fluttering in the wind.'
+			'Once the train has left the station and all who disembarked with you are gone, he carefully inspects your surroundings to see if anybody else is around. When he doesn''t see anyone, he stops and turns towards you. Back to his train persona, your gopnik friend decides to take this to the next level or three, unbuttons his pants and pulls them down to his knees. His cock springs free, already hard and proudly fluttering in the wind.'
 			act '"Um... No"':
 				*clr
 				cla
@@ -994,39 +982,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 				cls
 				gs 'boyStat', 72
 				'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gopnikbj.jpg" ></center>'
-				'The back and forth between him being nice and an ass was weird, the place is wide open, you barely know him - literally everything about this should discourage you from going near his crotch, and yet... and yet, you find yourself squatting down in front of him and taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. Your hand strokes his hard shaft while you roll your tongue around the head of his dick; you jerk his dick in tune with the bobs of your head, back and forth along his length, your <$liptalk> lips wrapped tightly around him.' 
+				'The back and forth between him being nice and an ass was weird, the place is wide open, you barely know him - literally everything about this should discourage you from going near his crotch, and yet... yet, you find yourself squatting down in front of him and taking his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. Your hand strokes his hard shaft while you roll your tongue around the head of his cock; you jerk his cock in tune with the bobs of your head, back and forth along his length, your <$liptalk> lips wrapped tightly around him.' 
 				*nl
-				'You know this is kinda slutty - a little more than just "kinda", actually - but the idea that you could get caught at any moment is making this a lot more arousing than it should be; so, here you are, sucking his dick right above the train platform. Plus, he is kinda cute and you like his dick, so who care''s if it is slutty? The things the people said on the train got you riled up, and this makes you feel like you''re getting back at their stuffy selves: You''re having fun and it''s your body to do with as you please, and that''s all that matters.'
-				'Well, that, and the hard dick you''re sucking with passion.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'exhibitionism'
-				minut -= 5
-				gs 'arousal', 'masturbating', 5, 'exhibitionism'
-				gs 'stat'
+				'You know this is kind of slutty - a little more than just "kind of", actually - but the idea that you could get caught at any moment is making this a lot more arousing than it should be; so, here you are, sucking his cock right above the train platform. Plus, he is kinda cute and you like his cock, so who care''s if it is slutty? The things the people said on the train got you riled up, and this makes you feel like you''re getting back at their stuffy selves: You''re having fun and it''s your body to do with as you please, and that''s all that matters.'
+				'Well, that, and the hard cock you''re sucking with passion.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown'
 
 				act 'Let him fuck you':
 					cls
 					gs 'boyStat', 72
 					'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gopnikvag.jpg" ></center>'
-					'You don''t know how many minutes pass as you suck him; somewhere along the way, you wormed your fingers into your panties and started rubbing your clit, feeling a lot more turned on by sucking his dick than you expected to be. You don''t know if he always planned on more than just a blow job or if he sensed that you were getting horny and influence-able, but he eventually has you stop and stand up, pulls your clothes aside enough to bare you naked ass and expose your glistening wet pussy.'
+					'You don''t know how many minutes pass as you suck him; somewhere along the way, you worm your fingers into your panties, rubbing your clit, feeling a lot more turned on by sucking his cock than you expected. You don''t know if he always planned on more than just a blow job or if he sensed that you were getting horny and influence-able, but he eventually has you stop and stand up, pulls your clothes aside enough to bare you naked ass and expose your glistening wet pussy.'
 					*nl
-					'He meets no resistance when he turns you around and bends you over, up against the side of the walkway railings; by the time he has lined his dick up with your pussy, you are looking back at him with eager anticipation. Impatient as you expected him to be, he slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your sopping wet pussy. It slides in easily and he has no trouble at all bottoming out on the first thrust. Hearing your moan and feeling how wet and turned on you are, he starts fucking you hard right away. His hips slap against your butt cheeks with every thrust and he reaches up and grabs your shoulder with one hand to keep you from moving away, furiously fucking your pussy and putting you into a state of ecstatic bliss, right there on the skywalk.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism'
-					gs 'stat'
+					'He meets no resistance when he turns you around and bends you over, up against the side of the walkway railings; by the time he has lined his cock up with your pussy, you are looking back at him with eager anticipation. Impatient as you expected him to be, he slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your sopping wet pussy. It slides in easily and he has no trouble at all bottoming out on the first thrust. Hearing your moan and feeling how wet and turned on you are, he starts fucking you hard right away. His hips slap against your butt cheeks with every thrust and he reaches up and grabs your shoulder with one hand to keep you from moving away, furiously fucking your pussy and putting you into a state of ecstatic bliss, right there on the skywalk.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'rough', 'unknown'
 
 					act 'Have anal sex with him':
 						cls
 						'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gopnikanal.jpg" ></center>'
 						'When another train rolls into the station, he curses, pulls out of you and hastily tucks his penis back into his pants. Without waiting until you could do anything similar, he grabs your hand and pulls you along with him; you manage to cover yourself to some extent but you know your ass is still partially showing.' 
 						*nl
-						'He rushes down one of the access ramps of the skywalk to an older platform of the station that now serves as a storage siding. As soon as you turn the corner and not immediately visible from the skywalk or other platforms anymore - so basically as soon as you turn the corner - he pushes you up against the graffiti-covered wall, pulls your clothes aside again and shoves his dick back into your pussy, fucking you like you hadn''t been interrupted. While you try to stifle your moans so passersby on the walkway won''t hear you, he leans forward and seductively whispers into your ear: "I''m going to fuck that tight little ass of yours."' 
+						'He rushes down one of the access ramps of the skywalk to an older platform of the station that now serves as a storage siding. As soon as you turn the corner and not longer visible from the skywalk or other platforms anymore - so basically as soon as you turn the corner - he pushes you up against the graffiti-covered wall, pulls your clothes aside again and shoves his cock back into your pussy, fucking you like you hadn''t been interrupted. While you try to stifle your moans so passersby on the walkway won''t hear you, he leans forward and seductively whispers into your ear: "I''m going to fuck that tight little ass of yours."' 
 						*nl
-						'Without waiting for a response from you, the boy pulls his dick out once more and slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass. You gasp in pain, but it turns into a moan of pleasure along the way. You don''t have to consciously relax your asshole to enjoy this at this point; you are so turned on at the moment that you don''t really care where he sticks his dick as long as he just keeps fucking you.'
+						'Without waiting for a response from you, the boy pulls his cock out once more and slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock up your ass. You gasp in pain, but it turns into a moan of pleasure along the way. You don''t have to consciously relax your asshole to enjoy this at this point; you are so turned on at the moment that you don''t really care where he sticks his cock as long as he just keeps fucking you.'
 !!if Sveta has a orgasm then add below.
 						'Your ass is getting pounded almost as hard as your pussy; he is just rough enough to make it hurt a little, but in this strange state you''re in, it seems to hurt in a <i>good</i> way, adding more fuel to the mounting climax inside of you. And then, just like that, the pressure is released explosively, shaking you like a leaf in the wind as you have an anal orgasm, maybe five meters away from a skywalk. You cannot contain your moans at this point, and it doesn''t help that your lover redoubles his efforts and fucks your tight little asshole even harder when he realizes that you''re cumming.'
 						'Had anybody walked by and heard or seen you right now, you wouldn''t have even cared.'
-						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'exhibitionism'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
-						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'exhibitionism'
+						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unknown', 'rough'
+						gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'exhibitionism', 'unkown', 'rough'
+						minut -= 10
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Take his cum':
@@ -1063,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Gopnik':
 							act 'Don''t give him your number':
 								*clr
 								cla
-								'You shake your head. "Look, <<$boydesc>>, I had fun but I am not looking for more than that right now. Maybe we run into each other on the train again or something, sometime?"'
+								'You shake your head. "Look, <<$boydesc>>, I had fun but I am not looking for anything more than a fuck right now. Maybe we will run into each other on the train again or something, sometime?"'
 								'He shrugs like he doesn''t care either way but the look he gives you tells you that he''s a little pissed. "Sure, whatever. See you around." With that, he turns and walks off, leaving you to finish getting your clothes back in order.'
 
 								act 'Return to the station': gt $loc, $metka

+ 8 - 8
locations/train_incidental

@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/crowded.jpg" ></center>'
-	'The car is absolutely packed today. No seats are available so you are left standing, feeling much like a sardine in a can. At one of the stops you stumble forward a bit. After regaining your footing you feel something hard lodged between your legs. It seems the man in front of you is carrying a thin brief case and you managed to stumble onto it. He doesn''t seem to notice and the car is too packed for you to move away. Every time the train starts or stops the brief case brushes against your vagina. You spend the rest of the ride hoping nobody notices while stifling any unintentional moans.'
+	'The car is absolutely packed today. No seats are available so you are left standing, feeling much like a canned sardine. At one of the stops you stumble forward a bit. After regaining your footing you feel something hard lodged between your legs. It seems the man in front of you is carrying a thin brief case and you managed to stumble onto it. He doesn''t seem to notice and the car is too packed for you to move away. Every time the train starts or stops the brief case brushes against your vagina. You spend the rest of the ride hoping nobody notices while stifling any unintentional moans.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '7':
 	minut += 20
-	'You get a window seat today and enjoy watching the countryside go by. Some time later the train stops and technical difficulties are announced. You get very bored staring at the same farm for twenty minutes, wishing you had a magazine. Finally the train starts moving again.'
+	'You get a window seat today and enjoy watching the countryside go by. As some time passes by the train stops and the conductor announces that there are some technical difficulties with the train. You get very bored staring at the same farm for twenty minutes, wishing you had a magazine. Finally the train starts moving again.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '12':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/ride.jpg" ></center>'
-	'After you''ve settled down, a woman enters with three children and a push-chair looking for a seat. One of the few remaining ones is next to you. So you now have the pleasure of an energetic small child sat next to you, one that jumps up and down on the seat, shouts to his brother, and occasionally throws things at his brother. Sometimes those things are thrown back. Sometimes they hit you, by accident or perhaps deliberately given how amusing they find it.'
+	'After you''ve settled down, a woman enters with three children and a push-chair looking for a seat. One of the few remaining ones is next to you. So now you have the pleasure of an energetic small child sat next to you, one that jumps up and down on the seat, shouts to his brother, and occasionally throws things at his brother. Sometimes those things are thrown back. Sometimes they hit you, by accident or perhaps deliberately given how amusing they find it.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '16':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/dickslip.jpg" ></center>'
-	'While sitting in your seat on the train, you glance up at the guy across from you. He is texting on his phone, leaned back with his legs spread. He isn''t half bad looking. As you check him out thats when you notice the head of his dick hanging out the leg of his shorts. You can''t help but look for a bit, then you glance around and see a older woman watching you. By the smile she gives, you know she noticed as well and noticed your look. Blushing your look away and try to find anything else to look at for the rest of the trip.'
+	'While sitting in your seat on the train, you glance up at the guy across from you. He is texting on his phone, leaned back with his legs spread. He isn''t half bad looking. As you check him out that''s when you notice the head of his dick hanging out the leg of his shorts. You can''t help but look for a bit, then you glance around and see an older woman watching you. By the smile she gives, you know she noticed as well and noticed your where you''re looking. You start blushing as you''ve been caught and you try looking away, trying to find anything else to look at for the rest of the trip.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '21':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/nipslip'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg" ></center>'
-	'The ride has been fairly boring so far, you start looking around at your fellow passengers and thats when you notice it. A woman is distracted and seems to be completely unaware of her shirt has ridden down and left her boob and nipple exposed for all to see. You are about to say something to her, when another woman gets her attention. She blushes and quickly tucks her breast back away.'
+	'The ride has been fairly boring so far, you start looking around at your fellow passengers and that''s when you notice it. A woman is distracted and seems to be completely unaware of her shirt has ridden down and left her boob and nipple exposed for all to see. You are about to say something to her, when another woman gets her attention. She blushes and quickly tucks her breast back again.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -159,7 +159,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '25':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/bj'+ rand(1,2) +'.gif" ></center>'
-	'There are a few people in the car, a couple sits across from you and an old man at the far end of the car. A few minutes pass and the man pulls his dick out of his pants and grabs the womans head that is with him. He shoves her face down to his crotch, she obediently opens up her mouth and starts sucking his cock. He looks over at you and grins as his female companion keeps sucking his cock. As time passes, he grabs her hair and starts forcing her head down, while thrusting his hips up. He roughly fucks her mouth until he finally groans loudly. Pulling her off his dick, he puts it away, as she uses her fingers to clean up the cum at the corner of her lips.'
+	'There are a few people in the car, a couple sits across from you and an old man is sitting down at the far end of the car. A few minutes pass by and all of the sudden the man pulls his cock out of his pants grabbing the woman''s head. He shoves her face down towards his crotch, while she obediently opens up her mouth and begins sucking on his cock. He looks over at you and grins as his female companion keeps sucking his cock. As time passes, he grabs her hair and starts forcing her head down, while thrusting his hips up. He roughly fucks her mouth until he finally groans loudly. Pulling her head off his cock, he puts it away, as she uses her fingers to clean up the cum at the corner of her lips.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -171,7 +171,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '27':
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/gmast.gif" ></center>'
-	'The train car is completely empty other than one other woman, who spends a lot of time texting on her phone for most of the trip. All of a sudden she pulls up her shirt exposing her breasts and unbuttons her pants. One hand reaches down into her pants as she starts to masturbate right there on the train, while the other hand plays with her breasts. Unsure what to do, you attempt to ignore it, but her moans of pleasure make it very hard to do. Luckily she seems adept at getting herself off, as she doesn''t take too long before she climaxes. Once she does she goes back to using her phone as if nothing had happened.'
+	'The train car is completely empty other than one other woman, who spends a lot of time texting on her phone for most of the trip. All of a sudden she pulls up her shirt exposing her breasts, unbuttoning her pants. One hand reaches down into her pants as she begins masturbating right there on the train, while keeping the other hand occupied with her breasts. Unsure what to do, you attempt to ignore it, but her moans of pleasure make it very hard to do so. Luckily she seems adept at getting herself off, as she doesn''t take too long before she climaxes. Once she does she goes back to using her phone as if nothing happened.'
 	act 'Continue your journey': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
@@ -179,7 +179,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	*clr
 	cla
 	'<center><img src="images/locations/shared/train/sex/leskuni.gif" ></center>'
-	'As you get off the train and walk into the train station, you are greeted by a very unusual sight. One girl is sitting on a bench with her legs spread wide, while another girls is kneeling down on the floor with her face, buried in the first girls pussy. A few people are watching the two girls, but most people are just ignoring it, you watch the two of them feeling yourself getting aroused. Sadly as you make your way towards the exit you can no longer seem them, but you can still hear them for a bit longer.'
+	'As you get off the train and walk into the train station, you are greeted by a very unusual sight. One girl is sitting on a bench with her legs spread wide, while an other girl is kneeling down on the floor with her face, buried in hers crotch. A few people are watching the two girls, but most people are just ignoring it, you watch the two of them feeling yourself getting aroused. Sadly as you make your way towards the exit you can no longer seem them, but you can still hear them in the distance.'
 	act 'Continue': gt $loc, $metka
 end