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      locations/cardgame_durak
  2. 105 107
      locations/shulgabath
  3. 27 26
      locations/shulgabed
  4. 75 43
      locations/shulgahall
  5. 13 11
      locations/shulgahome
  6. 56 52
      locations/shulgakuh

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locations/cardgame_durak

@@ -26,10 +26,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs'stat'
 
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/durak.jpg"></center>'
-	'The boys said that they will play with you only on the strip + the loser does one desire to win.'
-	'Your game statistics: Win <<card_game_durak_win>>, defeats <<card_game_durak_loss>>, draws <<card_game_durak_draw>>, You undressed <<card_game_durak_nude>>'
+	'"Cards? We can deal you in, but only if you want to play strip poker", Vitek grins. "The loser does whatever the winner wants them to do. Because you''re a girl, you''ll get one extra piece of clothing to start with. Sound fair?"'
+	'Your game statistics: You''ve won <<card_game_durak_win>> times, lost <<card_game_durak_loss>> times, managed a draw <<card_game_durak_draw>> times, and have taken off <<card_game_durak_nude>> articles of clothing.'
 
-	if playcardgame_count <= 0:'<br><<$rnd_rebyata>> said: - "What-already tired today, playing cards, Let`s look at a TV set or a beer popem."'
+	if playcardgame_count <= 0:'<<$rnd_rebyata>> sighs: "I''m tired of playing cards. Let''s just watch some TV or something, or have some more beers."'
 
 	if playcardgame_count > 0:
 		act 'Play': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_durak_play'
@@ -44,53 +44,53 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_durak_play':
 	gs'stat'
 	!strip)
 	if card_game_durak_clothes = 0:
-		$cgd_clothes = '<font color=red><b>You naked</b></font>'
+		$cgd_clothes = '<font color=red><b>You''re naked!</b></font>'
 	elseif card_game_durak_clothes = 1:
-		$cgd_clothes = 'You are now wearing: panties'
+		$cgd_clothes = 'You are wearing: panties'
 	elseif card_game_durak_clothes = 2:
-		$cgd_clothes = 'You are now wearing: panties, bra'
+		$cgd_clothes = 'You are wearing: panties, bra'
 	elseif card_game_durak_clothes = 3:
-		$cgd_clothes = 'You are now wearing: panties, bra, skirt'
+		$cgd_clothes = 'You are wearing: panties, bra, skirt'
 	elseif card_game_durak_clothes = 4:
-		$cgd_clothes = 'You are now wearing: panties, bra, skirt, shirt'
+		$cgd_clothes = 'You are wearing: panties, bra, skirt, shirt'
 	elseif card_game_durak_clothes = 5:
-		$cgd_clothes = 'You are now wearing: panties, bra, skirt, shirt, socks'
+		$cgd_clothes = 'You are wearing: panties, bra, skirt, shirt, socks'
 	end
 
 	if card_game_durak_npc_vasya = 0:
-		$cgd_vasya_clothes = '<b>Vasya naked</b>'
+		$cgd_vasya_clothes = '<b>Vasily is naked!</b>'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vasya = 1:
-		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'On Vasya is now wearing: briefs'
+		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'Vasily is wearing: briefs'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vasya = 2:
-		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'On Vasya is now wearing: briefs, shorts'
+		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'Vasily is wearing: briefs, shorts'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vasya = 3:
-		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'On Vasya is now wearing: briefs, shorts, shirt'
+		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'Vasily is wearing: briefs, shorts, shirt'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vasya = 4:
-		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'On Vasya is now wearing: briefs, shorts, shirt, socks'
+		$cgd_vasya_clothes = 'Vasily is wearing: briefs, shorts, shirt, socks'
 	end
 
 	if card_game_durak_npc_den = 0:
-		$cgd_den_clothes = '<b>Den naked</b>'
+		$cgd_den_clothes = '<b>Dan is naked!</b>'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_den = 1:
-		$cgd_den_clothes = 'At Den is now wearing: briefs'
+		$cgd_den_clothes = 'Dan is wearing: briefs'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_den = 2:
-		$cgd_den_clothes = 'At Den is now wearing: briefs, Sports trousers'
+		$cgd_den_clothes = 'Dan is wearing: briefs, tracksuit pants'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_den = 3:
-		$cgd_den_clothes = 'At Den is now wearing: briefs, Sports trousers, sport jacket'
+		$cgd_den_clothes = 'Dan is wearing: briefs, tracksuit pants, track jacket'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_den = 4:
-		$cgd_den_clothes = 'At Den is now wearing: briefs, Sports trousers, sport jacket, socks'
+		$cgd_den_clothes = 'Dan is wearing: briefs, tracksuit pants, track jacket, socks'
 	end
 
 	if card_game_durak_npc_vitek = 0:
-		$cgd_vitek_clothes = '<b>Vitek naked</b>'
+		$cgd_vitek_clothes = '<b>Vitek is naked!</b>'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vitek = 1:
-		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'On Vitek is now wearing: briefs'
+		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'Vitek is wearing: briefs'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vitek = 2:
-		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'On Vitek is now wearing: briefs, jeans'
+		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'Vitek is wearing: briefs, jeans'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vitek = 3:
-		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'On Vitek is now wearing: briefs, jeans, shirt'
+		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'Vitek is wearing: briefs, jeans, shirt'
 	elseif card_game_durak_npc_vitek = 4:
-		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'On Vitek is now wearing: briefs, jeans, shirt, socks'
+		$cgd_vitek_clothes = 'Vitek is wearing: briefs, jeans, shirt, socks'
 	end
 
 	!Pictures undressing
@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_durak_play':
 		$cgd_clothes_set1 = '1'
 	end
 		
-	'<center><b>You play the fool on the strip. The game will continue until such time until somebody did not undress.</b></center>'
+	'<center><b>You''re playing strip poker with the guys. The game will continue until one of you is completely naked.</b></center>'
 	'<table width="100%" cellspacing="0" cellpadding="5"><td width="200" valign="top"><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/<<cgd_clothes_set>>-<<$cgd_clothes_set1>>.jpg"></td><td valign="top">'
 	'<<$cgd_clothes>>. 
 	<<$cgd_vasya_clothes>>.
@@ -121,46 +121,46 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_durak_play':
 		playcardgame_count -= 1
 		rnd_cgd_win_npc = RAND(1,3)
 			if rnd_cgd_win_npc = 1:
-				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Vasya'
+				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Vasily'
 				cgd_win_vasya = 1
 			end
 			if rnd_cgd_win_npc = 2:
-				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Den'
+				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Dan'
 				cgd_win_den = 1
 			end	
 			if rnd_cgd_win_npc = 3:
-				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Vitya'
+				$rnd_cgd_win_npc = 'Vitek'
 				cgd_win_vitek = 1
 			end	
-		'<b>Game over, you have no clothes left, you lost.</b>'
+		'<b>The game is over! You have no clothes left, you lose!</b>'
 		'Winner: <b><<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>.</b>'
-		'You will carry out his wish.'
+		'You will have to carry out his wish.'
 		
 		if GorSlut < 3: 
-			act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
+			act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
 		end	
 		if GorSlut >=3 and cg_clother_cum < 5:
 			if RAND(1,100) <= 90:
 				if RAND(1,100) <= 40: 
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gsex'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gsex'
 				else
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_rough_sex'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_rough_sex'
 				end	
 			else
-				act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
 			end
 		end
 		if GorSlut >=3 and cg_clother_cum >= 5:
 			if RAND(1,100) <= 70:
 				if RAND(1,100) <= 40: 
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gsex'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gsex'
 				else
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_rough_sex'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_rough_sex'
 				end	
 			elseif RAND(1,30) > 10:
-				act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_casual_sex'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_casual_sex'
 			else
-				act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex'
 			end
 		end		
 	end
@@ -179,32 +179,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_durak_play':
 			cgd_loss_den = 1
 		end	
 		if card_game_durak_npc_vitek <= 0:
-			$cgd_name_igrok = 'Victor'
+			$cgd_name_igrok = 'Vitek'
 			cgd_loss_vitek = 1
 		end		
 		''
-		'<b>Game over, <<$cgd_name_igrok>> is naked and has lost.</b>.'
+		'<b>The game is over! <<$cgd_name_igrok>> has no clothes left and loses!</b>.'
 		if GorSlut < 3: 
 			if RAND(1,100) <= 70:
-				act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clother'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clother'
 			else
-				act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_penis'
+				act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_penis'
 			end
 		end	
 		if GorSlut >= 3:
 			if RAND(1,100) <= 70: 
 				if RAND(1,100) <= 50:
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clothercum'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clothercum'
 				elseif RAND(1,50) < 40:
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clother'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_clother'
 				else
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_penis'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_ggwin_penis'
 				end	
 			else
 				if RAND(1,100) <= 70:
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gg_lick'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gg_lick'
 				else
-					act 'Further': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gg_sex'
+					act 'Continue': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_gg_sex'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -223,21 +223,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_durak_play':
 				$cgd_name_npc = 'Dan'
 			else
 				card_game_durak_npc_vitek -= 1
-				$cgd_name_npc = 'Victor'
+				$cgd_name_npc = 'Vitek'
 			end
 			'<img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/card3.jpg">'
-			'Do you hold a good hand and you can easily win the game. <b><<$cgd_name_npc>> lost</b>.'
+			'You have a great set of cards in your hand, and easily win the round. <<$cgd_name_npc>> loses, and reluctantly takes off an article of clothing.'
 			act 'Deal': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_durak_play'
 		elseif RAND(1,40) < 35:
 			card_game_durak_loss += 1
 			card_game_durak_clothes -= 1
 			'<img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/card1.jpg">'
-			'You hold bad cards. <b>You lost</b>.'	
+			'Your hand is very poor, and you don''t stand a chance. You slowly undress for the guys, removing an article of clothing.'	
 			act 'Deal': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_durak_play'
 		else
 			card_game_durak_draw += 1
 			'<img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/card1.jpg">'
-			'You hold poor cards, but with some skill manage to hold out for a draw.'	
+			'Your hand is not very good, but with some skill you manage to squeeze out a draw. That was close, but you get to keep your clothes on for now!'	
 			act 'Deal': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_durak_play'
 		end
 	end		
@@ -253,9 +253,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_nosex_dance':
 	minut +=5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/gif/dance'+rand(1,10)+'.gif"></center>'
-	'The guys put on some pop music and you throw some shapes.'
-	'<<$gop_text_npcr>> watches you with interest.'
-	act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+	'The guys put on a popular track with a lot of bass, and lean back. You realize this is your cue to start moving, and somewhat awkwardly begin to dance for them. After a while you get into the song more and become less hesitant in shaking your hips and boobs, trying to give the guys a good show. They did win, after all.'
+	'They all watch you intently, cheering you on and high-fiving their friend who made this possible.'
+	act 'Finish and put your clothes back on': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 end
 !making wishes NPC (turnip GorSlut < 3)
 if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_nosex':
@@ -263,42 +263,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_nosex':
 	minut +=5
 	gs'stat'
 	card_game_texta = RAND(0,6)
-		if card_game_texta = 0:$card_game_texta = 'I want you to suck me!'		
-		if card_game_texta = 1:$card_game_texta = 'Can you masturbate?'
-		if card_game_texta = 2:$card_game_texta = 'Kiss my dick.'
-		if card_game_texta = 3:$card_game_texta = 'Suck me off.'
+		if card_game_texta = 0:$card_game_texta = 'I want you to suck me off!'		
+		if card_game_texta = 1:$card_game_texta = 'Can you masturbate in front of us?'
+		if card_game_texta = 2:$card_game_texta = 'I want you to give my dick a kiss.'
+		if card_game_texta = 3:$card_game_texta = 'Let me touch your tits.'
 		if card_game_texta = 4:$card_game_texta = 'I want to fuck you.'
 		if card_game_texta = 5:$card_game_texta = 'I want to touch your pussy.'
-		if card_game_texta = 6:$card_game_texta = 'Boob job!'
-		if card_game_texta = 7:$card_game_texta = 'Let me touch your tits.'
+		if card_game_texta = 6:$card_game_texta = 'How about you give me a boob job?'
 	if cgd_win_vasya = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
-		'<<$shulga_name_rnd>> speaks: -"<<$card_game_texta>>"'
-		'- "Ahuel not you tell me this offer?, I`m offended and I!", Roughly speaking, you.'
-		'- "Okay not kipish, it was necessary to me you check, and suddenly agreed to.", smiling said Vasily.'
-		'- "Let`s lips rolled up and simpler desire Offer!"'
-		'<<$shulga_name_rnd>> long thought carefully offers: -"<<$gop_name_gg>>, can then simply povertishsya, potryasesh charms or well, there stantsuesh..."'
-		'You speak: -"Well, if all the same already naked, it`s possible..."'
+		'<<$shulga_name_rnd>> ponders for a second, and says: "<<$card_game_texta>>"'
+		'"Are you out of your mind!? There''s absolutely no way I''m doing that!", you shout, deeply offended by his suggestion.'
+		'He raises his hands defensively and smiles: "Relax, I was just kidding. I just had to try, who knows what kind of party girl you might''ve been!"'
+		'You sigh and tell him: "Seriously though, what do you want me to do?"'
+		'<<$shulga_name_rnd>> thinks long and hard, and carefully suggests: "<<$gop_name_gg>>, how about you perform a little dance for us? You know... shake your boobs, show off your body a little?"'
+		'You bite your lip while you think for a moment, and then say: "Fine. I''m naked, so it''s not like you haven''t seen it all already anyway. I''ll do it."'
 	end
 	if cgd_win_den = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
-		'Dan says his desire: -"<<$card_game_texta>>"'
-		'- "Ahuel not you tell me this offer?, I`m offended and I!", Roughly speaking, you.'
-		'- "Okay not kipish, it was necessary to me you check, and suddenly agreed to.", He says Dan smiling.'
-		'- "Let`s lips rolled up and simpler desire Offer!"'
-		'Denis is not long thinking offers: -"<<$gop_name_gg>>, Out of it, shake charms, Well there STATION..."'
-		'You speak: -"Well, if all the same already naked, it`s possible..."'
+		'Dan says what he wants: "<<$nickname>>. <<$card_game_texta>>"'
+		'"Are you out of your mind!? There''s absolutely no way I''m doing that!", you shout, deeply offended by his suggestion.'
+		'He raises his hands defensively and smiles: "Relax, I was just kidding. I just had to try, who knows what kind of party girl you might''ve been!"'
+		'You sigh and tell him: "Seriously though, what do you want me to do?"'
+		'Dan shrugs and says: "<<$gop_name_gg>>, how about we put up some music, and you shake your tits and perform a nice little dance for the three of us then?"'
+		'You bite your lip while you think for a moment, and then say: "Fine. I''m naked, so it''s not like you haven''t seen it all already anyway. I''ll do it."'
 	end
 	if cgd_win_vitek = 1:
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
-		'Vitek said the desire: -"<<$card_game_texta>>"'
-		'- "Ahuel not you tell me this offer?, I`m offended and I!", Roughly speaking, you.'
-		'- "Okay not kipish, it was necessary to me you check, and suddenly agreed to.", smiling says Victor.'
-		'- "Let`s lips rolled up and simpler desire Offer!"'
-		'Victor is not a long time thinking carefully offers: -"<<$gop_name_gg>>, can then simply povertishsya, potryasesh charms or well, there stantsuesh..."'
-		'You speak: -"Well, if all the same already naked, it can be..."'
+		'Vitek confidently says: "<<$card_game_texta>>"'
+		'"Are you out of your mind!? There''s absolutely no way I''m doing that!", you shout, deeply offended by his suggestion.'
+		'"Hey, you''re the one who agreed to do what we say if you lose. I didn''t realize you were going to be so modest", Vitek smirks.'
+		'You sigh and tell him: "Don''t be such a pervert! Seriously though, what do you want me to do?"'
+		'Vitek shrugs and says: "<<$gop_name_gg>>, how about we put up some music, and you shake your tits and perform a nice little dance for the three of us then?"'
+		'You bite your lip while you think for a moment, and then say: "Fine. I''m naked, so it''s not like you haven''t seen it all already anyway. I''ll do it."'
 	end
-	act 'Dance': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex_dance'
+	act 'Dance for them': gs 'cardgame_durak', 'card_game_nosex_dance'
 end
 !when years lost cards (turnip GorSlut >= 3), sex
 if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_gsex':
@@ -310,74 +309,64 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_gsex':
 	if npcSex[9] = 0:npcSex[9] = 1 & guy += 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'-"Once lost, Then let`s get undressed, look, what can be done", He says with a grin <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>'
-	act 'Further': 
+	'"Now that you''ve lost... how about we all get naked, and then see what we will do with you?" <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> says with a grin, as he takes the remainder of his clothes off. The other guys nod eagerly, and begin to undress as well.'
+	act 'Continue': 
 		cls
 		minut += 3
 		horny += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_2.jpg"></center>'
-		'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> speaks: -"I`ve thought about it and decided to, I would share your body with all the guys and we`ll fuck you good!"'
-		'-"As well?, you win, and to fuck all?, how-It does not add up", with which-then you say a weak perturbation, still understanding, that vyebut.'
-		'-"And this is my dear, I won, my desire, and you need not to talk, and perform!", stroking your chest says <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>.'
-		act 'Further': 
+		'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> says: "I''ve given it some thought, and I''ve decided that it is bad to be selfish. Therefore, as my wish: I will share your body with my friends, and we will all fuck you good!"'
+		'"But, that''s not fair..." you mutter weakly. "You won, they did not. Only you get a wish!'
+		'"Exactly! I get a wish, and you have to do what I want. My wish is to share your body with my friends", <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> tells you, while he plays with your boobs. "Now stop complaining and get on your back."'
+		act 'Continue': 
 			cls
 			minut += 10
 			horny += 10
 			bj +=1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lay on your back. <<$shulga_name_rnd>> and Dan went to close on the sides of your body and started to give your mouth, Vitek and is located between the legs. 
-			He immediately fell to burrow your lips and began to lick the clitoris. He then introduced his finger.
-			You suck a thick head of Vaska, Dan and his hand jerked off. Then you moved your hands both members and began to fondle them simultaneously. 
-			Then he took two terms in the mouth so deep, as far as possible. 
-			And guys stroking your hair and breasts. It was something! You were so excited, We could not tolerate, and you really wanted to finish.'
+			'Well, he''s got you there. With a deep sigh you lie down on your back, and immediately <<$shulga_name_rnd>> and Dan get on their knees next to you, offering their already fully erect cocks to you.'
+			'Vitek moves between your legs, and begins to play with your pussy. He occasionally thrusts a finger inside, but is mostly content to just play with your pussy lips and your clitoris for now.'
+			'You hesitantly lean towards Vasily''s cock and lick the head of his cock testively, before taking it into your mouth. Meanwhile Dan grabs your wrist and guides your hand to his cock, and he begins to play with your breasts once you get the message and masturbate him gently.'
+			'Wow, the three of them are making you feel really good! You do your best to repay them by giving Vasily and Dan a good blowjob, taking their cocks as far as possible in your mouth in turns while you masturbate the other.'
 			if horny >= 70:
 				orgasm += 1
 				horny = 0
 				manna += 35
 				mastr += 1
-				'To finish it take you a minute and a half. It was such a huge wave of orgasm, you moaned in a voice chat, in spite of the penis into the mouth.'
-				'You fought in convulsions, just not afraid to tear Vitka`s head, you squeezed his legs, he continued to lick you, until you have calmed down a little.'
+				'Vitek''s constant rubbing on your clit brings you to a thunderous orgasm, and you moan and groan loudly despite the penis that''s lodged deeply into your mouth.'
+				'For a moment you feel ashamed, your orgasm was very obvious to the guys and was met with loud cheers. Then you relax and just give in, why should you feel bad about them making you feel great?'
 			end	
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Continue': 
 				cls
 				minut += 10
 				horny += 10
 				sex += 1
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Then you turned on his stomach and put on her knees.
-				And so, Dan became <<$gop_sextext1>> I have cancer, but this time you suck Shulga and Vitka. 
-				Do you like it when you <<$gop_sextext3>> behind. Therefore, you are very excited and moaning, I do not hesitate one, showing it.'
-				act 'Further': 
+				'Then the guys pull you up, and put you down on your hands and knees. Dan immediately moves behind you, claiming he gets to fuck you first. Vasily and Vitek shrug and take place near your head, expecting you to give them blowjobs while Dan slips his cock inside your eager cunt and begins to thrust his hips against yours.'
+				'Dan''s dick feels great inside you, and you''re not afraid to show the guys that you''re enjoying it. You moan excitedly and eagerly switch from Vasily''s to Vitek''s cock and back, trying to please all of them.'
+				act 'Continue': 
 					cls
 					minut += 10
 					horny += 10
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'First you tried simultaneously podmahivat booty and gently suck. 
-					But then Dan is no longer restrained and vigorously began to press your body to yourself. Your priest shuddered and flapped, when it hits the groin
-					You are fully surrendered to him and so only had time to lick a member of the Victor, then Shulga.'
-					act 'Further': 
+					'For a moment, you try to take both of the dicks inside your mouth while Dan fucks you from behind.'
+					'However, Dan can no longer hold back and begins to vigorously slam his hips into yours, making your butt cheeks bounce whenever he bottoms out in you.'
+					'You fully surrender to him and can''t really focus on the blowjob you''re giving any more, only making some weak attempts to lick Vitek''s and Shulga''s cocks to make sure they don''t feel left out entirely.'
+					act 'Continue': 
 						cls
 						minut += 10
 						horny += 20
 						throat += 1
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Vitek hands clenched cheeks and you force your head planted on his dick because, you rested his nose in his hairy scrotum. From surprise you coughing. Convulsively swallowing, zahripev, twitched in all directions, trying to break free.
-						He pulled out a member of your mouth. You gasped, but you do not inhale given, right there in the vacant throat he puts his penis Vitek. You, choking, hiccupped, sobbing, like a child. Vitka felt sorry for you, and he loosened pressure. 
-						You rate this, gratefully looked him in the eye, become, smacking carefully handle <<$liptalk>> head and tongue.
-						Without stopping to jump on a limb Shulga, only increasing the pace, We tried to sit down faster and deeper.'
-						if horny >= 70:
-							orgasm += 1
-							horny = 0
-							manna += 35
-							'You groaned aloud. Your face broke into a pained-the sweet grimace. Shaking his head from side to side, You looked around half-closed, unseeing eyes. 
-							you <<$gop_sextext2>> more than an hour, and you are the first time in the evening was ending.'
-						end
-						act 'Further': 
+						'When you next take Vitek''s cock in your mouth, he puts his hands behind your head and forces you to take his full length down your throat. Your nose is against his hairy groin before you know it, and you cough in surprise. At least, you try to.'
+						'With his dick all the way down your throat, you can''t do much but convulsively swallow, and try to pull away from him. He realizes you''re having trouble deepthroating him, and pulls away from you.'
+						'You gasp loudly once you can breathe again, and sob and retch for a while... with Dan still fucking you allthesame. You can tell Vitek feels bad for pushing you too hard, and you give him a grateful look when he lets go of your head and lets you take over again. You carefully lick and kiss the head of his penis for a moment, as your way of thanking him.'
+						act 'Continue': 
 							cls
 							minut += 5
 							$boy = 'Vitek'
@@ -395,10 +384,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_gsex':
 							gs 'cum_manage'
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/gsex/ev1_7.jpg"></center>'
-							'You put on the floor and surrounded with different sides, boys began to pour cum on your face.
-							You were so long, without giving any signs of life. Then stir, rose heavily and, He came to the couch, flopped on him, stretching her legs. 
-							What do you look-the detachment. uncombed <<$hair2>>. Looking Away. Face, wreathed smeared makeup mixed with sperm.'
-							act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+							'A little while later the guys tell you to get down on your knees, and surround you. They jerk themselves off, and shoot their hot cum all over your face and in your hair.'
+							'They all sit down and take a minute to catch your breaths, with your naked body sprawled out on the floor in front of them. When you sit back up again, you catch a glimpse of yourself in a large mirror: you look like a mess! Your hair is seriously disheveled and has sperm in it and your face looks all messy and puffy, with gobs of cum smeared all over your cheeks and chin.'
+							'That was definitely not what you bargained for, when you wanted to play a game of cards with the guys...'
+							act 'Put your clothes back on': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 						end
 					end
 				end
@@ -419,9 +408,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_rough_sex':
 	if npcSex[9] = 0:npcSex[9] = 1 & guy += 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sexrough/bj'+rand(1,10)+'.gif"></center>'
-	'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> unceremoniously, I ran up to you and prisunul his dick in your mouth.'
-	'-"This is for all you damn garbage", I mumbled <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> and grab your head with your arms, I began to hammer away your hard-throat.'
-	act 'Further':
+	'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> unceremoniously moves up to you, and thrusts his erect dick into your mouth without saying a word.'
+	'"This is for you, slut", he hisses as he grabs your hair in his hands, and begins to thrust his hips against your face, fucking your throat roughly.'
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		minut +=10
 		anal += 1
@@ -432,24 +421,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_rough_sex':
 		horny += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sexrough/sex1_'+rand(1,10)+'.gif"></center>'
-		'-"Quickly I got cancer promiscuous bitch, your ass will develop", said <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>'
-		'You obeyed'
+		'"I want your ass next, bitch", <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> says. "Get on your hands and knees, and offer yourself to me."'
+		'You hesitantly do as he says, spreading your buttocks with your hands once you lower yourself to the ground.'
 		if analplugin = 1:
 			analplugin = 0
-			'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> said: -"It does not need you now", and with a loud chpok pulled out of ass plug.'
+			'<<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> laughs: "This would only get in the way. Out you go!", and he tugs the plug out of your ass and tosses it aside.'
 		end
 		if lubri > 0:
 			agape = 2
 			agapetime = totminut
 			horny += 10
-			'You are asked to get out of your handbag lubricant and lubricate the ass, but <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> with said slostyu:'
-			'-"You are my thing, fuck how I want, and I want to dry, realized blyadina!?"'
-			'You will only remain as humbly point to relax'
+			'"Wait! I have some lubricant with me somewhere, you could use that!" you offer.'
+			'When you reach up in an effort to go get it, <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> pushes you back down and says matter-of-factly: "No. You''re my prize, and I can fuck you how I want. I want to fuck you dry, so that''s what I''m going to do. Cute of you to always have lube on you just in case you might get your ass fucked that day though, very classy!"'
+			'You bite your lip and move back in position, hoping he will take it easy on you. All you can do at this point is relax, hopefully that will make it easier.'
 		end
-		'He brazenly stuck your dick in the ass and tore up your hole is not the jelly of his forces.' 
-		'You were hurt, but you obediently endured a couple of minutes and a member of the free entrance, without causing discomfort.'
-		'After finishing you in the ass <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> He said with a grin: -"Next, the hollow of our slut need to develop specific!"'
-		act 'Further':
+		'Unfortunately for you, <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> is not very careful and just crams the head of his cock in.' 
+		'You groan and scream and cry, hoping the pain will subside soon while <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> begins to fuck your ass. He''s not even particularly rough with you, but it still stings a lot. You''re not even sure why he insists on doing this... when you look back you occasionally see him wince too. If this is not comfortable for either of you, why does he insist on going on?'
+		'After a few minutes of you obediently enduring the ass fucking you''re receiving, it doesn''t hurt that much any more. There''s still a little discomfort, but you''re able to ignore that and even gain some pleasure out of it.'
+		'Then <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> shoots his load inside your ass, and says with a grin: "Who''s next? If we want her to be a good little butt slut for us in the future, she''s going to need more training! Stretch that hole, guys!"'
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			minut +=20
 			horny += 10
@@ -465,26 +455,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_rough_sex':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sexrough/sex2_'+rand(1,10)+'.gif"></center>'
-			'You understand your position, you <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> how fucked 50 ruble whore, but you are so damn them, what can I resent.'
-			'For this you stood humbly cancer, relaxed and waited for a point "next".'
-			'Guys use the rear hole davalki their turns as they wanted, paying no attention to your feelings.'
+			'You were about to get up once <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> finished in you, but his friends stop you. "Everyone gets to have a go, slut. I won your ass, so I decide when you''re done. Stay down", he orders you.'
+			'You meekly hang your head and get back in the position, deciding to just get it over with. Getting assfucked like some 50 ruble whore is not how you expected this game to end... but there are three of them, and they''re all stronger than you. What can you do?'
+			'Luckily, <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>''s cum acts as a lubricant to an extent, and when someone else pushes their dick inside your already opened sphincter, it doesn''t hurt quite as much any more. In fact... it actually feels kind of nice! You moan softly, trying to hide how much you''re enjoying this from the guys. They''d just get the wrong idea...'
+			'The guys use your asshole as they see fit for the next twenty minutes, not really paying any attention to your feelings. When his friends finish <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>''s cock is hard again, and he eagerly fucks you again while he still can.'
 			if horny >=70:
 				orgasm += 1
 				horny = 0
 				manna += 35
 				mastr +=1
-				'You pussy flowed from, that you do not ask, just rude <<$gop_sextext3>> lithe body as they want, Bud-then you are not a living person, a rubber doll.'
-				'You greatly excited the role of the litter and you lowered yourself rubbing pussy hand, We managed to finish a couple of times for all the time until your body <<$gop_sextext2>> turns guys.'
+				'Your pussy is drenched by the time <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> fucks you again. The guys haven''t shown any interest in it today, fully focusing on fucking your ass as if you''re just a rubber doll. You feel greatly aroused despite (or maybe because of?) the way they''re treating you, and gently masturbate yourself while <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> fucks you. You stifle your moans and have a quiet orgasm, trying to not let the guys find out.'
 			end	
-			'Then they wanted, look at your designed hollow.'
-			act 'Show':
+			'"Almost done, whore. Show us your ass", <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> smirks with contempt.'
+			act 'Show them':
 				cls
 				minut +=5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sexrough/ass'+rand(1,11)+'.jpg"></center>'	
-				'The boys watched a few minutes and discuss how they have developed good your hole'
-				'Then you were allowed to go to the bathroom, freshen up.'
-				act 'Escape': gt 'shulgahome', 'bath'	
+				'You obediently spread your ass cheeks, showing your gaping anus to the boys. That''s going to take a while before it closes again.'
+				'They look at you for a few minutes, proudly discussing on what a good job they did today.'
+				'Then <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>> slaps your ass cheek and grins: "Alright, slut. We''ve trained your hole enough for today. Go freshen up."'
+				act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'shulgahome', 'bath'	
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -494,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_casual_sex':
 	minut +=5
 	sub += 1
 	gs'stat'
-	'-"All <<$gop_name_gg>> lost, now you will be answerable for all the garbage that you invented us", speaks <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>'''
+	'-"All <<$gop_name_gg>> lost, now you will be answerable for all the garbage that you invented us", speaks <<$rnd_cgd_win_npc>>'
 	'-"Come guessing, anyway but to fuck me you have more desires can not be", snidely say you.'
 	'-"But you`re wrong!, my desire is: Now you go out on the street, We`ll find you something of an unknown man, and given it to him right there!"'
 	'-"Whore, and if you do not ahuel hour?, I suggested that you do not fuck anyone or..."'
@@ -547,35 +538,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_ggwin_clother':
 	minut +=3
 	gs'stat'
 	if cgd_loss_vasya = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Bob'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vasily'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vasily'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_den = 1:
 		$loss_npc_name = 'Dan'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Dan'	
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_vitek = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Cats'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vitek'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vitek'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'<<$loss_npc_img>>'
-	'You grin on his lips say: -"<<$loss_npc_name>> You blew today, Now you will carry out my desire!"'
-	'-"You start it with NARRATION, but we`ll see", speaks <<$loss_npc_name>>'
-	'You voiced their desire: -"So so, go to the street, you will find a beautiful girl and you pick it from the top or bottom part of the dress!, and we all zasnimem to mobile!"'
-	'<<$loss_npc_name>> Frustrated says: -"Nihuya you desire, but by simply could not think of anything?"'
-	'The boys did not give you a personal reply, desire kid liked and popular explained <<$loss_npc_name2>>, card debt that must be fulfilled.'
-	act 'Further':
+	'You can barely hide the smirk on your face as you say: "So... <<$loss_npc_name>>, you lose. Now you have to do what I want!"'
+	'"We''ll see... what is it you want?" asks <<$loss_npc_name>>.'
+	'You grin evilly and say: "I want you to go out on the street, and find a beautiful girl. When you do, you will pull her clothes away, exposing either her tits or her bare ass to us, while we film it with our phones!"'
+	'You laugh at his distraught look, and add: "Your choice... do what feels right."'
+	'"Come on, <<$nickname>>! Can''t you think of anything else?" <<$loss_npc_name>> pleads, lightly frustrated.'
+	'Before you can reply, his friends say: "You knew the rules! If you lose, you have to do what the winner wants. No questions asked."'
+	'<<$loss_npc_name>> slumps a little, but he knows his friends are right: "Alright then, let''s get this over with..."'
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		minut +=15
 		gs'stat'
-			
-		'<center>The loser had to fulfill your desire.</center>'
-		'<<$loss_npc_name2>> We show the guys that have done on your mobile phone:'
+		'<<$loss_npc_name>> exits the house, and the rest of you follow him. He does as you ask, and can barely escape when the furious lady chases him all the way down the street.'
+		'A few minutes later, he returns to you. His face is all red from the running, and he''s still out of breath when he says: "There... happy? She looked like she wanted to kill me!"'
+		'You grin, and show him the video you shot with your mobile phone:'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/street_event/j'+RAND(1,12)+'.gif"></center>'
-		'-"And then the camera shakes so, even normally can not remove!?", a frustrated asked <<$loss_npc_name>>'
-		'The boys responded: -"You`re five minutes out there stalking his prey, all did not dare to attack, or waiting for the right moment, fuck you know. But we just do not drop dead with laughter while watching, this and the camera shaking.'
-		act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+		'"Why is the camera shaking so much!? This looks like shit!" <<$loss_npc_name>> asks, clearly frustrated now.'
+		'His friends are also nearly out of breath, but it''s from laughing so hard. Finally, one of them manages to say: "I''m sorry, man! It just looked hilarious! None of us could hold our cameras still, we were laughing so hard!"'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 	end		
 end
 !When the years won, make a wish (turnip GorSlut < 3) (shake genitals)
@@ -584,34 +574,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_ggwin_penis':
 	minut +=5
 	gs'stat'
 	if cgd_loss_vasya = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Bob'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vasily'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vasily'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_den = 1:
 		$loss_npc_name = 'Dan'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Dan'	
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_vitek = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Cats'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vitek'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vitek'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'<<$loss_npc_img>>'
-	'You grin on his lips say: -"<<$loss_npc_name>> You blew, Now you will carry out my desire!"'
-	'-"You start it with NARRATION, but we`ll see", speaks <<$loss_npc_name>>'
-	'You voiced their desire: -"So so, you will need to run to some sort of a girl in front of her and twist her pussy!, and we all zasnimem to mobile!"'
-	'<<$loss_npc_name>> Frustrated says: -"Nihuya you desire, but by simply could not think of anything?"'
-	'The boys did not give you a personal reply, desire kid liked and popular explained <<$loss_npc_name2>>, card debt that must be fulfilled.'
-	act 'Further':
+	'You can barely hide the smirk on your face as you say: "So... <<$loss_npc_name>>, you lose. Now you have to do what I want!"'
+	'"We''ll see... what is it you want?" asks <<$loss_npc_name>>.'
+	'You grin evilly and say: "I want you to go out on the street, and find a beautiful girl. When you do, you will show her your dick, while we film it with our phones!"'
+	'"Come on, <<$nickname>>! Can''t you think of anything else?" <<$loss_npc_name>> pleads, lightly frustrated.'
+	'Before you can reply, his friends say: "You knew the rules! If you lose, you have to do what the winner wants. No questions asked."'
+	'<<$loss_npc_name>> slumps a little, but he knows his friends are right: "Alright then, let''s get this over with..."'
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		minut +=15
 		gs'stat'
-		'<center>The loser had to fulfill your desire.</center>'
-		'<<$loss_npc_name2>> We show the guys that have done on your mobile phone:'
+		'<<$loss_npc_name>> exits the house, and the rest of you follow him. He does as you ask, and can barely escape when the furious lady chases him all the way down the street.'
+		'A few minutes later, he returns to you. His face is all red from the running, and he''s still out of breath when he says: "There... happy? She looked like she wanted to kill me!"'
+		'You grin, and show him the video you shot with your mobile phone:'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/street_event/p'+RAND(1,3)+'.gif"></center>'
-		'-"And then the camera shakes so, normally can not remove!?", a frustrated asked <<$loss_npc_name>>'
-		'The boys responded: -"You`re there so defiantly twisted his genitals in front of Baba, that we`re just laughing are dead is not observed, this and the camera shaking.'
-		act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+		'"Why is the camera shaking so much!? This looks like shit!" <<$loss_npc_name>> asks, clearly frustrated now.'
+		'His friends are also nearly out of breath, but it''s from laughing so hard. Finally, one of them manages to say: "I''m sorry, man! It just looked hilarious! None of us could hold our cameras still, we were laughing so hard!"'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 	end		
 end
 !When the years won, make a wish (turnip GorSlut > 3) (cum on the victim)
@@ -621,45 +610,43 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_ggwin_clothercum':
 	cg_clother_cum +=1 
 	gs'stat'
 	if cgd_loss_vasya = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Bob'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vasily'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vasily'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_den = 1:
 		$loss_npc_name = 'Dan'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Dan'	
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
 	elseif cgd_loss_vitek = 1:
-		$loss_npc_name = 'Vitya'
-		$loss_npc_name2 = 'Vitek'
+		$loss_npc_name = 'Vitek'
 		$loss_npc_img = '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 	'<<$loss_npc_img>>'
-	'You barely-simmer, say: -"<<$loss_npc_name>> you lose nothing, ahah, my desire is not easy!"'
-	'-"Let`s not Tom, voiced, time lost to fulfill", said <<$loss_npc_name>>'
-	'You voiced their desire: -"Let`s go all the street, we`ll find you a nice sacrifice, and you`ll have to run up and finish it, and we all zasnimem to mobile!"'
-	'<<$loss_npc_name>> already ahuel: -"Pizdec! <<$nickname>> You are friends with the head? and generally how you represent yourself, Do you think I`m here so I can finish in a second?"'
-	'-"<<$loss_npc_name>>, Do not worry you so, I thought of everything, help your Elephant finish", licking <<$liptalk3>>, you say.'
-	'Guys neighing, but the desire they liked and you hop in unison throughout the company went into the street to look for the victim.'
-	act 'Further':
+	'You grin at <<$loss_npc_name>> and say: "Aww <<$loss_npc_name>>, what a bad time for you to lose! My wish today won''t be easy!"'
+	'<<$loss_npc_name>> sighs: "Let''s get it over with. What do you want?"'
+	'"Let''s go find you a nice girl", you smile mysteriously. "I''ll pick someone, and you have to run up and jerk off over her clothes! Of course, we''ll be recording it with our phones..."'
+	'<<$loss_npc_name>> looks concerned: "What, are you crazy!? That''s insane... and besides, I can''t cum that fast! That would never work!"'
+	'"I thought you would say that, <<$loss_npc_name>>. Don''t worry, I thought of that... how about if I help you get close?" you smile at him, licking your <<$liptalk3>> lips lewdly.'
+	'His friends are laughing, but <<$loss_npc_name>> suddenly shows a lot more interest in your plan. If you''re willing to blow him until he''s about to burst, that''s more than the others are getting from you today!'
+	'You leave the apartment with the guys, who are clearly excited to see this plan of yours play out. "Let''s go find a nice girl for <<$loss_npc_name>>, guys!" you shout happily.'
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		minut +=10
 		horny += 5
 		bj +=1
 		gs'stat'
-		'You`re all together for about five minutes looking for the victim. Then a couple of minutes looking for a quiet place, both found quickly and skillfully began to suck dick <<$loss_npc_name2>>'
-		'Guys acne and went commenting filmed on camera:'
+		'After a few minutes, you find someone. "Alright, <<$loss_npc_name>>, come here", you whisper to him as you drag him out of view.'
+		'You quickly drop to your knees and take his cock in your mouth, giving him a skilful blowjob. The other guys are actually a bit jealous when they see you on your knees before your friend, and pull out their phones to record you:'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/street_event/bj'+RAND(1,2)+'.gif"></center>'
-		'When <<$loss_npc_name>> he was about to finish, He ran to the victim.'
-		act 'Further': 
+		'When you lick <<$loss_npc_name>> close to his orgasm, he runs to his victim.'
+		act 'Continue': 
 			cls
 			minut +=5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/street_event/cum'+RAND(1,2)+'.gif"></center>'
-			'The boys did not stop to shoot everything to mobile.'
-			'But because of your comments and vulgar jokes, quality turned lousy, as all could not help but laugh and operator MOBILE shaking hands.'
-			'Returning red as a lobster <<$loss_npc_name>> said: -"<<$nickname>> the next time you lose, fuck you so, that would be more of these stupid and ridiculous desire in your brain did not arise!"'
-			'You guys and neighing loudly.'
-			act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+			'While you idly wipe your lips with the back of your hand and watch <<$loss_npc_name>> run, his friends are shooting everything on film with their mobiles.'
+			'When you watch the video back with the guys, it turns out that the video''s quality is downright lousy. It''s very shaky, and there''s a lot of background noise of the three of you laughing your butts off.'
+			'<<$loss_npc_name>> comes back, his face as red as a lobster. As he gasps for breath, he groans: "I''m never doing that again! <<$nickname>>, the next time you lose... I''m going to make you pay!"'
+			'You and the other guys are laughing loudly as you return to Vasily''s apartment. The next time you lose? You''ll see about that...'
+			act 'Finish': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 		end	
 	end		
 end
@@ -669,36 +656,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_gg_lick':
 	minut +=1
 	gs'stat'
 	if cgd_loss_vasya = 1:
-		$lick_name_npc = 'Vasya'
+		$lick_name_npc = 'Vasily'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "I want you to lick my pussy"'
-		'Vaska did not want to fulfill that desire, But the guys liked it and Vasily kicks sent him to perform.'
+		'You grin: "I''m actually feeling rather horny. Be a dear and lick my pussy for me, would you?"'
+		'Vasily grins eagerly and says: "What, really? I thought you were going to make me do something I didn''t want to do!"'
+		'He eagerly drops to his knees and begins to lick your wet snatch, being egged on by his friends.'
 	elseif cgd_loss_den = 1:
 		$lick_name_npc = 'Dan'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "You must lick my pussy"'
-		'Dan did not want to fulfill this wish, but again lost, it is necessary to perform.'
+		'You look at Dan commandingly, and tell him: "Dan, lick my pussy. Now."'
+		'Dan is not particularly eager, but he lost. And rules are rules. He obediently puts his tongue against your pussy, and reluctantly begins to eat you out.'
 	elseif cgd_loss_vitek = 1:
 		$lick_name_npc = 'Vitek'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "Lick my pussy"'
-		'Vitek gladly began to fulfill that desire.'
+		'You grin: "Vitek, darling... I''m actually feeling rather horny. Be a dear and lick my pussy for me, would you?"'
+		'Vitek shakes his head and quickly looks around, looking for a way out of his predicament. His friends love the idea though, and stop him from refusing. Vasily says: "You know the rules of strip poker! If you lose, you have to do what the winner says!"'
+		'With a deep sigh, Vitek drops to his knees and reluctantly puts his tongue against your wet folds. You can tell he feels thoroughly humiliated.'
 	end
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		horny += 15
 		minut +=10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/lick'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Minutes 10 I worked <<$lick_name_npc>>, I am trying to bring you to orgasm.'
+		'For the next ten minutes, <<$lick_name_npc>> does his best to bring you to orgasm with his tongue and lips.'
 		if horny >= 70:
 			orgasm += 1
 			horny = 0
-			'The abundance of surging emotions you with a loud groan finished.'
+			'He does a fantastic job of it, and within minutes you''re mewling and breathing in short gasps as you hover on the edge of your orgasm. When you finally have to yield, his friends cheer loudly and even <<$lick_name_npc>> has a smug look on his face when he continues to lick you. Rules are rules, after all; you didn''t say he was done.'
 		elseif horny < 70:
-			'<<$lick_name_npc>> like doing things right, you excited, But the end you can not.'
+			'<<$lick_name_npc>> does his best to get you to orgasm. He''s doing all the right things and you feel very aroused, but in the end you can''t quite reach an orgasm this time. After a while you can tell his tongue is starting to feel exhausted, and you tell him he can stop.'
 		end		
-		act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+		act 'Finish': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 	end		
 end
 !When the years won, make a wish (turnip GorSlut >= 3), sex
@@ -707,45 +696,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'card_game_gg_sex':
 	minut +=1
 	gs'stat'
 	if cgd_loss_vasya = 1:
-		$lick_name_npc = 'Vasya'
+		$lick_name_npc = 'Vasily'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vasya.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "I want you to fuck me thoroughly!"'
-		'Vaska`s eyes lit up, he liked your desire, grab you by the arm dragged him to the couch.'
+		'You smile at Vasily and say: "Vasily, dear... it''s been a while since a real man fucked my ass. Perhaps you could help me with that?"'
+		'Vasily''s eyes light up, he was expecting you to pick something humiliating. Instead, he gets to fuck you!? He immediately grabs you by the arm and drags you go the couch, before you can change your mind.'
 	elseif cgd_loss_den = 1:
 		$lick_name_npc = 'Dan'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/den.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "Well fuck me"'
-		'-"That I can", Dan responds with joy and begins to undress you'
+		'"Hey Dan, when is the last time you fucked a girl in the ass?" you prompt.'
+		'"Uhhh..." Dan replies, not sure what to say.'
+		'You wink at him and say: "If anyone asks you in fifteen minutes, you can say: fifteen minutes ago!"'
+		'It takes him a while to realize what you want; getting to fuck your ass was the last thing on his mind! He immediately grabs you by the arm and drags you go the couch, before you can change your mind.'
 	elseif cgd_loss_vitek = 1:
 		$lick_name_npc = 'Vitek'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vitek.jpg"></center>'
-		'You voice your desire, "Fuck me properly"'
-		'Witek grabbed you by the arm and dragged her to the bed.'
+		'You state your wish to Vitek: "Fuck me properly!"'
+		'Vitek looks at you a tad confused, and you add: "In my ass, silly!"'
+		'His eyes light up, he was expecting you to pick something humiliating. Instead, he gets to fuck you!? He immediately grabs you by the arm and drags you go the couch, before you can change your mind.'
 	end
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		horny += 15
 		minut += 10
-		sex += 1
+		anal += 1
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/sex'+rand(1,7)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Without any sentimentality <<$lick_name_npc>> You straightened and took a measured <<$gop_sextext1>>.'
+		'<<$lick_name_npc>> fucks you in the ass, like you demanded of him. He''s surprisingly careful with you, using plenty of lube and ensuring that he''s making you feel good as he does it. What a nice change from the normal way the boys treat you...'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'gg_sex_orgasm'	
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			$boy = $lick_name_npc 
 			sexpartkno = 1
-			spafinloc = 14
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-			$boy = $lick_name_npc
-			sexpartkno = 1
-			spafinloc = 7
+			spafinloc = 4
+			manna += 35
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs'stat'		
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/card/sex/cum'+rand(1,6)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'For a long time he could not tolerate, and ended on you'	
-			act 'Escape': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
+			'After a while he can''t hold back any longer, and you feel the hot jets of his sperm land on your body.'	
+			'You drag your finger through some of it and bring it to your tongue, to have a taste. It doesn''t taste particularly good, but it''s not bad either.'
+			'"Mmmm... delicious, babe!" you muse, more to make him feel good than anything. You smile at the proud grin <<$lick_name_npc>> has on his face afterwards, and feel slightly better for having made his day.'
+			act 'Finish': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 105 - 107
locations/shulgabath

@@ -26,11 +26,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 	end
 
-	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathtub</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna.jpg"></center>'
-	'Bathroom close and very unpretentious. Above the sink hanging <a href="exec:GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>.'
+	'Uncle Sergey''s bathroom is small and very unpretentious. Nevertheless, it has everything a bathroom needs. There is a <a href="exec:GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> above the sink.'
 
-	act 'Leave bathroom': gt'shulgahall'
+	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 
 	dynamic $shower
 	dynamic $bteeth
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	dynamic $basin
 
 	if spdirtyc > 0:
-		act 'Scour semen from clothing':
+		act 'Clean semen stains from your clothing':
 			cls
 			cumspclnt = 6
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/frotsp.jpg"></center>'
-			'You rinse the semen stains from your clothes.'
+			'You take fifteen minutes to thoroughly rinse the semen stains out of your clothes. By the time you''re done, all the evidence that remains of them are some quickly drying damp spots.'
 			act 'Finish': gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	end
@@ -63,13 +63,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			klismaday = daystart
 			klismaday1= 1
 			'<center><img src="images/picV/klisma.jpg"></center>'
-			'You give yourself an enema and clean your intestines. Your ass is now ready for anal sex.'
+			'You give yourself an enema, feeling clean down there. Your ass is now ready for anal sex without any awkward surprises.'
 			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if analplug = 1 and analplugin = 1:
-		act 'Remove the butt plug (0:05)':
+		act 'Take out your butt plug (0:05)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -77,11 +77,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if anus < 30:anus += 1
 
 			'<center><img src="images/body/analplug.jpg"></center>'
-			'You bent over and took out the butt plug.'
+			'You squat and tug gently at the butt plug, gasping as you push it out of you. You can''t help but feel a bit empty, now that it''s out.'
 			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif analplug = 1 and analplugin = 0 and klismaday = daystart:
-		act 'Insert a butt plug (0:05)':
+		act 'Wear your butt plug (0:05)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 5
@@ -91,9 +91,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if anus >= 20 and anus < 30:anus += rand(0, 1)
 
 			'<center><img src="images/body/analplug.jpg"></center>'
-			if butpluguse > 0:'You bent over and inserted the butt plug.'
-			if butpluguse = 0:butpluguse = 1 & '"If I don''t use it then why did I buy it!" you thought. You decided to take a closer look while thinking, "It is necessary to start developing my ass so I could have great adventures someday, you could even say a huge and thick adventures with crimson heads, uh, now I got carried away." You scratched your head. Then you directed it in your ass, it was a bit painful at first, but as soon as the widest part was plunged into the murky depths of your anus it became easier to push it all the way.'
-			act 'Leave':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
+			if butpluguse > 0:'You squat and gently rub the butt plug against your anus, after lubricating it with a bit of saliva. After a short while, you''ve relaxed enough to be able to push it in. Once it''s in you give it a few gentle tugs, wondering if anyone will catch you wearing it today.'
+			if butpluguse = 0:butpluguse = 1 & '"If I''m not going to use it, then why did I buy it?" you ask yourself. You look at the butt plug for a while, thinking "It is necessary to start developing my ass, so I could have great adventures someday... you could even say huge and thick adventures with crimson heads, uh, now I got carried away..." You''re slightly embarrassed at the thought for a second, but are then overcome by your horny fantasies. Determined to get the plug all the way in, you slowly press it against your asshole after lubricating it with a bit of saliva. It hurts a bit at first, but once the thickest part is in the rest follows rather easily. Patting yourself on your ass once it''s in, you wonder if anyone will notice you''re wearing it today and then immediately feel naughty for even having thought that.'
+
+			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -104,12 +105,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pregchem > 30:
 				knowpreg = 1
-				'The test showed the two strips. you are pregnant.'
+				'The test shows the two strips: you''re pregnant!'
 			else
-				'The test showed one band.'
+				'The test shows one band: you''re not pregnant.'
 			end
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
+			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -121,7 +122,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			vibratorIN = 0
 			if vagina < 30:vagina += 1
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/vibrator.jpg"></center>'
-			'You bend over the sink and take the vibrator out of your pussy.'
+			'You spread your legs and take the vibrator out of your pussy, letting out a slight moan as you do so. You feel somewhat empty now.'
 			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	elseif vibrator = 1 and vibratorIN = 0:
@@ -132,7 +133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			vibratorIN = 1
 			if vagina < 30:vagina += 2
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/vibrator.jpg"></center>'
-			'You bend over the sink and inserted the vibrator in your pussy.'
+			'You spread your legs and slowly insert the vibrator in your pussy, wondering if anyone will notice you wearing it today.'
 			act 'Finish':gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 		end
 	end
@@ -157,8 +158,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev1':
 	horny += 15
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/bj'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went to the bathroom and saw how Sonya sucks dick Sergei'
-	act 'Do not disturb': gt'shulgahall'
+	'When you enter the bathroom, you freeze when you hear a girl''s voice in there. You carefully open the door to see Sonia sucking Sergey''s cock. She''s even taking a video of herself doing it... you wonder why?'
+	act 'Leave them alone': gt'shulgahall'
 end
 
 !Bathtub, Sonia Event 2:
@@ -172,47 +173,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sexev2':
 	horny += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev2_1'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You opened the door to the bathroom and noticed Sonia. She did not see you, because it was occupied by the recalculation of money.'
-	'You decide to close the door and watch'
-	act 'Further': 
+	'When you want to enter the bathroom, you see Sonia standing in front of the mirror. Luckily she didn''t see you; she was too occupied counting money. Your curiosity gets the better of you, and you decide to watch her for a while. Where did she get that money?'
+	act 'Continue': 
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev2_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Sonya starts to undress, powder her nose and lipstick before a mirror.'
-		'You understand, Now that it will exit from the bath, you quickly move to the kitchen and start to listen.'
-		'Sonia came out and went into a small room.'
-		act 'Further': 
+		'Sonia starts to undress, and then puts on a delicate lingerie set. She then touches up on her make-up, fixing every little blemish she can find.'
+		'You realize she''s probably going to come out of the bathroom soon, and quickly move to the kitchen and hide there.'
+		'Sure enough, Sonia comes out of the bathroom a few seconds later, and heads straight for uncle Sergey''s bedroom.'
+		act 'Continue': 
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev2_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ran to the room and opened the door just started watching.'
-			'Then, what you saw there was expected: Sonya was on her knees and took the dick in your mouth Sergey Borisovich'
-			'Sergei heard her say: -"Yes, here, good baby, Try deep, here, yes, very good, continue..."'
-			'-"Sergey Borisovich, I`m tired of sucking, fuck me doggy style on the bed, as the last whore on the planet!", a fucking smile says Sonia'
-			'After Sonya went hand, You have nothing to surprise she could not.'	
+			'You quickly sneak to the door, and carefully open it just enough so you can see what''s happening inside the room.'
+			'What you see does not surprise you in the slightest; Sonia is on her knees in front of Sergey, eagerly sucking on his dick.'
+			'"Very nice, baby. Take it deeper... all the way in, there you go..." he encourages her.'
+			'After sucking his dick for a few minutes, Sonia pulls away from Sergey. Just when he''s about to ask if something''s wrong, she grins lewdly at him and whispers: "Sergey Borisovich, I want you to fuck me like I''m the last whore on the planet! I''m all yours, baby."'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Continue': 
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 15
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev2_4'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sergei turned Sonya cancer and began rhythmically to fuck. Sony`s face was read fun, she liked sex more than anything else, and after a few minutes she began to cum like a machine gun, it was shaking, face blurred in various grimaces.'	
+				'Sergey makes Sonia bend over for him and rams his cock inside her sopping cunt. When he rhythmically fucks your classmate, Sonia moans and groans while her face turns a deep red. She''s completely lost in the moment... for a second you wonder why Sergey even gave her money, looking at her like this makes you think she probably would''ve done it for free anyway.'
+				'After a few minutes Sonia orgasms violently on Sergey''s cock, and even squirts a little.'	
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-				act 'Further': 
+				act 'Continue': 
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					horny += 15
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev2_5'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-					'After playing with her holes, Sergey was at the peak of orgasm and decided to finish Sonya in her mouth.'	
+					'When he''s too worked up to postpone his orgasm any longer, Sergey says: "On your knees! Fast!"'
+					'Sonia aims to please, and immediately drops to her knees in front of him with her mouth wide open. Sergey finishes inside Sonia''s mouth, and she swallows his load eagerly. She loudly smacks her lips and smiles at him: "Mmm... delicious!"'	
 					gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-					'When it was over, what would you have not noticed, You quickly shut the door and went about his business.'
-					act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+					'Now that they''re done, you realize you should probably get the hell out of there before they find you staring. You quickly shut the door.'
+					act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -235,17 +236,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev1':
 	minut += 2
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/m.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went to the bathroom and saw Sonya, which suggests marafet.'
+	'When you go to the bathroom, you find Sonia already in there. "Hi!" she says cheerfully, before returning to touching up her make-up.'
 
-	act 'Chat': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
+	act 'Chat with Sonia': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
 	if sh_sonya_bazar > 5:
-		act 'Offer to take a bath': gt 'shulgabath', 'lesb'
+		act 'Suggest you take a bath together': gt 'shulgabath', 'lesb'
 	end
 	if sh_sonya_bazar >= 25 and serge_shulgin >= 50:
-		act 'Suggest Sonia fuck with Sergey': gt 'shulgabath', 'serg_sex'
+		act 'Suggest you and Sonia fuck Sergey together': gt 'shulgabath', 'serg_sex'
 	end
 
-	act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 end
 
 !Sonya is sitting on the toilet
@@ -254,9 +255,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ev2':
 	minut += 2
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/t.jpg"></center>'
-	'You went to the bathroom and saw Sonya, which sits on the toilet.'
-	'You do not give her troubled, apologizing go.'
-	act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+	'When you go to the bathroom, you find Sonia already in there. "Hey!" she shouts indignantly. Oops, she''s on the toilet!'
+	'"Sorry, sorry!" you apologize, quickly leaving the bathroom.'
+	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 end
 
 !Gossip with Sonia, If burned her sex a couple of times in this hut.
@@ -270,34 +271,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bazar':
 	minut += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/b.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sonia Ivanko ordinary girl, but Sonia once inadvertently drunk on diskach club and fucked her in the mouth in a circle with Vitek Kotov buddies. After that, many girls avoided Sonia, and boys consider her a whore and stick on every corner with offers to have sex.'
+	'Ever since Sonia inadvertedly got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
 
 	sonya_textb_vanna = RAND(1,7)
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You are not a long time conversing on different topics.'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'You rasprashivat about school performance, Sonya says: -"If you find an approach to teacher, the evaluation will be positive without any effort and homework!"'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'You ask about the work, Sonya shrugs and says,: -"Nowadays, the work is bad, you know! Virtue-steeper, there help, here to help, so that money for the life of me missing"'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You often ask whether it comes to Sergei, Sonia honest answers: -"Well, a couple of times a week I go, sometimes more often, sometimes less as the money needed, so suck, You do not like a fool, you know my methods. This Guys always without money, But adult uncle never hurt, plus fun getting."'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 4:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonya tells of his adventures.'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting about everyday things with Sonia.'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 0:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia how she''s doing in school, she laughs and says: "It''s very easy to get good grades at our school. All you have to do is get the teachers to like you. And as you may know, they all like me..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 2 and SchoolAtestat = 1:$sonya_textb_vanna	= 'When you ask Sonia about the kind of work she does since school ended, she shrugs: "It''s tough to get a decent job nowadays. I''m lucky I have some nice guys like Sergey helping me out with my bills, otherwise I wouldn''t know how to make ends meet!"'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 3:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'When you ask Sonia how often she comes to meet Sergey, you get a surprisingly honest answer: "It depends. Usually a few times a week, depending how much money he has. If he can afford it I come by more often, if money is tight I don''t visit as much. You don''t look like a fool, you know why I''m here. Still, I have so say... being fucked by Sergey is amazing! He''s more mature than most guys I sleep with, and such a skilled lover..."'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 4:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells you about some interesting encounters she had in the Pavlovsk hotel the other day.'
 	if sonya_textb_vanna = 5:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'Sonia tells an interesting story.'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 6:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You chat about, who both spent the day.'
-	if sonya_textb_vanna = 7:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You Sonya different share news and gossip.'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 6:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You spend some time chatting with Sonia, mostly sharing what the two of you have done today.'
+	if sonya_textb_vanna = 7:$sonya_textb_vanna = 'You and Sonia chat for a few minutes about the news and current events.'
 
 	'<br><<$sonya_textb_vanna>><br>'
 
 	if sonya_bazar_count = 0:
-		'Sorry <<$gop_name_gg>>, I have time to go, next time chat.'
+		'Sorry <<$gop_name_gg>>, I have time to go. Maybe I''ll see you here again, so we can chat some more!'
 	else
-		act 'More chat': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
+		act 'Chat some more': gt 'shulgabath', 'bazar'
 	end
 
 	if sh_sonya_bazar > 5 and mesec <=0:
-		act 'Offer to take a bath': gt 'shulgabath', 'lesb'
+		act 'Suggest you take a bath together': gt 'shulgabath', 'lesb'
 	end
 	if sh_sonya_bazar >= 25 and serge_shulgin >= 50 and sonya_bazar_count >= 1 and vagina >=1:
-		act 'Suggest Sonia fuck with Sergey': gt 'shulgabath', 'serg_sex'
+		act 'Suggest you and Sonia fuck Sergey together': gt 'shulgabath', 'serg_sex'
 	end
 
-	act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+	act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 end
 
 !gg and Sonia take a bath
@@ -312,44 +313,48 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesb':
 	if frost > 0:frost = 0
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are offering: -"Sonia come with a bath"'
-	'-"And let`s", fun meets Sonya'
+	'You fill the bath tub and get in. Sonia is still standing near the mirror, fixing her make-up. She doesn''t seem to mind that you are in here with her.'
+	'Then you smile at her and ask: "Hey Sonia... would you like to take a bath with me?"'
+	'Sonia looks puzzled for a second, and asks: "Like... you want me to get in the bath with you right now?"'
+	'When you nod, she grins: "Actually, that sounds like fun! Sure!" and quickly gets naked, sliding her naked body into the warm tub water.'
 
-	act 'Further': 
+	act 'Continue': 
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev1_2'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Basking in the bath, not talking to you for a long time.'
+		'"Mmmm..." Sonia muses, enjoying the warmth of the bath water slowly seeping into her body. For the next few minutes you just sit in the bath next to each other. Sonia occasionally looks at you, but doesn''t say much.'
 
-		act 'Further': 
+		act 'Continue': 
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev1_3'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'Suddenly Sonya brings his lips to kiss you and your.'
+			'Just when you were about to say something, Sonia moves closer to you and kisses you full on your mouth. You freeze for a second, and then think to yourself... why the hell not?'
+			'You kiss Sonia back eagerly, playing with her tongue as she thrusts it into your mouth.'
 
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Continue': 
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/ev1_4'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Going below, Sonya dobiraetsya clitoris and starts to fondle.'	
+				'Before you realize what''s going on, Sonia signals for you to lift your hips above the water, which you do immediately.'
+				'Sonia moves her head between your legs and licks your cunt eagerly, teasing your clitoris with her tongue. She teases you with one hand, thrusting two fingers inside your snatch while she licks you skilfully. The way she looks into your eyes the whole time makes it a very intimate experience... she''s really good at this!'	
 				if horny >=70:
 					orgasm += 1
 					horny = 0
 					manna += 35
 					willpower +=20
-					'From skillful tongue Sony you a couple of minutes with a loud groan finished.'
+					'Sonia''s constant teasing pushes you over the edge, and you orgasm loudly when she licks your clit again.'
 				end	
-				'-"Well <<$gop_name_gg>> You liked my tongue?", playfully asks Sonia'
-				'-"Yes, it was very nice, let you do the same."'
-				'-"As a next time, Now I have been waiting at home, gotta run".'
-				'Sonya smacking your lips starting to come.'
+				'Sonia grins at you and asks playfully: "Did you like my tongue on your pussy, <<$gop_name_gg>>?"'
+				'"Absolutely!" you nod. "Come on, let me do the same for you! I want to taste you too!"'
+				'"I can''t right now, my mom is waiting for me at home", Sonia says wistfully. "Maybe next time?"'
+				'Sonia kisses you again, and you taste yourself on her lips. Mmmm... next time you really want to get a taste of her too!'
 
-				act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+				act 'Finish': gt'shulgahall'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -369,43 +374,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 	throat += 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/gr/ev1_1_'+rand(1,5)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'Have you looked at his penis if zagipnotizirovanye, Sonia then opened her mouth and dropped it to the member. 
-	It captures only the head, I start to drive on her tongue and a little sucking, from what Sergei already filched spirit.
-	When she began to move her head up and down and really suck, You put his hand between her legs and began to actively stroking her clitoris.
-	For a minute, Sonia pulled away from the penis and offered it to you. You started to lick from the base member, and then up until it took it into his mouth and began to fall on the head member for many, how much could, until the gag reflex did not take his. 
-	Sergei looked at you and show thumb. You really did everything very well.'
-	act 'Further': 
+	'"Sure, I bet Sergey would love having an extra girl around when he fucks me!" she grins. "Come on!"'
+	'You follow her into his room, and she was right; Sergey loves the idea! Sonia eagerly begins to suck his cock, and then offers it to you after a while: "Come on, <<$nickname>>! Get to work!"'
+	'Sonia notices your hesitance and puts her hand behind your head, gently but firmly guiding your head to his cock. "Go on, you''ll love it! I''ll help!"'
+	'You lick the shaft first, and then take the head of his cock in your mouth. Sonia gently strokes your hair, whispering encouraging words into your ear while you try to take more and more of his length inside your mouth. From time to time she assists you quite actively, sucking the head of his cock while you lick his balls, or licking one side of the shaft while you lick the other. At one point, you''re even trying to kiss one another with Sergey''s cock between your mouths!'
+	'You manage to take most of him in, but you have to yield and pull away before your gag reflex takes over. Sonia and Sergey both smile at you proudly, that was great!'
+	'"Wow, <<$nickname>>", Sonia says with some admiration in her voice, "I thought I was good with my mouth, but you sure look like you could teach me a thing or two!"'
+	act 'Continue': 
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		sex += 1
-		$boy = 'Sergei'
+		$boy = 'Sergey'
 		sexpartkno = 1
 		cumprecheck = 1
 		gs 'cum_manage'
 		horny += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/gr/ev1_2_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Sergei moved up to a member of your lips sex, and he moved his little up and down near the entrance. From these slides pussy even more wet and Sergey led by a dick on it was very nice. 
-		Sonia looked after us, gently massaging her breasts and pussy. Then Sergei gently and slowly moved forward.
-		Sponges your pussy opened and accepted it, surrounding member strong heat. Sergei felt like your pussy stretched, to meet the needs of members and measured, slowly she moved to member-here. 
-		Your mouth opened wide and he broke a long moan. Sonya without losing the time held up her pussy to your mouth and grabbed your head with your arms making it clear, that it is not bad to serve. 
-		When you began to crawl tongue over her pussy. Her breathing quickened and she bit her lip.
-		- What feelings? - You asked Sonia.
-		You through the fun and her pussy, bellowed, something strange. Sonya smiled mischievously, and further he moved up and pressed her hand harder your face to the pussy. 
-		With blissful face, Sonia lowered yourself to your mouth, two fingers opened her pussy for, that would be easier to see Sregeyu, as your tongue hides in it.'	
-		act 'Further': 
+		'Sergey seems to have made his choice; he wants to fuck you first. He moves up behind you and rubs his hard cock against your pussy lips; the wetness of them combined with his precum make it feel very nice.'
+		'Sonia just watches as Sergey slowly pushes his dick further and further inside of you, idly rubbing her clit and massaging her boobs. Your pussy feels quite full when Sergey is all the way in, but it''s a good kind of full. A nice kind of full. Maybe you should visit Sergey more often...'
+		'When he slowly begins to thrust his cock in and out of you, you open your mouth and let out a soft moan. Sonia sees this as an invitation and grabs your hair, as she rubs her pussy against your lips eagerly. Her actions are making it perfectly clear: you''re supposed to service her with your mouth while you get fucked.'
+		'You do what is expected of you, and lick Sonia''s pussy as best you can. It''s fairly difficult, with Sergey fucking from behind at the same time, but you notice her breathing quickening and her biting her lip while she looks down at you. She looks rather cute when she''s squirming.'
+		'"Enjoying yourself over there, Sonia?" you teasingly ask between moans. Sonia grins mischievously, and punishes you by grabbing a firmer hold on your hair and roughly grinding her pussy against your mouth.'
+		'Then Sergey decides it''s Sonia''s turn, and he makes her lie down on her back.'
+		act 'Continue': 
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/gr/ev1_3_'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'Sonya asked you to swap, saying:
-			- I also want to feel a member of the, Sergei vyebet let me properly, and you <<$name>> I thoroughly otlizhu.
-			Sergei put her back on the bed and swung entered her wet pussy, over which a few minutes ago, you did a good job.
-			By focusing on the fucking Sonya forgot about his promise, and you yourself had to sit by a pussy on her face. She moaned loudly in your pussy. 
-			You rocked on her face, Sergei is a flourish, the entire length of his cock fucked her, trying to insert as far as possible.
-			- Do not hold back Sergei, - You said, - Do not be afraid of this whores pussy, fire away it properly, it is only a hole for it and created.
-			Sonia assent, suck your pussy lips with his lips and began to actively crawl language. You already shakin `pleasure. You suffocated, when the language is deeply Sony`s in your labia.'	
+			'You have a devious grin on your face when you see Sonia in her current position. She forced you to lick her when Sergey fucked you... well, two can play that game!'
+			'Sergey groans as he enters Sonia, the wetness of her pussy definitely easing his access to her. You must''ve done a good job with your mouth, getting her that worked up.'
+			'"Your turn to service me, dear..." you smirk, right before you lower your hips over Sonia''s mouth before she can protest.'
+			'Sonia is too enthralled by the large dick fucking her snatch, and mostly just moans and groans into your pussy when you grind your groin against her face.'
+			'Sergey is railing her quite roughly now, and since Sonia is not doing a good job of pleasing you, you encourage him: "Fuck that pussy, Sergey! No need to hold back on this whore''s slit, she can take it! Pleasing you is what she''s made for!"'
+			'Suddenly Sonia becomes far more eager to please you, and you feel her tongue actively rubbing against your clit. You smirk when you realize why; Sonia must understand that you''re the reason why Sergey is fucking her so roughly, and is trying to please you so you''ll choose her side again.'
 			if horny >=70:
 				orgasm += 1
 				horny = 0
@@ -413,9 +416,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 				manna += 35
 				willpower +=20
 				minut += 5
-				'Sonya was able to please everyone and her sweet tongue has brought you to orgasm. From surging emotions you with a loud groan and finished.'
+				'She does such a good job, she brings you to an orgasm before you can stop her. You loudly groan and your body trembles over hers, causing Sergey to give you some confused looks.'
 			end	
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Continue': 
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 10
@@ -428,16 +431,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'serg_sex':
 				hapri = 0
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/vanna/sonya/gr/ev1_4_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sergey finished Sonya in her mouth, on her lips dripping cum and she licked it and partially swallowed.
-				You stood in front of Sergei on his lap and licked all the sperm that could not swallow Sonya. 
-				You always had few sperm. Sonya giggled from such a perverse kind.
-				- Oh, you little slut, - She joked, smiling broadly.
-				Between the legs of Sergei, you have raised my eyes and looked at him.
-				- I`m your slut, - You whispered and smiled, Before returning to the cleaning member.
-				Once you have finished, up, We sat next to Sonya and your lips met. Sponges Sony broke into her mouth letting your language. 
-				And you are completely inserted language to, where a couple of minutes ago there was a lot of sperm.
-				You broke the kiss, but strongly pressed to her, and your sweet tongue slid down her cheek licking the remains of the seed.'	
-				act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+				'When Sergey is close to his orgasm, he stops fucking Sonia and orders the both of you to get down on your knees before him. Sergey readily puts his cock into Sonia''s mouth, and roars loudly as he drops his hot load of sperm onto her tongue.'
+				'Sonia swallows some of it, while you lick the sperm that she didn''t manage to swallow from Sergey''s cock and balls after he pulls out of Sonia''s mouth.'
+				'"<<$nickname>>, you horny minx!" Sonia exclaims. "I didn''t know you were such a slut for cum!"'
+				'You take Sergey''s cock in your hand and gently rub it, trying to milk the last bits of sperm out of him. Sonia kisses you greedily, and you taste Sergey''s sperm on her tongue when she does. When she breaks off the kiss, you lick her cheek. "Just cleaning up your face, you had some sperm there", you wink at her.'
+				act 'Finish': gt'shulgahall'
 			end
 		end
 	end	

+ 27 - 26
locations/shulgabed

@@ -4,23 +4,21 @@ $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
 $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 $locM = $CURLOC
-cla
-*clr
 cls
 minut = minut + 1
 gs'stat'
 gs'gopsex'
-'<center><b><font color = maroon>Bedroom father Shulga</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color = maroon>Uncle Sergey''s bedroom</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom.jpg"></center>'
-'Everything is as usual a large bed, beside tables, opposite the TV, Side cabinet.'
+'Sergey''s bedroom looks just like any other bedroom. There''s a large bed, a television with a VCR connected to it, and a large cabinet to store clothes in. A random amount of junk is deposited on one of the nightstands.'
 
-if hour < 7 or hour >= 23: 'On the bed sleeping <<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''sleep''">Sergei</a>.'
+if hour < 7 or hour >= 23: 'When you come in you see that<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''sleep''">Sergey</a> is currently on his bed, sound asleep.'
 
-if week < 6 and ((hour >= 16 and hour < 18) or (hour >= 21 and hour < 23)): 'On the bed lies<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''tv''">Sergei</a> watching TV.'
-if week >= 6 and ((hour >= 7 and hour < 18) or (hour >= 21 and hour < 23)): 'On the bed lies<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''tv''">Sergei</a> watching TV.'
+if week < 6 and ((hour >= 16 and hour < 18) or (hour >= 21 and hour < 23)): 'When you come in you see that<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''tv''">Sergey</a> is relaxing on his bed, watching TV.'
+if week >= 6 and ((hour >= 7 and hour < 18) or (hour >= 21 and hour < 23)): 'When you come in you see that<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:GT ''Serge_Shulgin'',''tv''">Sergey</a> is relaxing on his bed, watching TV.'
 
 
-act 'Exit the room': gt'shulgahall'
+act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 if week < 6 and hour >= 7 and hour < 16: dynamic $smroom_sleep
 
 smroom_ev_sonya = RAND(0,100)
@@ -35,48 +33,51 @@ $smroom_sex_sonya = {
 	horny += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/sonya/ev1_1_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'You with bated breath slowly came to the door, from-for which I have heard muffled groans and sniffles. Slowly, trying not to make a sound, opened the door and clung to a narrow schёlke, cautiously looking inside.'
-	'And there Sergei rhythmically pyalil cancer Sonya. Her face was read, and the lust of the indescribable pleasure.'
-	'Nothing new, you do not see, while hoping to see someone-else, instead Sonya.'
+	'When you hear a girl''s moaning coming from <<$serg_obr>> Sergey''s bedroom, you immediately slow down. You approach the door with bated breath, opening it very slowly. Who could he have in there?'
+	'You peek through the opening and see your classmate Sonia getting fucked from behind by Sergey. Quite roughly, at that!'
+	'"How does Sonia even know him?" you ask yourself.'
+	'Sonia has a serene smile on her face, while Sergey fucks her silly. She really seems to have embraced her inner slut recently, and is not at all ashamed of finding joy in sex any more.'
 	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-	act 'Further': 
+	act 'Keep watching': 
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/sonya/ev1_2_'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Rolling his eyes in pleasure and barely suppressing a cry, She dug her nails into plaid, on which lay. 
-		But then Sergei began to drive faster and deeper his dick in her, not withstanding such an attack, Sonia louder and louder moaning with pleasure.'
+		'Sergey groans: "Roll over so I can look you in the eye while I''m fucking you, slut."'
+		'Sonia immediately obeys him, turning around and spreading her legs wide to receive his cock again. Sergey wastes no time and immediately slams his cock back in.'
+		'You softly bite your lower lip, watching Sonia get railed by him. She really seems to enjoy it. He''s rough with her, sometimes even uncomfortably so, but you don''t think you''ve ever seen her this happy before. What if...'
+		'Sonia interrupts your train of thought by moaning louder and louder, clearly in a lot of pleasure. She even startles Sergey a bit, who quickly leans forward and kisses her on her mouth dominantly to shut her up.'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'	
-		act 'Further': 
+		act 'Keep watching': 
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/sonya/ev1_3_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'Sonya moaned no hesitating. Sergei could not stand it and made her remark:
-			- Hush... You do not want, to the house we heard?
-			Sonia choked moaned and shook her head.
-			- Well, that`s good. And as a reward such a good girl...
-			Ringing cotton, and attractive ass horny Sonya left a bright red spot. 
-			She could not endure, and strong vaginal muscles squeezing ramming its members, It shook in orgasmic convulsions.
-			Panting, Both silhouette exhausted collapsed on the floor.'	
+			'When he pulls away from her and gets down on the bed so she can ride him, she immediately begins to moan loudly again. You can tell that Sergey is starting to get annoyed by this, and he puts his hand over her mouth.'
+			'"Keep it down! Do you want the whole building to come see what you and I are up to, here?" he hisses at her.'
+			'Sonia clamps her lips tightly together and shakes her head, still emitting some muffled moans.'
+			'"I didn''t think so", he rumbles. "I''ll tell you what, if you promise to keep quiet I will make it worth your while..."'
+			'He slaps her perfect butt cheek quite hard, leaving a bright red spot on your horny classmate''s buttock. Her body begins to tremble almost immediately, and Sonia''s really struggling to hold in her moans. Wow... is she orgasming from getting spanked like that!?'
+			'Sergey decides he''s toyed with Sonia long enough and fucks her intensely, while she''s having her orgasm. "That''s it, baby. Milk my load out of me. Maybe uncle Sergey feel good", he groans.'
+			'Seconds later you can tell he''s shooting his load deep inside Sonia''s cunt. He embraces her tightly while the two of them lie on the bad, panting and gasping for air. That was intense...'	
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+			act 'Leave them alone': gt'shulgahall'
 		end
 	end
 }
 
 !sleep when the bed is empty
 $smroom_sleep = {
-	act 'Lie down on the bed to take a nap':
+	act 'Lie down and take a nap (1:00)':
 		cls
 		son += 10
 		health += 5
 		minut += 60
 		gs'stat'
-		'You snoozed for an hour'
-		act 'Up': gt 'shulgabed'
+		'Since Sergey isn''t using his bed, you''re sure he won''t mind if you take a nap here. You lie down under the covers and snooze for an hour, feeling a bit less tired when you wake up again.'
+		act 'Get out of bed': gt 'shulgabed'
 	end
 }
 

+ 75 - 43
locations/shulgahall

@@ -27,18 +27,18 @@ gs'stat'
 if momslut >= 1 and sexev_momgg_count > 0:
 	if hour < 23 and ((week < 6 and hour >= 15) or (week >= 6 and hour >= 10)):
 		if RAND(1,100) <= 3:
-			'Have you heard any-strange sounds from the small room: <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momgg1">see</a>'
+			'You hear some strange sounds, coming from uncle Sergey''s room. You could go <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momgg1">see</a> what''s causing them.'
 		elseif RAND(4,100) <= 6:
-			'Have you heard any-the sounds of a small room: <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momgg2">see</a>'
+			'You hear loud slurping sounds coming from uncle Sergey''s room, leaving no doubt as to what''s happening there. You could go <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momgg2">see</a> who''s with him.'
 		elseif RAND(7,100) <= 9:
-			'Have you heard any-the loud sucking sound from the small room: <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momggbang">see</a>'
+			'You hear loud slurping sounds coming from uncle Sergey''s room, leaving no doubt as to what''s happening there. It doesn''t sound like he''s the only guy in there, though! You could go <a href="exec: dynamic $shulga_home_momggbang">see</a> who else is in there.'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 
 act 'Go to the living room': gt 'shulga_room', 'start'
-act 'Go to Shulgas room': gt 'shulgabed'
+act 'Go to Sergey''s room': gt 'shulgabed'
 act 'Go to the bathroom': gt 'shulgabath', 'start'
 act 'Go to the kitchen': gt 'shulgakuh'
 act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
@@ -52,50 +52,57 @@ $shulga_home_momgg1 = {
 	horny += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev1_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Hands Sergei wandered erratically on my mother`s body - then fondle her breasts, the eagerly grabbed her perfect ass.
-	And then his fingers reached her most cherished places.
-	He sat down to her pussy and began greedily kissing millimeter by millimeter, the glaring fact biting her.
-	Natasha bit her lower lip and rolled her eyes...'
+	'Oops, uncle Sergey has a woman over! Just when you were about to leave them alone, you realize: wait a minute... that woman is your mother!'
+	'Sergey''s hands are roving over your mother''s body, fondling her boobs and caressing her perfect ass while she moans like a wanton whore.'
+	'Then Sergey runs her hands over her snatch, rubbing her clit until your mother tries to scoot away from him.'
+	'He smirks at her, and moves his head to her inner thighs. He''s placing kisses all over the place, carefully avoiding her pussy.'
+	'"Just lick me already, you bastard!" your mother groans, and she moans happily as Sergey thrusts his tongue inside her. Having her beg for him is all he was waiting for. Your mother lets out a satisfied sigh and closes her eyes, thoroughly enjoying his mouth on her wet cunt.'
 	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-	act 'Further': 
+	act 'Keep watching':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev1_2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Sergei, He grabbed her by the arms and lifted from the bed, Natasha sat down on my knees and began to drive huge cock in her mouth.
-		He tightened his grip on her head and pulled as close as possible to him, Sergei furiously leading pelvis literally trying to break Natasha`s mouth, with red lipstick that gently rubbed his chin now!.'
+		'After licking your mother''s pussy for a few minutes, he grabs her by the arms and pulls her up from the couch, putting her down on her knees in front of him. Without needing any prompting, she eagerly closes her lips around th head of his huge cock and begins to take it further and further into her mouth. They''ve definitely done this before.'
+		'Sergey grips your mother''s hair firmly and thrusts his hips forward, forcing his cock all the way down her throat.'
+		'"That''s it Natasha, take it all the way... rub your lipstick all over my groin", he grins, looking her straight in the eye. Then he begins to fuck your mother''s mouth furiously. Your mother takes it like a champ, not showing any gag reflex whatsoever.'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-		act 'Further': 
+		act 'Keep watching':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev1_3_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'Sergey big hands grabbed her ass and spread his buns to the sides, juicy spit into her cunt and easily drove a member, holding her hands stretched to the sides, from what Natasha bent like a cat.
-			- Like, fuck? Yes!? Yes?!
-			- AAAA... mmm... oh, yes... fuck... fuck... - Could only whined Natasha.
-			And he has continued its rhythmic poёbyvat. Natasha continued to moan and hips podmahivala.
-			- Like? Natasha appetizing you bitch, not to fuck you pereebat... yeah...
-			- daaaaa, more... Ebi... worse... yes... here... about daaaaa...'
+			'When Sergey pulls your mother''s head away from his cock, a thick strand of saliva dribbles down from it onto the floor.'
+			'"On the couch, Natasha", Sergey commands. "You know what I want next."'
+			'Your mother nods and eagerly gets down on the couch, moaning at him: "Fuck me, Sergey! Fuck me hard!"'
+			'Sergey spreads her butt cheeks with his hands, and guides his cock to her cunt. He''s not very gentle with your mom, and begins to pound her furiously as if his life depended on it.'
+			'Your mother looks like she wouldn''t have it any other way and rhythmically bounces her ass back against his hips, matching his thrusts.'
+			'"Yes! Keep fucking me! Just like that! Aaahhh..." your mother groans.'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Keep watching':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 15
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev1_4_'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sergei decided to change position, He lay on the sofa, and Natasha sat down on top of him and began to actively jump, all accelerating pace and without stopping to talk as she well.'
+				'You know you shouldn''t be watching this... but wow! Sergey is treating your mother like a cheap whore, and she''s loving it!'
+				'Sergey decides to change things up a bit, and gets up. He then sits down on the couch, his cock still firmly erect. You mother immediately mounts him with a lewd grin on her face, and rides his cock eagerly.'
+				'Sergey roughly pinches your mother''s nipples while he keeps degrading her, talking about what a huge slut she is for him, and how he can''t believe how often she''s coming upstairs to see him lately. Your mother just groans and rides him even harder.'
 				gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-				act 'Further': 
+				act 'Keep watching':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					horny += 15
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev1_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'He roared like a lion, and two hands holding her crown. Then step back, I nadrachivat already started and is about to put his finishing them in her mouth Natasha. 
-					She pressed her lips together, and a jet of dense and fibrous beginning to fill her mouth, chin, dripping on the floor.'
-					act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+					'Your mother quickly gets up and drops down on her knees before Sergey, when she notices he''s about to come. Seconds later, Sergey roars and throws his head back while your mother jerks him off, opening her mouth to catch the jets of his hot sperm.'
+					'She''s not very good at aiming it; the majority of it lands on her cheeks and chin. When Sergey recovers a little, he grins down and watches your mother lick and suck on his slowly softening cock, some of his load slowly running down her chin and dripping down to her boobs.'
+					'He lovingly strokes her hair for a second and says: "You''re insatiable, Natasha. I''m glad Vladimir decided the two of you should live here, right below me!"'
+					'"What can I say? Vladimir just can''t keep me satisfied by himself. A woman has her needs, you know..." she grins. "I better freshen up and head back downstairs though, before anyone notices I''m gone. See you soon?"'
+					'Sergey nods happily: "Absolutely!"'
+					act 'Hide while your mother leaves': gt'shulgahall'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -110,32 +117,46 @@ $shulga_home_momgg2 = {
 	horny += 5
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev2_1_'+rand(1,4)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	''
+	'When you carefully peek around the corner, you immediately recognize the woman uncle Sergey is with... it''s your mother! Her head is bobbing up and down on his cock eagerly, and she''s making loud slurping sounds while she''s sucking him off.'
+	'She looks like she''s been at it for a while. Her hair looks all disheveled, and her face looks a bit puffy.'
+	'"Keep sucking, slut", Sergey commands. "I''ll tell you when you''re done."'
+	'Your mother nods and keeps serving his large dick obediently with her mouth. You''re baffled... your mother lets Sergey talk to her like that? Your high-and-mighty mother, who always takes the high ground with you?'
 	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-	act 'Further': 
+	act 'Keep watching': 
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev2_2_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		'After a few more minutes, your mother pulls away and winks at him: "You''ll have to fuck my ass today. It''s that time of the month..."'
+		'"My favourite time of the month!" Sergey grins. "Go ahead, hop on", he invites her, nodding at his stiff erection.'
+		'Your mother gets on top of Sergey, and guides his cock towards her tight sphincter. She left out of a soft sigh and bites her lip as she slowly lowers herself down onto it.'
+		'"I''m so full!" she groans, when he''s all the way inside her ass. "Why do you have to be this big?"'
+		'Sergey smirks: "As if you''d have it any other way..." and slowly begins to move his hips once she gets used to his size. Your mother soon matches his thrusts, and rides Sergey more and more enthusiastically.'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-		act 'Further': 
+		act 'Keep watching': 
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev2_3_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			''
+			'Then Sergey makes your mother roll on her side. "I love that time of the month..." he growls in her ear as he begins to thrust his cock into her ass more firmly, making your mother moan and mewl with pleasure.'
+			'"Ohh Sergey, that feels so good! Don''t stop!" your mother groans, and she begins to rub her pussy to stimulate herself while he fucks her ass from behind.'
+			'He responds by redoubling his efforts, hammering his hips against hers. He whispers: "You love it when I stretch out your ass, don''t you Natasha? We could be doing this all the time, you know..."'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Keep watching': 
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 15
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev2_4.jpg"></center>'
-				''
-				act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+				'Your mother moans between ragged breaths: "No... I like it... when it''s special..."'
+				'Sergey laughs and helps your mother to her hands and knees, before roughly pressing his cock against her asshole again. It''s a lot more flexible from the stretching it already received, and his rod slides in fairly easily.'
+				'"You''re right, Natasha. It''s nice to have something special to look forward to", he chuckles. He roughly fucks her ass for a few minutes more, slapping her ass cheeks every chance he gets. You could swear you see your mother have an orgasm from the rough treatment, right before Sergey''s body spasms.'
+				'"Ohh yea! I love it when you come in my ass, Sergey!" your mother gasps. After a few more thrusts, he pulls out and you see his sperm slowly trickle from your mom''s slightly gaped anus.'
+				'"That was fun, babe", Sergey smiles. "I''m guessing I will see you again soon? I know how horny you get when you''re on your period!"'
+				'She kisses him on the lips and slaps his chest playfully. "Shut up!" she grins. "But... yea. See you soon!"'
+				act 'Hide while your mother leaves': gt'shulgahall'
 			end
 		end
 	end	
@@ -149,35 +170,46 @@ $shulga_home_momggbang = {
 	horny += 10
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev3_1_'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-	'And then you saw how your mother greedily sucking dicks and Sergei Uncle Misha.'
+	'When you peek through the narrow door opening, you see your mother sitting on her knees inbetween uncle Sergey and uncle Misha!'
+	'She''s almost naked, while the men still have their clothes on. They pulled their cocks out through their zippers and your mother is sucking them both off greedily, taking them in her mouth in turns. She''s doing her best to please them both, jerking off whoever she''s not pleasing with her mouth.'
+	'"Just like good old times eh, Misha?" Sergey grins. Misha laughs and nods: "Indeed... I don''t think we''ve ever had a better slut to share than our Natasha!"'
+	'Your mother blushes a bit, but keeps servicing them as if she didn''t hear it.'
 	gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-	act 'Further': 
+	act 'Keep watching':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 15
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev3_2_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-		'Sergey looking, both on the movements of his friend first inflated cheeks of your mother, and then her throat, Sergei gently introduced his dick in pussy Natasha and began measuring the motion pelvis. 
-		Natasha was in seventh heaven - with her eyes closed she tried to skip a member of Uncle Misha as deeply as possible into the throat. 
-		Sergey drives the his trunk into it to its full length, and she already felt spanking eggs on his ass. 
-		Gradually, the movement of men came in unison, and at the same time they began to push their guns into it from both sides, and it was so delicious, Natasha tried to spread on their members as deep as possible.'
+		'While your mother is fully focused on sucking off Misha, Sergey moves behind her and slips his dick inside her slowly.'
+		'Your mother wasn''t expecting him, and is startled for a second. Then she relaxes, and redoubles her efforts on taking as much of Misha''s cock down her throat as she can while Sergey fucks her gently.'
+		'Misha laughs: "Every time you bottom out in her, her throat squeezes my cock a little when she moans... it feels great! Want to try?"'
+		'Sergey grins and the men change places, moving your mother around. She''s content to just let it happen, happy to please the men any way they see fit.'
+		'"Such an eager slut..." Sergey muses, after they''d been fucking her for a while. "Let''s see how she likes it when both her holes are fucked at once!"'
+		'Misha snorts: "You don''t remember the last time we did? You''re getting old and forgetful, Sergey... it was last week, for crying out loud!"'
 		gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-		act 'Further': 
+		act 'Keep watching':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 15
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev3_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Your mother was sucking dick Sergei, Uncle Misha fucked her in the ass. Within minutes 5 Model Behavior...Your mother looked like a real whore.'
+			'Your mother ignores the derogatory remarks and eagerly mounts uncle Misha, slowly taking his cock in her ass before leaning back. In fact, it almost looks like she''s enjoying hearing the men talk about her like that!'
+			'Sergey immediately moves between her legs and guides his cock towards her dripping cunt, slamming it in. After a few testy thrusts, the men find a rhythm and fuck your mother in sync, making her moan and beg like you''ve never heard her before. From her usual model behaviour, to acting like a total whore in less than 15 minutes... oh, how the mighty have fallen!'
 			gs 'gopsex', 'masturb_gg'
-			act 'Further': 
+			act 'Keep watching':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 15
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/smroom/momgg/ev3_4_'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-				'The first finished Sergey, his dense sperm flowed profusely from the mouth of your mother. It, not stopping stick your ass to meet Uncle Misha. Just a minute, Uncle Misha frequent movement and its member threw a jet, Natasha felt it within himself.'
-				act 'Escape': gt'shulgahall'
+				'When Misha says he''s about to cum, your mother quickly gets off him and takes his cock in her mouth, drinking his sperm eagerly.'
+				'Meanwhile, Sergey stood up and moved behind her, sliding his stiff rod into your mother''s stretched asshole. He roughly pounds her ass like this for a minute or so, before shooting his load deep inside her.'
+				'"I love our little meetings", Misha grins while everyone catches their breath again. "Natasha is so insatiable, though! Three cocks are probably better than two... maybe we should finally invite Vladimir too, after all these years?"'
+				'Your mother quickly blurts out: "No! No, don''t tell Vladimir... he wouldn''t understand."'
+				'Misha raises his hands apologetically and kisses her cheek: "Of course, dear. I honestly prefer keeping you for just me and Sergey anyway. Thanks for the fuck, Natasha. You know where to find us if you need more!"'
+				'You quickly hide when he walks past you. That was close! Your mother quickly cleans herself up a little, chatting with Sergey about everyday things. This really was nothing special for her. You can''t help but wonder how long this has been going on... from how they were talking, it could be years!'
+				act 'Hide while your mother leaves': gt'shulgahall'
 			end
 		end
 	end	

+ 13 - 11
locations/shulgahome

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 $locM = $CURLOC
 $metka = $ARGS[0]
 $loc = $CURLOC
-!podgruzhaem dynamics which "gopsex"
+!Vasily/Shulga''s dynamic name is randomly chosen in "gopsex"
 gs'gopsex'
 gs'stat'
  
@@ -16,25 +16,27 @@ gs'stat'
 if serge_shulgin < 30:$serg_obr = ' uncle'
 if serge_shulgin >= 30:$serg_obr = ''
 
-'You are at the door to Shulgas apartment.'
+'You''re at the door to the Shulgin apartment.'
 !Entry conditions:
 if week < 6 and hour >= 10 and hour < 16:
-	'No one opens the door. Apparently there is no one home.'
-	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'However, you have the key that Sergey gave you.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'When you ring the doorbell, no one comes to answer the door. Apparently both <<$shulga_name_rnd>> and Sergey are not at home.'
+	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'You could still enter with the key that Sergey gave you.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 16 and hour <= 23:
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/serge2.jpg"></center>'
-	'The door is opened by<<$serg_obr>> Sergey who tells you that his son is not home.'
-	if serge_shulgin >=30: 'He doesn''t mind if you want to come in anyway.' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'When you ring the doorbell,<<$serg_obr>> Sergey comes to answer the door.'
+	'"Oh, hello <<$nickname>>", he shrugs. "If you''re looking for Vasily: he''s not here, and I don''t know when he''ll be back."'
+	if serge_shulgin >=30: 'He offers: "You can come in anyway, if you want?"' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 2 and hour < 5:
-	'It''s too late to visit, you don''t want to wake everyone up.'
-	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'However, you have the key that Sergey gave you.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too late to go visit them, you''d wake everyone up!'
+	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'You could use the key that Sergey gave you to enter the apartment quietly.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 elseif hour >= 5 and hour < 10:
-	'It''s too early, they wont be out of bed yet.'
-	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'However, you have the key that Sergey gave you.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
+	'You move your hand to ring the bell, but stop yourself. It''s too early, they won''t be out of bed yet.'
+	if serge_shulgin >=70: 'You could use the key that Sergey gave you to enter the apartment quietly.' & act 'Unlock the door and enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 else
 	'The door is opened by <<$shulga_name_rnd>> and you are invited in.' & act 'Enter':gt 'shulgahall'
 end
 
-act 'Escape':minut += 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+
 --- shulgahome ---------------------------------
 

+ 56 - 52
locations/shulgakuh

@@ -14,9 +14,9 @@ gs'kit_din'
 
 if hour >= 18 and hour < 21:
 	if rand(1,100) < 10:
-		'In the kitchen, sitting at the table <<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:gt ''Serge_kuh'',''kuh_buh''">Sergei</a> and drinking vodka.'
+		'When you enter the kitchen,<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:gt ''Serge_kuh'',''kuh_buh''">Sergey</a> gives you a friendly nod. He''s sitting at the kitchen table, drinking vodka.'
 	else
-		'The kitchen prepares food <<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:gt ''Serge_kuh''">Sergei</a>.'
+		'When you enter the kitchen,<<$serg_obr>> <a href="exec:gt ''Serge_kuh''">Sergey</a> is standing at the kitchen counter preparing a meal.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ act 'Look in the fridge': dynamic $holodil
 
 dynamic $driwater
 
-act 'Leave the kitchen': gt'shulgahall'
+act 'Return to the hallway': gt'shulgahall'
 
 !Launch Event with gopotoy kitchen	
 if RAND(0,100) <= 5 and GorSlut >= 3 and gangsexroom_count > 0 and week < 6 and hour >= 0 and hour < 3: 
@@ -50,17 +50,17 @@ $holodil = {
 	minut += 1
 	gs'stat'
 	if beer_count = 2:
-		$r_beer = ' 2 beer bottles,'
+		$r_beer = ' 2 beers,'
 	elseif beer_count = 1:
-		$r_beer = ' 1 a bottle of beer,'
+		$r_beer = ' 1 beer,'
 	else
 		$r_beer = ''
 	end
 
 	if vodka_count = 3:
-		$r_vodka = ' full bottle of vodka,'
+		$r_vodka = ' a full bottle of vodka,'
 	elseif vodka_count = 2:
-		$r_vodka = ' half-empty bottle of vodka,'
+		$r_vodka = ' a half-empty bottle of vodka,'
 	elseif vodka_count = 1:
 		$r_vodka = ' a nearly empty bottle of vodka,'
 	else
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ $holodil = {
 		'You open the fridge and see:<<$r_vodka>><<$r_beer>><<$r_sup>><<$r_pusto>>'	
 	!drink beer		
 	if beer_count > 0: 
-		act 'Drink beer':
+		act 'Have a beer':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			alko += 1
@@ -89,14 +89,14 @@ $holodil = {
 			beer_count -= 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/beer'+rand(1,3)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You drank a bottle of beer'
+			'You take a bottle of beer from the fridge and drink it, quenching your thirst.'
 
-			act 'Further': dynamic $holodil
+			act 'Continue': dynamic $holodil
 		end	
 	end
 	!drink vodka
 	if vodka_count > 0: 
-		act 'Drink vodka':
+		act 'Drink some vodka':
 			cls
 			minut += 1
 			alko +=2
@@ -107,11 +107,11 @@ $holodil = {
 			vodka_count -= 1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/vodka'+rand(1,2)+'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You drank a glass of vodka'
-			act 'Remove the bottle': dynamic $holodil
+			'You pour some vodka in a glass and drink it. You shiver as you feel the warm, burning sensation slowly slide down your gullet.'
+			act 'Put the bottle back in the fridge': dynamic $holodil
 
-			act 'More zhahnut': 
-				if vodka_count = 0: '<font color = red>No more vodka</font><center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/vodka0.jpg"></center>'
+			act 'Drink more vodka': 
+				if vodka_count = 0: '<font color = red>There''s no vodka left, you drank it all!</font><center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/vodka0.jpg"></center>'
 				if vodka_count > 0:
 					minut += 1
 					alko +=2
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ $holodil = {
 					vodka_day = daystart
 					vodka_count -= 1
 					gs'stat'
-					'You poured himself another glass and drained it in one gulp'
+					'You pour yourself another glass and drain it in one gulp. Wow, that stuff is strong!'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ $holodil = {
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			fbreath = 0
 
-			'You happily eat a bowl of soup.'
+			'You happily eat a bowl of soup. It''s good soup,<<$serg_obr>> Sergey sure knows how to cook!'
 
 			act 'Further': dynamic $holodil
 		end	
@@ -160,79 +160,83 @@ $gang_sex_ev1 = {
 	gangsexroom_count -= 1
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang1.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you come to the kitchen, There waiting for you three drunken boys. Seeing you, they were glad, and were about to be expanded on your desk, but you have to kind of resist.'
+	'When you enter the kitchen, you see Vasily and his friends sitting at the kitchen table there. They''ve clearly been drinking.'
+	'"<<$nickname>>, how nice of you to join us! We were just talking about you", Vitek grins, as he pulls you onto the table. The other boys immediately surround you, and the three of them begin to paw at your clothes.'
+	'"Guys, what are you doing!?" you protest, and you weakly try to get away from them. They''re too strong though, and all your struggling does is make them even more turned on.'
 
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		minut += 3
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Vitek hold your hair, <<$shulga_name_rnd>> I am trying to cope with your hands.
-		-"Fuck, <<$gop_name_gg>> do not build ourselves out of hymen, Spreading Legs", said Dan.
-		He wanted to study the condition of your gap and you put his hand into her panties and began to explore your pussy.
-		Defenseless situation you a little excited, so she opened pussy, and from it flowed juice, and the ass ring also opened slightly in anticipation of a member.'
+		'You stop protesting when Vitek firmly grabs you by the hair. Meanwhile, <<$shulga_name_rnd>> slides his hand underneath your clothes, attempting to thrust a finger inside your snatch.'
+		'"Stop squeezing your legs together, <<$gop_name_gg>>", Dan grins, as he keeps tugging at your top. "It''s a bit late for you to start being a prude now. We all know what you''ve been up to."'
+		'You have to admit that despite yourself, you''re getting rather turned on by how helpless you are... unable to resist the boys'' rough touch. Part of why you didn''t want to spread your legs was... they''d find out how wet you are.'
+		'When you spread your legs a little, Vasily immediately snakes his finger inside your pussy and confirms their suspicions: "She''s dripping. I knew it!"'
 
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You squatted, but you still tried to resist.
-			- "<<$gop_name_gg>> Stop faces here we build, Attend to normal, not the first time the...", Dan said and ordered the boys be from different sides, and you suck all the good.'	
+			'The guys force you to squat, and surround you. They all pulled their cocks out of their pants, and Dan is slapping his cock against your cheek impatiently.'
+			'When you don''t open your mouth, the boys grow impatient. Dan orders you: "<<$gop_name_gg>>, drop the act, seriously. You know what we want from you! Don''t worry, we won''t tell anyone..."'
 
-			act 'Further':
+			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Yes, you do not suck against their mighty sausages, obsosyvat started with at the beginning of Vic, Once in your mouth cock began to grow rapidly and you`re barely able to swallow it. 
-				Suck it a little, Dan pulled you by the hair of his friend and you`re sucking the second term. Dan was more unfettered, therefore I wanted to push his friend to you on the eggs, and he began to peck. 
-				But you it was already no stranger to you safely, expertly took his dick the entire length in the mouth. Later in the game you joined Bob and everyone turns sucking dick.'	
+				'After giving it some thought, you realize: they''re not just going to let you walk away, in their current state. You can cooperate or be difficult, but you''re getting fucked no matter what. You might as well take the easy route and just go along with it...'
+				'You nod obediently and take the closest dick in your mouth; it''s Vitek''s. You run your tongue over the head and suck on it gently, feeling it swell more and more in your mouth. By the time he''s at full mast, it doesn''t fit in your mouth any more and you have to pull away.'
+				'Vasily immediately takes his place, and Dan puts his hand on the back of your head and pushes you towards Vasily''s cock, making you swallow more of his length. Fortunately Vasily is the least girthy of the lot, and you manage to take him all the way in. He grins proudly at you when your chin touches his balls.'
+				'Then Dan wants a turn, and you manage to take most of his length down your throat too.'	
 
-				act 'Further':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					minut += 10
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Gradually, the guys started to undress and now your body is put on the table and you feel his forage cap, in you that-something breaks. Bob immersing dick in pussy began to fuck measured, the other guys you masturbate and do not forget to suck.
-					Vitek says: - "<<$shulga_name_rnd>>, Fall place for me, I want it in the ass!"'	
+					'Gradually, the guys undress you more and more while you suckthem off in turns. Then Vasily hoists you up and the guys make you lie down on the table. Vasily guides his cock to your pussy and thrusts it inside you, while Dan and Vitek move to the other end of the table and offer their dicks to you again. You masturbate them eagerly while Vasily fucks you. It''s difficult to suck them off in this position, but you try to make the most of it.'
+					'Then Vitek says: "<<$shulga_name_rnd>>, move over. I want to fuck her ass now!"'	
 
-					act 'Further':
+					act 'Continue':
 						cls
 						minut += 10
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You throw on the floor and Vitek enters your ass.
-						- "There, she, narrowish!", says Victor
-						- "Yes, Che you drive, submerge normal member, here you see, and I said narrow", Dan chuckled komentiruet simultaneously thrusting his dick in your mouth.'	
+						'The guys pull you off the table and throw you onto the ground, where Dan puts his belt around your neck.'
+						'"Keep sucking, slut", he commands, and rubs his dick against your lips while Vitek spits on your asshole a few times.'
+						'You groan around Dan''s cock when Vitek forces the head of his dick inside you, but fortunately he''s gentle and gives you some time to adjust to the feeling before he begins to thrust.'
+						'"It''s a good thing she has a dick in her mouth", Vasily laughs. "She''d definitely wake up my father with her screaming, otherwise!"'
 
-						act 'Further':
+						act 'Continue':
 							cls
-							minut += 10
+							minut += 20
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang7.jpg"></center>'
-							'<<$shulga_name_rnd>> speaks: - "You until it spiers, and I`ll masturbate, I do not want to wait until someone-it frees a place for me. Deng her well Waffles, We have three holes, and she, too, three. So let`s expand on the couch ok, all of it will be convenient".
-							Guys did not argue, as the arguments of Basil were undeniable and you dragged him into the room on the sofa.
-							You last twenty minutes continuously in three holes fucked. You were so good and you can easily take on the eggs whose-the member, not being afraid of what`s behind you fuck in two holes and your head from bumps all the time flies forward-ago.
-							The pussy and ass members climbed easily and not forced. You just went mad and enjoyed their members. 
-							The holes between the legs were so rastrahany, that easily takes members, especially ass. She had not closed, even if you try to squeeze the muscles ringlet.'	
+							'"Alright guys, let''s change holes. Vasily needs one too", Vitek grins, and he picks you up like a rag doll.'
+							'When he sees the concerned look on your face, he smirks: "Do the math, <<$nickname>>. There are three guys here, you have three holes... what did you think was going to happen? You expect one of us to just jerk off the whole time? Not gonna happen. Let''s take her to the couch, guys."'
+							'Vitek carries you to the couch in his arms as if you weigh nothing, and positions you over his cock before he lowers you. Then the other guys join in, Dan sliding his cock into your already warmed up asshole while Vasily takes your mouth again.'
+							'For the next twenty minutes, the guys take turns fucking all of your holes, swapping it up every now and then. You end up deepthroating the dick of whoever is in front of you at the time a lot, with the guys behind you fucking you so roughly that your head keeps bouncing forward.'
+							'Your throat feels a little sore, but for the rest it feels heavenly! You can easily take their members on by now and blissfully lie down on the chest of the guy beneath you, willingly surrendering yourself to them.'	
 							if horny >=70:
 								orgasm += 1
 								horny = 0
-								'Having an orgasm, guys give you respite for a couple of minutes, but then begin to clatter furiously all your slots.'
+								'When you groan loudly and your body begins to spasm, the guys are actually kind enough to give you some respite for a minute or two to ride out your orgasm. Once they feel you''ve recovered enough, they redouble their efforts and furiously pound all of your holes, as if they''re trying to make up for lost time.'
 							end
 
-							act 'Further':
+							act 'Continue':
 								cls
 								minut += 10
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/kuh/event/gang8.jpg"></center>'
-								'Dan is already tired of it all, he proposes to end and builds all around you. Before your face three dick, that you drochat. Some of you are helping your mouth, and who-Fingering the hands, on the machine waiting for their portion of the seed. 
-								The first pours into your mouth his sperm Dan, You eagerly swallow it and then to have fires Vitek. Sperm are so many, that you hardly have time to swallow it. 
-								Following the ready <<$shulga_name_rnd>>, you do not always have time to catch all the cum, so it gets you in the face and even on tits.
-								- "Videsh how fucking fuck, and you show off!", says Dan.
-								You said nothing, cute smile.'
-								act 'Escape': gt 'shulgakuh'
+								'When the guys are getting close, Dan suggests they all stand around you and shoot their loads over your face. The guys happily agree and move in front of you, all pointing their cocks at your face.'
+								'"What are you waiting for, <<$nickname>>? Finish us off!" Dan orders you impatiently.'
+								'You bite your lip and begin to jerk two of them off with your hands, while sucking on the third. It doesn''t take long for the first jets of cum to fly through the air; Vasily shot his hot load all over your face, groaning loudly.'
+								'Then Dan''s cock begins to pulse in your mouth, and you feel his load being squirted into your mouth. You swallow it obediently and immediately turn your head to Vitek, who shoots his sperm all over your face and boobs.'
+								'Dan grins at your cute face, all covered in sperm: "That wasn''t so bad... was it, <<$nickname>>? Next time, how about you drop the good girl charade and just let us fuck you when we want to? You know you love it as much as we do!"'
+								act 'Leave them': gt 'shulgakuh'
 	
 							end
 						end