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      locations/artemEv
  2. 30 27
      locations/artemEv3
  3. 66 49
      locations/artemev2
  4. 85 65
      locations/artemhome
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      locations/artgar

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locations/artemEv


+ 30 - 27
locations/artemEv3

@@ -1,52 +1,54 @@
 # ArtemEv3
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'slut_talk':
 	cls
 	cla
 	gs'stat'
 	minut += RAND (10,15)
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/talk1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You go to Artem`s room and silently sit on the couch.'
-	'Artem: "<<$name>>..."'
-	'Do not you just start answering roar. Artem, abashed, silently hugged you. As it could be seen, he just does not know what to say about the incident.'
-	'You: "They all told..." - through tears and snot you say - "Everybody! All in Pavlovsky know!"'
-	'Artem: "<<$name>>, I..."'
-	'You: "What <<$name>>?! What <<$name>>?! No , I no longer <<$name>>, just $gnikname! Everyone is talking about it!" - almost hysterical shout you.'
-	'Artem vaschi wipes tears and even stronger presses you to her.'
-	'Artem: "I still love you..." - he said almost in a whisper - "...and will not let anyone hurt you".'
-	'You: "Are you ready to meet with a whore?" - you raise your eyes to the Artem.'
-	'Artem: "I do not care how you got there called, it is not important for me."'
+	'You quietly walk past Artem and enter his room. You sit down on the couch, without saying a word.'
+	'Artem looks at you questioningly: "<<$name>>..."'
+	'Tears roll down your cheeks, but you still don''t know what to say and just sit there, crying softly.'
+	'Artem is clueless as to what he should do, and just hugs you. You''re fairly sure he knows about your reputation. Surely he must...'
+	'Eventually, you sniffle: "They all know... Everyone in Pavlovsk knows!"'
+	'Artem keeps hugging you: "<<$name>>, I..."'
+	'You break away from him, and shout hysterically: "What do you mean, <<$name>>?! No one calls me that any more! It''s just <<$gnikname>> now..."'
+	'Artem wipes the tears from your face, and hugs you tightly.'
+	'He whispers: "I still love you..."'
+	'You smirk at him: "Are you sure you want to be seen with a whore? Everyone will look down on you too!"'
+	'Artem tells you: "I don''t care what others call you, or what they think... I just want to be with you."'
 	if soniaPS > 0:
-		'You: "But not all the same, that to me would do, it is so?! Look at Sonia - She does not give her a pass after the case after the disco!"'
+		'You continue: "You saw what happened to Sonia! She used to get along with everyone... but ever since the incident at the disco they all treat her like dirt! That will happen to me too, I just know it! And you, if people see you near me!"'
 	else
-		'You: "But not all the same, that to me would do, it is so?! You know how we have things to do here, Now I also will not pass!"'
+		'You shake your head sadly: "I know you think that now, but it won''t be the same. People will treat me like dirt, Artem! And they would do the same to you!"'
 	end
-	'Artem: "<<$name>>, what I-`ll figure it out... be sure to come up. Just have patience, beloved..." - you hear his voice trembled, As he spoke.'
-	'It is difficult to, at that moment, I felt Artem. He definitely was broken no less than yours.'
-	act 'Kiss':
+	'You hear his voice crack when he tries to reassure you things will be okay: "<<$name>>, please calm down! We''ll figure something out! Just give it some time..."'
+	'You can tell it has been on his mind as well, and that he''s having a difficult time with it too. Nevertheless, he''s willing to support you.'
+	act 'Kiss him':
 		cls
 		cla
 		gs'stat'
 		artQW = 22
 		minut += RAND (5,10)
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/talk2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You Artem lifts and sits on its feet, leans in and kisses him.'
-		'You: "Thank you..." - add to withstand a short pause - "I love you!".'
-		'Artem: "I love you"'
-		'Pressing your lips to their, Artem kisses you, very much embracing.'
-		'What-While both of you just keep silent lie, scrolling in mind all that happened.'
-		act 'Escape':minut += 5 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+		'You lean towards Artem and kiss him amorously.'
+		'You mutter: "Thank you, Artem... I don''t know what to say, besides... I love you!"'
+		'Artem replies: "I love you too, <<$nickname>>."'
+		'You press your lips against his again, and kiss him. He embraces you and kisses you back.'
+		'You just lay silent in each other''s arms for a minute, just thinking about the implications of it all. After that, you realize you need to get on with your day and he probably does too. You give Artem a quick kiss on his cheek and thank him for his support as you get up and gather your things. At least you know you''re not alone in this.'
+		act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 5 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 	end
-	act 'Throw it':
+	act 'Tell him you can''t see him any more':
 		cls
 		cla
 		gs'stat'
 		minut += RAND (5,10)
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/talk3.jpg"></center>'
-		'You get up and begin to gather.'
-		'Artem: "Where are you going?"'
-		'You: "Sorry... I do not want you to suffer. Surely, we should no longer see'
-		'After taking away all their belongings, I do not say anything you leave in silence, leaving Artyom alone.'
-		act 'Escape':minut += 5 & artemblok = 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+		'You quietly get up, and begin to gather your things.'
+		'Artem looks at you questioningly: "<<$name>>, what are you doing?"'
+		'You shake your head as you softly mutter through your tears: "I''m sorry, Artem... I can''t ask this from you. I can''t ask this from anyone. I''m really sorry... but I don''t think we should see each other any more."'
+		'After you gather your things you leave his apartment, ignoring his pleas.'
+		act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 5 & artemblok = 1 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -55,5 +57,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'home_start':
 	cla
 	gs'stat'
 end
+
 --- ArtemEv3 ---------------------------------
 

+ 66 - 49
locations/artemev2

@@ -1,17 +1,20 @@
 # artemev2
+
 gs 'stat'
 
 if artQW = 1:
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artem suddenly gets flowers and presents them to you.'
+	'Out of nowhere, Artem suddenly produces a bouquet of flowers and offers it to you.'
 
-	act 'Take':
+	act 'Accept the flowers':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take the flowers and kisses Artem. Do you feel that-it boils down to you through his pants. "Thank you ." You accidentally running a hand over his crotch and away from it.'
-		'Artem blushing: "You are beautiful in different colors." Artem looking into the eyes you see them as much adoration that do not stand up and kiss him. Artem responds to kiss and you feel that his hand begins to caress your breasts.'
+		'What a nice gesture! You smile at him and mutter: "Awww, they''re beautiful! You shouldn''t have!"'
+		'You move in and give him a kiss. When you reach out for him you accidentally run your hand over his groin, and feel quite the bulge down there.'
+		'Artem blushes when he tells you: "Not as beautiful as you..."'
+		'He returns your kiss, and gently begins to caress your breasts through your clothes.'
 
 		act 'Tell him to stop it':
 			cls
@@ -19,12 +22,13 @@ if artQW = 1:
 			artQW = 2
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You.:" stop. Not too fast?" Artem blushing removed from you:"Sorry_..."'
+			'You push his hands away: "Wait... you''re going too fast, please stop!"'
+			'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes: "Sorry..."'
 
 			dynamic $din_artem_lern
 		end
 
-		act 'Enjoy and encourage him':
+		act 'Enjoy his touch and jerk him off':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 20
@@ -36,42 +40,47 @@ if artQW = 1:
 
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/cum.jpg"></center>'
-			'You keep kissing and unbutton the dress so it was convenient .Take it out and put it on his chest. You feel his caresses excite you.'
-			'Continuing to kiss you unbutton his pants and begin to masturbate guy. After several frictions Artem ends of the dress you.'
-			'Pulled away from him you say "Well - dress soiled - where you have a bath?" Artem blankly pointed. You took the bag with textbooks buttoned dress and went to the bathroom. Along the way. "Hello." Hiding behind the package you''ve gone to the bathroom. I hope my mother did not notice.'
-			'You.: "Let''s deal with."'
+			'You keep kissing and remove your top so he has easier access to your <<$titsize>> boobs.'
+			'Meanwhile, you reach down and unbutton his pants, taking his cock in your hand. After a few quick jerks, Artem already cums on your clothes.'
+			'You notice your soiled clothes, and smile at him as you ask: "It''s okay. But that''ll leave a stain if I don''t do something... where''s your bathroom?"'
+			'Artem apologetically points at the door, and you bring your bag to cover up the stain with as you head for the bathroom. Just when you''re almost there, you hear a cheerful voice behind you: "Oh hello! I thought I heard a girl''s voice in Artem''s room!"'
+			'It''s his mother! You quickly mumble a greeting and enter the bathroom, hoping she didn''t see the sperm on your clothes. You rinse it off and return to his bedroom.'
+			'You smile at him: "That was fun... shall we study now?"'
 
 			dynamic $din_artem_lern
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Do not take':
+	act 'Reject the flowers':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re looking at Artem but do not take flowers "Thank you of course - but we''re just friends and I want to make it so . I can not take them from you - that you had not counted on that-something more."'
-		'Artem throws flowers into the trash.'
+		'You look at Artem compassionately, but don''t take the flowers: "Thank you... they''re very nice, but we''re just friends... I don''t want to give you the wrong idea by accepting them, you know?"'
+		'Artem sighs, and disappointedly throws flowers into the trash.'
 
 		act 'Run and pick them up from the trash':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'"What are you doing - they are so beautiful!" You got flowers from the bin and burst into tears. Artem came to you knelt down to hug you "Well ... do not cry unnecessarily ..I did not want . I''m just so up..because you are such a ...."He paused and buried his face in your stomach. You . Artem responds to kiss and you feel that his hand begins to caress your breasts.'
+			'You try to stop him: "No! What are you doing, they''re so beautiful!"'
+			'You take the flowers from the trash and burst into tears. Artem kneels down next to you and hugs you: "I''m sorry, please don''t cry! I didn''t think you wanted them... I... you''re so..."'
+			'You don''t object when he kisses you. You kiss him back, and a few seconds later you feel his hands on your boobs.'
 
-			act 'Stop it':
+			act 'Push his hands away':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				artQW = 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You.: "Stop. Not too fast?" Artem blushing removed from you:"Sorry_..."'
+				'You push his hands away: "Wait... you''re going too fast, please stop!"'
+				'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back while he apologizes: "Sorry..."'
 
 				dynamic $din_artem_lern
 			end
 
-			act 'Enjoy and encourage him':
+			act 'Enjoy his touch and jerk him off':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 20
@@ -83,36 +92,42 @@ if artQW = 1:
 
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/cum.jpg"></center>'
-				'You keep kissing and unbutton the dress so it was convenient .Take it out and put it on his chest. You feel his caresses excite you.'
-				'Continuing to kiss you unbutton his pants and begin to masturbate guy. After several frictions Artem ends of the dress you.'
-				'Pulled away from him you say "Well - dress soiled - where you have a bath?" Artem blankly pointed. You took the bag with textbooks buttoned dress and went to the bathroom. Along the way. "Hello." Hiding behind the package you''ve gone to the bathroom. I hope my mother did not notice.'
-				'You.:"Let''s deal with."'
+				'You keep kissing and remove your top so he has easier access to your <<$titsize>> boobs.'
+				'Meanwhile, you reach down and unbutton his pants, taking his cock in your hand. After a few quick jerks, Artem already cums on your clothes.'
+				'You notice your soiled clothes, and smile at him as you ask: "It''s okay. But that''ll leave a stain if I don''t do something... where''s your bathroom?"'
+				'Artem apologetically points at the door, and you bring your bag to cover up the stain with as you head for the bathroom. Just when you''re almost there, you hear a cheerful voice behind you: "Oh hello! I thought I heard a girl''s voice in Artem''s room!"'
+				'It''s his mother! You quickly mumble a greeting and enter the bathroom, hoping she didn''t see the sperm on your clothes. You rinse it off and return to his bedroom.'
+				'You smile at him: "That was fun... shall we study now?"'
 
 				dynamic $din_artem_lern
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Leave it as it is':
+		act 'Leave them in the trash and study':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			artQW = 4
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pass silently into the room and say :"Come on."'
-			'Artem: "Well ... Come." Have you noticed in his eyes a bad light. Come on - it seemed.'
+			'You quietly walk past him and say: "Come on, let''s study?"'
+			'You can tell he''s unhappy, and he mutters: "Fine..."'
+			'You really hurt his feelings.'
 
 			dynamic $din_artem_lern
 		end
 	end
 elseif artQW = 10:
 	minut += 30
+	alko += 4
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You see a table - Lighted candles - a bottle of wine. "what is that? And why?"'
-	'Artem.:"We have a lot of time dealing with you and we can draw some conclusions. You do not loom poor results - and the gold medal can hold out and I decided to celebrate this modestly."'
-	'You. :"Does your mother know ? And wine from? Suddenly?"'
-	'Artem.:"Do not go down - my mother went to her friend - and the wine -one gave me herself .... She thinks that we meet ... was very happy for me - especially dry wine - degrees in yogurt, she said, so let''s just sit here - talk - you do not mind?"'
-	'You.:"No - do not mind ...."'
-	'You are talking about the future - who wants to be someone where to go - from the conversation . You do not notice the bottle is almost empty and hops hit you in the head. You see how shiny Artem eyes when he looks at you. There is a strange silence and he kisses you .You are responsible for a kiss .Artem wants to remove your clothes.'
+	'When you enter the room, you immediately notice the table: it has several lighted candles on it, and a bottle of wine with two glasses.'
+	'You look at Artem, slightly confused: "What''s the meaning of this, Artem?"'
+	'He smiles at you as he says: "Well, we''ve spent a lot of time studying together, and I think it''s obvious from your school results that it''s paying off. I figured it would be nice to celebrate your achievements!"'
+	'You''re still not sold on the idea, and question him further: "I don''t know... does your mother know about this? And where did you get that wine from?"'
+	'Artem reassures you: "Relax, <<$nickname>>... my mom went to see her friend, to give us some privacy. And she gave me that wine, to share with you! She''s very happy I met you, and picked this one herself. So please... let''s just sit down and chat?"'
+	'You relax a bit and nod at him: "Okay... I have to admit, that does sound nice."'
+	'You spend the next half hour talking about your plans after you finish school, with your good grades. The bottle of wine is empty before you know it, and you feel a bit tipsy.'
+	'Artem looks at you greedily, and when the conversation hits a break he suddenly moves in and kisses you. You kiss him back, but then Artem''s hands are tugging at your clothes, trying to take them off.'
 
 	act 'Tell him to stop it':
 		cls
@@ -123,13 +138,14 @@ elseif artQW = 10:
 
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You.: "No need to rush okay?" Artem blushing removed from you:"Sorry_..."'
-		'You keep talking as if nothing had happened.'
+		'You smile at him as you push his hands away: "Artem, wait! All in good time, okay? We''ll get there, just please... slow down a little."'
+		'Artem does as you ask and pulls his hands back as he apologizes: "Sorry..."'
+		'You finish the bottle of wine with Artem, and thank him for a nice time before you gather your things and leave.'
 
-		act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+		act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 	end
 
-	act 'Enjoy':
+	act 'Enjoy his fondling':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		bj += 1
@@ -140,29 +156,30 @@ elseif artQW = 10:
 		artQW = 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/bj.jpg"></center>'
-		'You keep kissing and unbutton the dress so it was convenient .Take it out and put it on his chest. You feel his caresses excite you. Hop hit in the head ( not bad wine -Think you).'
-		'continuing to kiss , you put his hand into his pants and felt his cock is ready to fight. You unbutton his pants and start to unbutton his shirt . You take the hand of his cock and start stroking it .Your excitement is growing with every second you take a cock in her mouth and start sucking vigorously.'
-		'"I want you ..." Hear the voice of Artem.'
+		'You keep kissing him, and uncover your breasts to give him better access. He happily plays with your <<$titsize>> boobs, and his touch excites you. Then again, maybe the wine also has something to do with that.'
+		'You smile at him and tell him to take off his pants, which he happily does.'
+		'You rub your hand over his foreskin for a second, before pulling it back and slowly spreading his precum out with your fingers. You then clasp your fingers around the head of his cock and slowly jerk him off. Maybe it''s because of the wine, but you feel giddy. You guide his cock to your mouth and suck him off enthusiastically.'
+		'Artem mutters: "<<$nickname>>... I want you..."'
 
-		act 'Surrender':
+		act 'Let him fuck you':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			sexa += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/sex.jpg"></center>'
-			'You undressed and lay on his back.'
+			'You quickly remove your clothes and lie down on your back, giving him your best ''come hither'' look.'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
 			dynamic $sexcum
 
 			if artemsex = 0:
 				artemsex = 1
-				'"Here you are the man"-Say you smile.'
-				'Artem:"<<$nickname>> ... I ... my I love you ...."'
-				'In response. '
+				'After he finishes, you run your hand over his chest and smile at him: "So, you''re a man now..."'
+				'Artem is not sure what to say, and mutters: "<<$nickname>>... I... I love you..."'
+				'You don''t say anything, but just cuddle with him for a while before getting dressed. You can tell it means a lot to him.'
 			end
 
-			act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+			act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 		end
 
 		act 'Continue to suck':
@@ -172,15 +189,15 @@ elseif artQW = 10:
 			orgasm += 1
 			swallow += 1
 			spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/bjcum.jpg"></center>'
-			'You accelerate the pace of not paying attention to the words of one hand caressing herself.'
-			'"Now I finish"-Artem said. Without removing a member from the mouth you bring themselves to orgasm. During orgasm you swallow all his sperm and carefully lick dick.'
-			'You:"did you like it?"'
-			'Artem:"Very much. Not exactly what I wanted but it ''s even better - I could only dream about such a ..."'
+			'You pick up the pace, redoubling your efforts on getting him to cum with your mouth while pretending you didn''t hear him.'
+			'You fondle yourself with your hand while you suck Artem''s cock, and you orgasm when he does. You do your best to swallow his sperm while you suppress your own spasms, and after a while you regain your senses and look into his eyes.'
+			'You smile at him: "Did you like it?"'
+			'Artem nods: "Oh yes, I liked it a lot! It''s not exactly what I had in mind, but this was even better... I''m so lucky to have met you!"'
 
-			act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+			act 'Gather your things and leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 85 - 65
locations/artemhome

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # artemhome
+
 CLOSE ALL
 gs 'stat'
 $boy = 'Artem'
@@ -6,30 +7,30 @@ dick = 16
 silavag = 0
 
 if $ARGS[0] = '':
-	'You go to Artem Chebotarev''s apartment.'
+	'You go to Artem Chebotarev''s apartment and ring the door bell.'
 
 	if week < 6:
 		if hour < 16 and hour >= 7:
-			'Artem not at home.'
+			'No one answers the door. Artem is probably not home.'
 		elseif hour >= 16 and hour < 20:
-			'Artem opens the door and invites you to enter.'
+			'Artem opens the door and invites you in: "Hi <<$nickname>>, come on in."'
 
-			act 'Enter':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
+			act 'Enter Artem''s apartment':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
 		elseif hour >= 20 or hour < 7:
-			'Too late, that would go to visit.'
+			'It would be rude to even ring the doorbell at this time of day, Artem is probably asleep. You decide against it, and lower your hand.'
 		end
 	elseif week >= 6:
 		if hour < 10:
-			'Too early time, that would go to visit.'
+			'It''s too early in the day to go visit Artem.'
 		elseif hour >= 10 and hour < 20:
-			'Artem opens the door and invites you to enter.'
+			'Artem opens the door and invites you in: "Hi <<$nickname>>, come on in."'
 
-			act 'Enter':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
+			act 'Enter Artem''s apartment':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
 		elseif hour >= 20 or hour < 5:
-			'Too late, that would go to visit.'
+			'It would be rude to even ring the doorbell at this time of day, Artem is probably asleep. You decide against it, and lower your hand.'
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Escape':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+	act 'Move away from the door':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
@@ -45,9 +46,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 	elseif (arthakQW = 1 or (artQW = 4 and arthakQW = 2)) and artomhakday ! daystart and artemblag = 0:
 		!I tell a lie, She refused
 		DimaRudeBlock = 1
-		'Artem tells you "There are no words - well.I was ready to do anything for you .I think after that I saw our relationship will move to another plane. A record pobudet let me - so that your head is not climbed all sorts of nonsense. And now ON KNEES BITCH! Exhaustion - it''s the least you can do that I have not used this entry."Artem very disappointed and angry.It seems he began to despise you.'
+		'Artem looks away from you, with a blank stare in his eyes. He mutters: "You know... I watched that video you wanted me to delete from Dimka''s computer. I can''t believe it... I was willing to do anything for you. Anything!"'
+		'He continues: "Ever since I''ve seen that video... our relationship will be different. I saved a copy of it by the way, so I fucking own you now."'
+		'He looks at you, and his gaze hardens. You can see the hatred in his eyes. His voice remains surprisingly calm, as he orders you: "And now... get down on your fucking knees, bitch! You''re going to have to earn my silence, the hard way."'
+		'He will probably share the video with everyone, if you don''t do as he says.'
 
-		act 'Get on your knees':
+		act 'Get down on your knees':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			bj += 1
@@ -59,28 +63,38 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/facefuck.jpg"></center>'
-			'After these words, you choke, you are sick and flow snot, tears and saliva, Artem not stand for a long time and ends you right in the throat. You choking convulsively swallow sperm.'
+			'You drop to your knees quickly, like he tells you. You''re trying to apologize for lying to him, but all that comes out of your mouth is a blubbering mess of incoherent excuses.'
+			'Not that it would''ve mattered... Artem is not interested in what you have to say, and lowers his pants to reveal his erect cock. The hatred in his eyes makes place for a cruel grin... he realizes he owns you now, and is already thinking about all the things he could have you do.'
+			'When he approaches you, you open your mouth automatically and just suffer through it when he gives you a rough facefuck.'
+			'He''s quite mean with you, and once or twice you feel like you''re running out of breath. Fortunately he doesn''t last very long, and after a few moments you feel his sperm sliding down your throat. You swallow his load automatically, not even giving it any thought.'
 
-			act 'Breathe':
+			act 'Take a deep breath':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
-				'Artem takes you by the hand and says "I think that this bitch what are you showed not mind to devote my friend into the secrets of the female body." You shakes his head. "Well then .. And if you ''re obedient bitch - I promise - that no one is going to show her and eventually destroy. So do not speak and go."'
+				'You try to catch your breath, while Artem straightens his clothes. Then he takes you by the hand; an almost endearing gesture, but you know it''s not.'
+				'Artem has a serious look in his eyes when he says: "Down to business, <<$name>>. I know you''re a slut. A slut like you wouldn''t mind teaching my friend some things about the female body, would she?"'
+				'You obediently shake your head, knowing it''s what he wants to hear. He smiles: "Very good, very good. If you''re the obedient bitch for me that I think you will be, I promise no one will see that video. I''ll even destroy it. Eventually."'
+				'He''s not giving you any time to think it over, and says: "So, decision time. Are you going to be my obedient little bitch, <<$name>>?"'
+				'You know he will publish that video if you leave now. It would ruin your reputation in Pavlovsk, but you have no clue what Artem has planned for you if you stay.'
 
-				act 'To escape and run away':
+				act 'Leave his apartment and run away':
 					artemblok = 1
 					artemhakday = daystart
 					artemvbrosvid = 1
 					gt 'pod_ezd', 'etaj_1'
 				end
 
-				act 'Go with Artem':
+				act 'Do what he wants':
 					cls
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You go to the garage with Artem. In the garage you see Pete Klyueva.'
-					'Artem:"Look who I have here. As I promised you <<$name>> kindly agreed to teach us all the secrets of the female body. Anatomy lessons will be held on Mondays. And today''s lesson we will start with the vagina ...!"'
-					'Artem:"Stretch ka pussy. I can imagine what else you got up with Nosov!"'
+					'You hang your head in shame and nod. He grins at you and mocks: "What''s that, <<$name>>? I can''t hear you."'
+					'You softly say: "I''ll... I''ll be your bitch, Artem."'
+					'He smiles benevolently at you and says: "I knew you would. Now come with me."'
+					'You follow him to their garage, where Peter Klyuyev was already waiting. He''s by far the biggest nerd in your class.'
+					'Artem grins at him: "Look who I have brought, Petka! Just like I promised you, <<$name>> here has kindly agreed to teach us everything about the female body. <b>We will have anatomy lessons here every Monday, after class.</b>"'
+					'"Today''s lesson will be about the vagina". Artem looks at you insistently and says: "Show us your pussy and spread those lips. I don''t even want to think about what that sleezebag Nosov did with them earlier."'
 
 					act 'Spread your lips':
 						cls
@@ -88,13 +102,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 						vagina += 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/fist.jpg"></center>'
-						'Artem :"Here Petruchio see what her capacious pussy. Yes stronger Do not be afraid - I know what you''re capable!"'
-						'You stretch even further.'
-						'Artem:"And not to be unfounded zasun a hand."'
-						'Have you tried but did not get:" Give Vaseline please .Does not work." Artem gets what that oil and throws you "For such a whore ." You lubricate the hands of those that have and shove it in yourself.Oddly but you chustvuete excited that start from these humiliations.'
-						'Artem:"That''s how come there -here until the end of!"'
-						'You do not have to say anything .'
-						'Under the comments guys "Bring it on! come_on!" you end exhausted and lie down on the floor.'
+						'You do as he says, and pull your pussy lips apart.'
+						'Artem tells Petka: "So, Petka, this is what a spacious whore pussy looks like. Open them further <<$name>>, I know what it''s capable of."'
+						'You oblige and pull them further apart, stretching it as fas it will go.'
+						'Artem nods contently: "Good. Now put your hand in. I know you can do it."'
+						'You try to push your hand in, but it doesn''t work. You look up at Artem and ask him: "I can''t, not like this... can you at least give me some lubricant, please?"'
+						'Artem throws a bottle of oil your way, and sighs: "Here you go, whore. Now get to work."'
+						'You lubricate your hand royally, and try again. It takes a while, but eventually you manage to put your entire hand inside your snatch. Even though this experience is humiliating you to the bone, you can''t help but get aroused from the feeling. After a few minutes your body begins to spasm, and you realize you''re having an orgasm on Artem''s garage floor, while he and his friend watch you shove your own fist up your pussy. The whole world goes black.'
 
 						act 'Open your eyes':
 							cls
@@ -111,21 +125,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 							artemblok = 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/doublebj.jpg"></center>'
-							'You open your eyes and see how Peter and Artem surrounded you masturbate their cocks.'
-							'Artem:"That stared - Get direct their work - you know how it is good. Petya now you enjoy all the pleasures of professional blow job!"'
-							'You remove the hand from the vagina and begins to suck alternately guys and they end up on your face.'
-							'Do_You:" You erase record?"'
-							'Artem :"Erase ... but not today ... we Petka at you a lot of plans. Do not roar.'
-							'It will be our little secret. Fair_Enough - until next week."'
-
-							act 'Leave':gt 'garmassiv'
+							'You open your eyes and see how Petka and Artem surrounded you, both stroking their cocks.'
+							'Artem says: "Back in the land of the living, whore? I can''t believe you came from that. Anyway, it''s time you give Petka his first blowjob. Make sure it''s a good one. You know what, suck me off too."'
+							'You slowly pull your hand from your stretched vagina and gently try to rub the sore feeling from your pussy lips while you suck off the guys, one at a time. After a few minutes, they both shoot their loads onto your face.'
+							'You carefully ask: "So... will you delete the video now?"'
+							'Artem chuckles: "Delete the video? <<$name>>, please... we''re just getting started. Me and Petka have big plans with you."'
+							'He continues: "Don''t worry, it will be our little secret. Next Monday, we will continue our anatomy lessons. I''ll be waiting for you after school."'
+
+							act 'Leave the garage':gt 'garmassiv'
 						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'To escape and run away':
+		act 'Leave his apartment and run away':
 			artemvbrosvid = 1
 			artemblok = 1
 			artemhakday = daystart
@@ -135,12 +149,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		arthakQW = 7
 		!!the_truth
 		DimaRudeBlock = 1
-		'Artem tells you "all, I Rushed comp bow and destroyed records."'
+		'Artem tells you: "<<$name>>, I managed to get onto Dimka''s computer and deleted the video. It''s gone."'
 	end
 
 	if artemtimes >= 15 and artQW = 0 and lernHome > 0 and GorSlut < 2:artQW = 1 & gt 'artemev2'
 
-	'Artem sits in his room on the bed.'
+	'Artem sits in his room, on his bed.'
 
 	artemRand = rand(0,1)
 	if artemRand = 1 and artemtimes >= 45 and artemsex > 0 and artemanal > 0 and artemProgul ! daystart and (GorSlut < 2 or artemblag = 1):
@@ -149,19 +163,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 		gs 'stat'
 		artemRand = rand(0,1)
 		if artemRand = 0:
-			'"<<$name>>, Let`s go for a walk?"'
-			act 'Agree':
-				'You agree, quickly packed up and went for a walk on the square.'
-				act 'Walk':dynamic $artemSkver
+			'Artem smiles at you, and suggests: "<<$name>>, do you want to go for a walk in the park?"'
+			act 'Agree to go for a walk':
+				'You give him a cute smile back: "Sure Artem, we could go for a walk, that sounds like fun!"'
+				'You quickly pack up your things and leave the apartment with him, heading for the park.'
+				act 'Walk in the park':dynamic $artemSkver
 			end
-			act 'Refuse': gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
+			act 'Stay here': gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
 		else
-			'"<<$name>>, Let`s go to bibleotek, to write the essay?"'
-			act 'Agree':
-				'You agreed and went with Artem in bibleotek.'
-				act 'Go':dynamic $artemBibl
+			'Artem smiles at you, and suggests: "<<$name>>, that essay for school is due in not too long. We should go work on it in the library, what do you say?"'
+			act 'Agree to work on the essay':
+				'You nod. You don''t feel like working on the essay, but you know you really should. At least you''ll be doing it together with Artem, hopefully he can help you out a bit.'
+				'"You''re right, we really should. Okay, let''s go then."'
+				'You quickly gather your things and go to the library with Artem.'
+				act 'Go to the library':dynamic $artemBibl
 			end
-			act 'Refuse': gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
+			act 'Stay here': gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -173,14 +190,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 	elseif artQW = 3 and artemkissday ! daystart:
 		gs 'artemEv'
 		!!wanker Artem
-		'Artem hugs you and kisses'
+		'Artem invites you to sit next to him on the bed.'
 		dynamic $artemKiss
 	elseif artQW >= 2 and artQW <= 3 and artemtimes >= 30 and Suspeh >= 90 and GorSlut < 2:
 		artQW = 10
 		gt 'artemev2'
 	elseif artQW = 20 and artemkissday ! daystart:
 		gs 'artemEv'
-		'Artem hugs you and kisses'
+		'Artem invites you to sit next to him on the bed.'
 		dynamic $artemKiss
 	end
 
@@ -190,26 +207,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You:"Artem we''re more than friends?"'
-			'Artem: "Of course."'
-			'You: "Could you help me with one simple fact is not? After all, well versed in computers?"'
-			'Artem:"Certainly help. tell."'
-			'You: "Promise? Well. It stores it on your computer. Could you hack it and destroy this computer record. Just do not see it pozhalusta!"'
-			'Artem :"Okay. And that on the record?"'
-
-			act 'Lie':
+			'You''re not sure how to start this conversation, and take a deep breath. You carefully suggest: "Artem... we''re good friends, right?"'
+			'Artem nods, unsure why you look so distraught: "Of course! Why, what''s wrong?"'
+			'You continue: "And you''re good with computers? I could really use your help."'
+			'He nods again: "Yea, I know a thing or two about computers. If I can help you out, I certainly will. What do you need?"'
+			'You look at him, and decide to tell him: "Can you hack into someone else''s computer? To remove a file? I need you to hack into Dimka''s computer and delete a video. Just promise me you won''t look at it, please!"'
+			'Artem looks a bit confused: "Erm, yea... I think I can do that. Why, what''s the video about?"'
+
+			act 'Lie to him':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				artemhakday = daystart
 				arthakQW = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Yes, I dance drunk and he took it on video and promised my mother tell" you lied.'
+				'You lie to him: "I got very drunk in the disco, a few nights ago. He made a video of it and threatened to tell my mom. My mom would kill me!"'
+				'Artem nods: "Alright, I''ll see what I can do."'
 
 				if lernHome > 0:
 					dynamic $din_artem_lern
 				else
-					act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+					act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -220,12 +238,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 				arthakQW = 2
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-				'"It seemed to me that I love him and he took off like I''m doing him a blow job - now he is blackmailing me this." you said Artem downcast eyes.'
+				'You have to gather some courage to tell him the truth, and remain silent for a second.'
+				'You stare at your feet, afraid to look him in the eye when you tell him: "I thought I loved him. He made a video of me giving him a blowjob... he''s blackmailing me with it now, forcing me to do all sorts of nasty things. Please, it would mean the world to me if you could make that video disappear.'
+				'Artem nods: "That sounds horrible! Okay, I''ll see what I can do."'
 
 				if lernHome > 0:
 					dynamic $din_artem_lern
 				else
-					act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+					act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -242,15 +262,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inside':
 			manna += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/<<2>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You talked for an hour with Artem. Rather you are talking, and Artem listened to your stream of consciousness.'
+			'You talk with Artem for an hour, about various topics. Or rather: you''re doing most of the talking, and Artem is mostly listening to you talk. Occasionally he pitches in though, and you can tell he''s a very smart guy. You even learn a thing or two.'
 
-			act 'Return':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'artemhome', 'inside'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if lernHome > 0:dynamic $din_artem_lern
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+	act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':minut += 15 & gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 end
 
 --- artemhome ---------------------------------

+ 175 - 124
locations/artgar

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # artgar
+
 apmeetday = daystart
 gs 'stat'
 if apmeet = 0:
@@ -8,11 +9,16 @@ if apmeet = 0:
 	orgasm += 1
 	minut += 60
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/apmeet1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artem took you by the hand and led her into the garage, where you have been waiting for Petka Kluev.'
-	'Artem: "Well .I was thinking how uncomfortable all consider when you close all hands and brought one little thing." It gives you an expander:" I understand that just so uncomfortable - so to start masturbate themselves."You start to fondle himself gradually being raised. "In my opinion sufficient time to introduce this Thing. "You licked extender and inserted it into my pussy.'
-	'Extending to a maximum. The boys opened their mouths in surprise and there poodnomu zagyanuli. In your head is not clear what''s going on - bring your thoughts orgasm - you are such a slut in front of what that nerds are sitting with an open vagina and they treat you. "Now look carefully Petka - seen in porn. It''s uterus and take ..."Do you feel that the uterus is that you put in - you open your eyes and see what sticks out in your brush and at this point you already covers orgasm you can not hear anything that says Artem : "You see she had finished I pull out the brush and spreader - about what a beauty ..." Do you feel a breeze - the vagina does not close completely. '
+	'When you leave school, Artem is waiting for you by the entrance like he said he would. Without saying a word, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage. Peter Klyuyev is already waiting there.'
+	'You feel alarmed when Artem smiles at you benevolently. He says: "<<$name>>, I was thinking the other day about how uncomfortable you looked with your fist in your pussy. I got you this, so you can train yourself and teach us all about your pussy at the same time."'
+	'He gives you a transparent speculum. He laughs when he sees the doubtful look on your face. "You''re welcome, slut. Go on, give it a try."'
+	'Without much enthusiasm, you lick the blades of the speculum and slowly slide it into your pussy. When it''s in deep enough, you make it open. It actually feels rather interesting, to be slowly stretched out like that... not nearly as uncomfortable as you thought it would be. You keep going and going, opening it as wide as it will go, slowly rubbing one finger over your exposed clit in the meantime.'
+	'The two nerds look at you with ever increasing amazement, and Artem tries to explain: "Look, Petka, you don''t usually see this in porn videos. Do you see that? That''s her cervix."'
+	'You miss the rest of his story when you reach a thunderous orgasm, and your vision goes blurry as your body shivers. The boys stand back and enjoy your little show... this is going even better than expected, for them.'
+	'A bit later, you come to your senses again and you see Artem took the speculum out. He''s holding it in his hand. It''s glistening with your juices. He smirks: "Looks like you enjoyed my little gift! No need for you to get up, just stay down there."'
+	'You do as he says and just stay on the ground, catching your breath. You feel a cool breeze between your legs, and realize your vagina is not fully closing after the stretching you gave it.'
 
-	act 'Lay down':
+	act 'Stay on your back':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
 
@@ -24,10 +30,13 @@ if apmeet = 0:
 		facial += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/facial.jpg"></center>'
-		'The boys begin to masturbate hard and end up on your face. "What a lesson for today is over - Petruchio think what else to do or would like to - I think we will not deny <<$nickname>>. The_Truth?"'
-		'You do not nod your head wondering "oh well?"'
+		'The guys got seriously aroused by your masturbation show, and when they pull their pants down their erections bounce up eagerly. They jerk themselves off over your face, and when he gets close Artem says: "Look me in the eye, slut."'
+		'You wince as you feel their warm sperm landing on your face, but do your best to not close your eyes. The cum in your eyes stings like hell, but you try to not let them know that.'
+		'You put your clothes on again, and Artem asks Peter: "Petka, what do you want to do with <<$name>> next week? Any ideas?"'
+		'"Hmm, I don''t know... I''ll give it some thought", Peter shrugs. Then he turns to you and smiles: "Don''t worry <<$name>>, you''ll love it. See you next week?"'
+		'As if you have a choice! You meekly nod: "Yea... see you next week..."'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'garmassiv'
+		act 'Leave the garage':gt 'garmassiv'
 	end
 elseif apmeet = 1:
 	apmeet = 2
@@ -36,20 +45,29 @@ elseif apmeet = 1:
 	horny += 10
 
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet2_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artem took you by the hand and led her into the garage, where you have been waiting for Petka Klyuyev.'
-	'"We thought that we would like to see. We decided to see how you fuck yourself bottle. And do not make round eyes - we know that it has brought you ALREADY. Beginners and that without hands."'
-	'You looked at a bottle of beer standing in the middle of the garage. Yes, you thought nedomerki even perverted Gopnik - hunger presses. You sat on the bottle - neck of sight and came into you is very easy - and you really flowed. You started to squat on the bottle almost forcing it to yourself - just a little bit and you finished. Do not stay on his feet, you fall to the floor - the bottle was left to wallow in your legs. "I look a beer bottle in the it does not hold - as well that we still have?" You have seen how Artem with Peter come up to you and turn to the top of the booty.'
+	'When you leave school, Artem is waiting for you by the entrance like he said he would. Without saying a word, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage. Peter Klyuyev is already waiting there.'
+	'Peter hands you a bottle as you walk in: "We''ve thought about what we want to see this week... we''ve decided on you fucking yourself with a bottle."'
+	'He grins when he sees your eyes bulge, and continues: "Don''t give me that surprised look, slut. After last week, we know it fits. To make things a bit more interesting, we decided to make it a challenge: you can''t use your hands. Can you handle that responsibility? Or should we lock your hands behind your back to make sure you don''t cheat?"'
+	'He approaches you with a set of handcuffs in his hand, and a menacing look in his eyes. You quickly say: "No, wait! No handcuffs! I''ll do it... no need for those!"'
+	'He smirks as he puts them in his pocket for now: "We''ll see about that."'
+	'You look doubtfully at the bottle, and spread a bit of saliva on the neck before putting it on the ground. After you remove your clothes, you squat down over the bottle and guide your pussy towards it, making an effort of showing that you''re not using your hands.'
+	'The neck of the bottle slides in quite easily, and you carefully ride the bottle for a while, easing it in a little further. However, when you try to squat low enough to get it in further, you lose your balance and fall back. The bottle slips right out of your pussy, and hits over the floor with a loud clattering noise.'
+	'The guys laugh, and Artem says: "Close enough! Get on your hands and knees now, <<$name>>. We''ll help you get it in your ass since it doesn''t look like you can handle that by yourself."'
 
-	act 'Get cancer':
+	act 'Get on your hands and knees':
 		cls
 		anal += 5
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet2_2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem takes what that bottle of lubricant inserts in back and neck squeezes. And then apply this grease fingers and sticks you in the ass. Gradually he razdrachivaet you point. "Well ka Petruchio pull it from the other side!" Peter smears fingers and inserts two fingers of the other hand - they stretch your point in different directions gradually adding fingers and lubrication.You roll the tears of pain and humiliation. "On-I think enough." Artyom takes the wine bottle plaster it with grease: "Let herself - will surprise us - bottomed inside." You could hardly put in a bottle. The guys applauded came to you "Now suck !"'
+		'Artem takes a bottle of lubricant, and squeezes some onto his fingers. He then pushes two fingers into your ass and slowly begins to move them, letting you get used to the sensation.'
+		'He then throws the bottle at Peter and says: "Petka, put some on your fingers and put slide them in too, we''ll help our slut open up."'
+		'He happily does, and soon Artem and Peter are pulling their hands in separate directions, stretching your ass open. Tears roll down your cheeks; you''re not sure if they''re from the pain, or the humiliation the guys are putting you through. Still, you don''t make a sound, hoping they won''t see your distress.'
+		'Then Artem says: "Okay, that''s enough" and they remove their fingers. Artem lubricates the neck of the bottle before offering it to you: "You''re welcome, slut. Show us how deep you can get it in."'
+		'Happy you at least get to try yourself instead of them doing it for you, you do as he says. You try your best to not hurt yourself while you slowly work it in. It doesn''t go that far in beyond the neck, but it still feels huge inside your ass. The boys see you put in the effort, and applaud you: "Nice job, slut. Now suck us off."'
 
-		act 'Suck':
+		act 'Give them a blowjob':
 			cls
 			if npcSex[2] = 0:npcSex[2] = 1 & guy += 1
 			if npcSex[6] = 0:npcSex[6] = 1 & guy += 1
@@ -61,11 +79,14 @@ elseif apmeet = 1:
 			gs 'stat'
 
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet2_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You started to suck their members with a bottle in the ass. Nerds finished your face - but you already do not care "I think that all the taboos removed." - said Artem.'
-			'"Thank you for the show - and until next time!" With sound "FER" You pulled out of a bottle.'
-			'You have gathered something like led myself up and went home on the road thinking how to get out of this situation and all the perverted fantasies. What to do? Maybe back blackmail? And what is the idea! It should be a good think about it.'
+			'You don''t think you can stand with the bottle in your ass, and they didn''t say you could take it out. With the thought of those handcuffs still lingering in the back of your head, you carefully crawl over to them and suck them off one by one, while the bottle is still lodged up in your butt. After a short while both the boys blow their loads on your face, but you don''t even care after what happened earlier.'
+			'Artem notices and smirks: "You''re learning to be our good little bitch fast, <<$name>>... I see you don''t even mind the cum on your face any more. We''ll have to think of something better for next week, to keep pushing your limits."'
+			'Peter adds: "Thanks for the show. After you take the bottle out, you can go... we''ll see you next time!"'
+			'You sigh... you were hoping they''d let you do that in private. You''re flushed with humiliation as you put your hand around the bottle and slowly pull it out, little by little. It makes a loud *schlick* sound when you pull out the last bit, and the boys laugh as they get dressed again.'
+			'You quickly gather some things and only do the necessities in the garage, wanting to be gone as quickly as you can. You fix your clothes as you walk between the garages.'
+			'You think to yourself: "This is getting out of hand! At first I thought they just wanted to have some fun, but they''re becoming more and more sadistic by the week! I have to do something... but what?"'
 
-			act 'Escape':gt 'garmassiv'
+			act 'Walk between the garages':gt 'garmassiv'
 		end
 	end
 elseif apmeet = 2:
@@ -74,18 +95,23 @@ elseif apmeet = 2:
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet3_1.gif"></center>'
-	'Artem took you by the hand and led her into the garage, where you have been waiting, drink beer, Petka Klyuyev.'
-	'Presenting,  that you will be up,  You, Nonetheless,  dutifully undressed in front of the guys before the goal and took a pose: kneeling before 10 liter bucket. You were blindfolded. Your body was covered with goose bumps, You start to shiver in anticipation of the upcoming action.'
-	'Here Peter, astraddle, I stood on a bucket in front of your face. As he pulled a condom on the penis, and watered it with vegetable oil from a bottle, Artem has got you hands behind your head. You were ordered to open his mouth wide, It started...'
+	'When you leave school, Artem is waiting for you by the entrance like he said he would. Without saying a word, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage. Peter Klyuyev is already waiting there. He''s having a beer, and it looks like it''s not his first.'
+	'Peter smiles as he sees you come in: "Ah <<$name>>, so nice of you to join us. We have a treat prepared for you today. Take your clothes off, and kneel down over there."'
+	'He points at a large bucket. You''re not sure what they need it for, but you''re afraid you will find out soon enough. Nevertheless, you obediently take your clothes off and do as he says. Artem approaches you, with a blindfold and some rope in his hands.'
+	'He teases you: "It''s important that you focus on your training today, slut. This way you won''t get distracted."'
+	'He tells you to put your wrists together in front of you, and ties you up with some rope when you do. Meanwhile, you see Peter rolling a condom down over his cock, and then rubbing it in with a tiny amount of vegetable oil. Then Artem covers your eyes with the blindfold.'
+	'Your skin is covered with goose bumps and you shiver in anticipation of what''s to come.'
+	'After a few seconds of silence you feel hands behind your head, and hear a voice that commands: "Open your mouth wide slut, and keep it open wide. It''s time."'
 
-	act 'Blow job':
+	act 'Open your mouth':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet3_2.gif"></center>'
-		'It was not the blow. Peter just fucked you deep throat. You poked away tongue and holding her mouth wide open, choked by walking across the throat of the male member in a condom. Oiled, sexual organ is easily slid over taut throat.'
-		'Eggs Petka relish slapping on your chin, When his cock was buried in the throat. Peter gripped you by the ears and deep rhythm stick your mouth on his penis. The worst thing was that in this, what do you, I am completely sober, well aware , that you get up to the guys in your class, but did not know how to stop this mockery of a humiliating and treacherous starts to flow from it all. All, What could I do - so it is, give their classmates plenty to enjoy your body, while meeting their absolutely wild ideas...'
+		'You open your mouth wide, still clueless as to what exactly they want. Then a very slippery cock enters your mouth. It must be Peter''s. A quick check with your tongue tells you it is: there''s a condom around it, and it''s very slippery from the vegetable oil. He roughly fucks your throat, and the slipperiness makes it very easy and pleasurable for him.'
+		'For you, not so much. You do your best to keep your mouth open and your tongue out of the way, but you keep choking and gagging on his cock time after time. You can''t see his movements either, so it''s impossible to prepare yourself for his thrusts. You feel his balls slapping against your chin, while he rams his hard cock down your throat repeatedly.'
+		'Lots of thoughts race through your head: how humiliating this is, and how powerless you are against Artem and Peter because of that damn video. You desperately try to think of ways to stop them at first. After a while you decide to focus on pleasing them as best you can, so they will let you go for at least another week. You can think about how to get out of this later.'
 
 		act 'Further':
 			cls
@@ -93,34 +119,42 @@ elseif apmeet = 2:
 			horny += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet3_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Feeling your first attempts to vomit, Peter brought his cock out of his mouth. Artem lowered your head in a bucket and held it there, until you problyuetes. Then you turn your head to the side, obpivshiysya beer and Petya began to piss in your mouth, to wash away the remnants of vomit.'
-			'By order of Artema you rinse the mouth with urine and swallow the liquid.'
-			'Artem: "Let`s swallow - Urinotherapy helpful. Otherwise, you will be punished." After the words of the punishment you even more poteklai. "What`s going on with me?" You thought.'
+			'After a while you can''t hold back your gag reflexes any more, and begin to retch with Peter''s cock still in your mouth. Peter quickly removes his cock from your mouth and Artem lowers your head into the bucket, holding it there until you''re done vomiting. So that''s why they needed the bucket. Artem then begins to piss in your mouth, supposedly to wash away the taste of vomit.'
+			'He then orders you: "Swallow it, bitch... I''m trying to help you, show some gratitude. You will be punished if you don''t."'
+			'You meekly do as he says when he mentions punishment, and mutter some words to thank him. You''re not sure how any punishment could be much worse than what you''re already going through... but knowing how twisted the boys'' fantasies have become, you really don''t want to find out.'
 
-			act 'Swallow':
+			act 'Swallow his urine':
 				cls
 				minut += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet3_4.jpg"></center>'
-				'And it continued on the new... So the guys took turns fucking you in the mouth for half an hour. You vomited into a bucket, and then continued to fuck in the throat again and again. After, Petya "finished", he removed the condom and put it into your mouth. Do you understand, what is expected of you, and began to chew the gum with sperm. Guys neighing, watching their classmate, about which they previously could not even dream, chews and swallows a condom with sperm. Swallowing this abomination, You smiled and showed the guys my empty mouth.'
-				act 'Proceed':
+				'After you swallow his urine, the boys continue where they left off. Your hands are tied in front of you, you still can''t see, and you have no choice than to helplessly allow the boys to fuck your throat in turns. They''re still using the vegetable oil to keep your throat slick.'
+				'They continue to do this for another ten minutes, and you have to vomit twice more. Finally, Peter finishes. He takes off your blindfold with his cock still in your mouth. Then he pulls back and removes the condom from his cock, offering it to you.'
+				'You know what''s expected of you, and obediently open your mouth so he can feed his cum to you. He puts the entire condom in though, and tells you to start chewing.'
+				'It tastes awful, and Peter''s sperm runs into your mouth. Once the boys are satisfied Peter''s cum is all gone, they let you spit out the condom into the bucket.'
+				act 'Continue':
 					cls
 					minut += 10
 					bj += 2
 					throat += 2
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					if npcSex[2] = 0:npcSex[2] = 1 & guy += 1
 					if npcSex[6] = 0:npcSex[6] = 1 & guy += 1
 					gang += 1
 					sub += 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet3_5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Artem: "It`s my turn to finish - Suck - We do without gum." You started sucking his dick swallowing Artem as deeply as possible. You feel like Artem began to finish you right in the throat.'
-					'Artem: "Do not remove!" You dutifully froze with a member in the mouth and heard after the sperm in the throat you hit urine, you quickly began to swallow, so as not to throw clothes. After all you guys released.'
-					'You have gathered some-how to put themselves in order and went home on the road thinking how to get out of this situation, and fantasies become perverted. What to do? Maybe back blackmail? And what is the idea! It should be a good think about it.'
+					'Artem grins: "My turn. Suck me off, no condom for me."'
+					'Forunately he doesn''t apply more oil to fuck your throat, and is happy to just let you do the work - as long as you do your best. You try to take his cock down your throat as deep as possible. After the long throatfucking session you just had, it''s not that difficult as long as you''re the one in control.'
+					'Soon, you feel jets of sperm hitting the back of your throat. Once it stops, you try to move your head back but Artem holds it in place.'
+					'He tells you: "Not yet <<$name>>, keep it there."'
+					'You freeze, his cock still in your mouth. Moments later, you feel a stream of urine in your mouth. You don''t want to make him mad, so you drink it all down. Finally satisfied, Artem unties the rope around your wrist and lets you go.'
+					'You quickly throw your clothes on and leave. You can''t keep doing this! Their fantasies are getting more and more perverted. What can you do, though?'
+					'The only thing you can think of right now, is to get something to blackmail them with in return. Maybe you could somehow film one of the sessions? If you could threaten them with that, surely they would back down! The camera would have to be small easy to hide though, you don''t want to know what happens if the boys find it!'
+					'Unfortunately, you don''t know where you would be able to buy such a camera... the one on your phone would be way too obvious. Perhaps someone in school knows?'
 
-					act 'Escape':gt 'garmassiv'
+					act 'Leave the garage':gt 'garmassiv'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -132,12 +166,15 @@ elseif apmeet = 3:
 	horny += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artem took you by the hand and led her into the garage, where you have been waiting for Petka Klyuyev.'
-	'Artem: "Well, Svetik - you learned a lot from us and now we will teach you. We have decided that you will be our bitch and Now for your in training. Take off your clothes and on your knees - bitches walk on all fours!"'
-	'You dutifully undressed and knelt. Artem came up to you and put the collar.'
-	'"The emphasis will be on learning to walk on all four paws in the collar, muzzled and on a leash, and do a lot of tricks for our entertainment. A good knot should lick the hands and feet of their masters."'
-	'Artem clipped the leash to you. You started to lick their shoes.'
-	act 'Training':
+	'When you leave school, Artem is waiting for you by the entrance like he said he would. Without saying a word, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage. Peter Klyuyev is already waiting there, like always.'
+	'Artem seems especially enthusiastic today. That can''t be good news for you.'
+	'He grins widely when he tells you of today''s plans: "<<$name>>. I know you''ve been enjoying our weekly sessions as much as we have. After all, why else would you be such a willing participant week after week? We''ve decided to reward you and train you to officially make you our bitch. Don''t worry, we will train you for as long as it takes. You''re welcome."'
+	'After a few seconds he lays out some rules: "Anyway, first rule: a bitch is always naked. Second rule: a bitch walks on all fours. Third rule: a bitch does not speak without permission. Understood?"'
+	'He looks at you expectantly, and you obediently nod while you undress and kneel down like he wants.'
+	'He happily smiles as he walks towards you and puts a collar around your neck: "Very good, <<$name>>. The emphasis of this training will be on us teaching you to behave like a proper bitch. That means walking around on your paws, on a leash. You will also perform tricks, for our entertainment."'
+	'He attaches a chain to your collar, which functions as a leash. He begins to walk, and you follow him on all fours as instructed. Then he offers you his shoe: "Good bitch! You learn fast. A good bitch licks her master''s feet."'
+	'Fortunately they look clean. You reluctantly begin to lick his shoes.'
+	act 'Continue your training':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
@@ -145,112 +182,117 @@ elseif apmeet = 3:
 		spankedtime = totminut
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Artem: "Well-Single, face lift, we want to play with you. You have to please us, otherwise we will be very angry and severely punish. Terms of our games are. You`ll follow me, wherever I go. At the same time you will be constantly kissing my ass. When I want to sit down, you have to guess my desire and then go under me. And as soon as I Spread your legs, You should be provided immediately between them and, you probably already guessed, suck my dick. That`s all the rules. Petruchio will customize your belt, if you slow down. And more, you certainly do not tell, What will happen, if you interrupt the just for a second, or you can not guess what-one of my desires."'
-		'And began training. You ran on all fours to Artem trying to guess what he will do in the next moment, Peter and whipped with a belt on your naked ass.'
-		act 'Further':
+		'Artem grins: "Okay. We''re going to play a game next. You will be severely punished if you fail to please us. Understood?"'
+		'You nod, and wait for him to explain what this game is. He continues:'
+		'"The objective of this game is to teach you about anticipating your master''s desires. The rules of the game are as follows: you follow me around, wherever I go. You will kiss my ass once, when I stand still, and then wait on your haunches. If I want to sit down, you will get into position so I can sit on your back. When I spread my legs you will, you guessed it, suck my cock. Simple enough, right?"'
+		'Peter takes his belt from his pants, and pitches in: "I will be dealing out your punishment, for this game. If you pause for too long, or guess wrong what Artem wants, I will spank you."'
+		'Then Artem begins to move, and Peter slaps his belt down onto your ass before you realize that was your cue to follow him. You quickly pick up the pace and follow Artem, trying to guess what he wants to do next. Whenever you fail Peter whips you with his belt, and after a few minutes you can only guess you have red welts all across your butt cheeks. It certainly feels like you do.'
+		act 'Continue your training':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_3.jpg"></center>'
-			'Strangely, but again you felt like your nipples gradually swell in a rack.'
-			'Seeing this Petruchio clamped between each finger and shook. The pain you bit his lower lip.'
-			'"We must help the nipples swell: put on them little decoration!" - Said Artyom, and took the rope, at the end of which - miniature lasso, are tightened at the base of the nipple. Wearing them, nipples immediately and visibly widened.'
-			act 'Continue':
+			'You''re amazed at your own body''s response when Artem points out your nipples are rock hard.'
+			'You blush in shame when Peter kneels down next to you, and takes them between his fingers, pinching them roughly. It hurts, and you bite your lip to stay quiet.'
+			'He admires them: "Wow, you could cut glass with those! I bet we can make them look even better, with some decorations!"'
+			'Artem gives him a piece of string, and Peter makes some miniature lassos on the ends before he ties them tightly around your nipples. You can see and feel them swell almost immediately.'
+			'He gives the string a few exploratory tugs, and you do your best to not squeal when he stretches your nipples to their limits.'
+			act 'Continue your training':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Artem: "Warm-up ends. It`s time to start exercising. You take up sex lips and spread them apart."'
-				'"Ouch!" - You cried when Pete attached to the right of sexual lip clamp, which lay to the tight tender flesh. On the ball screw clamp, Peter who began turning until the pain became unbearable.'
-				'Artem: "Endure, Bitch, Endure."'
-				'"Ouch!" - You cried when the second clip attached to the left lip sex.'
-				'Artem: "How do you feel? Now you can play. Divorced sexual sponges in hand. Painfully? Do not whine!"'
-				'Petruchio hung on clips weights.'
-				'"Now start weightlifting! Up!" - commanded Artem.'
+				'Artem nods, fairly pleased with your compliance so far: "Okay, not bad. Play time is over, it''s time for the next step in your training. Take your pussy lips and pull them apart for us."'
+				'You didn''t realize Peter had been out of sight for a few moments, and you do as Artem says. Suddenly you feel an uncomfortable pincing on your pussy, and you wince: "Ouch!"'
+				'When you look between your legs, you see Peter attaching a clamp to your right labia. He screws the clamp shut tighter, until the pain becomes almost unbearable.'
+				'He does the same thing to the other side, and again you yelp: "Owww! That hurts!"'
+				'Artem looks at you sternly: "Remember the rules, <<$name>>? Bitches don''t talk. I''m going to let it slide just this once, because you''ve been good so far. Don''t let it happen again."'
+				'Peter then attaches a weight to the clamps with some chains. You can tell it''s solid lead, and guess it''s probably quite heavy.'
+				'"Now for some weightlifting! Bitch, up on your hind legs! Squat!" Artem commands.'
 				act 'Do "weightlifting"':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_4.jpg"></center>'
-					'Peter holds the weights in hand and slowly releases.'
-					'Artem: "Picture - super! Chest - forward! Feet - apart!"'
-					'You feel like two heavy sinker, ruthlessly pulled down labia.'
-					'Artem: "What - need help. Hold the leash in his mouth. Now, as we say in school - nat-ra. Exercise time. Squats. Crouch - weights must lie on the floor. Up. Squat - stand. Squat - stand."'
-					'You squat 20 just feeling pain in the perineum.'
-					'Artem: "Exercise is completed! Exercise Two. Pendulum. Getting weights rock. Petruchio! Please help her, move it around the waist!"'
-					'Petruchio blowing you.'
-					'Artem: "Now - let itself. I will show the level of hand, who have to get the weights. All of the above, Higher and higher..."'
-					act 'Ask stop':
+					'You quickly get into the squatting position, and Peter slowly releases the weight once he''s satisfied.'
+					'Artem sees you wincing, and orders you to focus: "Remember, bitch! Good posture! Put your chest forward and your feet further apart!"'
+					'The weight is ruthlessly pulling down your labia, but you slowly get used to the feeling and the pain subsides a little.'
+					'Holding the leash in front of you, Artem orders: "Hold this in your mouth. Now... it''s exercise time! Every time you squat down, I want to see the weight touch the floor. Then stand up until your legs are straight. 20 squats should do, for today."'
+					'You bravely perform the squats, trying to disturb the weight as little as you can. By the end your leg muscles are aching, but you manage.'
+					'Artem praises you: "Very good, bitch! Exercise completed! Now for number two: the pendulum! This one should be easy, all you have to do is spread your legs and stand still. Petka! Give her a hand, please!"'
+					'He gives the weight a push, and the weight dangles back and forth. He demonstrates the exercise a few times, holding the weight higher and higher before releasing it. The weight is tugging at your labia every which way, and it begins to hurt again.'
+					act 'Beg him to stop':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_5.jpg"></center>'
-						'You mychite no longer able to hold back the pain.'
-						'Artem: "Requests to remove the weights?"'
-						'You nod.'
-						'Artem: "Wait, you have to earn it. Lean forward, kindle buttocks: I want to see both of your hole. Good for."'
-						'Artem gently releases the clamp. You - instant utter pain, pleasure, when she releases, Artem and gratitude for charity.'
-						'But it seems it is in vain, because in front of you - the two grinning faces.'
-						'Artem: "The turn of anal!"'
-						act 'Anal':
+						'You do your best to fight the pain, but Artem can see the begging look in your eyes.'
+						'Artem looks at you, faking concern: "What''s wrong, bitch? Would you like me to remove the weights?"'
+						'He didn''t say you could talk... you decide to play it safe, and just nod.'
+						'Artem teases you: "I could... but you would have to earn it. Lean forward and expose your holes to us, and I''ll take them off."'
+						'You do as he says, and pull your butt cheeks aside with your hands to give the boys a better view. Artem releases the clamps gently, one by one. The moment he releases one, the sudden rush of blood causes you a great deal of pain. Once the worst of that subsides, you can''t deny that the tingling feeling left in your labia actually feels good.'
+						'You look at Artem in gratitude, but from the evil grins him and Peter have, you know you will have to do more to ''earn'' their mercy.'
+						'Artem tells you: "Next up: anal training!"'
+						act 'Anal training':
 							cls
 							minut += 5
 							anal += 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_6.jpg"></center>'
-							'Artem takes a bottle of oil, lubricated points, He begins to push it up the ass.'
-							'Your point resists. Then Peter begins to whip you stronger belt.'
-							'Artem: "Explain - to relax the ass, better to take a whole bottle, than to show, that you do not want. Otherwise Petruchoo stops!"'
-							'After a-While due to its persistence, Fortress whipping, additional lubrication and doom bottle of oil is included in the full anal.'
-							'Artem: "But this is not the most difficult. Up! Straighten! Bounce!"'
-							'You perform all orders - even though it hurts, and it is not convenient - but the bottle firmly stuck in you and is not going to fall out.'
-							'Artem: "And now back squats - with the condition to keep the plastic piece in the anus. Petruchio, look, like trying Bitch! If you fall out, we will arrange this - that everything else will seem innocent prank!"'
-							'You: "Oh, oh, oh, She jumps!"'
-							'You are trying to push back the bottle, it does not work, and, lastly, it finally falls out of the anal.'
-							act 'Punishment':
+							'Artem takes a bottle of oil, and lubricates the bottom end of a beer bottle thoroughly. He then begins to rub it against your puckered anus.'
+							'You''re nervous, and your ass resists the entry. Then Peter begins to whip your ass cheeks with his belt.'
+							'Artem explains: "You should really relax more, bitch. You can take this bottle inside your ass... when it''s in, Petka will stop. If you continue to resist, we will have to find other ways to continue your anal training."'
+							'You''re not sure how you got it in. Maybe it''s Artem''s persistence, Peter''s constant whipping, the additional lubrication Artem added, or just you relaxing... but after a while, the bottle is actually mostly inside your butt.'
+							'Peter stops hitting you, and Artem seems satisfied for just a second. Then he tells you: "That was the easy part. Now do jumping jacks!"'
+							'You do as he says. The bottle is uncomfortably large for that orifice and your movements hurt a bit, but the bottle is well inside you and won''t slide out by doing this.'
+							'Artem notices it too, and changes his plan: "Okay, good. Now do squats... 10 is fine, you already did 20 before. You better make sure that bottle doesn''t fall out though, or anything we''ve done so far will look like an innocent prank compared to the punishment you''ll get!"'
+							'You wince as you squat, trying to clench down on the bottle: "Oww... Aaahh..."'
+							'Despite your best efforts your grip on the bottle is not tight enough, and it slides out of you. Uh oh.'
+							act 'Your punishment':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								vagina += 2
+								orgasm += 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_7.jpg"></center>'
-								'Of course, This is a serious cause for punishment, and you know it well. Artem tells you to stand in a pose cancer, knees wide apart, Area anus paraded. You have a new challenge.'
-								'The bottle is now part of your back gradually, with frictions. At the same time you feel someone-then hand in the pussy. Here you already do not stand. You begin to more actively in the ass and beat podmahivat, lastly, powerful orgasm shakes your body.'
-								'You are flattened like a frog, bent at the side of the leg divorced. Only an ass exposed up, asking continue, as if all your brains are focused now on two passes slowly emerge from there with your juices.'
-								'Artem: "Do not disconnect! And now the reward for the complete subordination!"'
-								'Artem hard drives bottle in the ass and tells her to keep. You do not have strength like-or respond. He stands in front of her face with his fighter at the ready.'
-								'Artem: "Do not dry your mouth? Why do we work all the time? To work hard to complete! Cum swallow".'
-								act 'Agree':
+								'Your heart skips a beat when you hear the glass hit the ground. Fortunately, it doesn''t break. You know you''re in serious trouble now, and when Artem tells you to get on your hands and knees with your legs spread wide, you quickly comply.'
+								'He gradually inserts the bottle again. At the same time you feel a hand on your pussy, slowly pushing in what feels like a lot of fingers. Despite yourself, you begin to buck back against the hand and bottle and a powerful orgasm hits you.'
+								'You rest your face and upper body against the ground for a moment while you recover from your orgasm, holding your ass up in the air as instructed. You beg the hand to keep fucking you, completely forgetting about the rules. Peter slowly pulls his hand out of your vagina, it''s dripping with your juices.'
+								'Artem knows he should punish you, but he was so thoroughly amused by your orgasm that he takes it easy on you. He merely shoves the bottle a bit deeper inside your ass, and tells you to keep it there this time.'
+								'Then he and Peter take their pants off, and Peter scolds you: "Why are you being so ungrateful, bitch? You''re making us do all the work, while you get all the pleasure? It''s time for you to do something back. Start sucking!".'
+								act 'Suck them off and swallow their loads':
 									cls
 									minut += 5
 									bj += 2
 									spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+									gs 'cum_manage'
 									gang += 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet4_8.jpg"></center>'
-									'In response, you dutifully nodded: "How else?" And when Artem erupts from the fountain of life-giving fluid flow, You swallow whole, without a trace, as the highest value, which can not drop a single drop.'
-									'Then comes the turn Petit. After all, you are ordered to lick the crotch, what you do with what-the ineffable pleasure.'
-									'Lastly, boys leave you alone.'
+									'You get up to your knees, doing your best to not drop the bottle this time. You suck them off in turns, and you can tell they''ve been enjoying your ''training'' a great deal. They both cum in no time at all, and you make sure to drink it all down without missing a drop. Then they tell you to nuzzle and lick their crotches for a while, and you happily do realizing this session is almost over.'
 									if artemIzdev = 4 and microcamera = 1:
 										act 'Install the camera':
 											cls
 											minut += 5
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/microcam_2.jpg"></center>'
-											'Already preparing to leave, if you pretend that-the lost and say Artem, that something-that forgotten in the garage and ask you to wait a little bit so that you can find the thing. Artem irritated allowed, but I asked to hurry.'
-											'During the search, you will quietly install camera (battery lasts for 48 hours, included - in response to movement, You can shoot in the dark).'
-											'After that you have to offer next Monday to arrange a meeting in the form of the game of rape.'
+											'You all get dressed and prepare to leave. When you''re all outside the garage, you tell Artem: "Artem, wait... I forgot something in the garage, can I go get it?"'
+											'Artem is a tad annoyed but sighs: "Fine... make it quick."'
+											'You enter the garage by yourself, and quickly find a spot to hide the tiny camera. It has 48 hours of battery time, can record in the dark and has a motion sensor. As long as no one spends that long in the garage before next Monday, you should be able to record your next session and hopefully end this abuse.'
+											'Maybe you could suggest some sort of ''rape play'' session for next week to the boys, so you''re sure you get the kind of footage you need. You''re fairly sure they''d go for it, being the perverts that they are.'
 											artemIzdev = 5
 											microcamera = 0
 											apmeet = 4
-											act 'Escape':gt 'garmassiv'
+											act 'Leave the garage':gt 'garmassiv'
 										end
 									else
-										'You have gathered something like led myself up and went home on the road thinking how to get out of this situation and that fantasy become perverted. What to do? Maybe back blackmail? And what is the idea! It should be a good think about it'
+									'You quickly throw your clothes on and leave. You can''t keep doing this! Their fantasies are getting more and more perverted. What can you do, though?'
+									'The only thing you can think of right now, is to get something to blackmail them with in return. Maybe you could somehow film one of the sessions? If you could threaten them with that, surely they would back down! The camera would have to be small easy to hide though, you don''t want to know what happens if the boys find it!'
+									'Unfortunately, you don''t know where you would be able to buy such a camera... the one on your phone would be way too obvious. Perhaps someone in school knows?'
 									end
 
-									act 'Escape':gt 'garmassiv'
+									act 'Leave the garage':gt 'garmassiv'
 								end
 							end
 						end
@@ -265,23 +307,25 @@ elseif apmeet = 4:
 	sub += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Artem took you by the hand and led her into the garage, where you have been waiting for Petka Klyuyev.'
-	'You sprsil the road: "Well I liked the idea Petka?"'
-	'Artem: "Yes, he delighted, and then - he says nothing`s new. And I look at you, and she was involved - the beginning of the idea to give, too bored?"'
-	'You: "Yeah - very. Well, Go to the garage. I`ll pass - you got me podzovete and drag it, just watch, so people did not have - to fuck us problems. Only consider, and I will resist kicking almost the present. Otherwise, it makes no sense in these games."'
+	'When you leave school, Artem is waiting for you by the entrance like he said he would. Without saying a word, he takes you by the hand and guides you to his parents'' garage. Peter said he would be a bit late this week, so you take your time walking there. While you walk, you ask Artem: "Did you ask Petka about my suggestion for this week?"'
+	'Artem nods: "Oh yea. He was delighted... and a bit surprised you would suggest that. What''s the matter, <<$name>>... are our regular sessions too boring for you now?"'
+	'You smile mysteriously at him, happy to just let him think that for now. You fake being embarrassed and say: "Well... yea. Just know that I want you guys to really get into it, okay? I will resist and fight you off. The fantasy kinda falls apart if I just do what you guys tell me to."'
 
-	act 'Post view':
+	act 'Pretend to fight them off':
 		cls
 		minut += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet5_1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You pass by the garage. Artem is at the entrance, and is calling you. You come, at this time it comes from behind Peter and wring your hand, shoving the garage. Artem closes the door, you yelling for help and Testament, trying to escape - Peter barely keeps you. Artem tells you to shut up. You spit in his face. It hits you in the face and neck takes inserts gag (some sort of rag). After that you adhere to the bench. You are trying to escape and mychite. Artem building takes the knife.'
-		'Artem: "If you do not shut up bitch now!, I`ll face so decked - none of the surgeon does not help. You will do what we say - leave alive. Understood?"'
-		'You nodded. Peter pulled the gag.'
-		'You: "Boys do not kill! Petya! Artem! I`m-All for you!"'
-		'Artem: "Okay Petruchio - believe it.. but first it risers."'
+		'You split ways when you reach the garage. Artem is going to open the garage first and you said you''d walk by a minute later, so they can set up their play.'
+		'You walk past the garage, and head over to Artem when he calls out for you. Suddenly, Peter is behind you and pushes you into the garage, while Artem closes the door behind you.'
+		'You shout for help and struggle, trying to escape. You''re doing a better job than you had expected, Peter can barely control you.'
+		'When Artem walks up to you and tells you to shut up, you spit in his face. He slaps you in the face and shoves a rag into your mouth to gag you, while the two of them drag you to the sofa.'
+		'You''re actually a bit nervous when Artem pulls out a knife, and stop fighting the boys. He hisses: "Bitch, if you don''t shut up now, I''ll fuck your face up so badly, no surgeon will even know which part used to be where any more. Do as we say and keep us happy, and we''ll let you leave when we''re done with you. Understood?"'
+		'You meekly nod, and Peter removes the gag from your mouth.'
+		'You beg: "Artem! Petka! Please don''t kill me... I''ll do anything for you! Please!"'
+		'Artem seems satisfied and nods: "Petka, relax... I think she knows we own her now. Let''s have some fun!"'
 
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			bj += 2
 			minut += 5
@@ -289,33 +333,40 @@ elseif apmeet = 4:
 			spankedtime = totminut
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet5_2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Artem cut the clothes on you. Men take the power cord and start to whip you on the ass. You want to cry, and you insert the gag in place. You risers, Peter takes the grease and begins to lubricate your point, then fucks you in the ass. Artem at this time connects your boobs rope and pulled in different directions. Peter moves away from you, He takes his place Artem. Peter notices, that his dick in shit. He takes the gag and inserts dick in her mouth. You sick of your shit taste, but you hold vomit gusts. When a member of the cleaning, Peter moves away from you and catches you on the nose hook. You become like a pig. Guys neighing. Artem is coming to you and you brush and a member of shit.'
+			'Artem uses his knife to cut the clothes from your body. Then both the guys take a power cord and begin to whip your ass with it. You try to cry out, but Peter quickly puts the gag back into your mouth. Artem holds you down while Peter lubes up his dick and then spreads some over your puckered asshole, before he rubs his cock against it and then shoves it in.'
+			'Peter fucks your ass roughly, while Artem has fun with a bit of rope and ties it tightly around your <<$titsize>> boobs, before he ties your wrists together. After a few minutes they change places.'
+			'Peter angrily shouts at you: "Bitch, there''s shit all over my dick! Clean it up, now!"'
+			'He takes the gag from your mouth and presses his cock past your lips, forcing you to clean him up. The taste sickens you, but you manage to suppress your gag reflex. Minutes later, Artem does the same.'
 
 			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+				gs 'cum_manage'
 				anus += 5
 				minut += 10
 				gang += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet5_3.jpg"></center>'
-				'"And now tricks!" Artyom takes the camera from the ball sticks it to you in the ass and pumps. When you think that you are here now need to pop it stops its pump.'
-				'Artem cut the rope and tells you to suck it and Peti. As long as you guys suck mock your sisyami. The guys end up on your face, spit at him. You throw scraps of clothing, which-a piece of canvas and kicks kicked you with an inflated chamber in the ass with words "I went away dirty whore, if anyone can tell slaughter fuck."'
+				'"Artem starts a video on his phone before he mocks: "And for her next trick, <<$name>> will make this football disappear!"'
+				'He pushes the deflated football into your asshole, and then gets a pump. He inflates the football further than you''re really comfortable with, and feel it stretch your poor butthole to its limits.'
+				'Artem then cuts the rope from your wrists and tells you to suck him and Peter off. While you do, they mock you constantly, saying how much of a whore you are, and how you were asking for this for a long time. After a few minutes they both cum on your face, spitting on you for good measure.'
+				'You pick up some of your scraps of clothing, and wipe the biggest goops of their cum from your face. They never allow you to remove the football from your anus, and tell you to leave the garage naked.'
 
 				act 'Pick up the camera':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/microcam_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Then the boys came and told themselves, it`s time to disperse. Already preparing to leave, if you pretend that-the lost and say Artem, that something-that forgotten in the garage and ask you to wait a little bit so that you can find the thing. Artem irritated allowed, but I asked to hurry. During the search, you will quietly take away the camera.'
-					'You got home quietly. In the bathroom blew the camera and got her off. At the point your two hands free vlazit. "Okay, heals" We think you, hoping, microchamber that all recorded to the last word.'
+					'After that, they let you back in so you can get dressed. Your clothes are damaged but Artem only cut the seams, you can fix this without a problem. When everyone gets dressed and is ready to leave, you pretend to have forgotten something again: "Artem, I forgot something... can I go get it please?"'
+					'Artem is a tad annoyed but sighs: "Fine... make it quick."'
+					'You enter the garage by yourself, and quickly collect the tiny camera you hid earlier. You quietly walk home with Artem, quite uncomfortable with the ball still up your ass. They never did allow you to take that out.'
+					'When you get home, you quickly remove it, and then go check if the video recorded properly. Minutes later, you see yourself struggling on the screen and let out a sigh of relief: you have evidence!'
 					agape = 3
 					agapetime = totminut
 					microcamera = 1
 					apmeet = 5
 
-					act 'Escape':minut += 20 & gt 'vanrPar'
+					act 'Continue':minut += 20 & gt 'vanrPar'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -327,15 +378,15 @@ elseif apmeet = 5:
 	dom += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/artom/meet/meet6.jpg"></center>'
-	'Today you have decided to go to the home Artem.'
-	'"<<$nickname>>, Well, as we did - realistically?"'
-	'"And you yourself look." and you show him a record, which shows how they raped a classmate Petya.'
-	'"I took a beating, written statement, so that - wait." We lied to you.'
-	'Artem pale and almost faints. "What do you want?"'
-	'"Take away all my entries. No hint of sex and a lot of small services..."'
-	'Artem agrees to all of your conditions and remove all records with you.'
+	'Instead of waiting for Artem after school, you go to his apartment today.'
+	'He''s surprised when he sees you: "<<$name>>? Why are you here?"'
+	'You don''t say a word, but show him your phone. A video of your romp plays on the screen, you''re clearly struggling while Peter and Artem are having sex with you.'
+	'Then you lie: "I''ve prepared a written statement, and am still deciding whether I should take this to the police or not."'
+	'Artem''s face turns very pale, and you can see him staggering when he realizes how much trouble he''s in. He softly asks: "What do you want?"'
+	'You tell him: "First of all, you delete all your videos with me in them. Secondly, you''re never touching me again. Thirdly, whatever I want, you will do. If I need anything from you, I''ll be in touch."'
+	'Artem agrees to all of your conditions without protest, knowing he could very well end up in jail if you press charges. As long as you have this video, you won''t have to fear him ever again.'
 
-	act 'Escape':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
+	act 'Leave Artem''s apartment':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_1'
 end
 
 gs 'stat'

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