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  1. 2 2
      locations/husbSex
  2. 51 51
      locations/love
  3. 6 6
      locations/lug
  4. 42 42
      locations/party

+ 2 - 2
locations/husbSex

@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dolgend':
 		act 'Finish':gt'bedr'
 	end
 
-	if vnesh < 60:'"She looks frightening. Like a poltergeist." says one of the thugs, looking at you. "Okay, go here, and you brought that money tomorrow, and then tomorrow we`ll going to fuck." said second your husband.'
+	if vnesh < 60:'"She looks frightening. Like a poltergeist." says one of the thugs, looking at you. "Okay, you bring us the money tomorrow, and then she''s getting fucked." says the second one to your husband.'
 
 	act 'Finish':gt'bedr'
 end
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'minet':
 
 	'<center><img src="images/picV/bj.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your husband''s <<husDick>> centimeter member enters you mouth.'
-	if bj = 1:'You think "Hell, I rolled, I am sitting in front of a man, and he told me in the mouth by a dick pokes."'
+	if bj = 1:'You think "This is exciting. I am sitting in front of a man, with his dick in my mouth."'
 
 	gs'oral','start'
 

+ 51 - 51
locations/love

@@ -12,9 +12,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	love = 1
-	'You started talking about cohabitation. What <<$boyA>> told you that it is in principle not against, but first he wants you to meet his parents.'
-	'He warns you that his mother is very demanding and rigorous, <<$boyA>> says that he loves her mother and does not want to upher. Therefore, you must look gorgeous, use the dress from a boutique, well-groomed and with curled hair and use cosmetics in moderation.'
-	'At the next date, if are ready, <<$boyA>> will take you to their parents.'
+	'You start talking about living together. <<$boyA>> tells you that he is not against it, but first he wants you to meet his parents.'
+	'He warns you that his mother is very demanding and rigorous. <<$boyA>> says that he loves his mother and does not want to upset her. Therefore, you must look gorgeous, wear a dress from a boutique, be well-groomed with curled hair and use cosmetics only in moderation.'
+	'For your next date, if your are ready, <<$boyA>> will take you to his parents.'
 
 	act 'To invite':
 		cla
@@ -26,18 +26,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 60
-	'<<$boyA>> to drive you to the home of his parents. You got out, took the elevator, after a call to the door you opened, it was clear that you were waiting for. You entered the apartment, you greet an elderly gray-haired muzhichek dressed in trousers and shirt, as long as you wore slippers in the hallway passed an elderly woman with thin, fastidiously pursed lips, she invited you to a table.'
-	'You went to the room <<$boyA>> chair pushed you and you sat down at a table already. Mother sat in front of you your guy. She began to consider you with disgust in his eyes as bydto sat in front of her vile insect, not a girl her son. Nous, darling, and what do you do for a living?'
+	'<<$boyA>> drives you to the home of his parents. You get out and take the elevator. The door opens after only knocking once. It seems clear that they were waiting for you. You enter the apartment and are greeted by an elderly gray-haired woman dressed in trousers and a shirt. You are told to switch into a pair of slippers and are then led down a hallway into another room where the elderly woman invites you to sit down at a table.'
+	'<<$boyA>> pulls out a chair for you and you sit down. His mother places herself in front of the two of you. She looks at you with disgust in her eyes, looking like an overgrown insect, clearly thinking you are not a girl for her son. "So, darling, what do you do for a living?"'
 
-	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe = 1:'You answered that you are a waitress in a cafe.'
-	if student > 0 and diplom = 0:'I study at the university.'
-	if diplom = 1:'Graduate graduated from university.'
-	if work = 0 and cheatWork = 0 and workKafe ! 1:'I''m unemployed.'
+	if (work = 1 or cheatWork = 1) and workKafe = 1:'"I am a waitress in a cafe."'
+	if student > 0 and diplom = 0:'"I study at the university."'
+	if diplom = 1:'"I graduated from university."'
+	if work = 0 and cheatWork = 0 and workKafe ! 1:'"I''m unemployed."'
 
 	if modelfoto > 0:
 		bfA = 0
-		'To which she smiled and said with disgust, "What are you not telling us how to shoot for web sites?" After these words, she laid on the table, your naked photos. "My son, my mother cares about you, this girl is not worthy of you."'
-		'<<$boyA>> blushed and said, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you, you just deshovaya whore! Get out."'
+		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Why are you not telling us about the photos you shot for these web sites?" She pulls out the nude photos of you and lies them out on the table. "My son, your mother cares about you. This girl is not worthy of you."'
+		'<<$boyA>> blushes and screams, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 
 	if kavslut > 0:
 		bfA = 0
-		'To which she smiled and said with disgust, "Son, let this slut all Armenians in the market know. Only and discuss <<$name>> waitress and her tear into all the cracks, she does not deserve it!"'
-		'<<$boyA>> blushed and said, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you, you just deshevaya whore! Get out."'
+		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, everyone knows that this girl is a slut. <<$name>> does not just wait tables, she lets her customers tear up every hole she has. She doesn''t deserve you!"'
+		'<<$boyA>> blushes and says, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -56,8 +56,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 
 	if frot > 3:
 		bfA = 0
-		'To which she smiled and said with disgust, "Son, this slut all perverts on the subway know and lots pulled, who''s next to her ass to settle down. She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$boyA>> blushed and said, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you, you just deshevaya whore! Get out."'
+		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, this girl is a slut and lets every pervert who settles down next to her on the subway grope her. She is not worthy of you!"'
+		'<<$boyA>> blushes and says, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -66,8 +66,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 
 	if gloryhole > 30:
 		bfA = 0
-		'To which she smiled and said with disgust, "Son, your Svetulya moonlights members sucking sex Shope, you want a wife himself? She is not worthy of you!"'
-		'<<$boyA>> blushed and said, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you, you just deshevaya whore! Get out."'
+		'She smiles and says with disgust, "Son, your girlfriend moonlights at the sex shope, sucking the members of countless strangers. Do you want a wife like that? She is not worthy of you!"'
+		'<<$boyA>> blushes and says, "<<$name>>, I loved you so, and you...you turn out to be just another dirty whore! Get out!"'
 
 		act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 
@@ -75,10 +75,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mother':
 	end
 
 	love = 2
-	'On what she tearful eyes looked at his son and said, "Very nice, Well Well son, it''s your choice who I am, that would interfere in your life, I just gave you, nursed and outgrowths, now you already have the right course forget about your mom and let it alone loves you and wishes you the best. If you need it, please, I do not forbid. "'
-	'<<$boyA>> looked down, "Mom, what are you, I love you, but <<$name>> also dear to me."'
-	'Mother jumped flashing eyes, "Son, you vstrechaeshsya with her recently, what do you know about her?"'
-	'<<$boyA>> a long time to persuade his mother and excuses, finally she let you out of their predatory claws and you''re ready to leave.'
+	'She looks at her son with tearful eyes and says, "Alright. Well son, it''s your choice. Who am I to interfere with your life? I just gave birth to you, nursed you and helped you grow up. But of course you are free to forget about your mom who loves you and only wishes the best for you. If you insist on keeping her, please do. I certainly don''t forbid it. "'
+	'<<$boyA>> looks down, "Mom, what are you saying? Of course I love you, but <<$name>> is also very dear to me."'
+	'His Mother jumps up, her eyes flashing, "Son, you only met her recently, what do you even know about her?"'
+	'<<$boyA>> takes a long time trying to persuade his mother and making excuses. Finally she lets you out of her predatory claws and you''re ready to leave.'
 
 	act 'Leave':dynamic $brodilr
 end
@@ -87,9 +87,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	love = 1
-	'You started talking about cohabitation. What <<$boyA>> told you that it is in principle not against, but first he wants to introduce you to their friends.'
-	'He says that you have to look chic, the dress from a boutique, well-groomed and curled hair, cosmetics in moderation, something to envy his friends are dead.'
-	'At the next meeting, once you will be totally ready <<$boyA>> will take you to your friends.'
+	'You start talking about living together. <<$boyA>> tells you that he is not against it, but first he wants you to meet his friends.'
+	'He tells you that you have to look chic, wear a dress from a boutique, be well-groomed with curled hair, use cosmetics only in moderation. He wants his friends to get green with envy.'
+	'For your next date, if you are totally ready <<$boyA>> will take you to his friends.'
 
 	act 'To invite':
 		cla
@@ -108,24 +108,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 
 	if proverka1 = 0 and proverka2 = 0 and proverka3 = 0 and proverka4 = 0 and proverka5 = 0:
 		minut += 180
-		'<<$boyA>> to drive you to your friends. The apartment had two guys <<$boyA>> introduced you as his bride, you sat down at a table set. You talked a couple of hours of fun when everything was eaten and drunk almost all <<$boyA>> has invited you to dance, you gladly agreed. <<$boyA>> was already pretty drunk and he''s bad at dancing, but good at it you paw, his hands squeezed your buttocks, he soon ran them under her dress and continued to stroke your ass. Her skirt rode up your panties and brought to the public, the guys were sitting on the sofa without taking your eyes from your buttocks. As a result, one of the guys got up from the couch and rocking podozhel to you "Very best bum on your heifers, let check out" he said, and slapped you on the buttocks so that you already jumped. <<$boyA>> and let you napravilssya to him "You do ohrenel, it''s my girl, you can watch, you can not touch."'
+		'<<$boyA>> drives you to his friends. You arrive at an apartment and <<$boyA>> introduces you as his bride to two other guys. You sit down at a table set and talk for a couple of hours. Everybody has fun and after everyone finishes eating and drinking, <<$boyA>> invites you to dance, to which you gladly agree. <<$boyA>> is already pretty drunk and he''s bad at dancing, but still start to grope you, his hands squeezing your buttocks. Soon he runs them under your dress and continues to stroke your ass. He hitches up you skirt so everyone can see your panties. The other guys are sitting on the sofa intently staring at your buttocks. Soon one of them gets up he guys got up from the couch and comes over to you. "You have the best butt I''ve ever seen. I would like to check it out." he says, and slaps you on the buttocks making you jump. <<$boyA>> pulls you to him and tells the other guy "Stop that. She''s my girl. You can watch, but you can not touch."'
 	end
 
 	if modelfoto > 0 and proverka1 = 0:
-		'"Yes calm down, she removed Golo not believe climbed in Inet''s full of pictures of her naked." the guy said.'
-		'"Is it true?" asked <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
-		'"Yes, I filmed naked, and I did that this was not a three-fuck and just showing her beautiful body." you said'
+		'"Calm down. I''ve already seen her naked. The Internet is full of naked pictures of her." the guy says.'
+		'"Is this true?" asks <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
+		'"Yes, I did some naked photoshoots, but I only ever showed of my body. I never fucked anyone." you say'
 
 		if intel <= 30:
 			guy += 2
 			picrand = 39
 			bfA = 0
-			'"Yes, I do not care what you were demonstrated once filmed naked whore means" with these words he threw you on the sofa. You tried to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stopped you, "Where are you going slut so much time powdering my brains and decided that we can just dump. Well guys Let this whore around." he said, and sat down on the sofa unbuttoned his pants "Suck" he shouted and pryatyanul your head to the perineum. Having decided that it is better not to argue with three drunken men you took his dick out of his pants and sent it into his mouth. Others also joined, one sat on the couch next to <<$boyA>> and took a member you grasped his hand and began to suck both poperemeno, the second time it took off your clothes and knelt launched language you pussy. The guy sitting on the couch and began wildly hiccup <<$boyA>> shouted at him, "Get out of here, but it still messed her whole buzz chippy" guy got up from the couch and immediately closed her mouth rushed to the toilet.'
+			'"I don''t care! Once everyone has seen you naked you are no better than a whore." With these words he throws you on the sofa. You try to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stops you, "Where are you going, slut? You think you can just mess around with me and then dump me? Well guys, lets pass this whore around." he says, sititng down on the sofa unbuttoning his pants. "Suck" he shouts while pushing your head down to his dick. Having decided that it is better to not argue with three drunken men you take his dick out of his pants and put it into your mouth. The two other guys join in, one sitting down on the couch next to <<$boyA>>. He takes out his member and you grasp it with your hand starting to suck both cocks simultaniously. The second guy undresses you and kneels down using his tongue to lick your pussy. The guy sitting on the couch suddenly starts to hiccup as if he is about to vomit and <<$boyA>> shouts at him, "Get out of here, before you make a mess." The guy gets up from the couch and rushes to the toilet, his hands covering his mouth.'
 
 			act 'Further':xgt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif intel > 30:
 			proverka1 = 1
-			'You have a few minutes to crucify about what you did not commit anything wrong and that his friends just jealous. In the end, you managed to convince him otherwise, and <<$boyA>> agree with you.'
+			'You defend yourself for a a few minutes trying to tell him, that you didn''t do anything wrong and that his friends are just jealous. In the end, you manage to convince him, and <<$boyA>> agrees with you.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end
@@ -135,20 +135,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 
 	if kavslut > 0 and proverka2 = 0:
 		cla
-		'"Yes, you wait, this whore all Armenians know, go ask any of the waitress <<$nickname>>, you her hole in detail describe" the boy said'
-		'"Is it true?" asked <<$boyA>> turning to you. Do not think of anything better you plunged into mourning.'
-		'"Yes, these freaks raped me several times"'
+		'"I''ve heard that your little <<$nickname>> doesn''t just wait the tables. There are some guys who brag about using her every hole." the boy says'
+		'"Is this true?" asks <<$boyA>> turning to you. You can''t think of anything better so you start to cry.'
+		'"Yes, these freaks raped me several times."'
 
 		if intel <= 50:
 			guy += 2
 			picrand = 39
 			bfA = 0
-			'"Yes, I do not care who gets raped again several times means you liked and you yourself went to them damn" with these words he threw you on the sofa. You tried to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stopped you, "Where are you going slut so much time powdering my brains and decided that we can just dump. Well guys Let this whore around." he said, and sat down on the sofa unbuttoned his pants "Suck" he shouted and pryatyanul your head to the perineum. Having decided that it is better not to argue with three drunken men you took his dick out of his pants and sent it into his mouth. Others also joined, one sat on the couch next to <<$boyA>> and took a member you grasped his hand and began to suck both poperemeno, the second time it took off your clothes and knelt launched language you pussy. The guy sitting on the couch and began wildly hiccup <<$boyA>> shouted at him, "Get out of here, but it still messed her whole buzz chippy" guy got up from the couch and immediately closed her mouth rushed to the toilet.'
+			'"I don''t care. Someone who says that she got raped several times clearly likes it and invites these situations." With these words he throws you on the sofa. You try to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stops you, "Where are you going, slut? You think you can just mess around with me and then dump me? Well guys, lets pass this whore around." he says, sititng down on the sofa unbuttoning his pants. "Suck" he shouts while pushing your head down to his dick. Having decided that it is better to not argue with three drunken men you take his dick out of his pants and put it into your mouth. The two other guys join in, one sitting down on the couch next to <<$boyA>>. He takes out his member and you grasp it with your hand starting to suck both cocks simultaniously. The second guy undresses you and kneels down using his tongue to lick your pussy. The guy sitting on the couch suddenly starts to hiccup as if he is about to vomit and <<$boyA>> shouts at him, "Get out of here, before you make a mess." The guy gets up from the couch and rushes to the toilet, his hands covering his mouth.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif intel > 50:
 			proverka2 = 1
-			'You have a few minutes to crucify about what you poor and miserable, and how these have brutally raped Caucasians. In the end, you managed to convince him and <<$boyA>> hug you and said that more will not allow anyone to offend you.'
+			'You keep crying for a few minutes about the bastards who raped you and in the end, you manage to convince him and <<$boyA>> hugs you and says that he will not allow anyone to hurt you again.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end
@@ -158,20 +158,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 
 	if frot > 3 and proverka3 = 0:
 		cla
-		'"Yes, you wait, this whore in the subway all the perverts know want myself to go down the subway and you can fuck her in the car right in front of everyone, " said the boy'
-		'"Is it true?" asked <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
-		'"What do you mean how could you think such a thing about me, if there is what that damn ride in the car so it''s something that I" cried out and you went for it.'
+		'"You don''t know who she really is. Everybody knows that this whore lets all the perverts in the subway fuck her in the car right in front of everyone, " says the boy'
+		'"Is this true?" asks <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
+		'"What do you mean? How can you believe that even for a second?" you yell at him squeezing a tear from you eye.'
 
 		if intel <= 40:
 			guy += 2
 			picrand = 39
 			bfA = 0
-			'"Mouth shut whore, I believe your friends, if they say it was you mean it was you" with these words he threw you on the sofa. You tried to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stopped you, "Where are you going slut so much time powdering my brains and decided that we can just dump. Well guys Let this whore around." he said, and sat down on the sofa unbuttoned his pants "Suck" he shouted and pryatyanul your head to the perineum. Having decided that it is better not to argue with three drunken men you took his dick out of his pants and sent it into his mouth. Others also joined, one sat on the couch next to <<$boyA>> and took a member you grasped his hand and began to suck both poperemeno, the second time it took off your clothes and knelt launched language you pussy. The guy sitting on the couch and began wildly hiccup <<$boyA>> shouted at him, "Get out of here, but it still messed her whole buzz chippy" guy got up from the couch and immediately closed her mouth rushed to the toilet.'
+			'"Shout your mouth, you whore! I believe my friends, when they say they it was you." With these words he throws you on the sofa. You try to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stops you, "Where are you going, slut? You think you can just mess around with me and then dump me? Well guys, lets pass this whore around." he says, sititng down on the sofa unbuttoning his pants. "Suck" he shouts while pushing your head down to his dick. Having decided that it is better to not argue with three drunken men you take his dick out of his pants and put it into your mouth. The two other guys join in, one sitting down on the couch next to <<$boyA>>. He takes out his member and you grasp it with your hand starting to suck both cocks simultaniously. The second guy undresses you and kneels down using his tongue to lick your pussy. The guy sitting on the couch suddenly starts to hiccup as if he is about to vomit and <<$boyA>> shouts at him, "Get out of here, before you make a mess." The guy gets up from the couch and rushes to the toilet, his hands covering his mouth.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif intel > 40:
 			proverka3 = 1
-			'Deciding that the best defense is attack, you have a few minutes yelling at him. In the end, you managed to convince him and <<$boyA>> begins to soothe you saying that he does not blame you, but just asking.'
+			'Deciding that the best defense is offense, you yell at him for a few minutes. In the end, you manage to convince him and <<$boyA>> begins to soothe you saying that he doesn''t blame you, but he had to know.''
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end
@@ -181,20 +181,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 
 	if gloryhole > 30 and proverka4 = 0:
 		cla
-		'"Yes you wait, this slut in a sex shop through a hole sucks." the guy said'
-		'"Is it true?" asked <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
-		'"What do you mean how could you think such a thing about me, if there is some sort of a whore in the mouth takes it so that I that if" you cried and went to him. "And you''re a freak with what is decided, that I sucked you that you have something to compare?" you started to attack the guy.'
+		'"You know, this slut sucks other men''s cocks in the sex shop.?" the guy asks'
+		'"Is this true?" asks <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
+		'"How can you believe that I would do that?" you cry. "And you''re a freak! How would you even know, unless you went there yourself?" you start to attack the guy.'
 
 		if intel <= 60:
 			guy += 2
 			picrand = 39
 			bfA = 0
-			'"Mouth shut whore, I believe your friends, if they say it was you mean it was you" with these words he threw you on the sofa. You tried to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stopped you, "Where are you going slut so much time powdering my brains and decided that we can just dump. Well guys Let this whore around." he said, and sat down on the sofa unbuttoned his pants "Suck" he shouted and pryatyanul your head to the perineum. Having decided that it is better not to argue with three drunken men you took his dick out of his pants and sent it into his mouth. Others also joined, one sat on the couch next to <<$boyA>> and took a member you grasped his hand and began to suck both poperemeno, the second time it took off your clothes and knelt launched language you pussy. The guy sitting on the couch and began wildly hiccup <<$boyA>> shouted at him, "Get out of here, but it still messed her whole buzz chippy" guy got up from the couch and immediately closed her mouth rushed to the toilet.'
+			'"Shut your mouth, you whore! If my friends say it was you I believe them." With these words he throws you on the sofa. You try to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stops you, "Where are you going, slut? You think you can just mess around with me and then dump me? Well guys, lets pass this whore around." he says, sititng down on the sofa unbuttoning his pants. "Suck" he shouts while pushing your head down to his dick. Having decided that it is better to not argue with three drunken men you take his dick out of his pants and put it into your mouth. The two other guys join in, one sitting down on the couch next to <<$boyA>>. He takes out his member and you grasp it with your hand starting to suck both cocks simultaniously. The second guy undresses you and kneels down using his tongue to lick your pussy. The guy sitting on the couch suddenly starts to hiccup as if he is about to vomit and <<$boyA>> shouts at him, "Get out of here, before you make a mess." The guy gets up from the couch and rushes to the toilet, his hands covering his mouth.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif intel > 60:
 			proverka4 = 1
-			'Deciding that the best defense is attack, you have a few minutes yelling at him. In the end, you managed to convince him and <<$boyA>> begins to soothe you saying that he does not blame you, but just asking.'
+			'Deciding that the best defense is offense, you yell at him for a few minutes. In the end, you manage to convince him and <<$boyA>> begins to soothe you saying that he doesn''t blame you, but he had to know.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end
@@ -204,20 +204,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 
 	if film > 2 and proverka5 = 0:
 		cla
-		'"Yes you wait, this slut in porn filmed." the guy said'
-		'"Is it true?" asked <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
-		'"Yes, but that was long before you, it is a mistake of youth and a couple of times, I had a very difficult time, but I do not do this for a long time" you started trying to squeeze out a tear.'
+		'"You know this slut has done porn movies?" the guy asks'
+		'"Is this true?" asks <<$boyA>> turning to you.'
+		'"Yes, but that was long before I met you. It mad some mistakes when I was younger. I had a very difficult time, but I didn''t do this for a long time." you start trying to squeeze out a tear.'
 
 		if intel <= 70 and izvrat = 0:
 			guy += 2
 			picrand = 39
 			bfA = 0
-			'"Mouth shut slut acted in porn whore means" with these words he threw you on the sofa. You tried to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stopped you, "Where are you going slut so much time powdering my brains and decided that we can just dump. Well guys Let this whore around." he said, and sat down on the sofa unbuttoned his pants "Suck" he shouted and pryatyanul your head to the perineum. Having decided that it is better not to argue with three drunken men you took his dick out of his pants and sent it into his mouth. Others also joined, one sat on the couch next to <<$boyA>> and took a member you grasped his hand and began to suck both poperemeno, the second time it took off your clothes and knelt launched language you pussy. The guy sitting on the couch and began wildly hiccup <<$boyA>> shouted at him, "Get out of here, but it still messed her whole buzz chippy" guy got up from the couch and immediately closed her mouth rushed to the toilet.'
+			'"Shout your mouth! Doing porn clearly means you are just another whore." With these words he throws you on the sofa. You try to get up to leave, but <<$boyA>> stops you, "Where are you going, slut? You think you can just mess around with me and then dump me? Well guys, lets pass this whore around." he says, sititng down on the sofa unbuttoning his pants. "Suck" he shouts while pushing your head down to his dick. Having decided that it is better to not argue with three drunken men you take his dick out of his pants and put it into your mouth. The two other guys join in, one sitting down on the couch next to <<$boyA>>. He takes out his member and you grasp it with your hand starting to suck both cocks simultaniously. The second guy undresses you and kneels down using his tongue to lick your pussy. The guy sitting on the couch suddenly starts to hiccup as if he is about to vomit and <<$boyA>> shouts at him, "Get out of here, before you make a mess." The guy gets up from the couch and rushes to the toilet, his hands covering his mouth.'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'sexdvoe', 'var'
 		elseif intel > 70 or izvrat = 1:
 			proverka5 = 1
-			'You have a few minutes grovel about how you love him and that everything that came before it, was a mistake. In the end, you managed to convince him and <<$boyA>> hugs you and whispers in his ear "A couple of tricks you probably remember, then you will show."'
+			'You keep explaining that you love him and that you made all these mistakes before you met him. In the end, you manage to convince him and <<$boyA>> hugs you and whispers in your ear "I guess you still remeber a couple of tricks...I would like you to show them to me later."'
 
 			act 'Further':gt 'love', 'frends'
 		end
@@ -226,7 +226,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'frends':
 	end
 
 	love = 2
-	'"Okay, let''s go from here <<$name>>, it''s time, " said <<$boyA>> and you''re headed for the exit.'
+	'"Okay, it''s time to go, <<$name>>." says <<$boyA>>. You head for the exit.'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'street'
 end
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/lug

@@ -4,21 +4,21 @@ $loc = $CURLOC
 gs'stat'
 gs 'outdoors'
 '<center><img src="images/pic/lug.jpg" ></center>'
-'Little, but well maintained meadow with evergreen grass to rest, picnic or just sunbath. Mothers with small children then regular visitors.'
+'A small but well maintained meadow with evergreen grass to rest, picnic or just sunbath. Mothers with small children regularly visit this place.'
 
 streetrand = RAND(0,100)
 if streetrand >= 10 and bfa < 1:
 	vnerand = RAND(0,300)
 	if vnerand <= vnesh:
 		gs'boy'
-		'To you came <<$boybody>> <<$boybod>> <<$boyface>>. It <<$boyClo>>'
-		'The guy introduced himself as <<$boy>> and I asked for your telefonchik.'
+		'<<$boybody>> <<$boybod>> <<$boyface>> comes up to you. He is wearing <<$boyClo>>'
+		'The guy introduces himself as <<$boy>> and asks for your telephone number.'
 
-		act 'Tell him your phone':
+		act 'Tell him your number':
 			cla
 			gs'boyfrend','start'
 			stopboy = 0
-			'<<$boyA>> record your phone and left.'
+			'<<$boyA>> thanks you and leaves.'
 			act 'Complete outing':gt'lug'
 		end
 	end
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ if pavserhom = 0 and psiha = 0 and housr = 0:
     if temp >= 90:
 	   	horny += 20
 	    gs'stat'
-	    'In the path is <a href="exec:dynamic $pavserjil">man</a> then-if waiting for someone, then-Do stakeholders than-something or someone-then.'
+	    'On the path stands a <a href="exec:dynamic $pavserjil">man</a> looking like he is waiting for someone.'
 	end
 end
 

+ 42 - 42
locations/party

@@ -12,32 +12,32 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first':
 	cla
 	vikavecher = 2
-	'You have come to the party with Vika. The party was held in the male dormitory, the company of beautiful girls and guys were drinking, dancing to the music and fun.'
-	'Are you politely said hello, but of particular interest to you, nobody showed'
+	'You go to with Vika to the party in the male dormitory. There are beautiful girls and guys drinking, dancing to the music and having fun.'
+	'You politely introduce yourself, put no one pays you any special attention.'
 
-	act 'Be overmodest':
+	act 'Be overly modest':
 		cla
 		clr
 		hour = 23
 		fairy = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'You modestly sat in a corner, that would not interfere with other fun. To you started glued what that small, long-haired guy. The other guys he was called explicitly for a laugh and otherwise as a fairy and did not call.'
+		'You modestly sit in a corner, trying not to interfere with anyones fun. A small, long-haired guy tries to keep close to you. The other guys occasionally laugh at him and call him a fairy.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 	end
 
-	act 'Cheerful':
+	act 'Be cheerful':
 		cla
 		hour = 23
 		fairy = 2
-		'You drank vodka together with all and struck up a conversation gradually. You dovlno strongly opyaneli and started dancing with sex. What is a little boy with a gentle girlish face and long blond hair trying to provide you clumsy attentions. The other guys he was called explicitly for a laugh and was referred to as a fairy. Gradually you kick in the trash and bran.'
-		'You woke up in a strange room, lying on his stomach, thank god clothes, then no you are not drunk ripped.'
+		'You drink vodka with the others occasionally striking up a conversation. You are getting drunk and start dancing with some of the guys. There is a little boy with a gentle girlish face and long blond hair clumsily attempting to get your attention. The other guys laugh at him and refer to him as a fairy. You are getting more and more drunk.'
+		'You wake up in a strange room, lying on your stomach. You are reliefed to see that you still have your clothes on.'
 
 		if jeans = 2:'<center><img src="images/picparty/jeanscum.jpg"></center>'
 		if jeans ! 2:'<center><img src="images/picparty/skirtcum.jpg"></center>'
 
-		'What''s this? Damn! What that bastard, you dragged into another room and obkonchal your ass.'
+		'What''s this? Damn! What kind of bastard did this? You drag yourself into another room and clean your ass.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 	end
@@ -45,29 +45,29 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'evening':
 	cla
-	'You have come to the party, a lot of beautiful girls and guys, drink, dance and hang out.'
+	'You go to the party. There are a lot of beautiful girls and guys, drinking, dancing and hanging out.'
 
-	act 'Sit modestly':
+	act 'Be modest':
 		cla
 		h = 23
 		zrand = rand(200, 400)
 
 		if vnesh < zrand:
 			cla
-			'You modestly sat watching the whole party opened others.'
+			'You sit down watching the others enjoy the party.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 	elseif vnesh >= zrand:
 		cla
-		'You modestly modestly sat in a corner, but a guy came up to you and started to talk to you.'
+		'You modestly sit in a corner, but a guy comes up to you and starts talking.'
 
 		act 'Snub and go':gt 'Lok'
 			act 'Keep the conversation':
 				cla
-				'Party ends and your new friend offers you to spend'
+				'The party ends and your new friend offers you to come with him'
 
 				act 'Refuse':gt 'Loka'
 
-				act 'Go with a guy':
+				act 'Go with the guy':
 					newboy = 1
 					gs 'boy'
 					gs 'boyopred'
@@ -77,11 +77,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'evening':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act '<<$name>>':
+	act 'Introduce yourself':
 		cla
 		h = 23
 		horny -= 10
-		'You have fun, dance and Bukhaev.'
+		'You have fun dancing and drinking.'
 		itrand = rand(1, 10)
 
 		if itrand = 1:xgt 'party', 'result'
@@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog.jpg"></center>'
-	'Gradually you distribute alcohol as hell and you start to feel sick, you end vechereniki spent hugging the toilet.'
+	'You drink a lot and start to feel sick. You end up spending the rest of the evening hugging the toilet.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 end
@@ -110,11 +110,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result2':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You danced and hooligans, you had the idea to dance with Vika, ended your dance light lesbian show with savory lingering kisses.'
+	'You dance and fool around with other people when you get the idea to dance with Vika. The two of you end up doing a light lesbian show with some savory lingering kisses.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Lok'
 
-	act 'Vika leave an empty room':
+	act 'Take Vika to an empty room':
 		cla
 		$girl = 'Vetch'
 
@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result3':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You nakiryalis and slept in the next room with a few hardcore sex.'
+	'You get tired and sleep in the next room with a few other girls.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 end
@@ -137,11 +137,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result4':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You get opyaneli and began to molest girls, how come you and do not understand, but you have exposed breasts and Vic kiss and lick your nipples in front of everyone.'
+	'You get drunk and begin to molest some of the girls. You can''t remember exactly how it happened, but suddenly your breasts are exposed and Vika kisses and licks your nipples in front of everyone.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 
-	act 'Vika leave an empty room':
+	act 'Take Vika to an empty room':
 		cla
 		$girl = 'Vetch'
 
@@ -156,8 +156,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result5':
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog5.jpg"></center>'
 
-	if throat > 10:money += 100 & 'Fun and drinking, you had an argument about the girl that will be able to shove down your throat it a whole banana, not great wisdom that you have done with success and at the table. The girl gave you 100 <b>₽</b>.'
-	if throat <= 10:money -= 100 & 'Fun and drinking, you had an argument about the girl that will be able to shove down your throat myself a banana, you have choked on a half a banana and lost the argument. Then you gave 100 <b>₽</b>.'
+	if throat > 10:money += 100 & 'You are drinking and having fun, telling a girl that you are able to shove a whole banana down your throat. She bets you 100 rubles that you can''t do it, but you prove her wrong when you succesfully deepthroat the banana at the table. The girl gives you 100 <b>₽</b>.'
+	if throat <= 10:money -= 100 & 'You are drinking and having fun, telling a girl that you are able to shove a whole banana down your throat. She bets you 100 rubles that you can''t do it. Trying to prove her wrong you choke after putting the banana halfway down your throat. You pay her 100 <b>₽</b>.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 end
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result6':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog6.jpg"></center>'
-	'You all evening molested girl with big breasts begging her to kiss her breasts. By evening, the two of you got drunk in the trash and then you climbed her face in his chest and began kissing them.'
+	'You molest a big breasted girl all evening, begging her to let you lick her breasts. Later on, after the two of you got drunk, you bury your head in her chest kissing her breasts.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 end
@@ -175,7 +175,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result7':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog7.jpg"></center>'
-	'Natreskavshis in zyuzyu you bared her breasts and started licking her nipples.'
+	'You drunkenly decide to bare your breasts and start to lick your nipples.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 end
@@ -184,11 +184,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result8':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog8.jpg"></center>'
-	'You ran with Vika Vika became sex with what that guy is not known. You were lying next fun chatting with her until Vika tore drunk in the trash is not familiar guy.'
+	'You spend the evening with Vika when she decides to have sex with a guy she just met. You lie down next to them happily chatting with Vika while the guy is fucking her.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 
-	act 'Caress Vic':
+	act 'Caress Vika':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		$girl = 'Vetch'
@@ -197,32 +197,32 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result8':
 		if vikasex = 0:vikasex = 1 & sexf += 1
 
 		'<center><img src="images/picVA/tri.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kiss and fondle breasts Vicki, she is very excited and you have decided to give her to lick your pussy.'
+		'You kiss and fondle Vika''s breasts. She seems very excited and you decide to have her lick your pussy.'
 
-		if horny < 100:'You started to get tired of licking and wanted to continue'
-		if horny >= 100:horny = 0 & 'Muscles of the vagina began to decline sharply, the entire abdomen as if covered hot wave of pleasure, you scream from a powerful orgasm.'
+		if horny < 100:'It feels good, but you soon get tired of her licking you'
+		if horny >= 100:horny = 0 & 'You soon feel your pussy convulsing and waves of pleasure wash over your body as you scream from a powerful orgasm.'
 
-		'The guy pulls his dick out of Vicki and lifting it inserts his penis into her mouth.'
+		'The guy pulls his dick out of Vika and shoves it into her mouth.'
 
 		act 'Watch':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img src="images/picVA/tri4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Vick guy cums in her mouth. Vicki peremazanny lips in semen and it stretches to you that would have kissed her.'
+			'The guy cums in Vika''s mouth. Her lips covered in semen she leans over to you, her eyes begging you to kiss her.'
 
-			act 'Kissing with Vika':
+			act 'Kiss Vika':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				spafinloc = 12
 gs 'cum_manage'
 				'<center><img src="images/picVA/tri3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re kissing licking each other''s cum.'
+				'You kiss each other, sharing the guys cum and spreading it over both of your faces.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Suck together with Vika':
+		act 'Help Vika suck him off':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			sexm += 1
@@ -230,15 +230,15 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			spafinloc = 11
 gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img src="images/picVA/tri2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fucked by dick together with Vika finally ends Perrin you on the face.'
+			'Vika and you enthusiastically suck his dick and he finally ends up coming on both of your faces.'
 
-			act 'Kissing with Vika':
+			act 'Kiss Vika':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				spafinloc = 12
 gs 'cum_manage'
 				'<center><img src="images/picVA/tri3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You''re kissing licking each other''s cum.'
+				'The two of you start kissing, sharing the guys cum and licking it off the each others face.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 			end
@@ -250,7 +250,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result9':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Girls love to have fun, you two had a drunken girlfriends lesbian show right at the party. Caressing, kissing and squeezing each other in front of everyone.'
+	'Two girls seems to have a lot of fun and start a lesbian show during the party, caressing, kissing and squeezing each other in front of everyone.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Lok'
 end
@@ -259,11 +259,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'result10':
 	cla
 	repa += 1
 	'<center><img src="images/picparty/itog10.jpg"></center>'
-	'You got drunk and danced with what that guy who you dirty paw tits.'
+	'You get drunk and dance with a guy who keeps grabbing your tits.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'Loka'
 
-	act 'Touch for pants':
+	act 'Touch the bulge in his pants':
 		cla
 		repa += 1
 		sexm += 1