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      locations/burger
  2. 25 24
      locations/burgerBoss
  3. 20 20
      locations/burgerWork

+ 40 - 39
locations/burger

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # burger
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	$metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 	$locM = $CURLOC
@@ -32,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Go into the office to Anatoly Borisovich':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You go to the office of the owner. He is sitting at his desk, dealing with your papers. Anatoly Borisovich looks at you and says, "Well? Are there any news?"'
+			'You go to the office of the owner. He is sitting at his desk, dealing with your papers. Anatoly Borisovich looks at you and says, "Well? Do you have any news?"'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
@@ -55,7 +56,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					IvanKvartira = 0
 					IvanEvidence = 0
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You show the recording, where Ivan confesses and promises to return the money, to Anatoly Borisovich. Anatoly Borisovich takes the record and says, that the further he will understand and take a statement from the police.'
+					'You show the recording, where Ivan confesses and promises to return the money, to Anatoly Borisovich. Anatoly Borisovich takes the record and says, that he understands and will take the statement to the police.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
@@ -81,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	elseif posuda >= 3 and posudaA = 0:
 		act 'Go to the manager':
 			cla
-			'You go to the office of the Manager. The girl tells the manager that you are doing good work and offers you another part-time job, "You can wash the floors in the morning, from 8 to 9. 1 hour of cleaning floors will get you 100 <b>₽</b> immediately on hand."'
+			'You go to the office of the manager. The girl tells the manager that you are doing good work and offers you another part-time job, "You can wash the floors in the morning, from 8 to 9. 1 hour of cleaning floors will get you 100 <b>₽</b> immediately on hand."'
 
 			act 'Refuse and leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
@@ -113,10 +114,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 			if vnesh >= 80 and posuda >= 7 and bistroQW < 10:
 				if bistroQW = 1:
-					'Out of the owner''s office comes Bystroezhki smiling at you. "<<$name>>. My offer still stands. Would you like to go to a restaurant?"'
+					'Out of the his office comes the owner of the bistro smiling at you. "<<$name>>. My offer still stands. Would you like to go to a restaurant?"'
 				elseif bistroQW = 0:
 					bistroQW = 1
-					'Out of the owner''s office comes Bystroezhki and nearly bumps into you.'
+					'Out of the his office comes the owner of the bistro and nearly bumps into you.'
 					'"Oh, sorry. How could I not see such a charming girl."'
 					'"Don''t worry", you respond with a smile.'
 					'"Have we met? I am Anatoly Borisovich."'
@@ -151,8 +152,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							'You undress and begin to inspect the dress.'
 							'Suddenly Anatoly comes into the dressing room.'
 							'"Sorry, I could not resist to take a look at your beauty."'
-							'Looking at dresses, Anatoly says, '
-							'"I think you should take this one. It is the most expensive one. And you know, <<$name>>, should be very thankful for such a gift."'
+							'Looking at the dresses, Anatoly says, '
+							'"I think you should take this one. It is the most expensive one. And I think, <<$name>>, you should be very thankful for such a gift."'
 							'Anatoly''s eyes point at his pants showing what he wants from you.'
 
 							act 'Give him a blowjob':
@@ -204,21 +205,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									dressB[24] = bedra
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img src="images/maggot/pr.jpg"></center>'
-									'You look up at him startled and immediately notice the hot head of his cock resting on your lips. Anatoly begins to move his cock to your lips. "Don''t shy baby, lick it with your tongue."'
+									'You look up at him startled as you notice the hot head of his cock resting on your lips. Anatoly pushes his dick to your lips. "Don''t shy baby, lick it with your tongue."'
 
-									act 'Lick':
+									act 'Start licking':
 										cls
 										minut += 2
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/maggot/pr1.jpg"></center>'
-										'You hesitantly stick out your tongue and lick the purple head again and again, until you finally lick his dick the whole length wetting it with your saliva.'
+										'You hesitantly stick out your tongue and lick the purple head again and again. Soon you are running your tongue along the whole length of his cock, wetting it with your saliva.'
 
-										act 'Licking dick':
+										act 'Keep licking his dick':
 											cls
 											minut += 2
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img src="images/maggot/pr2.jpg"></center>'
-											'You continue to lick his dick and Anatoly Borisovich puts his hand on the back of your head pushing you closer to his penis. You feel his member rest on your lips. Your wet lips part and the hot and firm flesh of his member fills your mouth completely. "That''s it baby, suck it now." says Anatoly Borisovich as he starts moving his hips, slowly fucking your mouth. You cup his member tightly with your lips and feel the skin on his penis as it moves along the rod.'
+											'You continue to lick his dick and Anatoly Borisovich puts his hand on the back of your head pushing your head into is groin. You feel his cock fill up your mouth almost completely as your wet lips part to take in the hot and firm flesh of his member. "That''s it baby, suck it now." says Anatoly Borisovich as he starts moving his hips, slowly fucking your mouth. You wrap your lips tightly around his member, trying not to choke as his thrusts become more and more forceful.'
 
 											act 'Suck his dick':
 												cls
@@ -245,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 													cumspclnt = 11
 													gs 'cum_cleanup'
 													'<center><img src="images/maggot/pr4.jpg"></center>'
-													'Finally Anatoly Borisovich stops, puts his cleaned off dick back in his pants and starts to button them up. You sit on the floor stunned with semen dripping from your face. You feel taste the distinct flavor of semen in your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich helps you back to your feet and quickly walks out of the dressing room. You try to erase the traces of sperm from your face.'
+													'Finally Anatoly Borisovich stops, puts his cleaned off dick back in his pants and starts to button them up. You sit on the floor stunned with semen dripping from your face. You feel taste the distinct flavor of semen in your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich helps you back to your feet and quickly walks out of the dressing room. You try to clean the traces of sperm from your face.'
 
 													act 'Exit out of the dressing':
 														cls
@@ -276,8 +277,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									cls
 									dom += 5
 									'You grin and say, "Thank you very much." Anatoly flushes and says emphatically, "You know what I mean." He unbuttons his pants and pulls out his hard member.'
-									'You laugh, "That''s it, I understand perfectly, you can wear this dress yourself, if you think I''m spreading my legs for every fat cat, who fancies himself the king of the world and a brutal macho. so not par my brain baby, and its fledgling shove back into the socket until it fell out, and then I look out there in the nest next to the chick, a couple of balls hatched not because you looked, I help them hatch knee. In general, sebi away in horror, Casanova unfinished. "'
-									'Antaloy erupts and begins to threaten you, "Yes I am, I''ll fire you!"'
+									'You laugh, "Oh yes, I understand perfectly. You can wear this dress yourself, if you think I''m spreading my legs for every fat cat, who fancies himself the king of the world. So don''t insult my intelligence and put your ugly dick back in your pants. If you think I am going to suck you off for buying me a dress you are a bigger idiot than I thought. Wo do you think you are? Casanova? Are you fucking serious?"'
+									'Antaloy''s face turns red with anger and begins to threaten you, "Yes I am, I''ll fire you!"'
 									'You laugh in his face, "Oh I''m scared. Alright fire me and then use this dress as a rag to wash the dishes."'
 									'Anatoly pale, flushed and hissing angrily jumps out of the fitting followed by your loud laughter.'
 
@@ -309,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						cls
 						bistroQW = 57
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You refuse Ivan''s offer and notice his face flashing with a shadow of annoyance. Disappointed he says to you. "Well, the offer stands."'
+						'You refuse Ivan''s offer and notice a flash of annoyance on his face. Disappointed he says to you. "Well, the offer stands."'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 					end
@@ -376,7 +377,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Bend over':
 						cls
 						'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You bend over and come face to face with Ivan, he whispers, unbuttoning his pants, "Go to work with your mouth, baby"'
+						'You bend over and come face to face with Ivan, he whispers, unbuttoning his pants, "Get to work with your mouth, baby"'
 
 						act 'Use your mouth':
 							cls
@@ -386,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj3.jpg"></center>'
 							'Still standing in front of Ivan you bend over even more gently lick his member with your tongue, again and again. Finally your lips wrap around his cock and begin to suck it. His curly pubes tickle your nose with every movement, as you put his whole member in your mouth.'
-							'Ivan finally breaks down and without warning begins to cum in your mouth. A Jet of hot liquid hits you in the mouth. Your eyes widen, but you continue to suck his seed-spewing dick until finally you have a mouth full of semen. You can not contain it anymore and as it emerges on your lips and runs down Ivan''s member.'
+							'Ivan finally lets out a loud moan and without warning begins to cum in your mouth. A Jet of hot liquid hits you in the mouth. Your eyes widen, but you continue to suck his seed-spewing dick until finally you have a mouth full of semen. As your mouth can not contain it anymore it emerges on your lips and runs down Ivan''s member.'
 
 							act 'Swallow cum and clean his cock':
 								cls
@@ -399,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								money += 1500
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj4.jpg"></center>'
-								'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm as you began to lick the remnants of semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
+								'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm before licking the remnants of his semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
 								'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you half thousand <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
 
 								act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -413,11 +414,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							bistroQW = 56
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You escape from Ivan''s hands who was not expecting such a reaction. He glares at you, "You suck off Borisovich but get squeamish with his deputy?" You are taken aback by these words. How does he know about what happened in the fitting room. Apparently your thoughts are reflected on your face and Ivan chuckles. "Yes Borisovich himself bragged about it. If you thought, Borisovich wouldn''t tell anyone you were wrong. But I won''t tell anyone. And I''m offering you a decent reward. So, be a good girl and show me what you can do with your mouth. "'
+							'You escape from Ivan''s hands who was not expecting such a reaction. He glares at you, "You suck off Borisovich but get squeamish with his deputy?" You are taken aback by these words. How does he know about what happened in the fitting room. Apparently your thoughts are reflected on your face and Ivan chuckles. "Yes Borisovich himself bragged about it. If you thought, Borisovich wouldn''t tell anyone you''re an idiot. But I won''t tell anyone. And I''m offering you a decent reward. So, be a good girl and show me what you can do with this mouth of yours. "'
 
-							act 'Perebesh!':dom += 1 & gt 'burger', 'start'
+							act 'That''s bullshit!':dom += 1 & gt 'burger', 'start'
 
-							act 'Take by mouth':
+							act 'Use your mouth':
 								cls
 								bistroQW = 55
 								minut += 3
@@ -426,9 +427,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj3.jpg"></center>'
 								'Still standing in front of Ivan you bend over even more gently lick his member with your tongue, again and again. Finally your lips wrap around his cock and begin to suck it. His curly pubes tickle your nose with every movement, as you put his whole member in your mouth.'
-								'Ivan finally breaks down and without warning begins to cum in your mouth. A Jet of hot liquid hits you in the mouth. Your eyes widen, but you continue to suck his seed-spewing dick until finally you have a mouth full of semen. You can not contain it anymore and as it emerges on your lips and runs down Ivan''s member.'
+								'Ivan finally lets out an audible moan and without warning begins to cum in your mouth. A Jet of hot liquid hits you in the mouth. Your eyes widen, but you continue to suck his seed-spewing dick until finally you have a mouth full of semen. You can not contain it anymore and as it emerges on your lips and runs down Ivan''s member.'
 
-								act 'Swallow cum and clean his cock language':
+								act 'Swallow his cum and clean his cock':
 									cls
 									minut += 2
 									swallow += 1
@@ -439,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 									money += 1500
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj4.jpg"></center>'
-									'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm as you began to lick the remnants of semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
+									'You squat in front of the manager and swallow his sperm as you began to lick the remnants of his semen off of the still standing, but quickly lowering penis.'
 									'Finally Ivan sinks back, completely satisfied and gives you half thousand <b>₽</b> for the work you have done.'
 
 									act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -456,7 +457,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				act 'Go to the manager''s office':
 					cls
 					bistroQW = 60
-					'You go into the office where Ivan is sitting at the table and motions you under the table. You understand that Ivan wants you to crawl under the table.'
+					'You go into the office where Ivan is sitting at the table and motions you to get under it. You immediatly understand what he wants from you.'
 
 					act 'Crawl under the table':
 						cls
@@ -470,8 +471,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						money += 1500
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/maggot/bjud.jpg"></center>'
-						'You crawl under the table and Ivan pulls out his penis in front of your face. You cup your mouth around it and begin to suck trying to get it into your mouth as deeply as possible. Under the table it is cramped and uncomfortable to suck, but you cope with it and after a few minutes Ivan releases is semen into your mouth and quickly start to swallow, to not get dirty.'
-						'Afterwards, Ivan takes out half a thousand rubles and hand it to you.'
+						'You crawl under the table and Ivan pulls out his penis in front of your face. You wrap your lips around it and begin to suck trying to get it into your mouth as deeply as possible. It is cramped and uncomfortable under the table, but you cope with it and after a few minutes of skilfully sucking him off you get Ivan to release his semen into your mouth. You quickly start to swallow, trying to avoid getting your clothes dirty.'
+						'Afterwards, Ivan takes out half a thousand rubles and hands them to you.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 					end
@@ -482,7 +483,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				act 'Go to the manager''s office':
 					cls
 					bistroQW = 65
-					'You come to the office, but it is closed. The deputy manager comes over to you and tells you with a chuckle, "What <<$name>>? Can''t work without a dick? I know all about you and our general manager. But he is not here until the end of the week. And if you do not want me to tell others how you earn a living, then you will go to the office and serve me."'
+					'You come to the office, but it is closed. The deputy manager comes over to you and tells you with a chuckle, "What <<$name>>? Can''t work without a dick? I know all about you and our general manager. But he is not here until the end of the week. And if you do not want me to tell other people how you earn a living, then you will go to the office and serve me."'
 					''
 
 					act 'Nod obediently':
@@ -499,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 						guy += 1
 						'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj21.jpg"></center>'
-						'You go into the office and squat before deputy manager. He takes out his member and puts it in your face showering you with the smell of his unwashed crotch. You lick the salty cock and, with a sigh of despair, begin to suck him. The pimply jerk lasts just a few of your movements and begins to violently cum in your mouth. You can''t keep all his semen in your mouth and it runs down your lips.'
+						'You go into the office and kneel before the deputy manager. He takes out his member and puts it in your face showering you with the smell of his unwashed crotch. You lick the salty cock and, with a sigh of despair, begin to suck him. The pimply jerk lasts just a few of your movements and begins to violently cum in your mouth. You can''t keep all his semen in your mouth and it runs down your lips.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 					end
@@ -507,9 +508,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					act 'Send him away':
 						cls
 						'You contemptuously tell this boy, that he can go to hell with his threats.'
-						'"Ha, listen here slut! My father, he is the master bystroezhki and Borisovich is just a hired director. And if he knows that you fuck Borisovich whenever he wants it will be very bad for you! So if you want me to keep quiet…"'
+						'"Ha, listen here slut! My father is the real owner of the bistro and Borisovich is just a hired director. And if he learns that you fuck Borisovich whenever he wants it, it will be very bad for you! So if you want me to keep quiet…"'
 						'After these words, he calls two movers over and says'
-						'"Guys wouldn''t you like to blow off some steam on this nymph? Don''t worry, it will be good-natured. She is here to serve. Am I right <<$name>>?'
+						'"Guys would you like to blow off some steam on this nymph? Don''t worry, she enjoys it. She is here to serve. Am I right <<$name>>?'
 
 						act 'Yes':
 							cls
@@ -518,10 +519,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							guy += 3
 							gruzsex += 1
 							'<center><img src="images/maggot/tri.jpg"></center>'
-							'You jitter and mumble, "Yes", in front of the three men and the movers smile. You are quickly grabbed by your hand and taken to the warehouse. They help you to undress and put you on your knees presenting their three members for you to serve.'
-							'You begin to diligently serve their three members one by one sucking and stroking. Soon the men groan and one of them grabs the head of his suspended member.'
+							'You jitter and mumble, "Yes." as you stand in front of the three men. The movers smile and you are quickly grabbed by your hand and taken to the warehouse. They help you undress and put you on your knees. Then they pull out their cocks waiting for you to serve them.'
+							'You begin to diligently suck and stroke the cocks of the three man. Soon they groan and one of them grabs your head with one hand, holding his erect cock with the other.'
 
-							act 'Substitute person':
+							act 'Let them cum on you':
 								cls
 								$boy = 'The Deputy Manager'
 								sexpartkno = 1
@@ -541,7 +542,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					end
 				end
 			elseif bistroQW >= 65 and soplakTimes ! 3:
-				'The pimply deputy manager comes to you and taking your hand leads you into his office.'
+				'The pimply deputy manager comes to you and, taking your hand, leads you into his office.'
 				'In the office, he sits down on a chair pulls out his dick and puts you in front of him on all fours.'
 
 				act 'Use your mouth':
@@ -549,7 +550,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					bj += 1
 					sub += 1
 					'<center><img src="images/maggot/bj31.jpg"></center>'
-					'You kneel in front of the kid sitting in a chair, and begin with the blowjob diligently sucking his dick. You caress his cock and testicles with your tongue while simoultaneously using your hand to stroke his member.'
+					'You kneel in front of the kid sitting in a chair and begin to diligently suck his dick. You caress his cock and testicles with your tongue while simoultaneously stroking his shaft with your hand.'
 
 					act '...':
 						cls
@@ -561,7 +562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 						soplakTimes1 += 1
 						if soplaktimes1=10:set soplaktimes=3
 						'<center><img src="images/picKav/cum9.jpg"></center>'
-						'A hot jet of sperm slaps you in the mouth, while you continue to stroke his member. You are careful not to spill a drop of the nasty smelling liquid out of your mouth. Finally the stream dries up and you swallow the sperm. He grins and tosses three-hundred rubles on the floor. You pick them up and hide them, then rise up from your knees and leave the office.'
+						'A hot jet of sperm slaps you in the mouth, while you continue to stroke his member. You are careful not to spill a drop of the nasty smelling liquid out of your mouth. Finally the stream dries up and you swallow the sperm. He grins and tosses three-hundred rubles on the floor. You pick them up and hide them in your pocket as you rise up from your knees and leave the office.'
 						''
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
@@ -574,7 +575,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 				if soplakTimes = 3:soplakTimes = 4
 
-				'After you finish, you see Anatoly Borisovich. He nods and tells you "Hello <<$name>>, you''re done, come to me."'
+				'After you finish, you see Anatoly Borisovich. He nods and tells you "Hello <<$name>>, when you''re done, come to me."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 

+ 25 - 24
locations/burgerBoss

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # burgerBoss
+
 !!Podyablonskaya
 !!Calvin Broadus Kaldazar
 !!Andrew Krivorotov
@@ -6,14 +7,14 @@
 gs 'stat'
 
 if BistroBoss = 10:
-	if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour < 17:'Anatoly Borisovich sitting at the table and talking to someone on the phone.'
-	if week < 6 and hour < 9 or week < 6 and hour >= 17:'Anatoly Chubais is not there.'
-	if week >= 6:'Now weekends and Anatoly Chubais is not there.'
+	if week < 6 and hour >= 9 and hour < 17:'Anatoly Borisovich is sitting at the table talking to someone on the phone.'
+	if week < 6 and hour < 9 or week < 6 and hour >= 17:'Anatoly Borisovich is not here.'
+	if week >= 6:'It''s the weekend and Anatoly Borisovich is not here.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
 	if PersSecWork = 2:
-		if week < 6 and hour < 10:'Anatoly Borisovich looked sternly at you, "<<$name>>, you''re fired, and I did not raise, go away, we''re done, I, my wife more than you."'
+		if week < 6 and hour < 10:'Anatoly Borisovich looks at you sternly, "<<$name>>, you''re fired. Go away, we''re done, I love my wife more than you."'
 	elseif PersSecWork = 1:
 		if week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype = 'office':
 			act 'Work':gt 'burgerWork'
@@ -27,42 +28,42 @@ if BistroBoss = 10:
 			end
 
 		elseif week < 6 and hour < 10 and $clothingworntype ! 'office':
-			'Anatoly Borisovich looks at you sternly, "<<$name>>, why aren''t you dressed properly? Go home and come back tomorrow in appropriate clothes, you are absent today!"'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich looks at you sternly, "<<$name>>, why aren''t you dressed properly? Go home and come back tomorrow dressed appropriately, you''re not working today!"'
 		end
 
 	elseif PersSecWork = 0 and week < 6:
 		if secrDiplom = 1:
-			act 'Show diploma':
+			act 'Show your secretary diploma':
 				cls
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You showed diploma Anatoly Borisovich, "A labor there?"'
+				'You show Anatoly Borisovich your diploma and he asks you, "Do you want to work for me?"'
 
 				act 'No':
 					cls
 					minut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You said what works elsewhere. Anatoly Borisovich smiled a little, "What could I take you to work, what would you need to quit my former employment. You think hard, I do not force you, but I''ll give you a salary normal. Polchaetsya 2500 Will the working day is longer fifty dollars a month. "'
+					'You tell him, that you already work somewhere else. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "What can I do to make you quit your job and work for me? You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 2500 rubles per day."'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
 
 				if (work = 0 and PersSecWork = 0 and cheatWork = 0) or (PersSecWork = 0 and cheatWork = 1):
-					act 'That labor':
+					act 'Ask about the work':
 						cls
 						minut += 1
 						gs 'stat'
-						'Labor you put on the table. Anatoly Borisovich little smile, "You think well, I will not force you, but I''ll give you a salary normal. Polchaetsya 2500 Will the working day is longer fifty dollars a month. From you I need loyalty, hard work, strict compliance guidelines."'
+						'You ask about the job. Anatoly Borisovich smiles a little, "You can think about it, I won''t force you, but I''ll pay you a normal salary. You will get 2500 rubles per day. I''m looking for loyalty, hard work, and strict compliance with my guidelines."'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
-						act 'Find a job':
+						act 'Take the job':
 							cls
 							minut += 1
 							work = 1
 							PersSecWork = 1
 							gs 'stat'
-							'You agreed to become a secretary to Anatoly Chubais, he takes your cv, makes a copy of your passport and diploma, and tells you. "Come to work every weekday here, no later than 9 am, you must wear an office outfit. You will receive calls, take letters, and copy documents, and any general office work as required. You will work until 17 hours, salary paid into your bank account every month."'
+							'You agree to become a secretary to Anatoly Borisovich. He takes your cv, makes a copy of your passport and diploma, and tells you. "Come to work here every weekday, no later than 9 am, you must wear an office outfit. You will receive calls, take letters, and copy documents, and you have to do any other general office work as required. You will work until 17.00, your salary will be paid into your bank account every month."'
 
 							act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 						end
@@ -73,7 +74,7 @@ if BistroBoss = 10:
 	end
 
 elseif BistroBoss = 1:
-	'You have entered the principal''s office. Anatoly Borisovich sitting at the table and studied the documents, you see, he put them aside and showed you invited to sit on a chair.'
+	'You enter enter the manager''s office. Anatoly Borisovich is sitting at the table studying some documents. When he sees you, he puts them aside and invites you to sit on a chair.'
 
 	act 'Sit on a chair':
 		cls
@@ -83,14 +84,14 @@ elseif BistroBoss = 1:
 
 		if bistroQW = 57:
 			kosmetica += 200
-			'You sat on a chair and smiled Anatoly Borisovich you. "I''m so glad this damn trip over. I had already missed you. Incidentally I do not come empty-handed, here''s a gift." with these words Anatoly Borisovich put on the table a of expensive cosmetics. "And yet, I want you to devote some of the details. I am married and I have kids. So do not even stutter about any marriage, this I will not go. My wife, the daughter of a very influential deputy and my current position of Director of the lousy diner time, very soon I''ll get the post of deputy minister of construction, but for now I just need to get the record in labor. So, you showed yourself a stiff upper lip, I need loyal people, and I invite you to be my secretary. Do you have passed the diploma courses secretary? "'
+			'You sit on a chair and Anatoly Borisovich smiles at you. "I''m so glad this damn trip is over. I really missed you. Incidentally I do not come empty-handed, here''s a gift." with these words Anatoly Borisovich puts some expensive cosmetics on the table. "And yet, I have to tell you about some facts. I am married and I have kids. So do not even think about marriage, it won''t work. My wife is the daughter of a very influential deputy and currently I am only the manager of this lousy diner. Very soon I''ll get the post of deputy minister of construction, but for now I just need to do my job here. So, don''t start any trouble. I need loyal people, and I want you to be my secretary. Did you get the diploma for the secretary course? "'
 
 			if secrDiplom = 1:
 				act 'Yes, I have a diploma.':
 					cls
 					minut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You said that you already have a diploma Secretary. Anatoly Borisovich smiled. "What are you still done. Listen, I now need to make a couple of calls, leave now."'
+					'You tell him that you already have a secretary diploma. Anatoly Borisovich smiles. "That''s good. Listen, I need to make a couple of calls, so leave now."'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
@@ -100,7 +101,7 @@ elseif BistroBoss = 1:
 					cls
 					minut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You said that you already have a diploma Secretary. Anatoly Borisovich smiled. "What are you still done. Douchishsya, come to me. Listen, I now need to make a couple of calls, leave now."'
+					'You tell him that you do not have a diploma, but are experienced at working as a secretary. Anatoly Borisovich smiles. "That''s good. Douchishsya, come to me. Listen, I now need to make a couple of calls, leave now."'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
@@ -111,18 +112,18 @@ elseif BistroBoss = 1:
 					sekrObu = 1
 					minut += 1
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You shook his head. Anatoly Borisovich smiled. "It does not matter, I now pay for your training and once you''re done, come to me."'
+					'You shake your head. Anatoly Borisovich smiles. "It doesn''t matter, I will pay for your training and once you''re done, come to me."'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 				end
 			end
 
 		elseif bistroQW >= 65:
-			'You sat on a chair and Chubais gave you a grim look. "I did not think you were such deshovke. What is your fee? Three weave for suction to swallow?" He pulled out his bill of 300 <b>₽</b> and threw it on the floor. "Get up on your knees and work it off, as you are able, vaflersha."'
+			'You sit down on a chair and Anatoly Borisovich gives you a grim look. "I did not think you were so cheap. What is your fee? 300 rubles for a blowjobto?" He pulls 300 <b>₽</b> out of his pocket and throws them on the floor. "Get down on your knees and do your work, slut."'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
-			act 'To kneel':
+			act 'Get on your knees':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				money += 300
@@ -134,7 +135,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 				BistroBossDay = daystart
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You knelt down and took the money from the floor. Anatoly Borisovich member and you got tipped off his face on his solid body. Then you gripped it with his lips and began to suck as hard core feeling fills your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich his teeth with pleasure "Suck slut, now swallow, and that would be swallowed up all the drops!" You feel like you hit the sperm in her mouth and began to swallow cum quickly, that would not choke. When finished, Anatoly Borisovich took dick in pants and said, "Now get out."'
+				'You kneel down and take the money from the floor. Anatoly Borisovich pulls his already hard member out and holds it in front of your face. You wrap your lips around it and begin to suck as the hard cock fills your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich grits his teeth with pleasure "Suck it slut and don''t forget to swallow every last drop!" You feel his sperm hit the inside of your mouth and begin to quickly swallow his cum to prevent yourself from choking. After you finish, Anatoly Borisovich puts his dick back in his pants. "Now get out."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 			end
@@ -142,17 +143,17 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 	end
 
 elseif BistroBoss = 2 and BistroBossDay = daystart:
-	'Knocking you walked into the office to Anatoly Borisovich. He looked angrily at you, "I said, get out of here."'
+	'Knocking you walk into the office to Anatoly Borisovich. He looks at you angrily, "I said, get out of here."'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
 elseif BistroBoss = 2 and BistroBossDay ! daystart:
 	BistroBossDay = daystart
-	'Knocking you walked into the office to Anatoly Borisovich. He looked darkly at you and got a bill of 300 <b>₽</b>, "Get up on your knees and work it off, as you are able, vaflersha."'
+	'Knocking you walk into the office to Anatoly Borisovich. He looked at you grimly and pulls out 300 <b>₽</b>, "Get down on your knees and get to work, slut."'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 
-	act 'To kneel':
+	act 'Get on your knees':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		money += 300
@@ -163,7 +164,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 		BistroBossDay = daystart
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You knelt down and took the money from the floor. Anatoly Borisovich member and you got tipped off his face on his solid body. Then you gripped it with his lips and began to suck as hard core feeling fills your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich his teeth with pleasure "Suck slut, now swallow, and that would be swallowed up all the drops!" You feel like you hit the sperm in her mouth and began to swallow cum quickly, that would not choke. When finished, Anatoly Borisovich took dick in pants and said, "Now get out."'
+		'You kneel down and take the money from the floor. Anatoly Borisovich pulls his already hard member out and holds it in front of your face. You wrap your lips around it and begin to suck as the hard cock fills your mouth. Anatoly Borisovich grits his teeth with pleasure "Suck it slut and don''t forget to swallow every last drop!" You feel his sperm hit the inside of your mouth and begin to quickly swallow his cum to prevent yourself from choking. After you finish, Anatoly Borisovich puts his dick back in his pants. "Now get out."'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'burger', 'start'
 	end

+ 20 - 20
locations/burgerWork

@@ -1,4 +1,5 @@
 # burgerWork
+
 $dinBistroWork = {
 	act 'Dinner':
 		gs 'food', 'dynf_food'
@@ -26,7 +27,7 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 
 		if kompromatBlackMail >= 2:
 			if komblrand = 0:
-				'After work, you are going to leave bystroezhki, but you came Ivan. "Where are you going, baby? And how to suck my candy?"'
+				'After work, you are about to leave the bistro, but Ivan stops you. "Where are you going, baby? Want to suck my dick?"'
 
 				act 'Agree':
 					cls
@@ -40,14 +41,14 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/ivanBJ.jpg"></center>'
-					'Ivan took you around the corner to a dirty alley bystroezhki smelling urine. He pulled out of his pants member. "And now for the baby and try to work better." You squatted in front of Ivan and took his penis in her mouth, it was salty and not washed. You started to suck trying to act more active, what would Ivan finished as quickly as possible. Ivan finally puffed and began to cum in your mouth. You quickly swallowed shooting eyes on the sides, in the hope that no one sees. Once you swallow cum, Ivan cleaned dick in his pants "Average nipple. Now get out of here!"'
+					'Ivan takes you around the corner to a dirty alley behind the bistro. It smells like urine. He pulls his member out of his pants. "Put it in your mouth and show me what you can do." You squat in front of Ivan and take his penis in your mouth. It tastes salty and unwashed. You start to suck actively trying to make Ivan finish as quickly as possible. Finally Ivan lets out a moan starts to cum in your mouth. You quickly swallow while looking around, hoping no one saw you. Once you swallowed his cum, Ivan puts his cleaned up dick in his pants "That was average. You can do better. Now get out of here!"'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 				end
 
 				dynamic $din_Ivan_work4
 			elseif komblrand = 1:
-				'After work, you are going to leave bystroezhki, but you came Ivan. "Where are you going, baby? And how to suck my candy?"'
+				'After work, you are about to leave the bistro, but Ivan stops you. "Where are you going, baby? Want to suck my dick?"'
 
 				act 'Agree':
 					cls
@@ -61,14 +62,14 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/ivanBJcar.jpg"></center>'
-					'Ivan took you to your car standing in the alley, he got behind the wheel and you sat next to him. Ivan got dick out of his pants and grabbed you by the hair pulled your face to his groin until his cock is not buried you in your <<$liptalk3>>. You opened your mouth and allow the members to enter between your lips. You started trying to suck harder to compress their <<$liptalk3>> on the penis that Ivan would be finished quickly. Ivan finally broke down and finished in your mouth. You continued to suck dick swallowing sperm while falling. Ivan tucked dick in his pants and said, "Okay cocksucker, get out."'
+					'Ivan takes you to his car standing in the alley. He gets behind the wheel and you sit next to him. Ivan gets his dick out of his pants and grabs you by the hair pulling your face to his groin until his cock is buried in your <<$liptalk3>>. You open your mouth and allow the member to enter between your lips. You are trying to suck hard, using your <<$liptalk3>> on the penis so Ivan would be finished quickly. Ivan''s body finally jerks and he finishes in your mouth. You continue to suck his dick swallowing the sperm without spilling a drop. Ivan tucks his dick back in his pants and says, "Okay cocksucker, get out."'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 				end
 
 				dynamic $din_Ivan_work4
 			elseif komblrand = 2:
-				'After work, you are going to leave bystroezhki, but you came Ivan. "Where are you going, baby? And how to suck my candy?"'
+				'After work, you are about to leave the bistro, but Ivan stops you. "Where are you going, baby? Want to suck my dick?"'
 
 				act 'Agree':
 					cls
@@ -76,8 +77,7 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/maggot/car.jpg"></center>'
-					'Ivan took you to your car standing in the alley, he got behind the wheel and you sat next to him. Ivan started the car and you go to the northern region. "And do not forget baby while you slushaesh me you have a job and prospects, but it is worth to you piss me off, and all you will take off from his job as a traffic jam." Soon you come to a new building, Ivan put the car in the free space. You got out and went with Ivan in the staircase. The lift takes you up to the apartment of Ivan and he opened the door for you. Ivan, without delay, to take you by the hand and led her into the bedroom. There he sat on the bed and took out the camera. Ivan got dick out of his pants and said, "Suck it baby, how can you do, should not get a bad porn."'
-
+					'Ivan takes you to his car standing in the alley. He gets behind the wheel and you sit next to him. Ivan starts the car and drives you to the northern region. "Don''t forget baby. As long as you continue to serve me you have a job and prospects, but if you piss me off, I will take everything from you." As soon as you come to a new building, Ivan parks his car in a free space. You get out and go with Ivan to a staircase. The lift takes you up to Ivan''s apartment and he opens the door for you. Without hesitation Ivan takes you by the hand and leads you to his bedroom. He sits down on the bed and takes out a camera. Ivan gets his dick out of his pants and says, "Now suck it baby. And give it your all, I don''t want the video to be bad."'
 					act 'Suck':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
@@ -85,16 +85,16 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 						ivanFilmBJ += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/ivanBJfilm.jpg"></center>'
-						'You sat down on his knees in front of Ivan and clasped their <<$liptalk3>> member. Ivan sent to you in the face the camera and filmed as you suck his cock closeup. Ivan put you back on the couch and sat on your chest so that his cock was in front of your face.'
+						'You get down on your knees in front of Ivan and clasp his member with your <<$liptalk3>>. Ivan films you using his camera to get a closeup of you sucking his cock. After a while he lies you down on his couch and sits on your chest to make sure his cock is right in front of your face.'
 
 						act 'Suck':
 							cls
 							minut += 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/ivanBJfilm2.jpg"></center>'
-							'North top Ivan began to fuck you in the mouth every time a member of his firm head sticking in your throat, you suck diligently trying not to choke. While Ivan did not forget to shoot you on camera. Finally he took a dick out of your mouth.'
+							'Sitting on top of you Ivan starts to fuck your mouth sticking is member in your throat as far as possible. You suck diligently trying not to choke as Ivan is filming you the whole time. Finally he takes his dick out of your mouth.'
 
-							act 'Open mouth':
+							act 'Open your mouth':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								facial += 1
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ $dinBistroWork2 = {
 								gs 'cum_manage'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/ivanBJfilm3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Ivan began to finish you on your <<$liptalk3>> and language. Cum dripping from your lips on his chin and chest. Ivan finally turned off the camera and put it away in a drawer. "Not bad chlenososka fulfilled. Can wash up and get out."'
+								'Ivan begins to finish on your <<$liptalk3>>. Cum drips from your lips on your chin and chest. Ivan finally turns the camera off and puts it away in a drawer. "Not bad. You did what you were required. Wash up and then get out."'
 
 								act 'Leave':cumspclnt = 12 & gs 'cum_cleanup' & gt 'nord'
 							end
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ $dinBistroWork3 = {
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/work.jpg"></center>'
 
-		'You sat down and started on the computer to prepare the contract.'
+		'You sit down and start preparing the contract on the computer.'
 		dynamic $burger_work_din
 		dynamic $dinBistroWork2
 	end
@@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ if hour < 10:hour = 10 & minut = 0 & PersSecWorkTimes += 1
 gs 'BurgerTip'
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/work.jpg"></center>'
-'You sit in front of his office cabinet Anatoly Borisovich.'
+'You sit in front of Anatoly Borisovich''s office.'
 
 if hour < 17:
 	act 'Work before lunch':
@@ -157,27 +157,27 @@ if hour < 17:
 		!!gs 'BurgerTip'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/sosed/work.jpg"></center>'
-		'You sat at the table and began to prepare the agreement on the computer.'
+		'You sit at the table and begin to prepare the agreement on the computer.'
 
 		if TerminalPapper = 1:
 			TerminalPapper = 0
 			kosiakBU += 1
-			'Anatoly Borisovich gave you dressing for what you are not carried documents in a storage terminal and disrupted supplies.'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich scolds you for not getting documents to the storage terminal, disrupting supplies.'
 		elseif TerminalPapper = 2:
 			TerminalPapper = 0
-			'Anatoly Borisovich thanked you for what you just delivered documents to storage terminal.'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich thanks you for delivering the documents to the storage terminal.'
 		end
 		if BankPapper = 1:
 			BankPapper = 0
 			kosiakBU += 1
-			'Anatoly Borisovich chastised you for what you did not take the documents to the bank.'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich chastises you for not taking the documents to the bank.'
 		elseif BankPapper = 2:
 			BankPapper = 0
-			'Anatoly Borisovich thanked you for what you just delivered the documents to the bank.'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich thanks you for delivering the documents to the bank.'
 		end
 
 		if BuSWworkEnd = 1 or kompromatBlackMail = 1:
-			'Anatoly Borisovich came into your office and put the paper in front of you with a pen. "Write on your own. I do not need a secretary with a past like yours."'
+			'Anatoly Borisovich comes into your office and puts the paper in front of you with a pen. "Write up your resignation. I don''t need a secretary with a past like yours."'
 
 			act 'Write a statement of resignation':
 				cls
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if hour < 17:
 				PersSecWorkTimes = 0
 				money += Pay
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You wrote a statement of resignation and quickly signed his boss, he was counted out to you <<pay>> <b>₽</b> your paycheck and said, "It''s over <<$name>>, get out of here."'
+				'You write a statement of resignation and quickly get it signed by your boss. He writes out a paycheck of <<pay>> <b>₽</b> to you says, "It''s over <<$name>>, get out of here."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 			end