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KevinSmarts 9 lat temu
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+ 5 - 5
locations/bedrPar

@@ -20,7 +20,6 @@ if sisboyday + 1 = daystart and hour = 18:gt'sisterQW','sisboyQW_expel'
 if komp = 1:'Your <a href="exec:gorodokKomp = 1 & GT ''Komp'',''start''">laptop</a> is on the desk.'
 gorodokKomp = 0
 
-
 gad = 0
 
 if sisboyQW > 10:sisboyQW = 10
@@ -43,7 +42,7 @@ else
 ! WD: add Underwear change
 
 	if student > 0 and kursovik < 100:
-		act 'Write coursework (1:00)':
+		act 'Do coursework (1:00)':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 60
@@ -90,7 +89,7 @@ else
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/dur.jpg"></center>'
 			'You snort some Pale Lady, feeling dizzy for just a moment. After that you feel fantastic, and incredibly horny.'
 
-			act 'Return':gt $curloc
+			act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -165,7 +164,7 @@ if poSkill>=200:
 			minut+=15
 			gs'stat'
 			'You spend 15 minutes at the embroidery frame, preparing the fabric and outlining the pattern for the tapestry.'
-			act'Set aside':gt $curloc
+			act'Set the tapestry aside':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 	if newgobelen>=1:
@@ -184,10 +183,11 @@ if poSkill>=200:
 				gobelen+=1
 				'Your work on the tapestry is done.'
 			end
-			act'Set aside':gt $curloc
+			act'Set the tapestry aside':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 end
 
+
 --- bedrPar ---------------------------------
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/bedrPar2

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # bedrPar2
 CLOSE ALL
-act 'Leave the room':gt 'korrPar'
+act 'Return to the hallway':gt 'korrPar'
 
 $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 $locM = $CURLOC

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+ 209 - 208
locations/dinfather


+ 117 - 117
locations/father

@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@ gs 'fathersex'
 $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 $locM = $CURLOC
 
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Stepfather Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-'Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years old. Your mother divorced your father and married Vladimir Mikhailovich when you were only one year old. You''ve never seen your biological father since the divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
+'Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years old. Your mother divorced your biological father and married Vladimir when you were only one year old. You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
 
 dynamic $fatherRep
 
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@ if hcolfronce = 0:
 	hcolfronce = 1
 end
 if hcolfatherremember ! hcol:
-	if hcol = 0: $texthcol = 'Decided to become a brunette?'
-	if hcol = 1: $texthcol = 'Or, rather, un-dyed. Decided to go back to your natural color?'
-	if hcol = 2: $texthcol = 'Decided to become a brazen redhead?'
-	if hcol = 3: $texthcol = 'Decided to become a blonde?'
-	'Your stepfather''s eyes widen as he notices your hair. "Oh, I see you dyed your hair! <<$texthcol>>"'
+	if hcol = 0: $texthcol = 'So you decided to become a brunette?'
+	if hcol = 1: $texthcol = 'Or, rather, un-dyed your hair. So you decided to go back to your natural color?'
+	if hcol = 2: $texthcol = 'So you decided to become a brazen redhead?'
+	if hcol = 3: $texthcol = 'So you decided to become a blonde?'
+	'Your stepfather looks at you for a second, noticing that something is different about you. His eyes widen as he notices your hair. "Oh <<$nickname>>, I see you dyed your hair! <<$texthcol>>" It looks good on you.'
 	hcolfatherremember = hcol
 end
 
@@ -35,22 +35,23 @@ if pirsA >= 1 and pirsAfather=0 and pirsadaytalk!daystart:
 	pirseerand=rand(1,100)
 	pirsadaytalk=daystart
 	if pirseerand>=75:
-		'Your stepfather glances at your mouth for a moment as you greet him. "<<$nickname>>, do you have something shiny in your mouth?"'
-		act'Nothing':
+		'Your stepfather looks at your mouth funnily as you greet him. "<<$nickname>>, do you have something shiny in your mouth?"'
+		act'"No"':
 			cla
-			'You shake your head: "Nothing!" - and then turn away before he can get a good look at your tongue piercing.'
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			'You shake your head: "Umm, no! No I don''t!"'
+			'You quickly turn away before he can get a good look at your tongue piercing.'
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 		
-		act'Show him your tongue piercing':
+		act'"Yes, want to see?"':
 			cls
 			pirsAfather=1
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/body/pirsA.jpg" ></center>'
 			'You open your mouth and stick out your tongue, showing him your piercing.'
-			if TouchedByFather=0:'Stepfather shakes his head: "<<$nickname>>, tongue piercings are only for lewd women who use their mouth to please men."'
-			if TouchedByFather>0:'Stepfather grins: "Does it help you work your mouth better?"'
-			act '<B>Continue</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+			if TouchedByFather=0:'Your stepfather shakes his head: "<<$nickname>>, tongue piercings are only for lewd women who use their mouth to please men."'
+			if TouchedByFather>0:'Your stepfather grins: "Nice, I bet you could make someone feel really good with that..."'
+			act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 		end
 		exit
 	end
@@ -59,20 +60,20 @@ end
 ! lip piercing
 if pirsB = 1 and pirsBfather=0 and pirsbdaytalk!daystart:
 	pirsadbytalk=daystart
-	'Your stepfather takes a long look at your mouth - specifically at your new piercing: "And you got that why?"'
-	act'I just like them':
+	'Your stepfather takes a long look at your mouth, specifically at your new piercing. He seems confused and asks: "Why did you get that?"'
+	act '"Don''t you think it looks cute?"':
 		cls
 		pirsBfather=1
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/body/pirsB.jpg" ></center>'
-		'You shrug your shoulders and say you just like the way lip rings look, so you decided to get one yourself.'
+		'You shrug. "I don''t know... I just like the way lip rings look, so I got one. Don''t you think it looks cute?"'
 		if TouchedByFather=0:
-			'Your stepfather shakes his head: "You kids, always adding new holes to yourselves..."'
+			'Your stepfather shakes his head: "Kids these days, always adding new holes to themselves..."'
 		end
 		if TouchedByFather>0:
-			'Your stepfather grins: "Alright, I''ll admit it does look sexy."'
+			'Your stepfather grins: "I must admit, it does look sexy on you."'
 		end
-		act '<B>Continue</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+		act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	end
 	exit
 end
@@ -86,13 +87,13 @@ end
 ! nose ring
 if pirsD = 1 and pirsDfather=0:
 	pirsDfather=1
-	'Your stepfather looks a bit shocked at your nose ring: "Jesus, <<$nickname>>, what is- why?! I understand putting a ring in a bull''s nose to lead them by, but a person - you? No reason for that!"'
+	'Your stepfather looks a bit shocked at your nose ring: "Jesus, <<$nickname>>, what is- why?! I understand putting a ring in a bull''s nose to lead them by, but on a person? There''s no reason to do that!"'
 end
 
 ! eyebrow piercing
 if pirsE = 1 and pirsEfather=0:
 	pirsEfather=1
-	'Your stepfather looks surprised when he sees your eyebrow piercing: "<<$nickname>>, why would you need that stuff on your eyebrow?" He shakes his head in exasperation. "Youth these days..."'
+	'Your stepfather looks surprised when he sees your eyebrow piercing: "<<$nickname>>, why would you want that thing in your eyebrow?" He shakes his head in exasperation. "Kids these days..."'
 end
 
 ! lip tattoo
@@ -103,24 +104,24 @@ if tatlip>0 and fatherTatLip=0 and father>=60:
 		minut+=1
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/body/tatlip<<tatlip>>.jpg" ></center>'
-		if tatlip = 2: $textFatherTatLip = 'A tattoo in your lip?! That can''t have felt good... it is cute, though.'
+		if tatlip = 2: $textFatherTatLip = 'A tattoo on the inside of your lip?! That must''ve hurt like hell... it is cute, though.'
 		if tatlip ! 2: $textFatherTatLip = 'That''s crazy! Why would you get something like that written on you, much less there?! No one would even think of doing that when I was your age.'
-		'You wrenched his lip and showing a tattoo on the inside of the lip. Stepfather looks surprised look: "<<$textFatherTatLip>>"'
-		act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+		'You pull your lip down, showing your stepfather the tattoo on the inside of your lip. Your stepfather looks surprised: "<<$textFatherTatLip>>"'
+		act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	end
 end
 
 if $clothingworntype = 'nude' and pregTalkFather = 0 and pregtime > 90:
-	'Stepfather surprised looking at your belly: "<<$name>>, you flew that-whether? '
+	'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face: "<<$name>>, you''re pregnant?"'
 	if hadsexwithfather=1:
-		'Not from me, I hope? '
+		'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
 	end
 	pregTalkFather = 1
 	
 elseif $clothingworntype ! 'nude' and pregTalkFather = 0 and pregtime > 150:
-	'Stepfather surprised looking at your belly: "<<$name>>, you flew that-whether? '
+	'Your stepfather looks at your belly with a surprised look on his face: "<<$name>>, you''re pregnant?"'
 	if hadsexwithfather=1:
-		'Not from me, I hope? '
+		'You see him hesitate for a second, as if weighing whether he should say something or not. He finally does: "It''s not mine, I hope?"'
 	end
 	pregTalkFather = 1
 end
@@ -129,22 +130,22 @@ end
 
 if week < 6:
 	if father_go = 0 and hour >= 21:
-		'"Alright <<$nickname>>, it''s getting late, I need to get to bed. I''ll see you tomorrow."'
+		'"Alright <<$nickname>>. It''s getting late, I need to get to bed. See you tomorrow."'
 		cla
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act '<B>Continue</B>':gt $loc, $metka
 		exit
 	end
 end
 if week >= 6:
 	if father_go = 0 and hour >= 21:
-		'"Alright <<$nickname>>, it''s getting late, I need to get to bed. I''ll see you tomorrow."'
+		'"Alright <<$nickname>>. It''s getting late, I need to get to bed. See you tomorrow."'
 		cla
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act '<B>Continue</B>':gt $loc, $metka
 		exit
 	elseif father_go = 1 and hour >= 16:
-		'Sorry, <<$nickname>>, I have to go to the garage.'
+		'Sorry <<$nickname>>, I have to go to the garage.'
 		cla
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act '<B>Continue</B>':gt $loc, $metka
 		exit
 	end
 end
@@ -154,12 +155,12 @@ act 'Chat':
 	minut+=rand(10,15)
 	father+=1
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your stepfather is sitting on the couch watching TV. You sit down next to him.'
+	'Your stepfather sits on the couch in the living room, he is watching TV. You decide to join for a while and sit down next to him.'
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
-	act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+	act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 
 	if father<20:
 		dynamic $d_father[1]
@@ -183,65 +184,64 @@ act 'Ask for money':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Stepfather Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your stepfather is sitting on the couch watching TV. You sit down next to him.'
+	'Your stepfather is sitting on the couch, watching some boring TV show. You sit down next to him.'
 	dynamic $fatherRep
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
-	''
 	if fatherPayDay = daystart:
-		'Built up a face sweetly, you began to beg money from his stepfather, what he just shook his head wearily: - "No, <<$nickname>>. I`ve already given money. Let us call it a day."'
+		'Trying your cutest face on your stepfather, you ask him for some money. He just shook his head wearily: "No, <<$nickname>>. I''ve already given you some money today, don''t be greedy."'
 	else
 		if father<=40 and TouchedByFather=0 or vnesh<=15 and TouchedByFather=0:
-			'You asked for money stepfather, But in response, he only shook his head: - "All my mother`s salary bear, Come here and ask her."'
+			'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response: "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
 		else
-			'You asked for money stepfather, But in response, he only shook his head: - "All my mother`s salary bear, Come here and ask her."'
+			'You ask your stepfather for some money, but he shakes his head in response: "I already gave my salary to your mother, go ask her."'
 			if father>=40 and father<60 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = RAND (1,4)
 			if father>=60 and father<80 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = RAND (1,2)
 			if father>=80 and fatherPayDay ! daystart:FatherMolest = 1
 			if FatherMolest=1:
-				'During a call, you notice, stepfather in a good mood today,, so that, perhaps, you have a chance to persuade him...'
-				act 'Oh please':
+				'While you''re talking with him, you notice your stepfather is in a good mood today. Perhaps you can persuade him...'
+				act '"Oh please?"':
 					cla
 					minut+=5
 					gs 'stat'
 					horny+=RAND(1,5)
-					'- Well shake-and-aluysta, - drawling ask you, I am looking at him puppy eyes and flapping his expressive eyes.'
+					'"Oh come on, please Daddy?" you beg him, batting your eyelids and trying to look as cute as possible.'
 					if vnesh < 15:fatherLust = 2
 					if vnesh >= 15 and vnesh < 30:fatherLust = Rand (1,4)
 					if vnesh >= 30 and vnesh < 50:fatherLust = Rand (1,2)
 					if vnesh >= 50:fatherLust = 1
 					if fatherLust>=2:
-						'- Light, Well, I said,, that I have no money. Come to Mama.'
+						'"Sorry <<$nickname>>, like I said, I have no money. Go ask your mother."'
 					end
 
 					if fatherLust=1:
 						money+=rand(200,300)
 						fatherPayDay = daystart
 						gs 'stat'
-						'- Eh... Okay. Just do not tell my mother! - he said in a tired voice, shooting eyes in the kitchen. You portray genuine delight, take the money, She kisses him on the cheek and happily go.'
+						'"Oh, alright then. Just don''t tell your mother!" he says in a tired voice, keeping his eyes on the doorway as he gives you the money. You act genuinely happy as you take the money from him, giving him a kiss on the cheek as you go.'
 					end
-					act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+					act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				end
 
 				if hadsexwithfather=1:
-					act 'Are not you forgetting?':
+					act 'Blackmail him':
 						cla
 						minut+=5
 						money+=rand(300,500)
 						fatherPayDay = daystart
 						gs 'stat'
-						'- Are not you forgetting? - serious voice you say, an apparent reference to your recent him "relationship".'
-						'Stepfather clearly embarrassed and surprised your trick. His eloquent "Cough-cough" It leads you into the feeling and you feel uncomfortable from-for their behavior.'
-						'- Here`s, infection! You can not not take advantage Now! So be, on. Just keep your mouth shut!'
-						act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+						'"Aren''t you forgetting something?" you say in a serious voice, referring to your recent intimate moments with him.'
+						'Your stepfather is clearly embarrassed by this, and surprised at you for bringing it up. He clears his throat loudly, and the following silence makes you feel slightly uncomfortable. Nevertheless, he reaches for his wallet.'
+						'"Here you go, you leech! You know you shouldn''t be taking advantage of me like that! Here, take your money and get out of here. Just keep your mouth shut!" You nod and pocket the money, feeling slightly worse for blackmailing him for it.'
+						act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 					end
 				end
 			end
 
 			if FatherMolest>1:
-				'- No, <<$nickname>>. I`ve already said,. - All appearances, the money from him now, you obviously did not get.'
+				'"<<$nickname>>, I already said no."'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -251,9 +251,9 @@ act 'Ask about him and your mother':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Stepfather Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'You asked his stepfather as he met my mother. Stepfather scratched begin balding head and answered. "I then worked as a taxi driver. Busing like Natasha, your mother. She even then was quite soplyushkoy, but has managed to leave her husband for the class-mate and give birth to you with Anya. Your father I did not know, I saw only a couple of times. Know that his name Mikhail Kuznetsov. He left somewhere in another city. "'
+	'You ask your stepfather how he met your mother. Your stepfather scratches his slightly balding head and replies: "I used to work as a taxi driver back then, drove your mother to places from time to time and we got along very well. Natasha is a strong and independant woman, raising you and Anya all by herself after she left your father. I didn''t know him very well, I''ve only met him a couple of times. All I know is that his name is Mikhail Kuznetsov, and that he moved to a different city soon after he and your mother divorced."'
 
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 end
@@ -262,9 +262,9 @@ act 'Ask about his work':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Stepfather Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'You asked about his stepfather''s work. Stepfather reached crunching joints. "Before Takser. Tired now. And dangerous and old. Bought Gazelle and now I''m on pickup truck breed products hucksters. Know yourself, I have two garages, one worth our Volga, Gazelle else I got you."'
+	'You ask your stepfather about his work. Your stepfather reaches for his aching joints, with a grimace on his face. "I used to be a taxi driver. It was hard work though, often working many hours a day, and it could be dangerous too. With some money we saved up I bought a Gazelle pickup truck, and now I drive that selling goods and making deliveries. As you know I have two garages; one for our Volga, and the other one for the Gazelle."'
 
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 end
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if motherKnowSpravka = 1 and hadsexwithfather=0:
 	cla
 	father = 0
 	motherKnowSpravka = 2
-	'Stepfather angrily walked up to you, "Oh damn, do not have time to get off the pot, and already someone has twisted pussy! Hem you bring in who will bring?"'
+	'Your stepfather angrily walked up to you: "Damnit <<$name>>, your mother told me you''re sexually active already! You''re still so young! I know I can''t stop you, but at least have some decency and don''t bring them to our house." His facial expression then softens, and he adds in a milder voice: "And please... be careful, okay?" You can tell your stepfather is very disappointed in you.'
 
 	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 	exit
@@ -282,24 +282,24 @@ end
 if alko > 0 and alkoday ! daystart:
 	alkoday = daystart
 	father -= 1
-	'Stepfather sniffed "<<$name>> from you smell alcohol, what is this mess? You''re too young to drink that!"'
+	'Your stepfather notices the sharp smell of booze on you and looks disappointed. "<<$name>>, you smell like alcohol, what are you getting yourself into? You''re too young to drink that!"'
 end
 
 if TorgVokzalTimes>0 and YouCanGar=0:
-	act 'To request permission to store items in the garage':
+	act 'Ask him permission to store things in his garage':
 		cls
 		minut+=5
 		gs'stat'
-		'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+		'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg" ></center>'
-		'You asked for permission to store his stepfather in the garage items.'
+		'You ask your stepfather if it is okay for you to store some things in his garage.'
 		if father+dom>=80 or TouchedByFather=1:
 			YouCanGar=1
-			'Stepfather hesitation still allow you to use his garage to store the goods for sale.'
+			'Your stepfather reluctantly agrees to let you store some things in his garage. You can hide some of your drugs there now.'
 		else
-			'Stepfather shook his head "No <<$nickname>>. I have, and so there is little room."'
+			'Your stepfather shook his head and said "Sorry <<$nickname>>. The garage already has more stuff in it than I would like, there''s simply no room."'
 		end
-	act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+	act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	
 	end
 end
@@ -308,18 +308,18 @@ act 'Ask him what he thinks of your outfit':
 	cls
 	minut+=rand(10,15)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'Stepfather sitting on the couch watching TV. You sat next to him on the sofa'
+	'Your stepfather is sitting on the couch, watching TV. You sat next to him on the sofa.'
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
-	act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+	act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 
 	''
 	if father<=40 or vnesh<=15:
-		'You asked stepfather evaluate your outfit. It, that-the unhappy muttering under his breath, You waved a hand: - Do not bother, <<$nickname>>, I`m busy.'
+		'You ask your stepfather what he thinks of your outfit. It looks like he''s not in the mood to indulge you, and impatiently waves you away with his hand: "Don''t bother me <<$nickname>>, I''m busy.'
 	else
-		'You, coquettishly smiling stepfather, We were asked to rate your outfit.'
+		'You move slightly closer towards your stepfather, flirtatiously smile at him and ask him what he thinks of your outfit.'
 		dynamic $din_father_hapri
 
 		if father>=40 and father<60:FatherMolest = RAND (1,8)
@@ -329,10 +329,10 @@ act 'Ask him what he thinks of your outfit':
 		if FatherMolest=1:
 			horny+=RAND(1,5)
 			gs 'stat'
-			'It, It seems, quite seriously reacted to your request, and asked for a little whirl, to look over your outfit from all sides. By approving nods you understand, the clothes he had to taste better, than he would like to show you.'
+			'He seems happy to oblige, and asks you to twirl your body so he can look at your outfit from all angles. The approving nod and hungry look in his eyes that follow, show that he would like to do more than just watch.'
 			if horny>=50 or TouchedByFather=1:
 				dynamic $din_vertetzopa
-				if fatherLust=1:'"- Oh..." - Stepfather did not expect this from you, but his involuntary exhalation and kindled eyes you know, he is, least, very pleasant.'
+				if fatherLust=1:'"Even though he did not expect this from you, you can tell by the spark in his eyes and his heavier breathing that he is, at least, pleasantly surprised by your request.'
 			end
 
 			if horny>=90 or TouchedByFather=1:
@@ -342,9 +342,9 @@ act 'Ask him what he thinks of your outfit':
 		end
 
 		if FatherMolest>1:
-			'You twirled on the spot, letting him see themselves from all sides, then go to the complacent view.'
+			'You twirl on the spot, showing off your outfit from all sides.'
 			cla
-			act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+			act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -355,11 +355,11 @@ act 'Watch TV together':
 	willpower+=RAND(5,10)
 	manna+=RAND(10,50)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
-	act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+	act 'Move away':gt $locM, $metkaM
 
 	if father<20:
 		dynamic $d_watchtv[1]
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ act 'Watch TV together':
 end
 
 if mother_go = 1 and hour = 16 and TouchedByFather = 1 and horny >= 50 or hadsexwithfather=1 and mother_go = 1 and hour = 16:
-	act 'Seduce':
+	act 'Seduce him':
 		if father<20:
 			dynamic $d_father[1]
 			exit
@@ -404,89 +404,89 @@ end
 if $clothingworntype = 'nude':
 	if tatvag>0 and Putsawtatvag=0 and tanga=0:
 		if father>=70:
-			'-First tattoo in a place you see. Obviously, not for himself did, - said stepfather, noticing the tattoo on the Mons pubis.'
+			'With your naked body on display, your pubic tattoo catches your stepfather''s eye. "Wow, that is one hard to miss tattoo. Obviously you didn''t get that one just for yourself", he says as he moves towards you and has a closer look.'
 			father += 1
 			Putsawtatvag=1
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 			exit
 		else
-			'"Fucking tattoo." Your stepfather obviously doesn''t like the tattoo you have on your pubis. '
+			'"Damn tattoo, I can''t believe you would soil your body like that." Your stepfather obviously doesn''t like the tattoo you have in your pubic area. '
 			father -= 1
 			Putsawtatvag=1
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 			exit
 		end
 	end
 	if pirsF>0 and PutsawpirsF=0:
 		if hadsexwithfather ! 1:
 			if father>=60:
-				'- Funny looks, - the stepfather liked your piercing nipples'
+				'"Hey, those look nice on you!" your stepfather says, nodding at your nipple piercings. He seems to like them.'
 				father += 3
 				PutsawpirsF=1
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				exit
 			else
-				'-What the hell do you, - stepfather points to your nipple piercing, - better get this stuff.'
+				'"Why would you do that... you should probably take those out", your stepfather says as he shakes his head, pointing at the piercings in your nipples.'
 				father -= 1
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				exit
 			end
 		else
 			if hour >= 18 and hour < 21:	
-				'-Looks nice, - stepfather indicates your pierced nipples'
+				'"Hey, those look nice on you!" your stepfather says, nodding at your nipple piercings. He seems to like them.'
 				father += 3
 				PutsawpirsF=1
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				exit
 			else
-				'-Very sexy, - stepfather barely noticeable taps on the rod in your nipples, calling you an involuntary groan.'
+				'"Wow, those are sexy!" your stepfather says, as he reaches out and touches your nipple piercings. You can''t help but let out an involuntary groan. He admires them for a moment, rubbing his fingers on your nipples and lightly tugging at them before he lets you go.'
 				father += 3
 				PutsawpirsF=1
 				horny+=10
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 				exit
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	'Stepfather with a smirk looking at you - "Nifiga! Blyadinka growing. Did you ever be ashamed,I-I`m still the man."'
+	'Your stepfather stares at your naked body, you can''t help but notice the admiring look on his face mixed with the torment of him knowing that he should know better. "<<$nickname>>, have you no shame? You shouldn''t be flaunting your naked body like that, you have no idea what kind of effect it has on men!"'
 	if hadsexwithfather ! 1:
 		if father>=40:
-			'Then he turned away added - "A body so Nitsche, I vdulby... but go get dressed mother home"'
+			'He reluctantly turned his face away from you, and added: "Your body does look fantastic... but you really should go put some clothes on, your mother is around the house somewhere. Who knows what she''ll do when she sees you walking around like this!"'
 			father += 1
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'bedrPar'
+			act 'Move away':gt 'bedrPar'
 			exit
 		else
-			'Then he turned away added - "Here is a whore ... Run go get dressed"'
+			'He decisively turns his face away from you, avoiding the looks of your naked body. "Don''t be such a whore <<$name>>, go put some clothes on right now."'
 			father -= 1
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'bedrPar'
+			act 'Move away':gt 'bedrPar'
 			exit
 		end
 	else
-		if mother_go = 0:$mother_go_text = 'but go get dressed mother home'
-			'Continuing to look at you, he added, - "Beauty.. <<$mother_go_text>>"'
+		if mother_go = 0:$mother_go_text = '"You really should go put some clothes on though, your mother is home."'
+			'His eyes never stop looking at your naked body, you can tell he''s very much impressed by your beauty as you walk around the room.<<$mother_go_text>>"'
 		if mother_go = 0:
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'bedrPar'
+			act 'Move away':gt 'bedrPar'
 			exit
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if hadsexwithfather =1 and pirsG=1 and PutsawpirsG=0 and (hour <= 18 or hour > 21):
-	act 'Show_ "intimate" piercing':
+	act 'Show off your labia piercing':
 		cls
 		gs'stat'
-		minut+=1
+		minut+=5
 		horny+=15
 		PutsawpirsG=1
 		if lobok > 2:
 			'<center><img src="images/picb/pirsGLob.jpg" ></center>'
-			'Coming closer, you demonstrate your pubic hair stepdad. To show the piercing comes out immediately, you have to push not long ago shaved thickets. When you do it, stepfather noticed the Shine between your legs and play some with decoration, thus otveshivaya vulgar compliments.'
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			'Moving closer to your stepfather, you tease him by showing him your somewhat hairy pussy. He doesn''t know you have a piercing in your labia yet, and you plan on showing it off today. As you absently rub your fingers through your bush, the glint of metal catches his eye and he pushes your hand away before you get a chance to tell him about it. "Well well, what do we have here?" he mutters, gently rubbing his fingers over the shiny new piercing. "<<$nickname>>, you are such a horny devil... I love it, we''re going to have a lot of fun with this." He spends the next few minutes rubbing and tugging on your new piercing, making lewd comments the whole time. After that he reluctantly lets you go, leaving you hornier than before.'
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		else
 			'<center><img src="images/picb/pirsG.jpg" ></center>'
-			'Coming closer, you demonstrate your pubic hair stepdad.He notices the Shine between your legs and play some with decoration, thus otveshivaya vulgar compliments.'
-			act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+			'Moving closer to your stepfather, you tease him by showing him your smooth pussy. He doesn''t know you have a piercing in your labia yet, and you plan on showing it off today. As you absently rub your fingers over your labia, the glint of metal catches his eye and he pushes your hand away before you get a chance to tell him about it. "Well well, what do we have here?" he mutters, gently rubbing his fingers over the shiny new piercing. "<<$nickname>>, you are such a horny devil... I love it, we''re going to have a lot of fun with this." He spends the next few minutes rubbing and tugging on your new piercing, making lewd comments the whole time. After that he reluctantly lets you go, leaving you hornier than before.'
+			act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -498,22 +498,22 @@ if $clothingworntype = 'nude': fatherwantssex=1
 if hadsexwithfather=1 and fatherwantssex=1 and mother_go = 1 and hour = 16 and father>60:
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
 	! WD: Fix old nude variable
-	if $clothingworntype = 'nude': '- Wow, I see you`ve prepared, I undressed for "Daddy"'
-	'Not having to say a word stepfather, you notice, he unbuttons his pants and pulls out a ready to fight a member: "Svetik, Rejoice old."'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
-	act 'Kneel down':dynamic $d_fatherblow_act[4]
+	if $clothingworntype = 'nude': 'You give your stepfather a lewd smile. "I figured my clothes would only get in the way Daddy, so I took them off for you."'
+	'Knowing words are not neccessary, your stepfather simply unbuttons his pants revealing his stiff cock: "<<$nickname>>, help your old man out will you?"'
+	act 'Change your mind and leave':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Get down on your knees':dynamic $d_fatherblow_act[4]
 end
 
 
 $fatherRep = {
-	if father<20:'You stepfather terrible scandal.'
-	if father>=20 and father<40:'You stepfather tensions.'
-	if father>=40 and father<60:'You have a normal relationship with his stepfather.'
-	if father>=60 and father<80:'You have a good relationship with his stepfather.'
-	if father>=80:'You have a great relationship with his stepfather.'
+	if father<20:'You and your stepfather can''t stand each other, and spend as little time in the same room as possible.'
+	if father>=20 and father<40:'You and your stepfather don''t get along very well.'
+	if father>=40 and father<60:'You have a normal relationship with your stepfather.'
+	if father>=60 and father<80:'You have a good relationship with your stepfather.'
+	if father>=80:'You have a great relationship with your stepfather.'
 	''
 }
 

+ 76 - 73
locations/fathersex

@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 
 !_____________________Ends _____________________________
 $d_fathercum_act[1]={
-act 'Stop in the ass':
+act 'Cum inside my ass':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	$boy='stepfather'
@@ -11,13 +11,13 @@ act 'Stop in the ass':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	horny=0
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim11.jpg"></center>'
-	'Stepfather growled, like a wounded bear, and with a loud groan, which began erupting-something in your rectum. After half a minute, you feel, as a member of his faded gently slipped out of your ass, pulling the warm sticky sperm...'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'"Cum inside me Daddy!" you gasp, as you feel your stepfather''s grip on your waist tighten. You slam your hips back against his a few more times and you feel his dick erupting inside your asshole. A few seconds later he pulls out, a trail of his cum slowly leaking from your stretched anus.'
+	act 'Get back on your feet':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fathercum_act[2]={
-act 'Cum on my ass':
+act 'Cum on my ass cheeks':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	$boy='stepfather'
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@ act 'Cum on my ass':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	horny=0
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Respecting your desire, stepfather takes the dick out of your anus and begins to erupt on your ass...'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'Respecting your wishes, your stepfather pulls his rod out of your sphincter and shoots his load on your ass cheeks, moaning loudly. After a few seconds he seems to come to his senses and slaps your ass playfully. "That was fun <<$nickname>>, we should do it again some time."'
+	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ act 'Cum all over my face':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	horny=0
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim12.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your request, all appearances, further intensified his excitement, so he began to finish back then, when you, jumping off his penis, just lay down on the bed. But despite this, most of the sperm still got your face...'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'Your request only excites him even further. After a few furious thrusts he pulls out, pushes you on your back and begins to jerk off over your face. You feel the warm strands of cum landing on your face and you stick out your tongue to catch some of it. He takes a second to admire his artwork and then goes to clean himself up, leaving you alone in the room.'
+	act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
@@ -57,31 +57,31 @@ act 'Cum together':
 	if horny >= 100:
 		horny = 0
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim4_1.gif"></center>'
-		'You are so excited, and stepfather so skillfully otrahal your ass, what you wanted to do it that-something nice.'
-		'Jumping out from under him, You flopped on his knees next to the bed, asking him to cum on your face. It seems the idea came to him in the shower, grab your dick, stepfather began nadrachivat, directing his unit into your pretty face. Long did not withstand such a picture, it became abundantly finish filling your attractive face his seed.The first jet of sperm served as the trigger for your orgasm, closing his eyes and enjoying the moment, you are catch-faced what else released from his stepfather dick.'
-		act 'Use your lips':
+		'You are so horny from the thorough assfucking your stepfather gave you, you want to orgasm together with him.'
+		'Scooting out from under him, you drop to your knees next to the bed and ask him to cum on your face. Your stepfather immediately reaches for his dick and finishes himself off, shooting his load all over your attractive face. When the first jet of sperm hits your face you orgasm too and you simply close your eyes and enjoy the moment, your body trembling all over.'
+		act 'Clean him up with your lips':
 			cls
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim4_2.gif"></center>'
-			'You could hardly restrain himself, We grabbed a member of his stepfather and began to drive them on their lips. Enjoying the feeling of moving on the mouth of the head.'
-			act 'Sucked dick':
+			'Overcome with desire, you rub his dick against your lips. "Let me clean that for you, Daddy" you say with a cute smile.'
+			act 'Use your mouth':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim4_3.gif"></center>'
-				'It was so nice that you affectionately began to suck the tip member, beloved stepfather, while looking him in the eye.Startled by your act, he said:"Svetun you straight in shock today".'
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				'You feel so good that you take the tip of his dick in your mouth, and affectionately begin to suck on it while looking him in the eye. The act of adoration renders your stepfather speechless. You give him a moment to recuperate while you gently suck on his cock. Eventually he manages to say: "Wow <<$nickname>>, that was amazing...", caressing your hair. He then gathers his things and goes to the bathroom to clean up, leaving you alone in the room.'
+				act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 			end
 		end
 	else
 		horny = 0
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim6.gif"></center>'
-		'You jump off with one jerk his cock and turn to face him, grabbing his cock his palm, the other at the same time running his crotch. While, when you nadrachivat stepfather hand, passing the tongue caressing his head, inside your belly is growing rapidly and almost sweet pressure of the first drops of warm jet of sperm hit you in the face, Flash blows strong orgasm -  you are finished at the same time.'
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		'You slide off his cock and quickly grab it with your hand to finish him off, the friction of your wrist against your folds being enough for you to orgasm as well. Right when you feel your own orgasm wash over you, you feel his jets of cum hitting your face, boobs and the rest of your body. After your orgasm, you fall down onto the bed next to him and need a minute to collect yourself. He playfully squeezes your ass cheeks and then goes to the bathroom to clean up, leaving you alone in the room.'
+		act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 	end
 end
 }
 $d_fathercum_act[5]={
-act 'Fall on the sofa':
+act 'Take his load on your face':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	$boy='stepfather'
@@ -90,13 +90,13 @@ act 'Fall on the sofa':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	horny=0
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim7.jpg"></center>'
-	'You jump off with one jerk his cock and turn to face him, grabbing his cock his palm, the other at the same time running his crotch. While, when you nadrachivat stepfather hand, passing the tongue caressing his head, inside your belly is growing rapidly and almost sweet pressure of the first drops of warm jet of sperm hit you in the face, Flash blows strong orgasm -  you are finished at the same time.'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'You slide off his cock and quickly grab it with your hand to finish him off. You place your other hand on your pussy and rub your clit furiously as you masturbate him. Right when you feel your own orgasm wash over you, jets of cum hit your face. After your orgasm, you fall down on the floor and need a bit to collect yourself. Your stepfather playfully squeezes your ass cheeks with a nod of approval and then goes to the bathroom to clean up, leaving you alone in the room.'
+	act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fathercum_act[6]={
-act 'Give him cum in her mouth':
+act 'He cums in your mouth':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	$boy='stepfather'
@@ -105,46 +105,48 @@ act 'Give him cum in her mouth':
 	gs 'cum_manage'
 	horny=0
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim15.jpg"></center>'
-	'He roughly fucks your mouth, while his penis begins to throb your mouth and spewed hot sperm.'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'As he roughly fucks your throat, you can tell he''s getting close. Suddenly, he pulls his dick out. "<<$nickname>> baby, stick out your tongue" he orders, and mere seconds later you feel jets of cum. Some land on your tongue, some end up in your mouth. You swallow it all willingly, licking your lips and gently sucking the tip of his dick for a while until he tells you to stop.'
+	act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 
 !_____________________Oral _____________________________
 $d_fatherblow_act[1]={
-act 'Suck':
+act 'Suck his cock':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	bj+=1
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim3.jpg"></center>'
-	'A little play with your anus, stepfather suddenly pulls away from you and, undressed, It sits in a chair, eyes pointing to his penis. Without waiting for the re-invitation, you go down on his knees in front of them and the one greedy traffic swallow most of his hot cock. Stepfather with a sigh of pleasure threw his head back, thus illegible advising you properly lubricate his penis with his saliva, because in a couple of minutes, he will be in your priest. You, understanding, it is in your best interest, diligently crawl moist lips on his hot flesh...'
+	'After he plays with your anus for a little while, your stepfather suddenly pulls away from you. He quickly takes off his clothes, sits back in his chair and points down to his cock without saying a word. Not needing any more encouragement, you get down on your knees in front of him and open your mouth, taking most of his cock down your throat in one swift movement. Your stepfather lets out a moan of pleasure and throws back his head. "<<$nickname>>, you have a minute to lubricate my dick properly. You know where it''s going to go next." Getting giddy with excitement you realize it''s in your best interest to do as he says and continue to suck his cock with increased vigor, spreading as much saliva on it as you can.'
 	dynamic $d_fathersex_act[1]
 	dynamic $d_fathersex_act[2]
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fatherblow_act[2]={
-act 'Suck':
+act 'Suck his dick':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	bj+=1
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim3.png" ></center>'
-	'Stepfather suddenly pulls away from you and, undressed, It sits in a chair, eyes pointing to his penis. Without waiting for the re-invitation, you go down on his knees in front of them and the one greedy traffic swallow most of his hot cock. Stepfather with a sigh of pleasure threw his head back, thus illegible advising you properly lubricate his penis with his saliva, because in a couple of minutes, he will be in your priest. You, understanding, it is in your best interest, diligently crawl moist lips on his hot flesh...'
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	'Your stepfather suddenly pulls away from you. He quickly takes off his clothes, sits back in his chair and points down to his cock without saying a word. Not needing any more encouragement, you get down on your knees in front of him and open your mouth, taking most of his cock down your throat in one swift movement. Your stepfather lets out a moan of pleasure and throws back his head. "<<$nickname>>, you have a minute to lubricate my dick properly, it''s going in your ass after that." Getting giddy with excitement you realize it''s in your best interest to do as he says and continue to suck his cock with increased vigor, spreading as much saliva on it as you can.'
+	dynamic $d_fathersex_act[1]
+	dynamic $d_fathersex_act[2]
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fatherblow_act[3]={
-act 'Continue to suck':
+act 'Deepthroat him':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	bj+=1
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim14.jpg"></center>'
-	'Enthusiastically and with great relish, you suck hot and hard cock stepfather. Every time he penetrates deeper and deeper into your throat, until you can not take it completely. With uterine roar stepfather brutally grabs you by the hair and skewer your head on his penis so much, you rest against his nose pubis.'
+	'You enthusiastically suck your stepfather''s hard cock. He pushes you to your limits, making you take a bit more of it down your throat with every thrust, all the while telling you what a great little cocksucker you are. You skillfully take most of it down your throat but struggle a bit with the last inch, and after a while he loses his patience. Grabbing you by the hair he lets out a loud groan and pulls your face into his groin, until you feel his balls on your chin and his pubic hair itching your nose. Realizing you can take it, he begins to move his hips and fucks your throat. He controls the pace at first, but after a while he releases his grip on your hair and lets you take over.'
 	dynamic $d_fathercum_act[6]
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
@@ -153,153 +155,154 @@ cls
 gs 'stat'
 bj+=1
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim3.jpg"></center>'
-'Without waiting for the re-invitation, you go down on his knees in front of them and the one greedy traffic swallow most of his hot cock. You diligently crawl moist lips on his hot flesh, tongue licking and toying with the head.'
+'Not needing any more encouragement, you get down on your knees in front of him and start to lick the tip of his cock as you look him in the eyes. "Does this make you feel good, Daddy?" you ask between licks. Then, deciding you have teased him enough, you take his dick in your mouth and diligently start to suck.'
 dynamic $d_fathersex_act[1]
 dynamic $d_fathersex_act[2]
 dynamic $d_fatherblow_act[3]
-act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 }
 !_____________________Bend ___________________________
-!There cork
+!butt plug
 $d_fatherbend_act[1]={
 cls
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim1.jpg"></center>'
-'Stepfather quietly hums, seeing the butt plug in your ass: -  Oh, <<$nickname>>, Well, you slag, however... - You feel, how is he, his fingers grasping the plug, It begins to move in all directions, sometimes trying to pull. But she sits tight, besides posture prevents you to relax and each time your anus involuntarily shrinks, without letting it slip.'
+'Your stepfather quietly mutters something to himself when he sees the butt plug in your ass: "Oh <<$nickname>>, you''re such a good little slut." His fingers grasp the plug''s base, and you can feel him shifting it around in your body, often tugging at it but not quite hard enough to make it come out. Besides: it would be difficult to relax your ass enough to take it out anyway, in your current position. You look back at him and say: "I know what you like, Daddy. I figured I would get myself ready for you."'
 if hadsexwithfather=0:
 	hadsexwithfather=1
 	guy+=1
 end
 dynamic $d_fathergotobedroom_act[1]
-act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 }
-!No cork
+!No butt plug
 $d_fatherbend_act[2]={
 cls
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim2.jpg"></center>'
-'Stepfather chuckles appreciatively, when you bend down forward and quick deft movement lower a little with her panties, providing him with a wonderful view of your bare ass. After a moment, you feel on your anus his rough calloused finger, which gently scratch your skin, but you even like it.'
+'Your stepfather chuckles appreciatively when you bend over and pull down your panties in one swift movement, providing him with a wonderful view of your bare ass. Not needing any more encouragement he reaches out for you immediately, going straight for your puckered sphincter. The rough callouses on his hand scratch your skin a bit as he begins rub his finger against your ass in earnest, but in a way it actually feels kind of nice.'
 if hadsexwithfather=0:
 	hadsexwithfather=1
 	guy+=1
 end
 dynamic $d_fatherblow_act[1]
-act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 }
-!No traffic jams and underwear
+!No inhibiting clothing or underwear
 $d_fatherbend_act[3]={
 cls
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim2_1.gif"></center>'
-'Stepfather chuckles appreciatively, when you bend down forward, raising the skirt, providing him with a wonderful view of your bare crotch.'
-'- Wow, <<$nickname>>, you''re not wearing any panties? - Not having come up, you feel that the answer to his anus his rough calloused finger, which gently scratch your skin, but you even like it.'
+'Your stepfather chuckles appreciatively when you bend over and pull up your skirt, revealing your bare ass. "Wow <<$nickname>>, you''re not wearing any panties?"'
+'Not needing any more encouragement he reaches out for you immediately, going straight for your puckered sphincter. The rough callouses on his hand scratch your skin a bit as he begins to rub his finger against your ass in earnest, but in a way it actually feels kind of nice.'
 if hadsexwithfather=0:
 	hadsexwithfather=1
 	guy+=1
 end
 dynamic $d_fatherblow_act[1]
-act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 }
 !_____________________OTHER ___________________________
 $d_fathergotobedroom_act[1]={
-act 'Going into the bedroom':
+act 'Go to your parents'' bedroom with him':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	! WD: Correct Image path ~ 'fahterim3.jpg' to 'fatherim3.png'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim3.png" ></center>'
-	'There you climb up on the bed and get down on all fours, carefully ottopyrivaya ass. The stepfather of a pretty smiling and eagerly resumes the game with a stopper, moving it in all directions, trying to pull. You tired of it too, and you decide to help him...'
+	'You hop on the bed and drop to your hands and knees there, sticking your ass out as much as you can. Your stepfather smiles eagerly and continues where he left off: playing with your butt plug, pushing and pulling it in all directions. After a while constant teasing, stretching and tugging, you smile and look at him: "Daddy, maybe there is something else you could put in its place?"'
 	dynamic $d_fatherother_act[2]
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fatherother_act[2]={
-act 'Retch':
+act 'Let him remove the plug and show him your gape':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim9.jpg"></center>'
-	'- Ohh, <<$nickname>>, Well, there is now a hole when you plug! - produces unexpected stepfather after, like a cork with a loud pop leaves your rectum. You densely blush these words, and his stepfather had forgotten about them, Meanwhile begins to get a job in your ass.'
+	'Your stepfather is very much on board with this idea, and his tugging on the plug increases. A few seconds later it comes out with a loud pop, and you feel the cool air of the room filling your rectum. Your stepfather is equally enthusiastic and intimidated by the size of your gape: "Wow <<$nickname>>! That is one hugely stretched hole... how did you even do that?"'
+	'Knowing he is an ass man and probably has seen more than a few stretched sphincters in his days, you feel an odd sense of accomplishment. "I just want to make you feel good, Daddy..." you mutter, and he nods. "I know you do baby, and I know you will."'
+	'He quickly takes off his clothes and scoots down next to you, his erect dick poking up like a flag mast. "Go on <<$nickname>>, make Daddy feel good."'
 	dynamic $d_fatherother_act[3]
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 $d_fatherother_act[3]={
-act 'Help':
+act 'Crawl on top of him':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	anus+=2
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your excitement is so great, that you are no longer able to wait for his unhurried steps, even though the blush on your face, and therefore decide to take matters into their own hands. As soon as the head of his cock began to enter into your anus, how are you, hands as much as possible pushing the buttocks, jerk fed back, nasazhivayas ass all the way to the coveted paternal member. Light pain pierces the ring anus, but because you immediately leaned forward slightly, feeling, it slides on the damp member.'
-	'Stepfather, It seems, also I decided to give all the initiative in your hands, and therefore I am now silently watched, how are you, increasing the tempo, glides on his ass hard erection. Once you plug it was pretty well, but because you are not particularly ceremonious - half a minute already being jumped on a member of his stepfather, plunging it into his supple flesh down to the eggs. But for a long time at a pace aging stepfather could not stand, and soon haltingly told you, that here-Here finish...'
+	'You''re so excited that you immediately get on top of him and gently gyrate your hips against his dick. You spit some saliva onto your fingers before reaching back and rubbing it over his rod. Then you rub his dick against your fairly loose asshole. His dick is big though. With a loud moan you slowly lower yourself onto his erect cock, taking about half of it in before pausing. "Just taking a second to get used to the size Daddy, your dick is too big for me to just slam down on right away," you apologize. "That''s okay sweetie, take your time", he replies, still not believing what''s happening. You gently bob your ass a bit, stimulating his dick while you mentally prepare yourself to take the rest in.'
+	'Your stepfather was not expecting this at all, when he gave you the initiative. Nevertheless, he is delighted by your eagerness to please him and he puts his hands behind his head, content to let you do all the work. Not wanting to disappoint him you continue, and lower yourself onto his cock further and further until you feel his balls resting against your ass cheeks. "One more break, Daddy... it just feels so good", you whisper. He has his eyes closed by now, fully focused on the pleasure you''re giving him. After a few seconds you decide you''re ready and soon the room is filled with the sound of your butt cheeks enthusiastically slapping against his thighs, combined with your high-pitched moans. Before too long your stepfather puts his hands on your hips trying to slow you down, saying he''s ready to cum.'
 	dynamic $d_fathercum_act[1]
 	dynamic $d_fathercum_act[2]
 	dynamic $d_fathercum_act[3]
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Stop and move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 end
 }
 !_____________________OTHER(2)___________________________
 $d_fathersex_act[1]={
-act 'On the bed':
+act 'Follow him to your parents'' bedroom':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	anus+=2
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim4.jpg"></center>'
-	'But as soon as you enter into the taste, stepfather gently, but surely he removes his hands on your head and its members with a loud slap on the ass pushes you toward the door. You squeal with risible skipping follow in the parents` bedroom, where overclocking thumps on his stomach on the bed. Stepfather appears right for you and unceremoniously immediately climbs up on you.'
-	'You, knowing, you have to, as much as possible throws up his hands and buttocks in an instant feel for his anus wet saliva from your penis - she slowly, but firmly pressed into the flesh of your elastic and after a while just dive into your rectum. From this your anus involuntarily shrinks, tightly clasping his father`s penis at the base of the head, but then you are able to concentrate and relax, then slowly begins to move stepfather inside.'
-	'You hurt a bit, but you know, that very soon this feeling will pass, and therefore, his teeth, meekly suffer. Meanwhile, traffic stepfather becoming faster and with a flourish and a minute later he is already on the entire length of the penis is forced into your rectum, adding to the dimensional bed creaking loud slapping flesh contacting. You feel, his eggs flop on your vagina, enhancing lust and bringing you pleasure.'
+	'Just as you were getting into the groove of things, your stepfather gently but surely moves your head away from his groin and pulls you up by the shoulder. He gives you a playful slap on the ass and says "Alright <<$nickname>>, time''s up." You meekly nod. He takes you to their bedroom and unceremoniously throws you face-down onto the bed, immediately mounting you.'
+	'You know what he wants, and spread your ass cheeks with your hands to allow him easier access. You quietly thank yourself for doing such a good job lubing him up when you feel his stiff cock press hard against your sphincter, working its way in. He lets you get used to the feeling at first, but gets impatient after a few seconds and roughly shoves the rest of his dick in. You scream and your asshole unvoluntarily tightens when he does, provoking a moan from him. "You like this, don''t you <<$nickname>>? You like it when I put my dick in your ass, I can feel your squeezing. Don''t worry baby, I''ll make you feel real good", he whispers into your ear as he begins to fuck your ass with long, slow thrusts.'
+	'His rougher than expected entry hurts a bit at first, but you know that feeling will soon pass. "I love it, Daddy. Just go slow for a moment please, you''re so big", you whisper. Your stepfather grunts and takes pity on you, slowing down his thrusting for a little while. You bite down on the pillow and meekly suffer through it, and soon enough the pain starts to dissipate. "You okay sweetie?" he asks with some concern in his voice, noticing you''re having a rough time with it. When you nod he tests you, slowly increasing the power in his thrusts, and really starts to pound your asshole when he doesn''t notice any objections from you. Within seconds the room is filled with the sounds of flesh slapping against flesh, your high-pitched cries and his low groans. His balls do a nice job of stimulating your pussy as he roughly fucks you on the bed, making you feel all tingly on the inside.'
 	set fathercum = rand(1,2)
 	if fathercum = 1:
 		$boy='stepfather'
 		sexpartkno = 1
 		spafinloc = 12
 		gs 'cum_manage'
-		'Frictions stepfather getting faster, and in a moment you feel, his penis inside you begins to shrink and convulsive throb, and a moment in your ass spreads pleasant warmth - He finished.'
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		'The thrusting of your stepfather becomes more erratic and intense and suddenly you feel him bucking against you, his dick throbbing heavily inside you. You feel a pleasant warmth spreading. When he moves away from you and crashes down next to you on the bed, he tells you what a great buttslut you are with a satisfied grin on his face.'
+		act 'Wink and get off the bed':gt $loc, $metka
 	else
-		'Frictions stepfather gets faster and soon he tells you, now finish.'
+		'From his increasingly intense and erratic thrusts, you can tell your stepfather is about to finish.'
 		dynamic $d_fathercum_act[4]
 	end
 end
 }
 $d_fathersex_act[2]={
-act 'Stay':
+act 'Give him a hard time':
 	cls
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	anus+=2
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim5_1.jpeg" ></center>'
-	'As soon as you enter into the taste, stepfather gently, but surely he removes his hands on your head and its members with a loud slap on the ass pushes you toward the door. You oykaete bit and decide to rebel, and therefore, ignoring the obvious desire stepfather, chillin halfway and go to the floor, sticking out his ass and parted buns wrapped around their hands, invite his stepfather fuck your ass.'
-	act 'Moan':
+	'Just as you were getting into the groove of things, your stepfather gently but surely moves your head away from his groin and pulls you up by the shoulder. He gives you a playful slap on the ass and says "Alright <<$nickname>>, time''s up." You meekly nod and pretend you''ll follow him, but decide to give him a hard time and just drop on all fours half-way down the hallway. You stick your ass out as high as you can and spread your ass cheeks with your hands. "Come and get it, Daddy", you tell him in a sultry voice, refusing to move another step.'
+	act 'Get fucked':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim5.gif"></center>'
-		'Stepfather mutters that-something under his breath, but accepts your desire to have sex here.'
-		'Through its own feet apart you see, he waddled closer to you, and a moment later his anus to feel his rough finger -  it is a circular motion massaging your ring, the tip of the nail is sometimes penetrating inside. You hear the characteristic spit and you become a little tickled - stepfather spat on your ass, using saliva instead of the grease. His finger gets you in and starts to simulate a sexual act. It hurts no, just a little frustrating.'
-		'After playing a little more, stepfather finally puts the head of his penis with your anus and slowly push. You, trying to facilitate his process, relax the ass and in a moment you know, his cock is already in you. Stepfather in no hurry to move, afraid to hurt you, so you are slowly stick her ass on his cock almost all the way, after which he osmelevaet - It begins to have you in the rectum, every moment increasing the tempo.'
+		'Even though it was not part of his plan, your stepfather just grins and gives your exposed ass a hard slap. "Alright <<$nickname>>, if that''s the way you want to play it...".'
+		'You see him taking position behind you when you look between your legs, and within seconds you have of his two fingers thrusted deep into your ass. Lucky for you, he had the decency to lubricate them first so it doesn''t hurt, even though it does feel a bit uncomfortable at first. He then spits on your asshole a few times and you feel the saliva settling on it. "I''m not sure you did a good enough job for what I''m about to do, <<$nickname>>... consider this a bonus", he says before rubbing his hard rod against your anus, coating it with the mixture of his and your saliva.'
+		'Despite his tough talk, your stepfather really does try to make this an enjoyable experience for you too. After playing with your asshole a little longer, he puts the head of his penis against your sphincter. Trying to accommodate him, you relax your anus as much as possible, and before you know it he''s all the way inside you. Your stepfather is in no rush, and slowly gyrates his hips a bit as he gives you time to get used to the size of his dick. Once he realizes you''re okay, he focuses more on his own pleasure and increases the tempo more and more until he is roughly pounding you. You cast a slightly concerned look at the doorway, and second guess your decision to tease him in the hallway for a second, but then your arousal takes over and you focus on the pleasurable feelings his rough thrusting provides.'
 		fathercum = rand(1,2)
 		if fathercum = 1:
 			$boy='stepfather'
 			sexpartkno = 1
 			spafinloc = 12
 			gs 'cum_manage'
-			'By focusing on the sensations, You suddenly feel, like where-deep inside your rectum that spreads-something warm - turns, You will not notice, stepfather approached orgasm and now finished you right inside. You now have nothing left, how to suffer in silence...'
-			act 'Show ass':
+			'As your mind tries to process all the sensations, you suddenly feel an intense warmth spreading inside you. Your stepfather pulls out his dick, and a slow trail of his cum slowly drips out of you and onto the carpet. Apparently the feelings of your tight ass milking his cock were too much for him to be able to hold out any longer. You slightly regret not getting to orgasm yourself, but then realize your teasing is what got him into this riled up state in the first place, and can''t really blame him. You would feel awkward asking him to finish you off after he has already had his fun, and just suffer in silence. He gets back up on his feet and looks down at your sprawled position on the floor. Your legs are all wobbly when you try to stand up and he helps you, but then has another request in return: "Show me your asshole, <<$nickname>>."'
+			act 'You show him your used anus':
 				cls
 				minut += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father/fatherim5_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Hand in the ass you breed apart from exposing their holes. Stepfather fascinated looking at how out of your ass follows his sperm.'
-				'- <<$nickname>>, You`re my little slut.- He says, hoarsely.'
-				act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+				'Spreading your ass cheeks with your hands, you give him a nice view of his load in your sphincter. Your stepfather is fascinated and watches his cum slowly drip down, giving your ass a few more slaps for good measure. "Very nice, <<$nickname>>... you can be my little slut any time you like", he chuckles as he goes to the bathroom to quickly clean up, leaving you to yourself.'
+				act 'Stand up':gt $loc, $metka
 			end
 		else
-			'Frictions stepfather gets faster and soon he tells you, now finish.'
+			'From his increasingly intense and erratic thrusts, you can tell your stepfather is about to finish.'
 			dynamic $d_fathercum_act[5]
 		end
 	end

+ 30 - 31
locations/garfather

@@ -7,26 +7,26 @@ gs 'dinfather'
 $metkaM = $ARGS[0]
 $locM = $CURLOC
 
-'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-'Your stepfather is a grey and slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years. Your mother divorced your father and married Vladimir Mikhailovich when you were one year. You do not remember your real father on account of never having seen him.'
+'Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years old. Your mother divorced your biological father and married Vladimir when you were only one year old. You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
 
 dynamic $fatherRep
-act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 act 'Chat':
 	cls
 	minut+=rand(10,15)
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
 	'Your stepfather is sitting on a chair, twirling some kind of dirty car part in his hands. You sit down next to him on a nearby chair.'
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
 	if hour>=20 and hour<21:
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 	else
-		act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+		act 'Continue':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	end
 
 	if father<20:
@@ -54,9 +54,9 @@ act 'Help':
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
 	if hour>=20 and hour<21:
-		act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+		act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 	else
-		act '<B>Further</B>':gt $locM, $metkaM
+		act 'Continue':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	end
 
 	if father<20:
@@ -74,14 +74,14 @@ act 'Help':
 end
 if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 
-	act 'Seduce':
+	act 'Seduce your stepfather':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/father/gar/father.gar.pre<<rand(0,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		'You walk up to the Gazelle and pick up a sponge. Bending slightly forwards, you begin washing the car and simultaneously putting your ass on display for your stepfather.'
 		'"- Oh..." - Stepfather did not expect this from you, but his involuntary exhalation and kindled eyes tell you he is enjoying it very much.'
 		'Your stepfather walks up behind you and puts his hands on your ass. He leisurely begins to knead your butt.'
-		act 'On knees':
+		act 'Get down on your knees':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			horny+=5
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/bimbo/bimbo.knees<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 			'You fall on your knees in front of your stepfather and place the palm of your hand on his crotch. You can feel his erection through the fabric of his jeans, and begin to caress him. After a while you unzip his pants and pull out his cock, taking a firm grasp on it with one hand.'
-			act 'In the mouth':
+			act 'Take his dick in your mouth':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -98,8 +98,8 @@ if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 				minut+=5
 				'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/father/gar/father.gar.0,<<rand(0,4)>>.jpg"></center>'
 				'Your stepfather opens the passenger side door of the Gazelle, and you sit down on the seat. He places a hand on your head and guides his dick towards your mouth.'
-				'You leisurely aspirated your stepfather, caress his balls, and again absorbs his cock in your mouth. Soon the cock began to throb, giving signs of an early end.'
-				act 'Suck and swallow sperm':
+				'You leisurely lick your stepfather''s dick, caress his balls, and then take his cock in your mouth. Soon the cock began to throb, giving signs of an early end.'
+				act 'Suck him off and swallow his sperm':
 					cls
 					if father<100:father+=2
 					fatherSuck+=1
@@ -113,11 +113,11 @@ if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 					! WD: Correct Image path ~ 'СЃ0,' to 'с0,' Cyrillic Unicode broke during translation
 					'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/с0,<<rand(0,10)>>.gif"></center>'
 
-					'You continue to suck your stepfathers dick as it continues throbbing. Suddenly, he arches his back and you feel cum begin to pour into your mouth. Although you try your best, the amount of cum flowing from your stepfathers dick is simply too much for you, and some of it instead flows out of your mouth and down your chin. Soon <<$boy>> finishes and you pull his cock out of your sperm-smelling mouth. You can feel the taste of sperm in your mouth, and your <<$liptalk3>> is wet with cum.'
-					act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'gargazel'
+					'You continue to suck your stepfather''s dick as it continues throbbing. Suddenly, he arches his back and you feel cum begin to pour into your mouth. Although you try your best, the amount of cum flowing from your stepfathers dick is simply too much for you, and some of it instead flows out of your mouth and down your chin. Soon your <<$boy>> finishes and you pull his cock out of your sperm-smelling mouth. You can feel the taste of sperm in your mouth, and your <<$liptalk3>> are wet with cum.'
+					act 'Move away':gt 'gargazel'
 				end
 
-				act 'Remove from the mouth':
+				act 'Take his load on your face':
 					cls
 					if father<100:father+=2
 					fatherSuck+=1
@@ -131,23 +131,23 @@ if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 					! WD: Correct Image path ~ 'С„0,' to 'ф0,' Cyrillic Unicode broke during translation
 					if rand1<49:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/ф0,<<rand(0,9)>>.jpg"></center>'
 					if rand1=>50:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/ф0,<<rand(0,9)>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You stop sucking on your stepfathers cock just as he reaches orgasm, and a jet of sperm immediately hits you in the face. You squeeze your eyes shut for fear of getting cum in your eyes and feel as another jet of hot sperm lands on your face.'
-					act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'gargazel'
+					'You stop sucking on your stepfather''s cock just as he reaches orgasm, and a jet of sperm immediately hits you in the face. You squeeze your eyes shut for fear of getting cum in your eyes and feel another jet of hot sperm land on your face.'
+					act 'Move away':gt 'gargazel'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'Bend over':
+			act 'Bend over, leaning against the Gazelle':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				minut+=20
 				horny+=20
 				dick=17
-				$boy='Stepfather'
+				$boy='stepfather'
 				'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/father/gar/father.gar.1,<<rand(0,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your stepfather grabs you and pulls you up from your knees, turning you to face the Gazelle. You plant your hands on the car, and arch your back to give him easier access to your ass and pussy. After, he begins carressing your pussy.'
+				'Your stepfather grabs you and pulls you up from your knees, turning you to face the Gazelle. You plant your hands on the car, and arch your back to give him easier access to your ass and pussy. Once you''re in position, he begins caressing your pussy and then slams his dick in.'
 				dynamic $sexstart
 				dynamic $sexstart2
-				act 'Further':
+				act 'Continue':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -157,23 +157,22 @@ if horny>50 and hadsexwithfather=1:
 					FatherSex += 1
 					'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/father/gar/father.gar.cum1,0.jpg"></center>'
 					if protect = 0:
-						'At last, you feel your stepfathers cock begin to throb within you. Your stepfather takes a few shocks, and then bore down on you all over, filling your pussy with his sperm.'
+						'After a thorough fucking, you feel your stepfather''s cock begin to throb within you. Your stepfather''s body spasms, his cock filling your pussy with his sperm.'
 						gs 'cum_manage'
-						if pillcon <= 0 and ovulate > 0: 
+						if pillcon <= 0 and ovulate > 0:
 							manna -= 15
 							willpower -= 15
 							'Hell, you could get pregnant, you think in horror.'
 						end
 					else
-						'At last, you feel your stepfathers cock begin to throb within you. Your stepfather takes a few shocks, and then bore down on you all over, filling the condom with his sperm.'
+						'After a thorough fucking, you feel your stepfather''s cock begin to throb within you. Your stepfather''s body spasms, his cock filling the condom with his sperm.'
 						sexcontra = 3
 						gs 'cum_manage'
 					end
 					horand = RAND(1,100)
-					if horand > horny:horny = horny + 10 & 'You were not satisfied'
+					if horand > horny:horny = horny + 10 & 'You were not satisfied and still feel horny.'
 					if horand <= horny:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You feel a pleasant warmth spread from your pussy, covering your entire body as you feel yourself nearing orgasm. Suddenly, your body begins to convulse and your legs lose their strength as an intense feeling of pleasure fills you. You fall down on your knees, moaning in ecstacy as your orgasm overtakes you.'
-
-					act '<B>Move away</B>':gt 'gargazel'
+					act 'Move away':gt 'gargazel'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -185,12 +184,12 @@ if fatherdrunk=1:
 	cls
 	minut+=60
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Stepfather Vladimir Skryabin</font></B></center>'
+	'<center><B><font color=maroon>Your stepfather, Vladimir Mikhailovich Scriabin</font></B></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/father.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your stepfather is a grey and slightly flabby man working as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years. Your mother divorced your father and married Vladimir Mikhailovich when you were one year. You do not remember your real father on account of never having seen him.'
+	'Your stepfather is a greying, slightly flabby man who works as a truck driver. He is <<fatherAge>> years old. Your mother divorced your biological father and married Vladimir when you were only one year old. You''ve never seen your biological father since their divorce, and as such you have no real memory of him.'
 
 	dynamic $fatherRep
-	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt $loc, $metka
+	act 'Move away':gt $loc, $metka
 
 	if father<20:
 		dynamic $d_fatherdrunk[1]

+ 15 - 15
locations/gargazel

@@ -9,56 +9,56 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if father_go = 1 and hour >= 16 and hour < 21:
 	'<center><img src="images/pic/gargazel.jpg"></center>'
-	'Large garage in which your stepfather keeps his beloved car, a Gazelle.'
+	'A large garage that belongs to your stepfather. He spends time in there working on his beloved Gazelle pickup truck whenever he can in the late afternoons and evenings. You can tell the door is not locked, he''s probably in there now.'
 else
 	'<center><img src="images/pic/gargazel_empty.jpg"></center>'
-	'Large garage in which your stepfather keeps his beloved car, a Gazelle. Right now the garage is closed and locked with a huge padlock.'
+	'A large garage that belongs to your stepfather. He spends time in there working on his beloved Gazelle pickup truck whenever he can in the late afternoons and evenings. Right now the garage is closed, and the door is locked with a large padlock.'
 end
 
-act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'garmassiv'
+act 'Leave the garage':minut += 5 & gt 'garmassiv'
 
 if father_go = 1 and hour >= 16 and hour < 20:
-	'Right now your <a href="exec:GT ''garfather''">stepfather</a> is in the garage, doing car repairs.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:GT ''garfather''">stepfather</a> is in the garage, working on his Gazelle pickup truck.'
 end
 
 if father_go=1 and hour>=20 and hour<21:
-	'Right now your <a href="exec:GT ''garfather''">stepfather and Uncle Misha</a> is in the garage, drinking vodka.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:GT ''garfather''">stepfather and uncle Misha</a> are in the garage, drinking vodka.'
 	set fatherdrunk=1
 end
 
 if YouCanGar > 0:
-	'In the garage there is stored <<GarTorgItem>> One unit of product, with a total capacity 100 One_unit. To, that would be able to sell the product out of the garage, you have to transfer it to your room.'
+	'You have stored <<GarTorgItem>> grams of drugs in the garage currently. Not wanting your stepfather to find it, you don''t think you can get away with storing more than 100 grams in various hiding places in the garage without him finding out. The garage is not very easily accessible; if you want to sell the drugs, you will have to bring it back home first.'
 
 	if tovarL >= 30:
-		'Home and so all culled product, transfer nowhere.'
+		'You already have too much stored at home and do not have any more hiding spots. You can''t bring home more, someone might find it.'
 	elseif tovarL < 30:
 		perenGarTov = 30-tovarL
-		'I could move out of the garage <<perenGarTov>> One unit of the goods in the room.'
+		'You can bring <<perenGarTov>> grams home and hide it somewhere there.'
 
 		if GarTorgItem > 0:
 			if GarTorgItem >= perenGarTov:
-				act 'move <<perenGarTov>> One unit of product':
+				act 'Move <<perenGarTov>> grams to your home':
 					cls
 					minut += 60
 					tovarL += perenGarTov
 					GarTorgItem -= perenGarTov
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You hour dealt with the goods, and transferred it from the garage to the apartment.'
+					'You spend an hour gathering your drugs from various hiding spots, bringing it home and hiding it there.'
 
-					act 'further':gt $curloc
+					act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 
 			if GarTorgItem < perenGarTov:
-				act 'move <<GarTorgItem>> One unit of product':
+				act 'Collect <<GarTorgItem>> grams to take with you':
 					cls
-					minut += 60
+					minut += 30
 					tovarL += GarTorgItem
 					GarTorgItem = 0
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You hour dealt with the goods, and transferred it from the garage to the apartment.'
+					'You spend half an hour gathering your drugs from various hiding spots.'
 
-					act 'further':gt $curloc
+					act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 		end

+ 3 - 3
locations/garmassiv

@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'time'
 '<center><h4>Garage array</h4></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/pic/garmassiv.jpg"></center>'
-'A large area is built up offsuit garages where motorists keep their cars.'
+'A large area near the edge of Pavlovski filled with garages. The weather in Pavlovski can be brutal especially in the winter, so people who own a car often have a garage to put it away safely.'
 
-if StoryLine = 1:'In one of the garages located <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''gargazel''">garage your stepfather</a>'
+if StoryLine = 1:'Your <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''gargazel''">stepfather''s garage</a> is around here somewhere.'
 
-act 'Go into town':minut += 5 & gt 'gorodok'
+act 'Go back to town':minut += 5 & gt 'gorodok'
 
 --- garmassiv ---------------------------------
 

+ 5 - 5
locations/kuhrPar

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 'The kitchen is not very impressive, but it has everything your family needs. Since everyone has the habit of eating at different times, Mom usually pre-cooks the meals and stores them in the fridge. Of course, you could also just have a snack if you''re not that hungry.'
 gs 'family'
 
-act 'Eat (0:30)':
+act 'Eat a meal (0:30)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -91,9 +91,9 @@ act 'Have a snack (0:15)':
 	act 'Get up from the table':gt $locM, $metkaM
 end
 
-act 'Drink':
+act 'Have a cup of tea (0:05)':
 	cls
-
+	minut += 5
 	if water >= 20:
 		'You don''t need any more tea.'
 	else
@@ -197,7 +197,7 @@ if lekarstvo > 0:
 			'<center><img src="images/inBed/lekr<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 			'You swallow the pill, and shortly after you feel a bit better.'
 
-			act 'Move away':gt $curloc
+			act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ if vitamin > 0:
 
 			'You take some vitamins to stay healthy.'
 
-			act 'Move away':gt $curloc
+			act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 37 - 33
locations/misha

@@ -1,5 +1,4 @@
 # misha
-
 if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	cla
 	*clr
@@ -8,15 +7,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 	BColor = RGB(255,255,255)
 	LColor = RGB(106,90,205)
 	'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha.pre0,<<rand(0,1)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You enter Uncle Mishas apartment. He closes the door behind you, and takes out his penis. Resignedly you walk over to his bed and sit down.'
-	'"Come on girl, we both know you want to service it.'
-	act 'Suck':
+	'You enter Uncle Misha''s apartment. He lets you in and you take a seat, as he glances down the hallway once more to see if anyone saw you enter. Content that the hallway is empty, he closes the door behind him. He then immediately reaches for his pants and pulls out his large cock with a lewd grin on his face.'
+	'Uncle Misha approaches you, his cock bobbing up and down. Noticing your reluctance he puts his hand below your chin and makes you look him in the eye: "Come on girl, we both know why you''re here. You want to service my hard cock. Get to it."'
+	act 'Take his dick in your mouth':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha0,<<rand(0,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take uncles'' penis in your mouth and begin to move your head. A few subtle tweeks of your mouth and strokes of your tongue and you feel an odd sense of pride as his stiffness throbs at your throat.'
-		act 'Further':
+		'Even though the size of his large cock intimidates you a little, you nod. He''s right... you wouldn''t have been here if this wasn''t what you wanted. Right?'
+		'You take your uncle''s penis in your hand, giving it a few short tugs. A bead of precum forms on the head of his dick, and you take that as your cue to really get involved. You move your head closer to his penis and close your lips around it, licking the dollop of precum off. It actually tastes kind of nice. You can feel his dick stiffen further in your mouth, and the thought of you being responsible for this gives you an odd sense of accomplishment.'
+		act 'Suck him off':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			dmishaday = daystart
@@ -31,32 +31,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 			gs 'stat'
 			if rand1<=60:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha1,<<rand(0,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if rand1>60:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha1,<<rand(0,3)>>.gif"></center>'
-			'His eyes now filled with lust, Uncle Misha informs you, "Okay, girl, now for the main course."'
+			'He''s content just letting you suck him off for a bit, especially when you gather your courage and start to apply your skills. After a while he pulls back though, saying: "Alright <<$nickname>>, that was nice but not what I had in mind for today. It''s time for the main course!"'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
-			act 'Further':
+			act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
-			cumface+=1
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+			sexpartkno = 1
+			spafinloc = 11
+			gs 'cum_manage'
 			'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha.cum0,<<rand(0,1)>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'Panting, Misha pulls his penis out of you.'
-			'He motions you to your knees, his breathing is hoarse and his face flushed as he finishes on your face.'
-			'Misha takes a minute to catch his breath and admire his handiwork, before leaning down and kissing you on the forehead. He gives you a couple of crumpled bills for your efforts.'
-			act 'Escape':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+			'Panting heavily, your uncle Misha pulls his hard cock away from your mouth.'
+			'He motions for you to get on your knees, his breathing is ragged and his face flustered. Once you''re in position, he furiously masturbates his dick as you sit there waiting for his load, not sure whether to close your eyes or to keep looking at him. You decide to be brave and look him in the eye, which turns him on a great deal. He rewards you by focusing on your mouth and making sure not to cum near your eyes. You do what feels right in the moment and stick out your tongue, trying to catch at least some of it.'
+			'Uncle Misha takes a minute to catch his breath and admire his handiwork on your face, before leaning down and kissing you on the forehead. He throws a couple of crumpled bills on the floor. "Very nice, <<$nickname>>. Here, take these for your efforts", he says as you scramble to pick them up. Indicating he''s done with you now, he expects you to leave.'
+			act 'Leave Uncle Misha''s apartment':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 	if dom=>20 or horny<30:
-		act 'No':
+		act 'Refuse to service him':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha.exit0,0.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decide that you don''t want to "service it". You turn around and go out the door.'
-			'Uncle Misha calls after you, "Okay girl, not today, but you''ll come back to me!'
-			act 'Escape':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
+			'You have no intentions of ''servicing him'', and stand up. Although he has always been nice to you, you know from the stories your mother told that uncle Misha is used to getting his way, and that he can get rather violent when he doesn''t. You try to placate him: "I''m sorry uncle, I didn''t mean to lead you on. I merely wanted to see if you were up for a chat."'
+			'Fortunately, he''s not upset with you at all. The smug grin on uncle Misha never leaves his face, his cock still hanging out of his pants. "No problem <<$nickname>>, I recognized that look in your eyes when I pulled my dick out. You''ll be back. They all come back." You try to ignore his laughter as you pull the door shut behind you.'
+			act 'Exit to the stairwell':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_2'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -69,9 +71,9 @@ FColor = RGB(0,0,0)
 BColor = RGB(255,255,255)
 LColor = RGB(106,90,205)
 '<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/father.misha.pre0,0.jpg"></center>'
-'They take off their pants exposing their still sluggish members.'
-'Your stepfather instructs you, "Well, <<$nickname>>, serve your sentence!"'
-	act 'Suck':
+'They both drop their pants to their ankles, revealing their hard cocks.'
+'Your stepfather instructs you, "Well, <<$nickname>>, given your history I''m sure you know what to do with these. Get started."'
+	act 'Get on your knees and suck them off':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		if fatherandmisha!1:fatherandmisha=1
@@ -82,10 +84,9 @@ LColor = RGB(106,90,205)
 		father+=3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/father.Misha0,<<rand(0,1)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go to your stepfather and uncle Misha and fall to your knees in front of them.'
-		'You start sucking your stepfathers dick, not forgetting to jerk Uncle Misha.'
-		'After a while you change position, Uncle Mishas dick in your mouth as you masturbate your stepfather with one hand.'
-		act 'Further':
+		'You meekly nod and fall to your knees in front of them, reaching for their hard dicks.'
+		'Since they have been talking about ''punishment'' non-stop, you do your best to keep them happy. Maybe they''ll go easy on you? You obediently put your lips around your stepfather''s dick, diligently sucking him off while you massage your uncle''s rod with your hand at the same time. A while later, the roles are reversed and your uncle Misha''s dick is deep down your throat as you try to keep your stepfather happy too.'
+		act 'Continue':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut+=30
@@ -94,19 +95,22 @@ LColor = RGB(106,90,205)
 			gs 'stat'
 			if rand1<70:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/father.Misha1,<<rand(0,5)>>.jpg"></center>'
 			if rand1>=70:'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/father.Misha1,<<rand(0,1)>>.gif"></center>'
-			'Uncle Misha says, "hmm... this is too mild a punishment."'
-			'You stepfather agrees, "Yes, you should be punished properly. <<$nickname>> spread those cute little legs of yours.'
-			'You open your legs wide and Uncle Misha enters your pussy, while you suck your stepfather. After a while they change positions. Then again changed, and again, you lose count of the different positions and combinations they try, surprised by their extensive repertoire.'
-			act 'Further':
+			'If your goal was to avoid punishment, you were way too eager to achieve that. Your uncle Misha notices how eager you are to comply and snorts: "Hmm, look at her... this is hardly punishment. She looks like she''s the happiest girl in the world, sucking our dicks like that."'
+			'Your stepfather agrees: "You''re right, <<$nickname>> should be punished properly." Then turning his attention to you he says: "Go on <<$nickname>>, spread those cute little legs of yours. It''s time for your real punishment."'
+			'You open your legs wide and Uncle Misha enters your pussy, while you suck your stepfather. Neither of them are too gentle about it, and within seconds you find yourself gagging on cock on one end, and being roughly pounded at the other. After a while they change positions. And then again, and again... you can tell this is definitely not the first time they used a girl together. You''re surprised at the amount of positions they manage to fuck you in, but at the same time are too horny to care and just enjoy your ''punishment''.'
+			act 'Continue':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img src="images/nigma/gor/Misha/Misha.cum0,<<rand(0,1)>>.jpg"></center>'
 				minut+=3
 				horny+=5
-				cumlip+=1
-				cumface+=1
-				'Finally, they put you on your knees, and both have a go at filling your mouth with their seed.'
-				act 'Escape':gt 'GarGazel'
+				spafinloc = 12
+				gs 'cum_manage'
+				sexpartkno = 1
+				spafinloc = 11
+				gs 'cum_manage'
+				'Eventually they''re close enough to reach orgasm, and they tell you to get on your knees and take it on your face like a good little slut. You simply get down on your knees and do everything they say, having way too much of a good time to cause any trouble. They drop their loads on your face one at a time, while you try to lick off any bits of cum that drop close enough to your mouth. Being fully satisfied by you, they drop back into their chairs and resume their drinking, not paying any more attention to you.'
+				act 'Regain your composure and get up':gt 'GarGazel'
 			end
 		end
 	end

+ 13 - 13
locations/selfplay

@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ $d_self_fingering = {
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/selfplay/finger.jpg"></center>'
 				'You press harder, forcing your finger against your hymen. It gives in, and suddenly your finger slides all the way in. Your pussy hurts a little now, and your finger has some blood on it when you pull it out.'
 
-				act 'Rest':gt $curloc
+				act 'Stop touching yourself and rest for a while':gt $curloc
 			end
 		elseif vagina > 0:
 			'You slide one finger into your vagina, and then another.'
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ $d_self_fingering = {
 
 				if horny > 0:dynamic $d_self_fingering2
 
-				act 'Stop':gt $curloc
+				act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 			end
 		elseif mesec > 0:
 			manna -= 5
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ $d_self_fingering = {
 
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Stop':gt $curloc
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 	end
 }
 
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ $d_self_fingering2 = {
 
 				dynamic $d_self_fingering2
 
-				act 'Stop':gt $curloc
+				act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 			end
 		end
 
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Stop':gt $curloc
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 	end
 }
 
@@ -346,7 +346,7 @@ if horny > 0:
 
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Stop':gt $curloc
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 		if horny > 0:dynamic $d_self_fingering
 	end
@@ -377,7 +377,7 @@ if horny > 0 and agape < 3:
 		dynamic $d_sis_prov
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'rest':gt $curloc
+		act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 		act 'Add a second finger':
 			cls
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if horny > 0 and agape < 3:
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'rest':gt $curloc
+			act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 			if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:dynamic $d_van_vtor
 
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if horny > 0 and agape < 3:
 						'When you slide in three fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 					end
 
-					act 'rest':gt $curloc
+					act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 					if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:dynamic $d_van_vtor
 
@@ -530,7 +530,7 @@ if horny > 0 and agape < 3:
 								'When you slide in four fingers, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 							end
 
-							act 'rest':gt $curloc
+							act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 							if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:dynamic $d_van_vtor
 
@@ -584,7 +584,7 @@ if horny > 0 and agape < 3:
 										'When you push your hand into your asshole, you feel a sharp pain in your anus. You may have tried too much, too fast.'
 									end
 
-									act 'rest':gt $curloc
+									act 'Stop touching yourself':gt $curloc
 
 									if $loc = 'vanrPar' and selfplaytime >= 60:dynamic $d_van_vtor
 
@@ -623,7 +623,7 @@ if horny > 10:
 					dynamic $d_vag_sex_dildo
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'rest':gt $curloc
+					act 'Stop using the dildo':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -644,7 +644,7 @@ if horny > 10:
 					dynamic $d_analsex_dildo
 					gs 'stat'
 
-					act 'rest':gt $curloc
+					act 'Stop using the dildo':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 		! WD: Fix Dildo choice Code  ~ refer above

+ 5 - 5
locations/stolPar

@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 # stolPar
 gs 'stat'
 !!'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
-'You sat down at the desk.'
+'You sit down at the desk.'
 
-act 'Get up from the table':gt $locM, $metkaM
+act 'Move away from the desk':gt $locM, $metkaM
 
 if lernHome > 0:
-	act 'Learning lessons':
+	act 'Do your homework':
 		cls
 
 		if lernHome <= 2:
@@ -20,9 +20,9 @@ if lernHome > 0:
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
 
-		'Sitting for a long time you learned yet they were able to learn.'
+		'It takes you a long time to finish your homework. Perhaps it would go quicker if you do your homework together with someone else.'
 
-		act 'Get up from the table':gt $locM, $metkaM
+		act 'Move away from the desk':gt $locM, $metkaM
 	end
 end
 

+ 2 - 2
locations/tvPar

@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 # tvPar
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
-'You turn on the TV and settled comfortably on the couch.'
+'You turn on the TV and get comfortable on the couch.'
 
 $din_wath_tv_h = {
 	cls
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ $din_wath_tv_h = {
 	manna += rand(10, 50)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are viewing the central channel lying on the couch. Watch almost nothing solid and cheesy advertising program.'
+	'You are watching the country''s main television channel. None of their programs are really worth watching, but the distraction is welcome anyway.'
 
 	act 'Watch TV (1:00)':dynamic $din_wath_tv_h
 	act 'Get off the couch':gt $locM, $metkaM

+ 6 - 6
locations/vanrPar

@@ -36,9 +36,8 @@ lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></b></center>'
 ! WD: Correct Image path ~ "images/qwest/alter/<<$loc>>.jpg"
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vanrPar.jpg"></center>'
-'The bathroom is very small and unimpressive.'
-'Above the sink hangs a <a href="exec:GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>.'
-if vanr_hanger = 1: 'Next to the sink, you find your neatly folded <a href="exec:dynamic $vanr_hanger_dress & tanga = tanga_hanger & GT ''vanrPar'' ">clothes</a>'
+'The bathroom is very small and unimpressive. Nevertheless, it has everything you need: a shower, toilet, <a href="exec:GT ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a>, sink and even a bath tub.'
+if vanr_hanger = 1: 'Next to the sink, you find the neatly folded <a href="exec:dynamic $vanr_hanger_dress & tanga = tanga_hanger & GT ''vanrPar'' ">clothes</a> Mom washed for you'.
 
 if stanok > 0:'Your razor will last for <b><<stanok>></b> more shavings.'
 !WD: heal chafe
@@ -55,8 +54,8 @@ dynamic $bath
 
 if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage Piercings</a>'
 
-if fillimplant = 1 and siliconeBag >= 1:'<a href="exec:cls & siliconeBag -= 1 & silicone += 10 & gt $curloc">Inject silicone into breast implants.</a>'
-if fillimplant = 1 and silicone >= 20:'<a href="exec:cls & silicone -= 10 & gt $curloc">Drain silicone from breast implants.</a>'
+if fillimplant = 1 and siliconeBag >= 1:'<a href="exec:cls & siliconeBag -= 1 & silicone += 10 & gt $curloc">Inject silicone into breast implants</a>'
+if fillimplant = 1 and silicone >= 20:'<a href="exec:cls & silicone -= 10 & gt $curloc">Drain silicone from breast implants</a>'
 
 dynamic $bteeth
 
@@ -217,8 +216,9 @@ if mosolmaz > 0 and mosol > 0:
 end
 
 if pregtest > 0:
-	act 'Do a pregnancy test':
+	act 'Do a pregnancy test (0:05)':
 		cla
+		minut += 5
 		pregtest -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
 

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