KevinSmarts 9 жил өмнө
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1 өөрчлөгдсөн 10 нэмэгдсэн , 10 устгасан
  1. 10 10
      locations/danceclass

+ 10 - 10
locations/danceclass

@@ -6,11 +6,11 @@ gs 'stat'
 fcolor = rgb(0, 0, 0)
 bcolor = rgb(255, 255, 255)
 lcolor = rgb(106, 90, 205)
-'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dance Class</font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Dance Studio</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/etogame/danceclass.jpg"></center>'
-'Modern room with good lighting and mirrors for the development of dance skills.'
+'A big, open room with good lighting and huge mirrors, perfect for developing dance skills.'
 
-act 'Modern club dancing (2:00)':
+act 'Modern dance class (2:00)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 120
@@ -22,12 +22,12 @@ act 'Modern club dancing (2:00)':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/fit1.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if dance < 100:'You studied modern dance, which is very popular in clubs.'
-	if dance >= 100:'Though you worked hard, you realize there is nothing more you can learn here.'
+	if dance >= 100:'Though you worked hard, you realize there is nothing more worth learning from this class.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 end
 
-act 'Striptease (2:00)':
+act 'Striptease class (2:00)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 120
@@ -42,16 +42,16 @@ act 'Striptease (2:00)':
 		stripdance += rand(2, 10)
 		'You studied the art of burlesque, imaging yourself stripping to the music.'
 
-		if stripdance >= 100:'But you could not learn anything new, since you have already mastered the art.'
+		if stripdance >= 100:'But there is nothing more worth learning, since you have already mastered the art.'
 	elseif dance < 100:
 		dance += rand(5, 15)
-		'You find it impossible to combine dancing and stripping into an erotic act. The teacher recommends that you first learn modern club dancing.'
+		'This isn''t just taking clothes off, it''s a difficult dance style and your basics aren''t upto the task. The teacher recommends that you work on your modern dancing first.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'
 end
 
-act 'Dancing on a pole (2:00)':
+act 'Pole dancing class (2:00)':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	minut += 120
@@ -69,9 +69,9 @@ act 'Dancing on a pole (2:00)':
 
 		if poledance >= 100:'But you could not learn anything new, you''re already a master of the art.'
 	elseif dance < 100 or stripdance < 100 or stren < 80:
-		'It took hitting your head on the pole the first time to realize you are out of your league. Maybe you should pick up modern dancing or striptease first.'
+		'It''s not pretty and you bang your head on the pole, you realize you are out of your league. It will help if you improve your modern dancing or striptease first.'
 
-		if stren < 80:'The instructor tries to be patient while making it clear that you are far too weak for this sort of dance.'
+		if stren < 80:'The instructor tries to be patient, but it is clear that you are too weak for this sort of dance.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'fit', 'dressing room'