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Lanteras texts, Veedanyas modelling price fix and a little menu fix.
KevinSmarts vor 9 Jahren
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8 geänderte Dateien mit 550 neuen und 555 gelöschten Zeilen
  1. 5 5
      locations/JuliaMilGo
  2. 41 41
      locations/JuliaMilHome
  3. 6 6
      locations/JuliaMilVhod
  4. 28 48
      locations/foto
  5. 89 90
      locations/gorodok
  6. 79 81
      locations/gschool
  7. 290 274
      locations/gschool2
  8. 12 10
      locations/onobjsel

+ 5 - 5
locations/JuliaMilGo

@@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
 # JuliaMilGo
 gs 'stat'
-'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[12]>> <<$npcSurName[12]>></font></b></center>'
+'<center><b><font color="maroon">Julia Milova, your classmate</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-'You go up to Julia and she asks you, "Want to go to my house? We can do our homework together.'
+'As you approach Julia after school, she smiles at you and asks, "Hi <<$nickname>>! Want to go to my place? We can do our homework together, and maybe grab a bite to eat?"'
 
 act 'Go with Julia':
 	cls
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[12]>> <<$npcSurName[12]>></font></b></center>'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Julia Milova, your classmate</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-	'You spend 15 minutes walking down the street to Julias home, chatting about rubbish.'
+	'You go to Julia''s apartment together, she lives just above you. During the 15 minute walk you chat about random things that happened at school that day.'
 
-	act 'Go to her apartment':gt 'JuliaMilHome'
+	act 'Enter her apartment':gt 'JuliaMilHome'
 end
 
 --- JuliaMilGo ---------------------------------

+ 41 - 41
locations/JuliaMilHome

@@ -5,12 +5,12 @@ if BeInJulMilHome = 0:BeInJulMilHome = 1
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npcName[12]>> <<$npcSurName[12]>></font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-'Nice room, with high quality furnishings, covered in books.'
+'Julia has a nice room, decorated with high quality furnishings. There are books everywhere, she must really like to read.'
 
 if lernHome ! 0:
-	'Julia arranges some books on the table.'
+	'Julia arranges her school books on a large desk and gets ready to do her homework, inviting you to join her.'
 
-	act 'Homework with Julia':
+	act 'Do your homework with Julia':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
 		!grupNPC[14] += 10
@@ -19,9 +19,9 @@ if lernHome ! 0:
 		intel += rand(1, 2)
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend an hour working with Julia and with her help, manage to learn quite a lot.'
+		'You spend an hour doing your homework with Julia, and thanks to her you manage to learn quite a lot. She''s a very clever girl, and good at explaining things.'
 
-		act 'rest':gt $curloc
+		act 'Relax after doing your homework':gt $curloc
 	end
 elseif lernHome = 0:
 	'Julia is sitting on her bed.'
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 	if eatJulMilDay!daystart:
 		'Julia smiles at you and offers you something to eat.'
 
-		act 'Eat with Julia':
+		act 'Have a meal with Julia':
 			cls
 			minut += 15
 			fat += 3
@@ -41,12 +41,12 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 			eatJulMilDay = daystart
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go into the kitchen with Julia and eat together. Then return to her room.'
+			'You follow her to the kitchen and have a meal together. When you''re both finished, you return to her room.'
 
-			act 'rest':gt $curloc
+			act 'Hang out':gt $curloc
 		end
 
-		act 'Refuse':
+		act 'No thanks, you''re not hungry':
 			cls
 			eatJulMilDay = daystart
 			gt $curloc
@@ -65,12 +65,12 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 				horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-				'You offer Julia some wine and she agrees. Julia gets a corkscrew and opens your bottle, then pours the wine into glasses. For half an hour you drink the bottle of wine and gossip with Julia.'
+				'You offer Julia some wine and she happily accepts, leaving the room quickly to get a corkscrew and some glasses. When she finishes pouring the wine, you propose a toast to your friendship and both have a sip. For the next half hour, the two of you enjoy the wine while sharing some juicy gossip. When the bottle is drained you both feel more than a bit tipsy and giggle happily, lying against each other on her bed.'
 
-				act 'rest':gt $curloc
+				act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 
 				if horny >= 50:
-					act 'Chat about sex':
+					act 'Talk about sex':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
 
@@ -81,43 +81,43 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 						'You steer the conversation towards sexual topics.'
 
 						if SexTalkJulia = 1:
-							'Julia is a little embarrassed and it looks like you killed the conversation.'
+							'Julia is too embarrassed to share her sexual experiences with you, and it looks like you killed the mood.'
 						elseif SexTalkJulia = 2:
-							'Julia, trying to get involved boasts that she is no longer a virgin.'
+							'Julia, trying to contribute to the conversation, boasts that she is no longer a virgin.'
 
-							act 'Inquire':
+							act '"Oh, really? Do tell!"':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								horny += 10
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev2/outdoor.jpg"></center>'
-								'Julia smiles mysteriously and begins to tell you, "My parents sent me to summer camp. There I met a guy named Vovka. He was a young counselor and at the end of the evening shift we found ourselves alone in the forest."'
-								'"There we began flirting and kissed, it was so nice. He first laid me on my back, but the ground was all rocky, so i asked him if I could kneel. He did not understand and removed my skirt and panties, before getting me on to all fours."'
-								'"Then he started having sex with me. It hurt. Noone tells you that your hymen is also part of the body, and it tears. Honestly, the first time I was just bent over waiting for it to end. Well at least it did not last long and the guy finished on the ground."'
+								'Julia smiles mysteriously and begins her story, "My parents send me to summer camp every year. Last year, I met a guy there... his name is Vovka. He was one of the youth councelors there, a fair bit older than me. After the day''s regular events had concluded, we found ourselves alone in the forest."'
+								'"We began to flirt a little, and then he kissed me... it was so nice to feel wanted! Then he laid me on my back, but the ground was all rough and rocky. I tried to get up, asking him if he would mind if I got down on my knees instead. He... misunderstood, and took off my skirt and panties before telling me to go down on all fours like he thought I had suggested. I didn''t have the courage to say no, and he had been so nice to me... so I did."'
+								'"Then he started to have sex with me. It was quite painful! No one ever told me about the hymen being a part of the female body, and that it tears during the first time. Honestly, the first time I had sex I just stayed bent over, hoping it would be over soon. Luckily Vovka did not last long, and he finished on the ground."'
 
-								act 'rest':gt $curloc
+								act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 							end
 
 							exit
 						elseif SexTalkJulia = 3:
-							'Julia while talking again remembered his adventures in the camp.'
+							'Julia shares more details about her adventures at summer camp.'
 
-							act 'inquire details':
+							act '"Go on, keep going!"':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								horny += 10
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev2/otrad.jpg"></center>'
-								'Julia smiles mysteriously and begins to tell you, "Well. I still managed to sleep with Vovka before leaving the camp. One afternoon when no one was in the cabin I bumped into Vovka, again he began to harass me. He was cute though and I let him."'
-								'"I undressed and lay on the bed, terribly afraid that it would hurt again, but it was much better. In the beginning was a bit painful, but it quickly passed. Although I didn''t get stimulated, probably because I was afraid that somebody would come in and sees us."'
-								'"Noone did and we didn''t meet like that again. He is from the city, I have his telephone number, but it''s not really him I fancy."'
+								'Julia once again smiles mysteriously and continues her story where she left off, "Remember when I told you about Vovka last time? I slept with him again, before leaving the camp! One afternoon when no one else was in the cabin, I bumped into him there. Ever since that first time he had been pestering me, wanting more sex. He was cute though, and really treated me like I was special... so I let him."'
+								'"I undressed and lay down on the bed, terribly afraid that it would hurt again. It felt a lot better though! In the beginning it was still a bit painful, but that quickly passed. He came inside me, that second time. I didn''t really get stimulated myself, probably because I was too afraid about someone walking in. Still, it was nice to feel so close to him."'
+								'"No one did enter, and he quickly left after we finished. After that, I saw him one or two more times at the camp but always with other people around, so nothing more happened between us. He lives in the city, actually. I still have his phone number somewhere, but I''m not going to call him. He''s not the one I fancy any more..." She has a dreamy look in her eyes when she says that.'
 
-								act 'rest':gt $curloc
+								act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 							end
 
 							exit
 						elseif SexTalkJulia = 4:
-							'Julia is embarrassed and says, "You''re such a funny girl <<$nickname>>. I''m with you, just being myself and I feel this compulsion." She suddenly moves her face to yours wanting to kiss you.'
+							'Julia is embarrassed and says, "There''s something unusual about you, <<$nickname>>. I''ve never felt so much at ease around anyone else before, around you I can really be myself. I...", she doesn''t finish her sentence, letting the silence linger in the air for a second. Then she suddenly moves her face to yours, intending to kiss you.'
 
 							act 'Kiss Julia':
 								cls
@@ -125,17 +125,17 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 								horny += 20
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev2/julkiss.jpg"></center>'
-								'You kiss Julia, feeling her soft, sweet smelling lips on your lips and her delicate, nimble tongue explores inside your mouth. Her hands gently hug you and you sigh as she wraps her hands around your chest and begins to gently caress.'
+								'You kiss Julia, feeling her soft, sweet smelling lips on your lips as her nimble tongue explores inside your mouth. Her hands gently cup your boobs, and you moan softly as she begins to gently caress them.'
 
-								act 'relax':
+								act 'Lie back and let her':
 									cls
 									minut += 5
 									horny += 20
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev2/jultit.jpg"></center>'
-									'Julia bares your chest and slowly lowers to her kisses. Finally you moan as she kisses and caresses your nipples. Her fingers climb between your legs, pushing your panties.'
+									'Julia bares your chest and slowly lowers her kisses, slowly trailing her way down to your chest. You do your best to stifle your moans when she takes your nipple in her mouth, gently biting it as her fingers rub the other one. Then her fingers find their way down between your legs, pulling your clothes to the side.'
 
-									act 'relax further':
+									act 'Eat each other out':
 										cls
 										minut += 15
 
@@ -146,23 +146,23 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 										orgasm += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/ev2/julick.jpg"></center>'
-										'You and Julia undress and you lay on your back, Julia throws her leg over your head and buries her face between your legs, while exposing you to her Budding flower.'
-										'You touch your tongue to her juicy vagina and begin licking, Julias tongue caresses you between the legs and soon you feel the fire spread and your body convulses in orgasm.'
-										'Julia, turned on by your arousal, also finishes. Her pussy convulses and soaks the front of your face, and her body shivers.'
+										'You and Julia giddily take off your clothes and you lie back down on the bed. Julia, eager to taste you, throws her leg over your head and buries her face between your legs, grinding her pussy against your lips as she gets to work.'
+										'Feeling her tongue lapping against your pussy like her life depended on it, you don''t want to let her finish you without reciprocating. Equally enthusiastically you stick out your tongue and lick up her juices from her budding flower, and soon enough it feels like a contest as to which of you can get the other off first. Julia wins: even though you tried to fight it as long as you could, your body spasms against her tongue as you groan into her pussy in orgasm.'
+										'This sends Julia over the edge as well. Her hips squirm against your mouth, and you feel a splash of warm liquid hit you as her pussy squirts her sweet nectar all over your face. You lick up some of it, and then give Julia another deep kiss. Quickly leaving the room to wash up, you return a minute later and cuddle for a while.'
 
-										act 'rest':gt $curloc
+										act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 									end
 								end
 
-								act 'Tell Julia to leave you alone':dom += 1 & gt $curloc
+								act 'Ask her to please stop touching you':dom += 1 & gt $curloc
 							end
 
-							act 'Tell Julia to leave you alone':dom += 5 & gt $curloc
+							act 'Whoa! Tell her to stop right now!':dom += 5 & gt $curloc
 
 							exit
 						end
 
-						act 'rest':gt $curloc
+						act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -174,17 +174,17 @@ elseif lernHome = 0:
 			JulMilBestFrend += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/npc/12.jpg"></center>'
-			'You talked to Julia about nonsense.'
+			'You spend 15 minutes talking with Julia about whatever topics come to mind. She really is a nice girl.'
 			tiprand = rand(0, 5)
 
-			if tiprand = 0:'Julia mentions in passing that she used to be friends with Natasha Belova, but she kept borrowing money and not paying it back. Julia frowns.'
+			if tiprand = 0:'Julia mentions in passing that she used to be friends with Natasha Belova, but cut the ties after Natasha kept borrowing money despite not being able to pay any of it back. Julia frowns, and you can tell they used to get along quite well.'
 
-			act 'rest':gt $curloc
+			act 'Relax in Julia''s room':gt $curloc
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-act 'go home':gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+act 'Leave Julia''s apartment':gt 'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
 
 --- JuliaMilHome ---------------------------------
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/JuliaMilVhod

@@ -9,19 +9,19 @@ gs'stat'
 
 GoInside = 1
 $byetext=''
-if hour <18 and kanikuli = 0 and week <6: $byetext='You call at the door, but nobody opens.' & GoInside = 0
+if hour <18 and kanikuli = 0 and week <6: $byetext='You ring the door bell, but no one comes to answer. Julia must not be home.' & GoInside = 0
 
-if hour > 20 : $byetext='Too late, to go to visit' & GoInside = 0
+if hour > 20 : $byetext='It''s too late in the day to visit Julia.' & GoInside = 0
 
-if hour < 8 : $byetext='Too early, to go to visit' & GoInside = 0
+if hour < 8 : $byetext='It''s too early in the day to visit Julia.' & GoInside = 0
 
 if GoInside ! 0:
-	'You call at the door. Julia opens you enter and invites.'
-	act 'Log in to the apartment':gt'JuliaMilHome'
+	'You ring the door bell. You hear footsteps in the apartment and sure enough, a few seconds later Julia opens the door. "Oh, hi <<$nickname>>! Come on in!"'
+	act 'Enter Julia''s apartment':gt'JuliaMilHome'
 else
 	'<<$byetext>>'
 end
-act 'Escape':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
+act 'Move away from the door':gt'pod_ezd','etaj_3'
 
 --- JuliaMilVhod ---------------------------------
 

+ 28 - 48
locations/foto

@@ -1,8 +1,6 @@
 # foto
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
-	cla
-	clr
-	*clr
+	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	fcolor = rgb(0, 0, 0)
@@ -89,14 +87,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'model':
 	*clr
 
 	if vnesh >= 20:
-		cla
-		clr
-		*clr
+		cls
 		minut += 5
 
 		if model = 0:model = 1
 
-		modelpay = vnesh * 100
+		modelpay = (vnesh * 25) + (modelfoto * 50) + (film * 100)
+
 		modelmon = month
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Photographer</font></b></center>'
@@ -121,12 +118,10 @@ $modelopt = {
 		act 'Not for me':gt 'foto', 'start'
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 9 * modelpay / 2
+			modelpayfin = 4000 + (modelpay * 2) + (200*rand(0,5))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[1] += 1
@@ -143,12 +138,10 @@ $modelopt = {
 		act 'Not for me':gt 'foto', 'start'
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 6 * modelpay
+			modelpayfin = 6000 + (modelpay * 3) + (300*rand(0,7))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[2] += 1
@@ -165,12 +158,10 @@ $modelopt = {
 		act 'Not for me':gt 'foto', 'start'
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 9 * modelpay / 2
+			modelpayfin = 4000 + (modelpay * 2) + (200*rand(0,5))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[3] += 1
@@ -187,12 +178,10 @@ $modelopt = {
 		act 'Not for me':gt 'foto', 'start'
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 6 * modelpay
+			modelpayfin = 6000 + (modelpay * 3) + (300*rand(0,7))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[4] += 1
@@ -213,7 +202,7 @@ $modelopt = {
 			cla
 			*clr
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 3 * modelpay
+			modelpayfin = 3000 + (modelpay) + (100*rand(0,5))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[7] += 1
@@ -229,13 +218,11 @@ $modelopt = {
 		act 'Not for me':gt 'foto', 'start'
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			lesbian += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 9 * modelpay
+			modelpayfin = 9000 + (modelpay*4) + (500*rand(0,13))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			girl += 1
@@ -259,9 +246,7 @@ $modelopt = {
 
 			act 'See alternative offer':
 				forand = rand(1, 6)
-				cla
-				clr
-				*clr
+				cls
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Photographer</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/fotograph.jpg"></center>'
 				'Ok, we have another job we could use you for.'
@@ -269,15 +254,13 @@ $modelopt = {
 			end
 
 			act 'Agree to new offer (lose virginity) (3:00)':
-				cla
-				clr
-				*clr
+				cls
 				vagina = 1
 				sub += 5
 				slava += 1
 				mastr += 1
 				minut += 180
-				modelpayfin = 5 * 3 * modelpay
+				modelpayfin = 8000 + (modelpay*4) + (400*rand(0,10))
 				money += modelpayfin
 				modelfoto += 1
 				modelfotoTipe[5] += 1
@@ -289,18 +272,16 @@ $modelopt = {
 
 				act 'Change back into your clothes':gt 'foto', 'start'
 			end
-			exit
 
+			exit
 		end
 
 		act 'Agree (3:00)':
-			cla
-			clr
-			*clr
+			cls
 			slava += 1
 			mastr += 1
 			minut += 180
-			modelpayfin = 5 * 3 * modelpay / 2
+			modelpayfin = 4000 + (modelpay * 2) + (200*rand(0,5))
 			money += modelpayfin
 			modelfoto += 1
 			modelfotoTipe[5] += 1
@@ -342,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'blackm':
 						bj += 1
 						gang += 1
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						swallow += 1
 						$nameV = 'Blond'
 						pose = 1
@@ -350,7 +331,7 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 						'<center><img src="images/pics2/studia.jpg"></center>'
 						'You have opened my mouth, and he shoved his cock, long and thick. You began to choke, but it literally you sit down, holding his head. They fuck you together, and walked beside Victor, no longer hiding and shooting, shoot, shoot. In his hand was a lovely big camcorder.'
 						gs 'orgazm', 'start'
-						' They finished together. Blonde poured everything you into the uterus. Brunette forced to swallow everything. You fell onto the bed.'
+						'They finished together. Blonde poured everything you into the uterus. Brunette forced to swallow everything. You fell onto the bed.'
 
 						act 'Begin to cry':
 							cla
@@ -368,11 +349,11 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 									throat += 1
 									anal += 1
 									spafinloc = 4
-gs 'cum_manage'
+									gs 'cum_manage'
 									spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+									gs 'cum_manage'
 									spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+									gs 'cum_manage'
 									'<center><img src="images/pics2/studia2.jpg"></center>'
 									'You shouted No! Do not yell, good soundproofing here. And your ass is still fuck, so do not twitch and relax. - Already two fingers brunette were you. You sobbing again sucking blonde. Three fingers. At that moment, when giving your mouth quickened and was ready to cum, brunette perched member of your rings and abruptly entered. You yelled again, but the blonde quickly plugged your mouth sperm bryzhzhuschim member and roaring "Swallow, swallow, bitch" - planted itself. When he finally finished, black hair pinned you to the bed all over and started to fuck in the ass. It was just crazy sick - without lubrication, but he did not finish, then pulling out entirely, then abruptly entering again, just ripping you. Finally, you feel like it is speeding up, and you poured semen into the rectum. Nothing worse and you could not imagine.'
 
@@ -383,9 +364,9 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 										anal += 1
 										sex += 1
 										spafinloc = 14
-gs 'cum_manage'
+										gs 'cum_manage'
 										spafinloc = 4
-gs 'cum_manage'
+										gs 'cum_manage'
 										$nameV = 'Brunet'
 										pose = 1
 										dick = 18
@@ -407,6 +388,5 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 		end
 	end
 end
-
 --- foto ---------------------------------
 

+ 89 - 90
locations/gorodok

@@ -23,7 +23,8 @@ boynumBlock = 0
 
 '<center><h4>Pavlovsky</h4></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/etogame/gorodok.jpg"></center>'
-'<center>A quiet province village, you have no idea of the where abouts, you couldn''t differentiate this village another. It''s tallest building is the chuch tower.</center>'
+'<center>A quiet province town in a rural area of Russia. Population: about 10000 inhabitants.</center>'
+'<center>It has nothing in particular going for it, and looks just like all the other towns in the area. The tallest building in town is the church tower.</center>'
 ''
 
 if marudatestinterface = 1:
@@ -133,28 +134,28 @@ if belgangQW=1000 and hour>=16 and hour<21 and daybelisex!daystart:
 	daybelisex=daystart
 	belrand=rand(1,100)
 	if belrand<=40:
-		'It drives you to the old Mitsubishi Pajero with White and his` brother
-		- Slysh, slut, hop, you go to work off debts.'
-		act'Take the jeep':
+		'You see the by now familiar old Mitsubishi Pajero driving through the streets, with Vadim Bely and his gang. Your heart skips a beat as you notice one of them pointing at you, and soon they pull over.'
+		'The tinted window slides down, and you find yourself staring directly into Vadim''s face. "Slut, get in. It''s time you work off your debts."'
+		act'Get into the jeep':
 			cls
 			minut+=5
 			gs'stat'
-			'You sat in the backseat of a jeep and drove around the city White.'
+			'You open the door and take a seat in the back, as Vadim drives through the city.'
             if month>=4 and month<=8:
 				tiperand=rand(0,1)
 				if tiperand=0:
-					'The car drove out of the city and one of the silent bandyukov deigned to explain
-					- Picnic we planned for nature.
-					Finally the car stopped somewhere near the road and got out bandyuki.'
+					'As the car leaves the city and goes off-road at some point, one of the more silent criminals feels the need to explain: "We have a little picnic planned for today. We know just the place... nice and quiet. You''ll be able to entertain us there without interruptions."'
+					'The way he says it puts a shiver down your spine.'
+					'Finally, a few minutes after the car has left the main roads, you stop somewhere. You have absolutely no idea where you are. The criminals get out of the car and Vadim does the same, telling you to get out and follow them.'
 					act'Get out of the car':gt'belpicknick'
 				end
 				if tiperand=1:
-					'The car pulled up to the well-groomed private home with high metal fence'
-					act'Get out of the car':gt'belgang'
+					'The car pulls over in the driveway of a large mansion, surrounded by a high metal fence. Vadim says a few words into a microphone and the gates swing open. He drives the car to the entrance of the house, as the gates close automatically behind you. He then tells you to follow them, as the men get out of the car.'
+					act'Do as they say':gt'belgang'
 				end
 		    else
-				'The car pulled up to the well-groomed private home with high metal fence'
-				act'Get out of the car':gt'belgang'
+				'The car pulls over in the driveway of a large mansion, surrounded by a high metal fence. Vadim says a few words into a microphone and the gates swing open. He drives the car to the entrance of the house, as the gates close automatically behind you. He then tells you to follow them, as the men get out of the car.'
+				act'Do as they say':gt'belgang'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -166,18 +167,18 @@ if belgangQW=100 and hour>=16 and hour<21 and daybelisex!daystart:
 	daybelisex=daystart
 	belrand=rand(1,100)
     if belrand<=40:
-		'It drives you to the old Mitsubishi Pajero and from the open driver`s window looks fat bald mug White.
-		- In short <<$name>>, sit down, drive around.'
-        act'Take the jeep':
+		'You see the by now familiar old Mitsubishi Pajero driving through the streets, with Vadim Bely behind the wheel. He pulls over next to you, and as the window rolls down you see Vadim''s smug face.'
+		'"<<$name>>, get in the car. We''re going for a drive." It looks like he won''t take no for an answer.'
+        act'Get into the jeep':
 			cls
 			minut+=5
 			gs'stat'
-			'You got into the jeep and drove around the city White.'
+			'Afraid of what might happen if you decline, you meekly nod: "Yes mister Bely", and enter the jeep. The next few minutes you drive around town seemingly at random, and you''re not sure where he''s taking you.'
 			tiperand=rand(1,100)
             if tiperand<=30:
-				'White said, unbuttoning his pants
-				- <<$name>> ,I have a little time, so let`s hurry'
-				act'Suck':
+				'As Vadim drives the car through the streets of Pavlovsky, he unbuttons his pants and pulls out his hard cock.
+				"Go on <<$name>>, start sucking. I don''t have much time, make it quick."'
+				act'Suck his cock while he drives':
 					cls
 					bj+=1
 					cumlip+=1
@@ -188,17 +189,17 @@ if belgangQW=100 and hour>=16 and hour<21 and daybelisex!daystart:
 					mrapic=rand(0,5)
 					!'<<mrapic>>'
 					'<center><img src="images/lur/sex/carBJ<<mrapic>>.gif"></center>'
-					'You leaned against a member of the White and began to suck, the fat man did not last long and nasty cum began to shoot you in the mouth. Spits it was nowhere to go, and you began to swallow it. When White cum stopped, he stopped the car and shoving you five hundred shoved you on the street.'
-					act'Escape':gt $curloc
+					'You shift your hips a bit and lean over, taking the head of his dick in your mouth and begin to suck obediently. The fat man doesn''t last long at all, and within minutes you feel his nasty cum squirting into your mouth. Since you''re in his car you can''t just spit it out somewhere, and see no other option but to swallow it. When he recovers, he pulls over and shoves you out onto the street. Throwing 500 rubles on top of your prone body, he then races off as you quickly get up and pocket the money, hoping no one saw you get kicked out of the car.'
+					act'Dust yourself off':gt $curloc
 				end
 			else
-				'Soon you approached the ordinary five-storey and white close up of the car will take you to the apartment.'
+				'Within minutes, you approach a five-storey apartment. Vadim parks the car in front of it and says: "Get out and follow me", not waiting for a response.'
 				act'Look around':
 					cls
 					minut+=5
 					gs'stat'
-					'You visited the apartment. Not bad repair, a minimum of furniture and a complete lack of any decorations and home comfort, likely Apartment Renting. White did not give you long osmatrivatsya and take you closer to him, smelling his tobacco mouth clung to your tender lips and you feel, he shoves his tongue in your mouth.'
-					act'Tselovatsya':gt 'BelSex'
+					'The apartment is actually in decent shape. The minimal amount of furniture and decorations don''t make it look very hospitable though, and you assume this might just be one of the places Vadim rented for business or pleasure, not for living in. Noticing you''re spending too much time looking around and aren''t following him swiftly enough, he grabs you by your hair and pulls your face to his, roughly shoving his tongue in your mouth. You can smell the tabacco on his breath, and do your best to ignore the taste as he kisses you.'
+					act'Kiss him':gt 'BelSex'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -207,44 +208,42 @@ if belgangQW=100 and hour>=16 and hour<21 and daybelisex!daystart:
 end
 
 if 	belgangQW=9000 and belgangday<daystart:
-	'Near the stop you order Mitsubishi Pajero shabby and out climbed lads. White immediately went to you and said,
-	- Well how are you <<$name>>? There is good news?'
+	'As you walk through Pavlovsky, a shabby Mitsubishi Pajero stops near you. Vadim Bely steps out, along with several of his henchmen. He gives you a smile that you know is 100% fake, and behaves amicably while he asks: "<<$name>>, well well! How are you? I hope you have good news for me?"'
 	if money>=belgangPay:
-		act'Give money':
+		act'Give him the money':
 			cls
 			gs'stat'
-			'You got the money and handed them over to gangsters. White smile.
-			- I hope it is not necessary to recalculate? And then we can go back.
-			You shook your head.
-			- It`s all the money, And count the better of me.'
-         
-			'White counted the money
-			- Okay, the entire amount on the spot. Well, do not fall ill <<$name>>.
-			After that, the whole gang sat back in the Jeep and the growling of burnt silencer left.'
+			'You have the money, and give it over to Vadim while his henchmen keep watch. Again, that awkward smile. "It''s all there, right? I would hate to have to come back for the rest."'
+			'You nod at him and reassure him: "It''s all there, mister Bely. You can count it if you want."'
+         	'He takes a moment to count it, and nods approvingly. "Very good, it''s the full amount. Please doing business, <<$name>>. Take care of yourself."'
+			'He signals his crew to get back in the jeep. You barely manage to dodge the spray of pebbles and dirt the spinning tires spew your way, as they drive off as fast as they can, probably on their way to another ''business appointment''.'
 			belgangQW=9999
 			money-=belgangPay
 			gs'stat'
-			act 'Escape':gt $curloc
+			act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 		end
 	else
-		act'I do not have that kind of money.':
+		act'You don''t have the money':
 			cls
 			gs'stat'
-			'You almost weeping shook their heads.
-			- I do not have that kind of money.
-			The bald man frowned.
-			- Ah ah ah, <<$name>>, how bad it, Well nothing, I love you in a warm place one Pristrom, there you exhaust me alive.'
-         
-			'You immediately grabbed and force landed in the jeep. The whole gang of village sites and Mitsubishi growling Burned silencer drove on the highway in the direction of the city.'
-			minut+=60
-			belgangQW=10000
-			workDolg=belgangPay
-			workDolg -= money
-			money = 0
-			belgangPay=0
-			'You`ve come to the sauna. Bandits have been dragged into what that room and started to explain. "You will live here and work, until not pay off your debts. All clear? Or try to escape the buzz, all, we`ll put a bullet in the head off and bury you in the woods, truncated?"'
-			'You nodded fearfully, realizing that they were not kidding.'
-			act 'Look around':gt'saunaroom'
+			'You have tears in your eyes as you look down at your shoes, not daring to look him in the eye. "I''m... I''m sorry, mister Bely. I simply don''t have that kind of money. If you can give me some more time, I wi-"'
+			'He frowns, he abruptly cuts you off. You can see the disapproval in his eyes when you glance up. "That is very unfortunate <<$name>>, I had such high hopes for you", he says. "I guess we will have to find an alternative way for you to pay off your debts."'
+			'He then directs his attention to two of his henchmen: "She''s coming with us."'
+			'Too scared to resist, you simply let it happen when two men grab you by your arms and pull you into the Mitsubishi. Vadim gets back behind the wheel and within minutes, you''re out of town. You notice you''re being taken to the city, and you wonder what plans they have with you there.'
+			act'In the city...':
+				cls
+				gs'stat'
+				minut+=60
+				belgangQW=10000
+				workDolg=belgangPay
+				workDolg -= money
+				money = 0
+				belgangPay=0
+				'The car pulls over in front of the sauna. After one of the criminals made sure the coast is clear, two of the men pull you out of the car and escort you to a room inside the sauna building. Vadim follows to them, and asks to be left alone with you for a minute. After the other guys leave the room, he explains: "Until you pay off your debts, we own you. You will live here and work here, until you pay off your debts. Any expenses you incur while you are here will be added to your debt. Understood?"'
+				'Silence fills the room as he waits for you to acknowledge what he just said. Mortified about what might happen if you don''t, you nod. He decides to paint the picture anyway: "If you try to escape or refuse to work, we''ll put a bullet in your head, chop you up and bury you in the woods in pieces. And that would be a waste, with a pretty face such as yours." He pinches your cheeks and then slaps your face; not hard enough to be painful, but it certainly drives the message home. You can tell he''s dead serious.'
+				'After looking you in the eyes for a few more seconds to make sure you get the message, he turns around and leaves. You are all alone now.'
+				act 'Look around':gt'saunaroom'
+			end	
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -252,17 +251,17 @@ if 	belgangQW=9000 and belgangday<daystart:
 end
 
 if GorSlut = 6 and rand(1, 10) = 10:
-	'To you a guy came up and offered to move into the bushes to get laid for a hundred.'
+	'A guy approaches you, and asks if you want to earn some money. He''s offering you 100 rubles for a quick fuck in the bushes.'
 
-	act 'Agree': $boy = 'Stranger' & sexpartkno = 0 & gt 'gevent', '5'
-	act 'Refuse':gt $curloc
+	act 'Go with him': $boy = 'Stranger' & sexpartkno = 0 & gt 'gevent', '5'
+	act 'Decline':gt $curloc
 	exit
 end
 
 if AlbFather >= 1:
 	if AlbFaterBlackTime = 0:AlbFaterBlackTime = totminut + 2880
 
-	'You can see voting posters on the walls. They say, "Vote for Boris Barlovsky!".'
+	'You can see election posters on the walls all over town. They say: "Vote for Boris Barlovsky!" Wait a minute... isn''t that Albina''s father?'
 end
 
 if AlbFaterBlackTime > 0 and AlbFaterBlackTime <= totminut and hour >= 16 and AlbFather = 1:gt 'AlbFatherQW'
@@ -275,9 +274,9 @@ if StoryLine > 0 and hour < 4 and motherWorry = 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and age
 end
 
 if rand(1, 5) >= 4:
-	if GorSlut = 3:'You catch people staring at you, some you recognize, but you hope they don''t recognize you or remember where from. Occasionally you hear people chuckle, looks like someone found out about your adventures.'
-	if GorSlut = 4:'People look at you with a grin, someone makes vulgar gestures towards you hinting at your adventures.'
-	if GorSlut >= 5:'All around you are recognized as a whore. Some came by and slap you on the ass. A grandmother on the benches calls you whore.'
+	if GorSlut = 3:'You catch people staring at you intently, as if they''re supposed to know who you are but can''t quite remember why. You sincerely hope they don''t realize your promiscuous adventures are the reason why. The occasional person chuckling and pointing at you crushes those hopes, and you quickly keep walking before they get a chance to say anything.'
+	if GorSlut = 4:'People look at you with lewd grins on their faces, some of them even making vulgar gestures. Looks like they know what you''ve been up to.'
+	if GorSlut >= 5:'Everywhere you go, people recognize you as a whore. Some even come over and slap you on the ass, claiming they know you like it when they do, or claiming they want to sample your goods. An elderly woman sitting on a bench calls out to you, loudly calling you a slut and a whore. You hide your face and run away as fast as you can, before she can draw too much attention to you.'
 end
 
 gs 'stat'
@@ -285,33 +284,30 @@ gs 'time'
 
 if car > 0 and cardrive = 20:
 	cardrive = 20
-	'Parked on the street is <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">your <<$car>></a>.'
+	'Your <a href="exec:gs ''carF'', ''start''">car<<$car>></a> is parked in the street.'
 end
 
 if marudatestinterface = 0:
 
 	if StoryLine = 1 and ParHomeBlock = 0:
-		'You live in the old five estate, <a href="exec:minut += 2 & GT ''pod_ezd'',''etaj_1''" class=plain>block number 1</a>, in your parents <a href="exec:minut += 5 & GT ''korrPar''" class=plain>apartment</a>. <<$gcartext>>'
+		'You live in one of the apartment blocks in the old part of Pavlovsky, and the door to the <a href="exec:minut += 2 & GT ''pod_ezd'',''etaj_1''" class=plain>apartment building</a> is right there. Your <a href="exec:minut += 5 & GT ''korrPar''" class=plain>parents'' home</a> is on the second floor there. <<$gcartext>>'
 	elseif StoryLine = 1:
-		'The old five estate, in <a href="exec:minut += 2 & GT ''pod_ezd'',''etaj_1''" class=plain>block number 1</a>, your parents live. <<$gcartext>>'
+		'One of the apartment blocks in the old part of Pavlovsky, and the door to the <a href="exec:minut += 2 & GT ''pod_ezd'',''etaj_1''" class=plain>apartment building</a> is right there. Your parents live here, but you are no longer welcome in their home. <<$gcartext>>'
 	else
 		'<<$gcartext>>'
 	end
 
 	if rexCar = 1 and rexCarDay = daystart and hour >= 21 and hour < 23 and rexSisTalk = 3:
-		'By the entrance Rex is waiting for you.'
-		act 'Sit in Rexs car':gt'reks','avto'
+		'Rex is in his car, waiting for you at the parking lot near the apartment building where your parents live.'
+		act 'Join Rex in his car':gt'reks','avto'
 	end
 	if rexCar = 1 and rexCarDay = daystart and hour = 21 and rexSisTalk = 4:
-		'By the entrance Rex is waiting for you.'
-		act 'Sit in Rexs car':gt'reks','avto2'
+		'Rex is in his car, waiting for you at the parking lot near the apartment building where your parents live.'
+		act 'Join Rex in his car':gt'reks','avto2'
 	end
 
-	if ArtemBeInHome > 0 and artemblok = 0:'Apartment <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemhome''">Artem Chebotarev</a>.'
-	if LariskaHomeIn > 0: 'Apartment <a href="exec:minut += 15 & GT ''LariskaHome''" class=plain>Lariska Gruzdevaya</a>'
-
 	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
-		$Pharmname = ', opposite which there is a <a href="exec: minut += 15 & gt ''gaptek'', ''start''">Pharmacy</a>.'
+		$Pharmname = ', and the <a href="exec: minut += 15 & gt ''gaptek'', ''start''">pharmacy</a> is right across the street.'
 	else
 		$Pharmname = '.'
 	end
@@ -321,25 +317,27 @@ if marudatestinterface = 0:
 		'.'
 	end
 	
-	'The town is situated by a <a href="exec:GT ''Glake''">lake</a> and includes a decent sized <a href="exec:gt ''gskver'', ''park''">park</a>.'
-	'It is serviced by a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''vokzalG''">Train Station</a> by the highway, with a nearby <a href="exec:gt ''zaprF'', ''start''">Gas Station</a>.'
-	'There is a small <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''gpoli''">Clinic</a><<$Pharmname>>'
+	'The town is situated by a <a href="exec:GT ''Glake''">lake</a> and includes a fairly large <a href="exec:gt ''gskver'', ''park''">park</a>.'
+	'It is serviced by a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''vokzalG''">train station</a>, which lies next to the highway. Near the highway you can also find a <a href="exec:gt ''zaprF'', ''start''">gas station</a>.'
+	'There is a small <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''gpoli''">clinic</a><<$Pharmname>>'
 
-	'The town centre features a <a href="exec:gt ''gdk''">Community Centre</a><<$schoolname>>'
+	'The town square features a <a href="exec:gt ''gdk''">community center</a><<$schoolname>>'
 	
-	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 17:'The <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''barbershop'', ''start''">local barbershop</a>.'
-	if hour >= 7 and hour <= 18:'Also, a <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos20''">Vocational School</a>.'
-	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'Plus, a kiosk selling <a href="exec:dynamic $kiosksig">cigarettes</a>.'
+	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 17:'The local <a href="exec: minut += 3 & gt ''barbershop'', ''start''">barbershop</a> is within walking distance, merely a few minutes away.'
+	if hour >= 7 and hour <= 18:'Pavlovsky also has a <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos20''">vocational school</a>, where young adults can learn a trade.'
+	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 22:'Right outside your apartment, a <a href="exec:dynamic $kiosksig">kiosk</a> sells cigarettes and magazines.'
 	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:'The only major store in town is the <a href="exec:gt ''shop'', ''start''">supermarket</a>.'
 
-	'On the outskirts of town is a <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''Gshveyfab'', ''start''">Garment factory named Paris Commune</a> and a <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''garmassiv''">number of garages</a>.'
-
+	'A <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''Gshveyfab'', ''start''">garment factory</a> named Paris Commune is situated near the outskirts of town, close to the highway. Inhabitants of Pavlovsky who own a car can store it in the <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''garmassiv''">garages</a>.'
 
-	if DimaBeHomeOnce = 1 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:'Private house, home to <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaGoHome2''">Dimka Nosov</a>.'
-	if katjaFirstKiss >= 1:'Private house, home to <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''KatjaHome''">Katja Meynold</a>.'
-	if BeInNatBelHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'On the 4th floor of your block is the apartment of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''NatBelHome''">Natasha Belova</a>.'
-	if BeInJulMilHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'On the 3rd floor of your block is the apartment of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''JuliaMilHome''">Julia Milova</a>.'
-	if beinalbinahome > 0:'Luxurious mansion belonging to the family of your friend <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaporog''">Albina Barlovskaya</a>.'
+''
+	if ArtemBeInHome > 0 and artemblok = 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemhome''">Artem Chebotarev</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the first floor.'
+	if BeInJulMilHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''JuliaMilVhod''">Julia Milova</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the third floor.'
+	if BeInNatBelHome = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour <= 20 and week < 6 or hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and week >= 6:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''NatBelHome''">Natasha Belova</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the same apartment building as your parents, on the fourth floor.'
+	if DimaBeHomeOnce = 1 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaGoHome2''">Dimka Nosov</a>, one of your classmates, lives in one of the fancier houses in town.'
+	if katjaFirstKiss >= 1:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''KatjaHome''">Katja Meynold</a>, one of your classmates, lives in the richer part of town.'
+	if LariskaHomeIn > 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & GT ''LariskaHome''" class=plain>Larissa Gruzdev</a>, one of your classmates, lives about 15 minutes away from your parents.'
+	if beinalbinahome > 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaporog''">Albina Barlovskaya</a>, one of your classmates, lives in one of the few luxurious mansions Pavlovsky has to offer.'
 
 
 	if workPTU > 2:act '<b>Go to the hostel</b>':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos40'
@@ -366,11 +364,12 @@ if StoryLine = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour < 23 and cumface > 0 and rand(0, 3) = 0
 
 	if sosedknow = 0:
 		sosedknow = 1
-		'Suddenly someone call out to you "<<$name>>." You turn around and see a neighbor Uncle Misha, he looks at your face with surprise "It''s that on your face?" You blush and hesitate, Stra hand to wipe off the face of sperm. he grins "Well, all clear." and goes on about his business.'
+		'As you walk though Pavlovsky, someone calls out to you "<<$name>>!" You turn around and see uncle Misha, your neighbor. He looks at your face in amazement: "Your face looks like a mess! What is that?"'
+		'You blush and hesitate, trying to inconspicuously wipe the sperm off your face. It''s obviously not working; he already noticed. You see his eyes widen when he realizes what it is. "I see. Looks like you had fun", he grins as he continues on his way.'
 	else
-		'Once again you are confronted face to face with Uncle Misha, your neighbor, he chuckled looking at you "Well."'
+		'Once again you run into uncle Misha, your neighbor. He notices the sperm on your face: "Again? Looks like you''ve been busy, girl. Nice look, it suits you."'
 	end
-	act 'Further':gt $curloc
+	act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 	exit
 end
 
@@ -379,9 +378,9 @@ if magik >= 1 and mainQW = 0 and altQS = 1:
 	*clr
 	mainQW = 1
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/main.jpg"></center>'
-	'At the entrance you see Karin and Juugo. Karin adjusts glasses and looks around, Juugo seems to have his head in the clouds and a strange look on his face as his tattoos are not visible.'
-	'Karin closely looks around you, "I felt a burst of energy. Were you attacked by a magician?"'
-	act 'No':gt 'mainQW'
+	'At the entrance to the apartment building you see Karin and Juugo. Karin adjusts her glasses and looks around, while Juugo seems to have his head in the clouds not really paying attention to his surroundings. His tattoos are not visible.'
+	'Karin closely looks around you: "I felt a burst of energy. Were you attacked by a magician?"'
+	act 'No?':gt 'mainQW'
 
 	exit
 end

+ 79 - 81
locations/gschool

@@ -6,18 +6,17 @@ gs 'stat'
 gs 'time'
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">School</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/gschool.jpg"></center>'
-'Ordinary school where local children learn.'
+'Pavlovsky''s only school, all the local children go here for their education.'
 
 
-act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
+act 'Return to town':gt 'gorodok'
 
 if zverRageQW = 1:
 	cls
 	zverRageQW = 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'time'
-	'As you cross the school yard after school, you are surprised by a powerful kick to your ass. Dumbfounded you turn to see Christina Zverev her face contorted with rage, she yells at you.'
-	'"You fucking bitch! How dare you spread shit about me like that? I''ll break your fucking face!"'
+	'As you cross the school yard after school, you are surprised by a powerful kick in your back. You fall to your hands and knees and rub your sore back for a second, before you turn around and see Christina Zvereva, her face contorted with rage. She yells at you, "You fucking bitch! How dare you spread shit about me like that? I''ll break your fucking face!"'
 	$nameV = 'Christina'
 	!!stats
 	strenV = 85
@@ -53,40 +52,40 @@ end
 
 if day = 31 and month = 12 and age <= 17 and StoryLine = 1 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and SchoolBlock ! 1:
 	if hour = 14:
-		'Near the school are already well-dressed girls and boys in your class. Someone called you "<<$name>>, you did not hand over a thousand for the new year"'
+		'All the boys and girls are standing near the school. Everyone did their best to look good today, wearing their nicest clothes. Someone calls out to you, "Hey <<$name>>, are you coming to the New Year''s Eve party or not? You didn''t pay the 1000 rubles entry fee yet!"'
 
-		if money >= 1000:act 'Go to a party (1,000 rubles)':money -= 1000 & gt 'sny'
+		if money >= 1000:act 'Go to the party (1,000 rubles)':money -= 1000 & gt 'sny'
 	end
 end
 if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10:
-	'Near the school students from different schools and athletes prepare for the running competition.'
+	'Athletic students of your school and other schools in the area have gathered at the athletics track near your school. Everyone is getting ready for the running competition.'
 
-	act 'Participate in city running race':
+	act 'Participate in the 400m sprint event':
 		cls
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You sign up to the race with the other athletes. As you prepare for the competition, you watch the guys race. As expected Ivan Prokhorov won. After the guys have finished it''s the girls turn.'
+		'You think you might be able to win, and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan Prokhorov wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
 
 		if swinbeggor = 0:
-			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She scoffs at you, "You''ll never beat me."'
+			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She scoffs at you, "You''ll never beat me!"'
 		elseif swinbeggor = 1:
-			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She looks at you angrily, "You beat me once, but never again."'
+			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She looks at you angrily and says, "You beat me once, but never again!"'
 		elseif swinbeggor = 2:
-			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She looks at you with hatred "You again, bitch? Never mind, this time I''ll do it!"'
+			'Getting ready at the start is Christina Zvereva, one of the girls in your class. She looks at you with hatred, "You again, bitch? You''re going down this time, I promise you!"'
 		end
 
-		act 'Go to start':
+		act 'Go to the start':
 			cls
 			kolsorev += 1
 			minut += 30
 			schoolSorev = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/begsor.jpg"></center>'
-			'Girls 400 meters race. You change clothes and go to the track.'
+			'The 400m sprint event for girls is up next. You take off your jacket and go the starting line, mentally preparing yourself for the race.'
 			wait 725
-			'On your marks.'
+			'On your marks...'
 			wait 725
-			'Get set.'
+			'Get set...'
 			wait 725
 			'Go!'
 			wait 725
@@ -94,25 +93,25 @@ if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10:
 			begresult = beg + speed + vital + rand(1, 20) - salo/2 - rand(1, 20)
 
 			if begresult <= 0:
-				'You barely managed to reach the line, there''s no point checking were you finished, you are last by some distance.'
+				'You barely manage to reach the finish line at all. There''s no point in checking where you finished, you already know you were last by quite a large margin.'
 			elseif begresult < 70:
-				'You struggle through the race, finishing in last place.'
+				'You struggle to keep up with the other girls, and finish in last place.'
 			elseif begresult < 80:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to finish second to last.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to finish second to last.'
 			elseif begresult < 90:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 6th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 6th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 100:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 5th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 5th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 110:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 4th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 4th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 120:
-				'You fought hard and manage to take 3rd place. The P.E. teacher congratulates you.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
 			elseif begresult < 130:
-				'You fought hard and managed to take 2nd place. The P.E. teacher congratulates you on your success.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
 			else
 				swinbeggor += 1
 				dom += 1
-				'You fought hard and managed to take 1st place. The P.E. teacher congratulate you on winning the competition.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to reach the finish line before anyone else. First place! Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition yet again while you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
 			end
 
 			beg += 1
@@ -122,13 +121,13 @@ if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10:
 				razradbeg = 2
 				grupNPC[18] = 0
 				zverevaQW = 1
-				'You have won the competition three times and your P.E. teacher awards you the second sports category in running. Christina Zvereva stands nearby, staring at you the whole time snarling, her hands balled into fists.'
+				'You have won the competition three more times and mr. Pavlovich awards you the second tier sports trophy in running. Christina Zvereva stands nearby glaring at you the whole time, her hands balled into fists. She''s seething with rage, realizing she cannot beat you.'
 			elseif swinbeggor = 2 and begresult >= 130:
 				grupNPC[18] = 0
-				'At the finish line is Christina Zvereva trying to catch her breath, she was unable to overtake you, and came second. Christina tries not to look you in the eye.'
+				'Christina Zvereva is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you, and came second again. Christina avoids your gaze, not wanting to look you in the eye.'
 			elseif swinbeggor = 1 and begresult >= 130:
 				grupNPC[18] = 0
-				'At the finish line is Christina Zvereva trying to catch her breath, she was unable to overtake you, and came second. Through clenched teeth Christina growls at you, "You bitch!"'
+				'Christina Zvereva is gasping for breath at the finish line. She was unable to overtake you, and came second yet again. You just flash her a teethy grin and continue your victory lap. Through clenched teeth Christina growls at you, "You bitch!"'
 			end
 
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -139,26 +138,26 @@ if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 2 and hour = 10:
 end
 
 if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 1 and hour = 10:
-	'Near the school are students from different classes preparing for the running competition.'
+	'Athletic students of your school and other schools in the area have gathered at the athletics track near your school. Everyone is getting ready for the running competition.'
 
-	act 'Participate in school running race':
+	act 'Participate in the 400m sprint race':
 		cls
 		minut += 30
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You came to the athletes and he wrote you. After this athlete finished all the preparations for the competition and the guys went to a stratum. The guys went over and as expected won the Ivan Prokhorov. After the guys finished the turn girls.'
+		'You think you might be able to win, and sign up to participate in the competition. After quickly changing into your running gear you return to the track. The guys are having their race first, and you watch them as you prepare. As expected, Ivan Prokhorov wins. When the guys have finished, it is the girls'' turn.'
 
-		act 'Go to start':
+		act 'Go to the start':
 			cls
 			minut += 30
 			schoolSorev = 0
 			kolsorev += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/begsor.jpg"></center>'
-			'Girls 400 meters race. You change clothes and go to the track.'
+			'The 400m sprint event for girls is up next. You take off your jacket and go the starting line, mentally preparing yourself for the race.'
 			wait 725
-			'On your marks.'
+			'On your marks...'
 			wait 725
-			'Get set.'
+			'Get set...'
 			wait 725
 			'Go!'
 			wait 725
@@ -166,25 +165,25 @@ if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 1 and hour = 10:
 			begresult = beg + speed + vital + rand(1, 20) - salo/2 - rand(1, 20)
 
 			if begresult <= 0:
-				'You barely managed to reach the line, there''s no point checking were you finished, you are last by some distance.'
+				'You barely manage to reach the finish line at all. There''s no point in checking where you finished, you already know you were last by quite a large margin.'
 			elseif begresult < 10:
-				'You struggle through the race, finishing in last place.'
+				'You struggle to keep up with the other girls, and finish in last place.'
 			elseif begresult < 20:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to finish second to last.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to finish second to last.'
 			elseif begresult < 30:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 6th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 6th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 40:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 5th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 5th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 50:
-				'You fought hard, but only manage to take 4th place.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, but only manage to take 4th place.'
 			elseif begresult < 60:
-				'You fought hard and manage to take 3rd place. The P.E. teacher congratulates you.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 3rd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you.'
 			elseif begresult < 70:
-				'You fought hard and manage to take 2nd place. The P.E. teacher congratulates you on your success.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to take 2nd place. Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on your achievement.'
 			else
 				swinbeg += 1
 				dom += 1
-				'You fought hard and manage to take 1st place. The P.E. teacher congratulate you on winning the competition.'
+				'You run as fast as you can, and manage to reach the finish line before anyone else. First place! Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, congratulates you on winning the competition, as you walk around with your arms raised in triumph.'
 			end
 
 			beg += 1
@@ -192,29 +191,29 @@ if week = 6 and schoolSorev = 1 and hour = 10:
 
 			if swinbeg = 3 and razradbeg = 0:
 				razradbeg = 1
-				'You have won the school competition three times and your P.E. teacher announces that your success has not gone unnoticed and awards you the third sports category in running.'
+				'You have won the school running competition three times now and Mr. Pavlovich, the P.E. teacher at your school, announces that your success has not gone unnoticed. He smiles and awards you the third tier sports trophy in running, which you proudly accept and show to everyone.'
 			end
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
+			act 'Return to town':gt 'gorodok'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if hour <= 8 and week < 6 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and kanikuli = 6:
-	'Today is graduation and the school prom.'
+	'Today is graduation day! The school prom is tonight as well.'
 
-	act 'Go to graduation':
+	act 'Go to your graduation':
 		cls
 		SchoolAtestat = 1
 		intel += 10
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Everyone form your year assembles. The teachers congratulate you all on successful completion of school and hand out diplomas.'
+		'Everyone from your year is assembled in the classroom. Your teachers have gathered in front of the class, and congratulate all of you on completing high school. As they hand everyone their well-earned diplomas, they wish you luck for the future.'
 
-		act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
+		act 'Leave to town':gt 'gorodok'
 
-		act 'Go to the prom':
+		act 'Go to the prom party':
 			cls
 			minut += 120
 			alko += 5
@@ -225,9 +224,9 @@ if hour <= 8 and week < 6 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and kanikuli =
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'clothing', 'strip'
 			!!gee gee, no normal outlet
-			'After graduation all get as drunk as assholes. You barely remember anything that happened, only that you were one of the group who went skinny-dipping in the fountain. You wake up by the town center completely naked.'
+			'After the official graduation, everyone gets hammered at the prom party. You don''t remember much of what happened, only recalling a few flashbacks of going skinny dipping in the town fountain with a group of friends. When you wake up somewhere in the town center, all of your clothes are missing and you are completely naked.'
 
-			act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
+			act 'Go home':gt 'korrPar'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -236,7 +235,7 @@ if hour <= 8 and week < 6 and StoryLine > 0 and SchoolAtestat = 0 and kanikuli =
 	if $clothingworntype = 'sforma':
 		act 'Go to school':gt 'gschool2'
 	else
-		'You can only attend school if you are wearing your school uniform.'
+		'You''re not allowed to attend any classes at school if you''re not wearing your school uniform.'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -245,19 +244,19 @@ if hour >= 16 and GorSlut >= 3 and SchoolGossip > 0 and afterschoolday ! daystar
 
 	if aftgopbjrand = 0:
 		cla
-		'Waiting for you at the school exit are Vitek and his friends. "Well, then cocksucker. Ready to work your fucking mouth? Come with us back to school."'
+		'Vitek and his friends are waiting for you by the school exit. "Hold on, <<$name>>. Everyone in school says you''re a great cocksucker. Do you want to put that mouth of yours to work? Come back to school with us, let''s have some fun."'
 
 		act 'Return to school':
 			cls
 			afterschoolday = daystart
 			SchoolGossip += 1
-			minut += 60
+			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You return to school with the boys giggling and looking at you. Dan says, "I do not understand why such an experienced cocksucker, still doesn''t get it?"'
+			'You return to school with the guys, sometimes feeling a hand on your ass as you walk through the hallway. You pretend to ignore it and just keep walking, but in the meantime your heart is racing. The guys pull you into the men''s room and tell you to get on your knees.'
 
-			act 'Suck':
+			act 'Suck Vitek''s cock':
 				cls
-				minut += 60
+				minut += 15
 				bj += 3
 
 				if npcSex[9] = 0:npcSex[9] = 1 & guy += 1
@@ -267,24 +266,24 @@ if hour >= 16 and GorSlut >= 3 and SchoolGossip > 0 and afterschoolday ! daystar
 				sub += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/toiletBJtreesome.jpg"></center>'
-				'You obediently squat and pull Viteks member out of his sweatpants. You clasp his hard cock between your <<$liptalk3>> and start sucking him off. Dan and Bob come to you and take out their members. You become one by one to pleasure cocks with your mouth, caressing those that are not in your mouth with your hands.'
+				'You obediently squat and pull Vitek''s member out of his sweatpants. You rub his hard cock against your <<$liptalk3>>, and then open your mouth and begin to suck him off. After making sure no one is coming, Dan and Vasily also approach you and take out their members, pointing them at you expectantly. Now sucking the dicks of all three boys in turns, you do your best to still please the ones you''re not sucking on by caressing them with your hands.'
 
-				act 'Suck':
+				act 'Take their cum on your face':
 					cls
-					minut += 60
+					minut += 15
 					bj += 3
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					spafinloc = 7
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					sub += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/toiletBJcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Finally, a member discharges semen in your mouth. Watching you as sperm follows from your mouth, the remaining guys cum on your face. You close your eyes and obediently wait until the boys have finished. Finally, they leave you, walking away laughing at you.'
+					'You close your eyes to fully focus on what you''re doing, and a few minutes later you feel the dick that''s currently in your mouth spasm. Several ropes of cum hit your tongue; it tastes rather bitter. Carefully opening one eye, you see that it is Vitek''s. The other two guys tell you to keep your eyes closed, and Dan shoots his load on your face before you can even comply. Luckily, he didn''t hit the eye that was open. You obediently close them, and a few seconds later you feel Vasily''s cum splattering against your eye lids and cheek. You hear the click of a camera, and open your eyes after carefully wiping the cum off your eye lids. They pull up their pants and leave, laughing at how much of a slut you are and how they had never thought you would actually come with them.'
 
-					act 'Leave':gt $curloc
+					act 'Leave the school building':gt $curloc
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -299,33 +298,32 @@ if hour = 16 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
 
 	if LinaSlut > 0:
 		randLina = rand(1,10)
-		if randLina < 3:'You see Lina, Dan and Vasily leaving school.'
+		if randLina < 3:'You see Lina, Dan and Vasily leaving the school together.'
 	end
 
-	if LariskaHomeIn > 0:'Walking through the courtyard of the school walks <a href="exec:minut += 1 & GT ''LariskaGo''">Lariska Gruzdev</a>.'
-
-	if JuliaMilLernQW >= 1:'Strolling across the school yard is <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''JuliaMilGo''">Julia Milov</a>.'
-	if NatBelLernQW >= 1:'Strolling across the school yard is <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''NatBelGo''">Natasha Belova</a>.'
-	if artemLernQW >= 1 and artemVitokQW ! 2:'Waiting for you buy the school entrance is <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemEv'', ''start''">Artem Chebotarev</a>.'
+	if LariskaHomeIn > 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 1 & GT ''LariskaGo''">Larissa Gruzdev</a> impatiently walks back and fourth across the courtyard, as if she''s waiting for someone.'
+	if JuliaMilLernQW >= 1:'<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''JuliaMilGo''">Julia Milova</a> is sitting somewhere on the school courtyard, reading a book.'
+	if NatBelLernQW >= 1:'<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''NatBelGo''">Natasha Belova</a> is standing in a corner.'
+	if artemLernQW >= 1 and artemVitokQW ! 2:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artemEv'', ''start''">Artem Chebotarev</a> is waiting for you near the school entrance.'
 	if albinaCarday ! daystart:
-		!!if DanceWhore > 0 or AlbinaLast > 0 or AlbinaBlokDance > 0:'You see standing in the school yard and BMW X5 <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaEv''">Albina Barlovskuyu</a> sitting behind the wheel'
-		if AlbFrend >= 1 and albrideday ! daystart:'Near a large black SUV parked near the school stands <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaRide''">Albina Barlovskaya</a>.'
+		!!if DanceWhore > 0 or AlbinaLast > 0 or AlbinaBlokDance > 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaEv''">Albina Barlovskaya</a> is sitting behind the wheel of her brand new BMW X5, waiting near the school.'
+		if AlbFrend >= 1 and albrideday ! daystart:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''albinaRide''">Albina Barlovskaya</a> is waiting behind the wheel of a large black SUV, parked near the school.'
 	end
 
-	if katjaMeynoldday ! daystart and meynoldQW >= 2:'Strolling across the school yard is <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''katjaEv''">Katja Meynold</a>.'
+	if katjaMeynoldday ! daystart and meynoldQW >= 2:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''katjaEv''">Katja Meynold</a> is walking across the school courtyard, getting ready to go home.'
 	if DimaBeHomeOnce = 1 and DimaRudeBlock = 0:
-		'In the school yard, deep in thought, you see <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaGoHome2''">Dimka Nosov</a>.'
+		'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaGoHome2''">Dimka Nosov</a> is deep in thought, as he leans against a lamp post.'
 	elseif DimaRudeQW > 0 and dimarudeday ! daystart and DimaRudeBlock = 0:
-		'In the school yard, deep in thought, you see <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaRudeEv''">Dimka Nosov</a>.'
+		'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''dimaRudeEv''">Dimka Nosov</a> is deep in thought, as he leans against a lamp post.'
 	end
-	if IgorLoverQW > 0 and igorkruglovday ! daystart and IdorBlock = 0:'Strolling across the school yard is <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''IgorEv''">Igor Kruglov</a>.'
-	if fedorKozlovQW >= 10:'Far away from the school entrance stands <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''FedorEv''">Fedor Kozlov</a>, he is glad to see you and waves you over to him.'
+	if IgorLoverQW > 0 and igorkruglovday ! daystart and IdorBlock = 0:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''IgorEv''">Igor Kruglov</a> is talking to some of his friends on the courtyard.'
+	if fedorKozlovQW >= 10:'<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''FedorEv''">Fedor Kozlov</a> is standing by himself, far away from the school entrance. When he sees you, he happily waves you over to him.'
 end
 
 if strelaDay ! daystart and strelaQW = 1 and hour = 16:
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'A Mitsubishi Pajero and BMW drive upto the school gates. Strong, musclular guys in leather jackets and tracksuits get out of the cars. They have came to meet Vitek, Dan and Bob. You watch them talking about something before you notice Fedor Kozlov leaving school, his face swollen and bruised. Kozlov waves his hand at you, "<<$name>>, come here, you''re a witness."'
+	'A Mitsubishi Pajero and a BMW drive up to the school gates. Strong, muscular guys in leather jackets and tracksuits get out of the cars. They have came to meet Vitek, Dan and Vasily. You watch them talk about something, though you''re not close enough to hear what it''s about. Then you notice Fedor Kozlov leaving school; his face all swollen and bruised. Fedor waves his hand at you, "<<$name>>! Come here, you''re my witness!"'
 
 	act 'Go and see what he needs':gt 'strela'
 

Datei-Diff unterdrückt, da er zu groß ist
+ 290 - 274
locations/gschool2


+ 12 - 10
locations/onobjsel

@@ -580,8 +580,6 @@ $din_cheat_Slutshot = {
 $din_cheat_menu_permanent = {
 	gs'stat'
 	clr
-	if cheatStatusBars = 0:$cheatStatusBars = 'OFF'
-	if cheatStatusBars = 1:$cheatStatusBars = '<b>ON</b>'
 	if cheatWork = 0:$cheatWork = 'OFF'
 	if cheatWork = 1:$cheatWork = '<b>ON</b>'
 	if cheatHapri = 0:$cheatHapri = 'OFF'
@@ -1114,6 +1112,9 @@ $objcheat_menu = {
 	nl
 	pl '<a href="exec:dynamic $din_cheat_dynamic">Dynamic Input Command</a>'
 	nl
+	if cheatStatusBars = 0:$cheatStatusBars = 'OFF'
+	if cheatStatusBars = 1:$cheatStatusBars = '<b>ON</b>'
+	pl
    	pl'<a href="exec:gt''gorodok''">Teleport to Pavlovsky</a>'
    	pl'<a href="exec:gt''street''">Teleport to City</a>'
    	pl'<a href="exec:gt''gadukino''">Teleport to Gadukino</a>'
@@ -1567,11 +1568,13 @@ $menu_lookon[2] = 'Clothing:$menu_clothes'
 $menu_lookon[3] = 'Tattoos:$menu_tattoos'
 $menu_lookon[4] = 'Piercing:$menu_pirs'
 
-$menu_other[0] = 'Refresh:$menu_obnovit'
-$menu_other[1] = 'Notebook:$menu_bloknot'
-$menu_other[2] = 'Emergency exit:$menu_avariya'
-$menu_other[3] = 'The old menu:$menu_addoldmenu'
-$menu_other[4] = 'Cheat menu:$menu_cheat'
+$menu_view[0] = 'The old menu:$menu_addoldmenu'
+$menu_view[1] = 'Cheat menu:$menu_cheat'
+$menu_view[2] = 'Refresh:$menu_obnovit'
+
+killvar 'menu_other'
+$menu_other[0] = 'Notebook:$menu_bloknot'
+$menu_other[1] = 'Emergency exit:$menu_avariya'
 if disable_autosave = 1:
 	$menu_other[5] = 'Enable autosave:$menu_autosave'
 else
@@ -1607,6 +1610,7 @@ if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/look.png">':menu '$menu_lookon'
 if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/Proch.png">':menu '$menu_other'
 if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/Phone.png">':gs 'din_bad' & dynamic $Phone_menu
 if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/Purse.png">':dynamic $d_bag
+if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/menu.png">':menu '$menu_view'
 !The new menu: end
 
 if $selobj = 'Player':
@@ -1616,9 +1620,7 @@ if $selobj = 'Player':
 	pl'Growth <<rost>> see, weight 100 kg.'
 end
 
-if $selobj = '<img src="images/pic/icon/menu.png">':
-	clr
-	gs 'stat'
+
 !'
 	gs'Menu.Create','mainMenu'
 	gs'Menu.Add','mainMenu','Status Bar','','MenuMainLoc','0'

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