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Merge remote-tracking branch 'Monztah/V1.1.3-Patches' into V1.1.3-Patches

* Monztah/V1.1.3-Patches:
  Translation fixes
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  1. 3 3
      locations/agentned
  2. 31 15
      locations/albdin

+ 3 - 3
locations/agentned

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ gs 'stat'
 act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 
 if StoryLine > 0 and housr = 0:
-	'You can buy an apartment in a residential of 2 million. Renting an apartment costs 200 rubles per day, minimum rental is for a period of 30 days.'
+	'You can buy an apartment in the residential area for a cost of 2 million. Renting an apartment costs 200 rubles per day, minimum rental is for a period of 30 days.'
 
 	if money >= 2000000:
 		act 'Buy an apartment (2,000,000 rubles)':
@@ -24,14 +24,14 @@ end
 
 if BuyHous ! 1:
 	if money >= 6000:
-		act 'Rent an apartment in residental district (6,000 rubles)':
+		act 'Rent an apartment in the residental area (6,000 rubles)':
 			cls
 			money -= 6000
 			housr = 1
 			BuyHous = 2
 			ArendHouseSL += 30
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You rented a flat in a residential area. Now you <<ArendHouseSL>> rental days.'
+			'You rented a flat in the residential area. You have paid for <<ArendHouseSL>> rental days.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 		end

+ 31 - 15
locations/albdin

@@ -12,13 +12,13 @@ if temp = 0:
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/game.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Albina laid before a huge TV which was connected set-top box.'
-		'Albina turned on the game and you started to play with her.'
+		'You and Albina laid down in front of a huge TV with a set-top box.'
+		'Albina turned on the game and you started playing together with her.'
 
 		if albsexday = daystart:
 			act 'Rest':gt $curloc
 		else
-			'Albina winking at you "<<$name>>, and let''s play on the desire, if I win, I''ll do something with you, and if you win, you can do with me anything"'
+			'Albina winks at you and says "<<$name>>, let''s have a wager. If I win, I can do anything I want with you, and if you win you can do anything you want with me"'
 
 			act 'Refuse':gt $curloc
 
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if temp = 0:
 				end
 
 				if albplay = 0:
-					'Albina easily beat you and laughing as the villain of the vaudeville slapped you on the ass palm "Arise cancer <<$name>>! Be my bitch."'
+					'Although you tried your best, Albina proved a worthy opponent. Laughing like the villain of a theater play, she slaps you on the ass with the palm of her hand, saying "Show me your ass, <<$name>>! You are my bitch now!"'
 
 					if rand(0, 1) = 0:
 						act 'Get on all fours':
@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@ if temp = 0:
 							straponVagPass += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/strapon.jpg"></center>'
-							'Albina took <<dick>> inch strap-on harness and attach it to yourself. Her hands stroked gently between your legs and you feel as her fingers began to caress your pussy.'
+							'Albina takes a <<dick>> inch strap-on harness and attaches it to herself.'
+							'Having strapped herself in, you feel her hands gently stroking the inside of your thighs, slowly working their way to your pussy.'
 							gs 'dinsex2', 'd_strapon_vag'
 
 							act 'Rest':gt $curloc
@@ -78,14 +79,15 @@ if temp = 0:
 							straponAnalPass += 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/analstrapon.jpg"></center>'
-							'Albina took <<dick>> inch strap-on harness and attach it to yourself. Her hands stroked gently between your legs and you feel as her fingers began to caress your anus.'
+							'Albina takes a <<dick>> inch strap-on harness and attaches it to herself.'
+							'Having strapped herself in, you feel her hands gently stroking your butt, slowly working their way to your anus.'
 							gs 'dinsex2', 'd_strapon_anal'
 
 							act 'Rest':gt $curloc
 						end
 					end
 				else
-					'Albina purged you, and silently slipped into the hands of you strap. "On, Bey do not regret Chapaya."'
+					'Looking slightly disappointed, Albina hands you a strap-on. "On, Bey do not regret Chapaya."'
 
 					act 'Put Albina on all fours and fuck her pussy':
 						cls
@@ -98,7 +100,12 @@ if temp = 0:
 						straponVagAkt += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/straponakt.jpg"></center>'
-						'You started to peck Albina threesome pussy and she moaned and spit on his back strapon, Finally you''re just tired and stopped.'
+						'You begin gently probing Albina''s nether regions with the strap-on, and soon enough she''s moaning and bucking her hips.'
+						'Deciding it''s time to give her the real deal, you spit on your plastic phallus, give it a nice rub to coat it in saliva and line it up with Albina''s pussy.'
+						'As you enter her, you can see her tense up from pleasure and hear soft moans escape her mouth.'
+						'Slowly ramping up the speed of your thrusts, Albina''s moans get louder and louder and her butt moves in rhythm with you as she nears orgasm.'
+						'Finally Albina cums. Trying to stifle a scream, she grabs on to the sheets and shoves her face down into them as her body shakes slightly from the intense pleasure.'
+						'Done dispensing your punishment, you climb out of the strap-on harness and lie down next to Albina for a few seconds to catch your breath.'
 
 						act 'Rest':gt $curloc
 					end
@@ -112,7 +119,14 @@ if temp = 0:
 						straponVagAkt += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/straponaktanal.jpg"></center>'
-						'You started to peck Albina threesome in the ass and she moaned and spit on his back strapon, Finally you''re just tired and stopped.'
+						'You begin gently kneading Albina''s butt, letting your hands roam all over her supple butt-cheeks and grazing her tight anus.'
+						'As you explore her bum, you realize her anus might be too tight for the strap-on. You lick your index finger and insert it in Albina''s anus. Slowly pushing your finger further in, you can hear her moaning softly.'
+						'As you finger-fuck Albina''s anus, you slowly introduce more and more fingers until three of your fingers are inside her.'
+						'Deciding it''s time to give her the real deal, you spit on your plastic phallus, give it a nice rub to coat it in saliva and line it up with Albina''s anus.'
+						'As you enter her, you can see her tense up from pleasure and hear soft moans escape her mouth. You notice she is gently rubbing her clitoris with one of her hands.'
+						'Slowly ramping up the speed of your thrusts, Albina''s moans get louder and louder and her butt moves in rhythm with you as she nears orgasm.'
+						'Finally Albina cums. Trying to stifle a scream, she grabs on to the sheets and shoves her face down into them as her body shakes slightly from the intense pleasure.'
+						'Done dispensing your punishment, you climb out of the strap-on harness and lie down next to Albina for a few seconds to catch your breath.'
 
 						act 'Rest':gt $curloc
 					end
@@ -121,15 +135,17 @@ if temp = 0:
 		end
 	end
 elseif temp = 1:
-	'Albina offers with her fun trying on dresses.'
-	act 'Trying on clothes':
+	'Albina offers to try on clothes with her.'
+	act 'Go try on some clothes':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
 		manna += 100
 		willpower += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/dressing.jpg"></center>'
-		'You and Albina opened her huge wardrobe and began to dig into the fun rags. She was just a bottomless closet packed with a wide range of clothing and you have an hour together trying on different outfits with Albina.'
+		'You and Albina open her huge wardrobe and begin digging into her various dresses.'
+		'As you rummage around in her wardrobe, you are amazed by how many different clothes she can fit in there. It feels like her wardrobe is a bottomless pit filled with dresses, leggings, jeans, and all kinds of other clothes!'
+		'You end up spending an hour trying on various dresses with Albina.'
 
 		if albsexday ! daystart:
 			act 'Rest':gt $curloc
@@ -138,7 +154,7 @@ elseif temp = 1:
 		end
 	end
 elseif temp = 2:
-	'Albina offers chat.'
+	'Albina offers to chat.'
 	act 'Chat':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
@@ -146,7 +162,7 @@ elseif temp = 2:
 		willpower += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		'You chat with Albina.'
 
 		if albsexday ! daystart:
 			act 'Rest':gt $curloc
@@ -164,7 +180,7 @@ elseif temp = 3:
 		alko += 4
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/albina/drunk.jpg"></center>'
-		''
+		'You drink a glass of wine with Albina.'
 
 		if albsexday ! daystart:
 			act 'Rest':gt $curloc