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merged some more translations from lukeranon

morgolon 10 éve
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      glife.txt
  2. 45 45
      locations/body
  3. 5 5
      locations/butik
  4. 53 54
      locations/dina
  5. 119 119
      locations/etoexhib
  6. 19 19
      locations/pornstudio

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glife.txt


+ 45 - 45
locations/body

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ if analplugIN = 0:
 	if anus > 0 and anus <= 5:anpic = 1 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/1.jpg''">anus</a> is barely used, but you wouldn''t really see that.'
 	if anus > 5 and anus <= 10:anpic = 2 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/2.jpg''">anus</a> has the shape of an asterisk.'
 	if anus > 10 and anus <= 15:anpic = 3 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/3.jpg''">anus</a> is now slightly parted, has it has been used quite often.'
-	if anus > 15 and anus <= 25:anpic = 4 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/4.jpg''">anus</a> look like a wide hole, one would definetely think the only thing you were doing was anal sex.'
+	if anus > 15 and anus <= 25:anpic = 4 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/4.jpg''">anus</a> look like a wide hole, anyone will definitely think that the only thing you do is anal sex.'
 	if anus > 25 and anus <= 35:anpic = 5 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/5.jpg''">anus</a> doesn''t fully close on its own anymore. You could put a fist through it and it wouldn''t stretch at all.'
 	if anus > 35:anpic = 6 & $anus = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/body/6.jpg''">anus</a> is almost completely wrecked. Even with conscious effort it''s hard to close it.' & $anustipe = 'destroyed'
 else
@@ -107,13 +107,13 @@ if hbangs <= 0:$hbangs = ''
 if hbangs > 0:$hbangs = ', with a fringe covering your forehead'
 
 if hscrunchw <= 0:$hscrunch = ''
-if hscrunchw = 1:$hscrunch = ' A hair-tie holds your hair as a ponytail in place.'
+if hscrunchw = 1:$hscrunch = ' A hair-tie holds your hair in place with a ponytail.'
 
 if hpingripw <= 0:$hpingrip = ''
-if hpingripw > 0:$hpingrip = ' Hair-pins hold your hair as an updo-hairstyle in place.'
+if hpingripw > 0:$hpingrip = 'The Hair-pins holds your hair in place with an updo-hairstyle.'
 
 if hscrunchw <= 0:$hpigtail = ''
-if hscrunchw = 2:$hpigtail = ' Two scrunchies hold your hair as a twin-tail styled pigtails in place.'
+if hscrunchw = 2:$hpigtail = ' Two scrunchies holds your hair in place with a twin-tail pigtail style.'
 
 if hbraids <= 0:$hbraids = ''
 if hbraids > 0:$hbraids = ' You have your hair beautifully braided.'
@@ -123,24 +123,24 @@ if hcol = 1:$hcol = 'brown'
 if hcol = 2:$hcol = 'red'
 if hcol = 3:$hcol = 'blonde'
 
-if hairlength <= 30:$hair = 'You have very short, <<$hcol>> hair. It doesn''t cover your ears, with some masculine complexions, one might mistake you for a man. Nonetheless, some people like this style, as it''s easy to take care off.'
-if hairlength > 30 and hairlength <= 80:$hair = 'You have short <<$hcol>> hair, which may cover your ears to the the earlobes. It''s a modern, yet classy, hairstyle. Currently your hair is <<$hapri>>.'
-if hairlength > 80 and hairlength <= 160:$hair = 'You have <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. Your hair goes down to your chinline and is therefore considered to be of a medium length, it fits almost all face shapes. Your hair is at the moment <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hpigtail>>'
-if hairlength > 160 and hairlength <= 260:$hair = 'You have <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. Your hair reaches your shoulders, with several strains going beyond. Currently your hair is <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hbraids>><<$hpigtail>>'
-if hairlength > 260 and hairlength <= 400:$hair = 'You have <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. As your hair reaches your bra-strapline, hairdress would consider this a rather long hair style, yet beautiful styles are created with this length. Your hair is <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hbraids>><<$hpigtail>>'
-if hairlength > 400:$hair = 'Your very long <<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>, that goes beyond your bra-strapline. Rapunzel would be jealous. Your hair is currently <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hbraids>>'
-!!if hcol = 0 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> straight, black hair.'
-!!if hcol = 1 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> straight, brown hair.'
-!!if hcol = 2 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> straight, red hair.'
-!!if hcol = 3 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> straight, blonde hair.'
-!!if hcol = 0 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> curly, black hair.'
-!!if hcol = 1 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> curly, brown hair.'
-!!if hcol = 2 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> curly red hair.'
-!!if hcol = 3 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> curly blonde hair.'
-!!if hcol = 0:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, black hair.'
-!!if hcol = 1:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, brown hair.'
-!!if hcol = 2:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, red hair.'
-!!if hcol = 3:$hair = 'You have <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, blonde hair.'
+if hairlength <= 30:$hair = 'You have a very short <<$hcol>> hair. It doesn''t cover your ears, with some masculine complexions, someone might mistake you for a man. Nonetheless, some people like this style, as it''s easy to take care off.'
+if hairlength > 30 and hairlength <= 80:$hair = 'You have a short <<$hcol>> hair, which may cover your ears to the the earlobes. It''s a modern, yet classy, hairstyle. Currently your hair is <<$hapri>>.'
+if hairlength > 80 and hairlength <= 160:$hair = 'You have a <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. Your hair goes down to your chin line and can be considered of a medium length, it fits almost all face shapes. Your hair is at the moment <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hpigtail>>'
+if hairlength > 160 and hairlength <= 260:$hair = 'You have a <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. Your hair reaches your shoulders, with several strains going beyond. Currently your hair is <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hbraids>><<$hpigtail>>'
+if hairlength > 260 and hairlength <= 400:$hair = 'You have a <<$curly>><<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>. As your hair reaches your bra-strapline, hairdressers would consider this a rather long hair style, yet beautiful styles are created with this length. Your hair is <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hpingrip>><<$hbraids>><<$hpigtail>>'
+if hairlength > 400:$hair = 'You have a very long <<$hcol>> hair<<$hbangs>>, that goes beyond your bra-strapline. Rapunzel would be jealous. Your hair is currently <<$hapri>>.<<$hscrunch>><<$hbraids>>'
+!!if hcol = 0 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> straight, black hair.'
+!!if hcol = 1 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> straight, brown hair.'
+!!if hcol = 2 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> straight, red hair.'
+!!if hcol = 3 and curly <= 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> straight, blonde hair.'
+!!if hcol = 0 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> curly, black hair.'
+!!if hcol = 1 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> curly, brown hair.'
+!!if hcol = 2 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> curly red hair.'
+!!if hcol = 3 and curly > 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> curly blonde hair.'
+!!if hcol = 0:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, black hair.'
+!!if hcol = 1:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, brown hair.'
+!!if hcol = 2:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, red hair.'
+!!if hcol = 3:$hair = 'You have a <<$hapri>> <<$curly>>, blonde hair.'
 !!! Maruda Hair Mod
 
 if lip > 4:lip = 4
@@ -205,21 +205,21 @@ if glaraz = 3:$glaza = 'You have a huge <<$glacol>> eyes that almost look like t
 
 if mop = 0:$mop = '<b><font color="red">Your makeup is smeared all over your face</font></b>'
 if mop = 1:$mop = 'You''re not wearing any kind of makeup'
-if mop = 2:$mop = 'Your makeup is very light, just a very few touch-ups here and there'
+if mop = 2:$mop = 'Your makeup is very light, just with a very few touch-ups here and there'
 if mop = 3:$mop = 'You have "everyday"-like makeup applied'
 if mop = 4:$mop = 'You have thick makeup, possible a bit too flashy for daytime wear'
 
 if leghair <= 0:legkoef = 3 & $leghair = 'You have smooth legs.'
-if leghair > 0 and leghair <= 2:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'You do not see with our eyes but rough to the touch bristles on his feet.'
-if leghair > 2 and leghair <= 5:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'You clearly visible thin hairs on the legs.'
-if leghair > 5:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'Do you have long hair standing out on his feet.'
+if leghair > 0 and leghair <= 2:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'You can not see with your eyes but you have hair rough to touch on your leg.'
+if leghair > 2 and leghair <= 5:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'You clearly have visible thin hairs on the legs.'
+if leghair > 5:legkoef = 0 & $leghair = 'You have long hair standing out on your legs.'
 
-if pirsG = 1:$pirsG = 'There are several piercings hanging from your vaginas lips.'
+if pirsG = 1:$pirsG = 'There are several piercings hanging from the lips of your vagina.'
 if pirsG = 0:$pirsG = ''
 
-if lobok <= 0:lobkoef = 3 & $lobok = 'You have a smoothly <a href="exec:view ''images/body/pussy.jpg''">shaved mound</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
-if lobok > 0 and lobok <= 2:lobkoef = 0 & $lobok = 'You have a light but visible thatch of hair above your <a href="exec:view ''images/body/spussy.jpg''">crotch</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
-if lobok > 2:lobkoef = 0 & $lobok = 'You have a thick, full delta of <a href="exec:view ''images/body/hpussy.jpg''">pubic hair</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
+if lobok <= 0:lobkoef = 3 & $lobok = 'You have a smoothly <a href="exec:view ''images/body/pussy.jpg''">shaved pussy</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
+if lobok > 0 and lobok <= 2:lobkoef = 0 & $lobok = 'You have a light but visible hair above your <a href="exec:view ''images/body/spussy.jpg''">crotch</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
+if lobok > 2:lobkoef = 0 & $lobok = 'You have a full delta of thick <a href="exec:view ''images/body/hpussy.jpg''">pubic hair</a>. <<$pirsG>>'
 
 bodytipe = bedra - talia
 
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ if StrongNarkota > 0:
 	manna = (intel * magik) + magik * 100 + vital * 10 + rikudo
 end
 
-if vnesh = -10:$vnesh = 'Your looks is even worse than terrible. It''s terribad. Noone want to see or talk to you and avoid you at any cost necessary.'
+if vnesh = -10:$vnesh = 'Your looks is even worse than terrible. It''s terribad. No one want to see or talk to you and avoid you at any cost necessary.'
 if vnesh < 5 and vnesh> - 10:$vnesh = 'Your looks is terrible. People try to avoid looking and talking to you.'
 if vnesh >= 5 and vnesh < 15:$vnesh = 'You''re a wallflower. Barely anyone notices you.'
 if vnesh >= 15 and vnesh < 30:$vnesh = 'You have good looks. Men and women like to take a glance at you.'
@@ -296,23 +296,23 @@ musle = strenbuf + vitalbuf
 
 if musle >= salo:
 	!!muscular type
-		if bedra < 60:$body = 'You are very thin and fat on the body virtually no muscles act through the skin.'
-		if bedra >= 60 and bedra < 70:$body = 'You are very thin and fat on the body virtually no muscles act through the skin.'
-		if bedra >= 70 and bedra < 80:$body = 'You are thin, fat on the body virtually no muscles act through the skin.'
-		if bedra >= 80 and bedra < 90:$body = 'You are thin, fat on the body virtually no muscles act through the skin.'
-		if bedra >= 90 and bedra < 100:$body = 'You are thin, fat on the body there is little, through the skin are the large muscles.'
-		if bedra >= 100 and bedra < 110:$body = 'Body fat there is little, through the skin are the large muscles.'
-		if bedra >= 110 and bedra < 120:$body = 'Body fat there is little, through the skin are the massive muscles.'
-		if bedra >= 120:$body = 'Body fat there is little, through the skin are the massive muscles.'
+		if bedra < 60:$body = 'You are very thin and virtually there is no fat on your body,your muscles appear through the skin.'
+		if bedra >= 60 and bedra < 70:$body = 'You are really thin and there is little fat on your body ,your muscles appear through the skin.'
+		if bedra >= 70 and bedra < 80:$body = 'You are and there is little fat on your body ,your muscles appear through the skin.'
+		if bedra >= 80 and bedra < 90:$body = 'You are thin and there is little fat on your body ,your muscles appear through the skin.'
+		if bedra >= 90 and bedra < 100:$body = 'You are thin and there is little fat on your body . Large muscles appear through your skin.'
+		if bedra >= 100 and bedra < 110:$body = 'You have little fat on your body, Large muscles appear through your skin.'
+		if bedra >= 110 and bedra < 120:$body = 'You have little fat on your body. Massive muscles appear through your skin.'
+		if bedra >= 120:$body = 'You have little fat on your body. Massive muscles appear through your skin.'
 	else
 		!!bold type
 		if bedra < 60:$body = 'You are very lean and you have virtually no muscle.'
-		if bedra >= 60 and bedra < 70:$body = 'You are very thin girl with a small soft booty and you are virtually no muscle.'
-		if bedra >= 70 and bedra < 80:$body = 'You are very skinny girl.'
-		if bedra >= 80 and bedra < 90:$body = 'You skinny girl.'
-		if bedra >= 90 and bedra < 100:$body = 'You skater girl.'
-		if bedra >= 100 and bedra < 110:$body = 'You formastaya girl.'
-		if bedra >= 110 and bedra < 120:$body = 'You zhirnovat girl.'
+		if bedra >= 60 and bedra < 70:$body = 'You have a very thin body with a small soft booty and virtually you have no muscle.'
+		if bedra >= 70 and bedra < 80:$body = 'You have a very skinny body.'
+		if bedra >= 80 and bedra < 90:$body = 'You have a slender body.'
+		if bedra >= 90 and bedra < 100:$body = 'You have a curvy body.'
+		if bedra >= 100 and bedra < 110:$body = 'You have a chubby body.'
+		if bedra >= 110 and bedra < 120:$body = 'You have a plump body.'
 		if bedra >= 120:$body = 'You are very fat.'
 	end
 

+ 5 - 5
locations/butik

@@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	set evrand = rand(0, 100)
 
 	if evrand >= 80 and skin > 0 and lesbiQW = 0:
-		'In the boutique you see a stylish and slender woman forty years.'
+		'In the boutique you see a stylish and slender woman ,with about forty years old.'
 
 		act 'Stare at the woman.':gt 'event', 'lesbi'
 	end
 
 	if QWdogreiqTimer = 0 and QWdogReiq = 1 and week = 7 and qwdogiventday ! day:
 		qwdogiventday = day
-		'Going into the boutique you start hanging on rassmatrevat veshlkah plate.Vzyav one you try on in passing it back and hang with mild grimassy brezglivosti.Neozhidanno attracts your attention One of the dresses, began to study it more closely kakoeto you feel a strange feeling as if you are looking for:'
+		'Going into the boutique you begin to consider picking dresses on hangers.By casually taking one you try it on in passing it on your back ,you hang with mild grim face.One of the dresses unexpectedly attracts your attention , as you began to study it more closely ,you feel a strange feeling as if you were being watched'
 
 		act 'Disregard':gt 'butik', 'start'
 		act 'Look around':dynamic $butikreiqdi
@@ -36,14 +36,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if RimmaSex > 0:
 		if rimmaday ! day:
-			'Apartment <a href="exec:gt ''RimmaSexQW''">Rima</a> you smiled and bit his lip and started shooting eyes in your direction.'
+			'<a href="exec:gt ''RimmaSexQW''">Rima</a> smiled at you. She bits her lip and starts shooting her eyes in your direction.'
 		else
-			'Rima smiled at you and do business.'
+			'Rima smiled at you and continued to do her business.'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if palto < 3:
-		'The boutique sells fur coat for winter - 50,000 rubles'
+		'The boutique sells a fur coat for winter - 50,000 rubles'
 
 		if money >= 50000:
 			act 'Buy a fur coat (50,000 rubles)':

+ 53 - 54
locations/dina

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ $d_read_porn = {
 			'You are flipping through the porno magazine, reading the stories and looking at the pictures and a small excitement begins to cover your body.'
 		end
 
-		act 'Go_Out':gt $curloc
+		act 'Get Out':gt $curloc
 	end
 }
 
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@ $kiosksig = {
 						set kioskflash = 1
 					end
 					'<center><img src="images/community/flash_tits_pus.jpg"></center>'
-					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your tits and your pussy. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the queue.'
+					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your tits and your pussy. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the line.'
 
 					act 'Buy and leave':gt $curloc
 				end
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ $kiosksig = {
 					if lobok >= 2:'<center><img src="images/community/flash_hairy.jpg"></center>'
 					if lobok <= 2:'<center><img src="images/community/flash_nohairy.jpg"></center>'
 
-					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your pussy. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the queue.'
+					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your pussy. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the line.'
 
 					act 'Buy and leave':gt $curloc
 				end
@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ $kiosksig = {
 					end
 
 					'<center><img src="images/community/flash_tits.jpg"></center>'
-					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your tits. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the queue.'
+					'The people in front of you are shocked, as they see you flashing your tits. As a small thank you, some of them let you move further up in the line.'
 
 					act 'Buy and leave':gt $curloc
 				end
@@ -272,9 +272,9 @@ $kiosksig = {
 
 					if cumlip = 0:
 						'<center><img src="images/community/kiosk_blowjob.jpg"></center>'
-						'A man agreed to your suggestion and let''s you move infront of him.'
+						'A man agrees to your suggestion and let you move in front of him.'
 
-						act 'Cum on face':
+						act 'Cum on your face':
 							cls
 							'<center><img src="images/body/cumface.jpg"></center>'
 							'The man cums on your face.'
@@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ $kiosksig = {
 							act 'Go away and buy cigarettes':gt $curloc
 						end
 
-						act 'Cum in mouth':
+						act 'Cum on your mouth':
 							cls
 							'<center><img src="images/etogame/cumlip.jpg"></center>'
 							'The man cums inside your mouth.'
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ $kiosksig = {
 					else
 						!!Przemar:IMAGE NEEDED
 						'<center><img src="images/community/Image_needed.png"></center>'
-						'Man punched you and say " Go away bitch your mouth is full of sperm " at this rate you needed to wait 4 hours and paid 200 rubles.'
+						'Man punched you and say <font color="#0D42C0"> " Go away bitch, your mouth is full of sperm "</font> - in this case you are needed to wait 4 hours and pays 200 rubles.'
 						minut += 240
 						siga += 20
 						money -= 200
@@ -337,9 +337,9 @@ $margoroomdiDush = {
 	QWdogreiqTimer = 7
 	QWdogReiq = 2
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You undress and started following Margarita into the shower.You didn''t really had the time for a bath since Margarita pulls yours lips for a kiss.'
+	'You undress and starts to follow Margaret into the shower.You didn''t really had time for a bath since Margaret pulls yours lips for a kiss.'
 
-	act 'Lick my nipples':
+	act '<font color="magenta">Lick my nipples</font>':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
 		horny += 50
@@ -351,10 +351,10 @@ $margoroomdiDush = {
 		'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo2.jpg"></center>'
 		'Margaret has taken your swollen nipples into her mouth. She began to lick them and their sharp little edges'
 
-		act 'Hold it':gt 'korr'
+		act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 	end
 
-	act 'Lick my vagina':
+	act '<font color="magenta">Lick my pussy</font>':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
 		horny += 20
@@ -364,14 +364,14 @@ $margoroomdiDush = {
 		lesbian += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Margaret kneels down and starts to lick your vagina, From her tongue your body is runned through by a pleasant body wave.'
+		'Margaret kneels down and starts to lick your pussy. Her tongue makes your body get crossed through by a pleasant body wave.'
 
 		if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
-		act 'Hold it':gt 'korr'
+		act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 	end
 
-	act 'Lick my ass':
+	act '<font color="magenta">Lick my ass</font>':
 		cls
 		minut += 15
 		horny += 20
@@ -379,25 +379,25 @@ $margoroomdiDush = {
 		lesbian += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Margo quickly began to lick your ass, causing a pleasant sensation all in the body, To margarita this was not enough, so she slowly inserted a finger into her ass and began to make rhythmic movements.'
+		'Margo quickly began to lick your ass, causing a pleasant sensation all over the body, To Margaret this was not enough, so she slowly inserted a finger into your ass and began to make rhythmic movements.'
 
 		if horny >= 99:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
-		act 'Hold it':gt 'korr'
+		act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 
 		if anus > 15 and horny > 0:
-			act 'Stick me in the ass hand':
+			act '<font color="magenta">Stick your hand in the ass</font>':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				horny += 60
 				anus += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo5.jpg"></center>'
-				'First one paeets, then two, three and so the whole entire hand. She quickly found herself in the depths of ass. It''s incredible. I still had no hand in its entirety. And so it happened. Margarita penetrated deeper and deeper and I was in seventh heaven. Supple ass took a hand. Was incredibly good. She massaged me inside like a real iskusstnitsa, causing me to moan loudly and wagging his ass with pleasure.'
+				'First she inserts one finger, then two, three and so on,eventually she shoved her entire hand completely. She quickly found herself in the depths of your ass. It''s unbelievable. Margaret penetrated deeper and deeper and you were in the seventh heaven.That is incredibly good. Your ass accepted her flexible hand. She starts massaging inside you like a real mistress, causing you to moan loudly and wagging your ass with pleasure.'
 
 				if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
-				act 'Hold it':gt 'korr'
+				act 'Carry her out':gt 'korr'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -407,7 +407,7 @@ $margoroomdi3 = {
 	cls
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You start to undress and go to the shower following Margaret. You do not have time to really get into the bath as Margaret pulls your lips with a kiss.'
+	'You start to undress and go to the shower following Margaret. You do not have time to really get into the bath since Margaret pulls your lips with a kiss.'
 
 	act 'Lick my nipples':
 		cls
@@ -434,9 +434,9 @@ $margoroomdi3 = {
 		lesbian += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Margaret kneels and nachenaet his tongue oblizovat vagina of her actions in the body run by a pleasant body wave.'
+		'Margaret kneels down and starts to lick your pussy. Her tongue makes your body get crossed through by a pleasant body wave.'
 
-		if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+		if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 		act 'Walk into a room':dynamic $margoroomdi2
 	end
@@ -451,9 +451,9 @@ $margoroomdi3 = {
 		lesbian += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo4.jpg"></center>'
-		'nimble and agile tongue Margarita began oblizovat anus, causing a pleasant languor all in the body, it seemed a little margarita hole she slowly inserted a finger into her ass and began to make rhythmic movements.'
+		'Margo quickly began to lick your ass, causing a pleasant sensation all over the body, To Margaret this was not enough, so she slowly inserted a finger into your ass and began to make rhythmic movements.'
 
-		if horny >= 99:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+		if horny >= 99:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm.'
 
 		act 'Walk into a room':dynamic $margoroomdi2
 
@@ -465,9 +465,8 @@ $margoroomdi3 = {
 				anus += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo5.jpg"></center>'
-				'First one paeets, then two, three and so the whole entire hand. She quickly found herself in the depths of ass. It''s incredible. I still had no hand in its entirety. And so it happened. Margarita penetrated deeper and deeper and I was in seventh heaven. Supple ass took a hand. Was incredibly good. She massaged me inside like a real iskusstnitsa, causing me to moan loudly and wagging his ass with pleasure.'
-
-				if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm.'
+				'First she inserts one finger, then two, three and so on,eventually she shoved her entire hand completely. She quickly found herself in the depths of your ass. It''s unbelievable. Margaret penetrated deeper and deeper and you were in the seventh heaven.That is incredibly good. Your ass accepted her flexible hand. She starts massaging inside you like a real mistress, causing you to moan loudly and wagging your ass with pleasure.'
+				if horny >= 90:horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have anorgasm.'
 
 				act 'Walk into a room':dynamic $margoroomdi2
 			end
@@ -479,8 +478,8 @@ $margoroomdi2 = {
 	cls
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'-I''m ready:Margarita says entering the hall'
-	'very good start, you answer Margarita.'
+	'-I''m ready:Margaret says entering the hall'
+	'very good start, you answer Margaret.'
 
 	act 'Suck in males':
 		cls
@@ -496,17 +495,17 @@ $margoroomdi2 = {
 			horny += 30
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/zoo/anal.jpg"></center>'
-			'Maragrita becomes chetverenki on and you naprvlyaete cock into her anus, pochuvstovat that hoditsya anus cable nachel rhythmic action 2 times faster, Margarita already squealed as the most natural bitch.'
-			'Margarita suddenly sobbed and then abruptly as nadtyazhno groaned and rolled her eyes with tears.'
+			'Maragrita becomes chetverenki on and you naprvlyaete cock into her anus, pochuvstovat that hoditsya anus cable nachel rhythmic action 2 times faster, Margaret already squealed as the most natural bitch.'
+			'Margaret suddenly sobbed and then abruptly as nadtyazhno groaned and rolled her eyes with tears.'
 			'Margaret, what happened, you got closer.'
-			'<<$name>> it stuck in me-quite said Margarita and licked her lips, feeling unusual, something to push against the walls of the anus and turns odnovremnno painful and pleasant, I did not yet ispytovala.'
-			'yes, unusual and pleasant feelings, then I completely agree Stobie, just do not make any sudden movements and jerk dog can break you, your wonderful ass-vyreshili show some care towards Margarita.'
-			'<<$name>> you know I looked so there zooporno girl 19 years pools overlook 3 hours 17 males, then she ate moved Margarita licked her lips:this will trenirovatsya that would kill her record.'
-			'Rit, you like a little video is certainly postonovochnoe-skeptical otveteli you no light on this video my father personally for himself zakazaval Margarita tried to change position but the dog viciously zarychla and Margaita left-poytki be freed so that not what postovki.'
-			'unexpected knot in anus Margarita opal, and a member of the dog with a strange sound "PSCs" vyskochil.Iz ass margaritas flowed sperm peremeshku blood.'
-			'Ohrenet Margarita delighted, I now will often proktikovat zoo, bath, and all I''m going home.'
-
-			act 'Walk-in shower with Margarita':dynamic $margoroomdiDush
+			'<<$name>> it stuck in me-quite said Margaret and licked her lips, feeling unusual, something to push against the walls of the anus and turns odnovremnno painful and pleasant, I did not yet ispytovala.'
+			'yes, unusual and pleasant feelings, then I completely agree Stobie, just do not make any sudden movements and jerk dog can break you, your wonderful ass-vyreshili show some care towards Margaret.'
+			'<<$name>> you know I looked so there zooporno girl 19 years pools overlook 3 hours 17 males, then she ate moved Margaret licked her lips:this will trenirovatsya that would kill her record.'
+			'Rit, you like a little video is certainly postonovochnoe-skeptical otveteli you no light on this video my father personally for himself zakazaval Margaret tried to change position but the dog viciously zarychla and Margaita left-poytki be freed so that not what postovki.'
+			'unexpected knot in anus Margaret opal, and a member of the dog with a strange sound "PSCs" vyskochil.Iz ass Margarets flowed sperm peremeshku blood.'
+			'Ohrenet Margaret delighted, I now will often proktikovat zoo, bath, and all I''m going home.'
+
+			act 'Walk-in shower with Margaret':dynamic $margoroomdiDush
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -515,7 +514,7 @@ $margoroomdi = {
 	cls
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
-	'YOU a little bit ajar and look after her but nothing happens Margarita just moetsya.Vy mark that she beautiful body.'
+	'YOU a little bit ajar and look after her but nothing happens Margaret just moetsya.Vy mark that she beautiful body.'
 
 	act 'Walk into a room':dynamic $margoroomdi2
 }
@@ -525,18 +524,18 @@ $margokafedin = {
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/zoo/margo.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are going to summon the waitress but here comes the Cafe Margarita, you noticing it immediately comes to your table.'
-	'Hi sorry that lingered unforeseen circumstances Margarita sits at a table.'
+	'You are going to summon the waitress but here comes the Cafe Margaret, you noticing it immediately comes to your table.'
+	'Hi sorry that lingered unforeseen circumstances Margaret sits at a table.'
 
 	if MargoSex = 0:
 		'And so ochem you wanted to talk to me? Once you took the bull by the horns.'
-		'About zoosekse, you''re practicing it?-Asked Margarita.'
+		'About zoosekse, you''re practicing it?-Asked Margaret.'
 		'Yeah, no, you shit?-YOU decided to show a bit of character.'
-		'I like the zoo-last words Margarita said not very confident - and I would like to try.'
+		'I like the zoo-last words Margaret said not very confident - and I would like to try.'
 		'Do you have a dog? - Her words you amused, causing slight smirk.'
-		'In that case there is, I live with my parents and they are not allowed to start a dog - those words Margarita sighed sadly.'
+		'In that case there is, I live with my parents and they are not allowed to start a dog - those words Margaret sighed sadly.'
 		'And you want to go under my dog? - You''ve already undisguised sarcasm.'
-		'Well, yes - Margarita missed your sarcasm on deaf ears'
+		'Well, yes - Margaret missed your sarcasm on deaf ears'
 	else
 		'You sat at the table with Margot and she admitted that she liked with the dog and she wants more.'
 	end
@@ -548,12 +547,12 @@ $margokafedin = {
 			cls
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You and Margaret rose from the table and went to your home. Already in the apartment Margarita went into the shower.'
+			'You and Margaret rose from the table and went to your home. Already in the apartment Margaret went into the shower.'
 
 			act 'Peek into the soul':dynamic $margoroomdi
 			act 'Wait in the room':dynamic $margoroomdi2
 
-			if horny >= 50:act 'Login to Margarita in shower':dynamic $margoroomdi3
+			if horny >= 50:act 'Login to Margaret in shower':dynamic $margoroomdi3
 		end
 	end
 }
@@ -640,9 +639,9 @@ $butikreiqdi = {
 									'You told her irritably that have not even begun to hysteria.'
 									'NO, you''re still on the nerves let''s meet next week, suddenly the girl is pronounced.'
 									'let''s you usalo shook his head.'
-									'that''s fine my name is Margarita and says the girl looks at you expectantly.'
+									'that''s fine my name is margaret and says the girl looks at you expectantly.'
 									'<<$name>>-you reply.'
-									'Prior to the meeting, said Margarita and leaves.'
+									'Prior to the meeting, said margaret and leaves.'
 
 									act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 								end
@@ -676,7 +675,7 @@ $butikreiqdi = {
 							'After putting the right palm gently on the pubis, Rimma fingers spread you wet lips, poking her tongue and run it inside.'
 							'A Soft reciprocating action of the tongue and on the clitoris excited you and caused a mild spasm. Rima suddenly begun to tongue prss on your clitoris.The body is already weak and no longer obey the brain,only trying to not moan fot he whole store.'
 							'Suddenly, Your body began to shake and was covered in soft wave of spasms, with the last spasm you came.You let a loud moan out while you knelt down.'
-							'You are in a easy prostration, and the body on a pleasant stasis.'
+							'You are in a easy prostration, and the body is on a pleasant stasis.'
 
 							act 'Exit out of the dressing room':
 								cls
@@ -692,13 +691,13 @@ $butikreiqdi = {
 								'<font color="#FF8732">let''s do it </font> Rima looks very happy.'
 								'You go home, suddenly you hear a woman''s voice behind you:'
 								'<font color="#808000">Goodnight</font>- said the strange stranger.'
-								'Looking closely you recognize her as girl with a vacant lot.'
+								'Looking closely you recognize her as girl with the vacant lot.'
 								'<font color="magenta">Hi</font>-you cheerfully answered, <font color="magenta">it was you that was observing me the entire time ?</font>'
 								'<font color="#808000">Yes</font>, she smiled in response,<font color="#808000"> I saw you in the boutique, but i didn''t dare to approach you that time, so i decided to wait outside for you.</font>'
 								'<font color="magenta">But why did you wait?</font>'
 								'<font color="#808000">Now it''s too late, Meet me next week so we can talk</font> - awaiting you response while she is looking at you'
 								'<font color="magenta">Let''s meet them </font> - you easily agreed -<font color="magenta">By way I''m <<$name>></font>'
-								'<font color="#808000">Margarita </font>'
+								'<font color="#808000">Margaret </font>'
 
 								act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 							end

+ 119 - 119
locations/etoexhib

@@ -6,34 +6,34 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the room with a solarium. The room is quiet and subdued light, like in the solarium anyone except the receptionist asked. You look at the door.'
+	'You walk into the room with the solarium. The room is quiet and with dim lights, seems like there is nobody in the solarium except for the administrator. You look at the door.'
 
 	act 'Close the door':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You close the door of the castle and stripped to the goals, arranged in solarium prone.'
+		'You locked the door and stripped naked, arranging yourself in the solarium ,lying on your stomach.'
 
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Next':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			manna += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar9.jpg"></center>'
-			'You tanned and relaxed. Satisfied, you go out of the solarium and dressed out into the hall salon.'
+			'You are tanned and relaxed. Satisfied, you go out of the solarium and dressed out into the hall salon.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'salon', 'start'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Leave the door ajar':
+	act 'Leave the door slightly open':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		manna += 10
 		horny += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You decide to fool around a bit and leave the door ajar to the room. You start to undress when you shoot livchik and strip the chest, lungs chills run through your bare back. Now all of a sudden somebody would go and see my chest that he think of me?'
+		'You decide to fool around a bit and leave the door for the room open. You start to slowly undress, when you take your bra off and exposes your breasts, long chills run through your bare back. Now, all of a sudden, anybody could go inside the room and see my breasts, what they would think of me?'
 
 		act 'Undress':
 			cla
@@ -41,23 +41,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 			horny += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You continue to undress and now your ass okazyvaetsya bare. Suddenly there is the feeling that someone is watching you. You breath quickens, and waves of excitement. If someone is really up to you peeps, you decide how to undress more erotic. You do not know why, it just tells your feminine nature.'
+			'You continue to undress and now your ass is naked bare. Suddenly, you have a feeling that someone is watching you. Your breath quickens, and waves of excitement run thought your body. If someone is really spying on you, you need to strip sexy as possible . You do not know why, it just orders from your feminine nature.'
 
-			act 'Undress to the goals':
+			act 'Undress everything':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You undressed and went to the goal in the solarium. Just face the door. Out of curiosity, do you attach the legs bent to the side and peering into the dark doorway. And you can actually see and hear the shadow flashed a sniff. Can be no doubt, for you obviously someone is watching. From one realization that someone is watching over you, and you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. Abdomen there is a pleasant feeling. And you are excited to the point that you start to push the legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
+				'You undressed and went naked into the solarium. There is just a person on the door looking at you. Of curiosity, you attach your legs and bent them to the side , peering into the darkness of the slightly open door. You can actually see and hear the shadow sniffing. There is no doubt, someone is obviously watching you. From the realization that someone is watching you, and that you are lying completely naked, your body begins to tremble. There is a pleasant feeling in the abdomen. You get so excited to the point that you start to spread your legs in different directions. To the joy of the mysterious stranger.'
 
-				act 'Spread her legs ':
+				act 'Spread your legs ':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					horny += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar5.jpg"></center>'
-					'"I spread my legs as lustful bitch. What did he think of me. Maybe he´s not alone, and all the staff had already escaped to look at me. Lord, and suddenly they shoot me on camera, and tomorrow I´ll be all over the internet." - Thoughts rushing through your head, but the excitement is high and there is no strength to stay.'
+					'You quickly spread the legs as the lustful bitch you are. <font color="magenta">"What did he think of me?. Maybe he´s not alone, maybe the entire staff had already came look at me. Lord, they can suddenly shoot me on camera, and tomorrow I´ll be all over the internet."</font> - The Thoughts go rushing through your head, but the excitement is too high and there is no strength to stay.'
 
 					act 'Masturbate':
 						cla
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 						horny += 20
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You start furiously rubbing her pussy to finally finish his shameless adventure. And gradually are excited to such an extent that you can not hold back emotions. You start to moan and push the labia fingers, showing her pussy to a stranger in all its glory.'
+						'You start furiously rubbing your pussy to finally finish your shameless adventure. Gradually, you get excited to such an extent that you can not hold back anymore. You start to moan and push your labia with your fingers, showing your pussy to a stranger in all it''s glory.'
 
-						act 'Further':
+						act 'Next':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							orgasm += 1
@@ -76,9 +76,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos1':
 							if exhibi = 2:exhibi = 3
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/etogame/solar7.jpg"></center>'
-							'Finally, you cover powerful orgasms and you weaken abating. Sniff more also not heard, it seems the secret observer finished with you.'
+							'Finally, you cover yourself in a powerful orgasms and you became exhausted. Also,you can not hear the sniff any more, it seems the secret observer finished with you.'
 							' '
-							'Gradually you will come to themselves and dressed and get out of the booth.'
+							'Gradually you come to your senses, get dressed,and get out of the booth.'
 
 							act 'Leave':gt 'salon', 'start'
 						end
@@ -95,14 +95,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos2':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/1dachi.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walked through the alleys. Basically society is not very crowded. Occasionally there are gardeners poking around in the beds. Somewhere heard the clang of the saw. Seen on the outskirts of the forest. At the end of the alley is an artificial reservoir. Some areas with houses for sale.'
+	'You walked through the alleys. Basically,this society is not very populated. Occasionally there are gardeners picking around the region. You hear the clank of a saw somewhere in the outskirts of the forest. At the end of the alley is an artificial reservoir. There are some areas with houses for sale.'
 
-	if etoexhib = 0:'You do not know anybody here and truckers not developed any opinion about you.'
+	if etoexhib = 0:'You do not know anybody here and the truckers do not developed any opinion about you.'
 
 	act 'Go to the forest':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos3'
 	act 'Go down to the lake':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos16'
 
-	if etoexhib = 10:'Start at <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos9''">clang saws</a>.'
+	if etoexhib = 10:'Follow the sound of <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos9''">saws clanging</a>.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
 	act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
@@ -121,17 +121,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos3':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/1fores.jpg"></center>'
-		'Livstvenny forest.'
-		'As far do you see the mushroom picker.'
+		'Greenwood forest.'
+		'You can see the mushroom picker far way from you.'
 
-		act 'His attention':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos4'
+		act 'Get his attention':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos4'
 	end
 
 	if foresrand > 90 and exhibi > 2:
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/1fores.jpg"></center>'
-		'Livstvenny forest.'
+		'Greenwood forest.'
 
 		act 'Undress':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos5'
 	end
@@ -144,9 +144,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos4':
 	*clr
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You are waving mushroomer handle and he stopped looking at you.'
+	'You are waving for the mushroom-picker and he stopped looking at you.'
 
-	act 'Show pussy':
+	act 'Show your pussy':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 5
@@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos4':
 
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/2fores.jpg"></center>'
-		'Smile, you show mushroomer her pussy. He stands in his tracks and stares at you, not knowing what was happening.'
+		'Smiling, you show the mushroom-picker your pussy. He stops in his tracks and stares at you, not knowing wha''s happening.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
 	end
@@ -172,13 +172,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos5':
 
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/3fores.jpg"></center>'
-	'I stripped down to goal and went for a walk in the woods. His heart was pounding in my chest. Fresh air, gentle warm breeze caresses me. Summer ... sun warms me. When it was, I thought that freeze quickly, but baking hot summer sun prompted that I´m wrong. Thought at all. I is not lost. Clothing left on earth, and if I do not find you! Here are collected only pickers. But if I povstechayu them? Which is a shame! Stumbled on a good clearing. The wind died.'
+	'you stripped down naked and went for a walk in the woods. Your heart was pounding in the chest. Fresh air, gentle warm breeze caresses your body... Summer arrives the sun warms you. When it was, I thought that freeze quickly, but baking hot summer sun prompted that I´m wrong. Thought at all. I is not lost. Clothing left on earth, and if I do not find you! Here are collected only pickers. But if I povstechayu them? Which is a shame! Stumbled on a good clearing. The wind died.'
 
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Next':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/4fores.jpg"></center>'
-		'Lie down and soak in a meadow naked. So anyone not met. Good or bad - it was nice, though a little extreme. Well, all I plan fulfilled. Need to go back, find the clothes.'
+		'Lie down and soak in a meadow naked. So anyone not met. Good or bad - it was nice, though a little extreme. Well, all I plan fulfilled. You need to go back and find the clothes.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
 	end
@@ -190,13 +190,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos6':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/rodnik.jpg"></center>'
-	'Spring with spring water.'
+	'Spring water.'
 
 	act 'Have a drink':
-		if water >= 20:'Water in you no longer climbs.'
+		if water >= 20:'You are full and can not drink more.'
 
 		if water < 20:
-			'You gladly drank spring water.'
+			'You gladly drink the spring water.'
 			water += 20
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
@@ -228,14 +228,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos7':
 
 			if energy >= 30:
 				set fat += 2
-				'You no longer want to drink.'
+				'You don''t want do drink more.'
 			end
 
 			if energy < 30:
 				!!!etogame amend
 				energy += 10
 				fat += 1
-				'You gladly drank goat´s milk.'
+				'You gladly drank goat''s milk.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
@@ -251,7 +251,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos8':
 	minut += 15
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachakuz.jpg"></center>'
-	'Neighbor´s cottage.'
+	'Neighbor''s cottage.'
 
 	if etoexhib < 10:
 		act 'Apply neighbors':
@@ -261,9 +261,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos8':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/kuzmich.jpg"></center>'
 			etoexhib = 10
-			'You:-Hello! <<$name>>, I´m your new neighbor, we are familiar with.'
+			'<font color="magenta"> You:-Hello! <<$name>>, I´m your new neighbor, we are familiar with</font> .'
 			'Neighbour:- Hello. I´m all Kuzmich. So be neighbors.'
-			'You:- Can you help me, you know my whole garden was overgrown with weeds. And so I would like to bring it up.'
+			'<font color="magenta"> You:- Can you help me, you know my whole garden was overgrown with weeds. And so I would like to bring it up</font>.'
 			'Kuzmich:- Well, hire local men. They´ll all plowed. Bestolku still stagger through the alleys.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos10':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachabust.jpg"></center>'
 	'You went out into the garden and going to work, asked:'
-	'- Well, boys? How´s it going?'
+	'<font color="magenta"> - Well, boys? How´s it going?</font> '
 	'- Normally, the hostess. We make the best possible way.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'dachamy'
@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos11':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachaex.jpg"></center>'
 	'You pretend to hang clothes to dry. You can see that through the mall on the site to swarm your neighbor Kuzmich and stole glances at you. Lightly knotted robe is not able to hide your appetizing forms. But, you do not hide them, and give your neighbor enjoy the beauty.'
 
-	act 'Go to home':gt 'dachamy'
+	act 'Go home':gt 'dachamy'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos12':
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos12':
 			temp = day
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachabust3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You:- While all do, do not get anything.'
+			'<font color="magenta">You:- While all do, do not get anything</font>.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'dachi'
 		end
@@ -395,7 +395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos13':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachagang.jpg"></center>'
 	'You get up in the middle of the vegetable garden and begin to undress.'
 	'The guys eyes on the forehead climb from such a spectacle.'
-	'- Boys, you did a good job and deserve a reward!'
+	'- <font color="magenta"> Boys, you did a good job and deserve a reward!</font>'
 
 	act 'Undress completely':
 		cla
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos13':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachagang1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You stripped naked and stand podmanivaya to his guys.'
-		'- Well, I do 100% percent discount?'
+		'- <font color="magenta"> Well, I do 100% percent discount?</font>'
 
 		act 'Surrender':
 			cla
@@ -421,12 +421,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos13':
 			horand = rand(1, 100)
 
 			if horand > horny:set horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied'
-			if horand <= horny:set horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm'
+			if horand <= horny:set horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm'
 
 			'When it was over, you raised your clothes, put on shorts and ran into the house.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'further':gt 'dachain'
+			act 'Next':gt 'dachain'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -436,23 +436,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos14':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachagang2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Drunk guys surrounded you on all sides.'
-	'- Look, here is our princess! You´re just in time for beauty, and come on guys, our hostess present to love!'
-	'You:- What are you doing?'
+	'Drunk guys have surrounded you on all sides.'
+	'-<font color="#0D42C0"> Look, here is our princess! You´re just in time, beauty.Come on guys, our hostess presents her love!</font>'
+	'You:- <font color="magenta">What are you doing?/font> '
 
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Next':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachagang3.jpg"></center>'
-		'Guys grabbed you and started to undress and grope.'
+		'The Guys grabbed you and they started to undress and grope you.'
 
 		act 'Surrender':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/dachagang4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Boys pounced on you and after a brief caresses have become eagerly in all holes.'
+			'The boys pounced on you and after a brief caresses have become eagerly in all holes.'
 			minut += 120
 			etoexhib = 16
 			horny += 50
@@ -463,12 +463,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos14':
 			horand = rand(1, 100)
 
 			if horand > horny:set horny += 10 & 'You were not satisfied'
-			if horand <= horny:set horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You covered orgasm'
+			if horand <= horny:set horny = 0 & orgasm += 1 & 'You have an orgasm'
 
-			'When it was over, you raised your clothes, put on shorts and ran into the house.'
+			'When it was over, you took your clothes, put on shorts and ran into the house.'
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'further':gt 'dachain'
+			act 'Next':gt 'dachain'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -507,7 +507,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos15':
 		'Apparently startled woman pervert. As for you, no one stood.'
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'further':gt 'rinok', 'start'
+		act 'Next':gt 'rinok', 'start'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos16':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/lake.jpg"></center>'
 
 	if temper >= 20 and bikini > 0 and hour >= 6 and hour <= 20:
-		act 'Bathe in a bathing suit':
+		act 'Swim with a swimsuit':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			set cumpussy = 0
@@ -538,7 +538,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos16':
 			'<center><img src="images/pics/swim.jpg"></center>'
 			'You iskupnulis in the lake, the water refreshes and invigorates.'
 
-			act 'Out of the water':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos16'
+			act 'Get out of the water':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos16'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -561,9 +561,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos16':
 			if stren < 30:set stren += 1
 
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/lakenude.jpg"></center>'
-			'You swam in the lake completely naked, water refreshes and invigorates.'
+			'You swim in the lake completely naked, the water refreshes and invigorates you.'
 
-			act 'Out of the water':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos16'
+			act 'Get out of the water':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos16'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -589,7 +589,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos17':
 		act 'Sign in here':money -= 25 & minut += 15 & gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 	end
 
-	act 'Back to the train station':gt 'gorodok'
+	act 'Go back to the train station':gt 'gorodok'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
@@ -620,10 +620,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 				willpower += 10
 				frost = 0
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 			end
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 		end
 
 		if temp >= 35 and temp < 65:
@@ -643,7 +643,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 						'<center><img src="images/etogame/club_foto.jpg"></center>'
 						'You poziruete for "beginner" photographer, trying to look as attractive as possible.'
 
-						act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+						act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 					end
 
 					if alko < 3 and vnesh >= 30:
@@ -654,7 +654,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 
 						'You poziruete for a novice photographer, trying to look as attractive as possible.'
 
-						act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+						act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 					end
 
 					if horny > 10 and alko > 1:
@@ -663,7 +663,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 					end
 				end
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -686,13 +686,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos18':
 				willpower += 10
 				frost = 0
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 			end
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
+			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos18'
 		end
 	else
-		'Club closes. The lights go on, the music fades and all begin to diverge.'
+		'The Club closes, The lights go off, the music fades and everyone begins to diverge.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Go outside':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos17'
@@ -716,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos19':
 		teachlevel = 0
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos20'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos20'
 
 		exit
 	end
@@ -833,7 +833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos21':
 			'- What are you doing? Immediately stop, I´ll call the police! Throws at you girls. And they snort:"Asshole, are to blame!" leave the guy alone.'
 			'You set a good example by helping the helpless man. This will positively impact your reputation.'
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos21'
+			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos21'
 		end
 
 		act 'Disregard':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos21'
@@ -858,13 +858,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos22':
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/PTU_rand.jpg"></center>'
 		'Olga L. you met a teacher of foreign languages. Hmm, she is wearing a pretty sexy, and that´s against the rules.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
 	end
 
-	act 'In the gym':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
-	act 'In the medical office':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos36'
-	act 'In the dining room':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos37'
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
+	act 'Go inside the gym':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
+	act 'Go inside the medical office':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos36'
+	act 'Go inside the dining room':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos37'
+	act 'Go inside the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos23':
@@ -883,13 +883,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos23':
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_korr1.jpg"></center>'
 		'One of the students sitting on the windowsill. You will be looking at her revealing outfits and cheeky behavior.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
 	end
 
 	act 'Account Director':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos28'
-	act 'In library':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos38'
-	act 'The toilet':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos39'
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
+	act 'Go in the library':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos38'
+	act 'Go to The toilet':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos39'
+	act 'Go inside the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos24':
@@ -900,11 +900,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos24':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_3korr.jpg"></center>'
 	'On this floor there is a class of optional subjects.'
 
-	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 13:act 'In class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
+	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 13:act 'Go in class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
 	if hour >= 14 and hour < 15:act 'A lesson':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos26'
-	if hour >= 15 and hour <= 18:act 'In class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
+	if hour >= 15 and hour <= 18:act 'Go in class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
 
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
+	act 'Go inside the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos25':
@@ -924,7 +924,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos25':
 		'Ina:- Today you look so chic!'
 		'You:- Thank you, Ina.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos25'
 	end
 
 	act 'Get out into the corridor':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos24'
@@ -970,7 +970,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_karandash.jpg"></center>'
 				'Pacing between rows, you go down on his haunches, pretending to pick up a fallen pencil. However, sitting in the back row overlooking your legs under her skirt. By the eyes widened as one of the guys, you know what it´s done.'
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -985,7 +985,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_urok1.jpg"></center>'
 				'Explaining the stuff you like the statute, sit on the edge of the table. In this case, the entire class overlooks your feet.'
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1000,7 +1000,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_rak.jpg"></center>'
 				'Explaining stuff you accidentally, drop the chalk. At the same time, you pick it up so that any pornstar obzaviduetsya. First, you cant, but realizing that the chalk does not get it, get down on all fours, with his ass as if someone podmanivaya. Those who sat nearby, witnessed an unforgettable show.'
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1015,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_nastol.jpg"></center>'
 				'Explaining the stuff you like the statute, sit on the edge of the table. In this case, the entire class overlooks your feet.'
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 			end
 		end
 
@@ -1030,7 +1030,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_urok2.jpg"></center>'
 				'When you came to the student to show a presentation, you kakby casually crossed his legs, showing student elastic stockings. Immediately after answering the poor man otprasilsya the toilet. Fingering neboys.'
 
-				act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+				act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1049,12 +1049,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/lesson.jpg"></center>'
 			'You spend a lesson. Students listen to you carefully.'
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
+			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos27'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if hour >= 16:
-		act 'Finish the lesson':
+		act 'Finish your lesson':
 			cla
 			'The lesson ends and the students rush to leave the classroom.'
 
@@ -1066,7 +1066,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos27':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Get out of class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos24'
+	act 'Get out of the class':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos24'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos28':
@@ -1088,9 +1088,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos33':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/sportzal.jpg"></center>'
 	'Gym for team sports.'
 
-	act 'Women´s Shower':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos34'
-	act 'Men´s shower':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos35'
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
+	act 'Go to the Women´s Shower':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos34'
+	act 'Go to the Men´s shower':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos35'
+	act 'Go to the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos19'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos34':
@@ -1112,10 +1112,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos34':
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_dush.jpg"></center>'
 		'- Oh! <<$name>>, leave, please, we´re not dressed! - Two girls screamed, taking a shower.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
 	end
 
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
+	act 'Go to the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
 	end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos35':
@@ -1125,10 +1125,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos35':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Men´s shower</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_muz.jpg"></center>'
-	'Shower for boys. You should not be here. This will affect your reputation.'
+	'Shower for the boys. You should not be here. This will affect your reputation.'
 	teachlevel -= 1
 
-	act 'In the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
+	act 'Go to the hall':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos33'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos36':
@@ -1148,12 +1148,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos36':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Doctor</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_med1.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you went into the medical room, nurses were entertained that fotkali herself in her robe and seductive poses. But then lay out these pictures in the social network.'
+		'When you went into the medical room, nurses were entertained that fotkali herself in her robe and seductive poses. But then lay out these pictures Go to the social network.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos36'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos36'
 	end
 
-	act 'In the corridor (1 Floor)':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
+	act 'Go to the corridor (1 Floor)':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos37':
@@ -1176,7 +1176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos37':
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_stoldir.jpg"></center>'
 			'You met a director of the institution. You politely greeted her nezabyvaya pay a compliment.'
 
-			act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos37'
+			act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos37'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -1210,7 +1210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos37':
 		act 'Finish':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos37'
 	end
 
-	act 'In the corridor (1 Floor)':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
+	act 'Go in the corridor (1 Floor)':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos22'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos38':
@@ -1232,10 +1232,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos38':
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_ups.jpg"></center>'
 		'You have become a casual witness as librarian lighted his seductive crotch. But in the hall were people wondering it intentionally or accidentally?'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos38'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos38'
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
+	act 'Go to the hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos39':
@@ -1245,7 +1245,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos39':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women´s WC</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_toilet_w.jpg"></center>'
-	'WC, which in theory, can use only teachers.'
+	'WC, which in theory, only teachers can use.'
 	temp = rand(1, 100)
 
 	if temp >= 90:
@@ -1255,12 +1255,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos39':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women´s WC</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/ptu_zanato.jpg"></center>'
-		'Oops! Sorry, should be closed.'
+		'Oops! Sorry, the door was supposed to be closed.'
 
-		act 'Further':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos39'
+		act 'Next':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos39'
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to Hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
+	act 'Go to the Hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos23'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos50':
@@ -1274,13 +1274,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos50':
 	'You have tried to take your clothes back but the teenagers around you constantly pushed and pulled you in different directions. You begged to let you go, to say that you will never come here again and stuff. But teenagers only laughed and has openly pinned you. You suddenly felt from behind that someone''s hands got down to your pants and pulled sharply to force them out, going together with the other clothes. And another bastard pulled your bra and the rest of your clothes.'
 	'Now you are standing in front of them completely naked. They have began to push you off into the depths of the attic, and only now you´ve seen a huge old sofa with broken legs. Going to the couch you stopped and tried again to soften the teenagers, but they do not even pay attention to it. They have abruptly pushed you on the couch. The teenagers began to unbutton their jeans. First approached a powerfully built man, he shoved your shoulders and dropped you on your back, he unceremoniously also roughly spread your legs, he lays on the top of you, and abruptly penetrates you.'
 
-	act 'Further':
+	act 'Next':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		'<center><img src="images/etogame/cherdak1.jpg"></center>'
 		'He fucks you in a fast and intense pace. After he finishes, his place is taken second guy, and the same thing happened as with the first. After you fucked it all of them, one by one. And also those who wanted one more time.'
 
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Next':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/cherdak0.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1298,7 +1298,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos50':
 
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Go to apartment':gt 'korr'
+			act 'Go to the apartment':gt 'korr'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -1312,19 +1312,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos51':
 	'Entrance to the 5-floors building in which you live. The lock on the door leading to the attic is broken.'
 
 	if sosedQW = 0:
-		'<br>Suddenly in the stairwell you are faced with a young guy who almost gotten up the stairs. He runs into you and is noticeably embarrassed. "Oh sorry, I did not see you there. You''ve moved into apartment 69, right?"'
+		'<br>Suddenly in the stairwell you are faced with a young guy who is climbing up the stairs. He runs into you and is noticeably embarrassed.<font color="#1589FF">"I''m sorry, I did not see you there. You''ve moved into apartment 69, right?"</font>'
 
 		act 'Yes, I live in the apartment 69':
 			cls
 			sosedQW = 1
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You nod, confirming that you live in apartment 69. The guy looks visibly delighted and says, "Wonderful. I lived there before Petrovich. He tormented the whole building. By the way I´m Timothy, and you are?"'
+			'You nod, confirming that you live in apartment 69. The guy looks visibly delighted and says, <font color="#1589FF">"Wonderful. I lived there before Petrovich. He tormented the whole building. By the way I´m Timothy, and you are?"</font> '
 
 			act '<<$name>>':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<font color="magenta">My name is <<$name>></font>> - you say. He nodded his head and began to get the key to open the door of the apartment 68. "Very nice. I live in the next apartment." The guy opened the door and on the threshold appeared the curious face of an elderly woman. She pointed her sharp nose at you and began to curiously look you. Timothy entered the apartment and said irritably, "Mom, stop hanging around the front door!" and closed the door.'
+				'<font color="magenta">My name is <<$name>></font>> - you say. He nodded his head and begins to get the key to open the door of the apartment 68. <font color="#1589FF">"Very nice. I live in the next apartment."</font>  The guy opened the door and on the threshold appeared the curious face of an elderly woman. She pointed her sharp nose at you and began to curiously look you. Timothy entered the apartment and said irritably, <font color="#1589FF"> "Mom, stop hanging around the front door!"</font> and closed the door.'
 
 				act '....':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos51'
 			end
@@ -1339,7 +1339,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos51':
 		if sosedrand >= 70:'Your neighbor, <a href="exec:Gt ''Timofei''">Timothy</a>, is in the hallway. He''s smoking a cigarette, flicking the ashes into a jar.'
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to street':
+	act 'Go to the street':
 		cls
 
 		if sick <= 72 and nude = 0:
@@ -1353,7 +1353,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos51':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to attic':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos52'
+	act 'Go to the attic':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos52'
 	act 'Go home':gt 'korr'
 end
 
@@ -1365,7 +1365,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos52':
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/cherdak.jpg"></center>'
 	'A flight of stairs that leads to the roof through the attic. It''s Dark and scary. This is clearly no place for a decent girl.'
 	temp = rand(1, 100)
-	if temp > 90:'In the depths of the attic you hear a group of <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos50''">teens</a> talking. It seems they did not noticed you.'
+	if temp > 90:'In the depths of the attic you hear a group of <a href="exec:gt ''etoexhib'', ''pos50''">teens</a> talking. It seems they do not notice you.'
 
 	act 'Go to the roof':
 		cla
@@ -1374,7 +1374,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos52':
 		gt 'etoexhib', 'pos53'
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos51'
+	act 'Go to the hallway':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos51'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pos53':
 	cla
@@ -1401,14 +1401,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pos53':
 			if krem > 0:
 				set krem -= 1
 				set tan += 3
-				'You smear your body with sunblock and lie down to sunbathe.'
+				'You put the sunblock on your body and lied down on the roof to sunbathe.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Get Up':gt 'etoexhib', 'pos53'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Go to attic':
+	act 'Go to the attic':
 		cls
 		gt 'etoexhib', 'pos52'
 	end

+ 19 - 19
locations/pornstudio

@@ -11,20 +11,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 
 	if hour >= 9 and hour <= 22:
-		'Manager´s office opened.'
+		'The Manager´s office opened.'
 
 		act 'Go to the manager':gt 'pornstudio', 'man'
-		act 'Visit the Assistant queries manager':gt 'pornstudio', 'pomman'
+		act 'Visit the manager assistant':gt 'pornstudio', 'pomman'
 
-		if bomzQW = 1 and week = 4 and workDisk = 0:act 'Arrive at the expense of':dynamic $workbomzdi
+		if bomzQW = 1 and week = 4 and workDisk = 0:act 'Arrive for work':dynamic $workbomzdi
 
 		if workDisk = 1 and week = 5:
-			act 'Take a drive':
+			act 'Take the disk':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				workDisk = 2
-				'You are given a disk, and specify whether you remember all the instructions. You nod your head and head to the exit with the disc. Moving away from the studio near you heard someone else came out of a nearby building and headed for you. "Avoid deserted places, maybe blow over" you had hoped, and went on.'
+				'You are given a disk, and specify whether you remember all the instructions. You nod with your head and goes for the exit with the disc. Moving away from the studio near you heard someone else came out of a nearby building and head for you. <font color="magenta"> "Avoid deserted places, maybe this will blow over"</font> you had hoped, and went on.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 			end
@@ -38,12 +38,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				if konvert = 0:
-					'Starting kopatsya in things you struck terror. No envelope. You all again ransacked, but no envelope.'
-					'-WHAT! But how could this happen! You know, in what you got dibs?!'
-					'You stand and you can not squeeze out a single word. Sounds like your situation is really deplorable.'
-					'Manager grabs the phone and explains the situation to the other party. After listening to a couple of minutes, he hung up.'
-					'So-so - he said - his boss was in a good mood, so I have good news. You have a week. Until next Friday evening you shall bring into the studio 200000. If you bring - we leave, but more than an actress you work with us you can not.'
-					'Otherwise, the consequences will be grim.'
+					'Starting to dig in your things you are struckd in terror. No envelope. You search everything again, but you didn''t find the envelope.'
+					'-WHAT!! But how could you let this happen! You know in what you have gotten into?!'
+					'You stand there not squeezing out a single word. Sounds like your situation is really deplorable.'
+					'The Manager grabs the phone explaining the situation to the other party. After listening to a couple of minutes, he hung up.'
+					'<font color="#0D42C0"> So-so</font>  - he said - <font color="#0D42C0"> his boss was in a good mood, so I have good news. You have a week. Until next Friday evening you shall bring into the studio 200000. If you bring - we separate. You can not work as an actress with us anymore.</font>'
+					'<font color="#0D42C0">Otherwise, there will be consequences.</font>'
 					workDolg = 200000
 					workDolgDay = 7
 				else
@@ -57,33 +57,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		if workDolg > 0 and money >= workDolg:
-			act 'To repay the debt':
+			act 'Repay your debt':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				workDisk = 0
 				money -= workDolg
 				workDolg = 0
-				'You gave the money owed to the studio.'
+				'You gave the money that you owed to the studio.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 			end
 		end
 
 		if pfilmNO = 1 and pfilmNoVenera = 1 and Venera = 0:
-			act 'Show help about sexually transmitted diseases cured':
+			act 'Show the certificate about STD''s cured':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				pfilmNoVenera = 0
 				pfilmNO = 0
 				gs 'stat'
-				'You gave a certificate of sexually transmitted diseases cured and you promised to consider your reinstatement as a porn actress.'
+				'You gave a certificate that your sexually transmitted diseases is cured.They promised to consider your reinstatement as a porn actress.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'down'
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		'Porn studio closed'
+		'The Porn studio is closed'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -94,10 +94,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pomman':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	set minut += 5
-	'Young guy knocks on the computer keys in a small office.'
-	'"How can I help you?".'
+	'There is a young guy tapping on the computer keys in a small office.'
+	'<font color="#0D42C0"> "How can I help you?".</font> '
 
-	if pfilmSTOP = 0:act 'What rating views from my video?':gt 'pornstudio', 'myvid'
+	if pfilmSTOP = 0:act <font color="magenta">'What rating views from my video?'</font>:gt 'pornstudio', 'myvid'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'pornstudio', 'start'
 end