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Translations from Lantera part 1 of 2

KevinSmarts 9 ani în urmă
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+ 6 - 5
locations/fbDorm

@@ -1,21 +1,22 @@
 # fbDorm
 gs 'stat'
 gs 'fbDormD'
-'<<$bname>> led you to ptushnoy hostel. "what, let''s go to my room."'
+'<<$bname>> leads you towards the shabby hostel in Pavlovsk, and smiles at you: "Come on, let''s go to my room."'
 dynamic $d_fbd_start
 
-act 'Ehmm... I changed my mind':
+act '"Ehmm... I changed my mind"':
 	cls
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Seeing that <<$bname>> brought you to the hostel you decide to retreat until it''s too late. <<$bname>> began to persuade you, promising that everything will be fine, nobody knows.'
+	'Seeing that <<$bname>> brought you to his crappy hostel, you''re not so sure about this any more. You''ve heard lots of stories about girls being taken to this place... none of them good. On the other hand, <<$bname>> is kind of cute. What''s the worst that could happen? You can always leave, if you don''t like what''s happening in there.'
+	'He notices your hesitation and tries to persuade you: "Come on, babe! It''ll just be you and me, having some fun in there! What''s the harm?"'
 
 	if dom > 0:
-		'But you were adamant, and as you are not trying to persuade the guy still decided to leave.'
+		'You make up your mind; you should not be doing this. You apologize to him: "Sorry <<$bname>>, but I don''t think this is such a good idea. I have to go... take care." Then you quickly kiss him on the cheek and leave, ignoring his pleas. Fortunately he doesn''t follow you.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
 	else
-		'The guy managed to convince you and you bite my lip thinking, why all of you weave ropes, and whether it is necessary to repent for his act this.'
+		'Before you know it you nod, and he smiles as he takes you by the arm and guides you into the hostel. You''re still not sure about this, and somewhat question your decision while you let him show you to his room.'
 		dynamic $d_fbd_start
 	end
 end

+ 78 - 66
locations/fbDormD

@@ -1,10 +1,14 @@
 # fbDormD
 $d_fbd_start = {
-	act 'Go to the hostel':
+	act 'Let him guide you to his room':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Vahtersha seeing you snapped indignantly "<<$bname>>, you sort of infection, again what that damn led?" <<$bname>> grinned "Come on Aunt Kate, case that young, and with me chocolate." Aunt Katya noticeably slowed down and probubnela "Yup, how, you will wait."'
+		'In the hallway, you''re stopped by an older lady. You can only guess she''s the caretaker for the building.'
+		'She halts <<$bname>> and says: "What''s this... another one? That''s already the third girl you brought over! You know we don''t normally allow guests!"'
+		'<<$bname>> grins at her apologetically and shrugs: "Just having some fun while on holiday, aunt Inga. You know how it is..."'
+		'You see her halt for a second, probably thinking back to her youth. Then she refocuses, and nods at <<$bname>>: "Alright, yea... just don''t cause any trouble!"'
+		'Then she lets you pass and shuffles down the hallway with a wistful smile on her face.'
 
 		tiprand = rand(1, 100)
 
@@ -17,26 +21,27 @@ $d_fbd_start = {
 }
 
 $d_fbd_dormroom = {
-	act 'Go into the room':
+	act 'Enter the room':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		if fbde <= 1:
-			'When you enter the room you will see, that here in the middle of a party, on the table there are bottles and snack, PTUshnik full walk. One of the guys got up to meet you "A, <<$bname>> Come, and introduced us to his girlfriend." <<$bname>> shook hands with the guys and introduced you after which you helped to sit down. Chairs was not enough and you sat down in the middle of the bed, sat on the one hand <<$bname>>, on the other hand are not familiar guy.'
+			'When you enter the room, you see it''s crowded with boys! It seems that some of <<$bname>>''s friends were having a party in the hostel. One of them walks up to greet you and says to <<$bname>>: "Hey man, what''s up? How about you introduce us to your girlfriend?"'
+			'<<$bname>> happily shakes his hand and introduces you to his friends one by one, after which you look for a place to sit. There aren''t enough chairs in the room, so you sit down on a bed next to <<$bname>>. One of his friends is on the other side, but you already forgot his name again. Not important, anyway. You cuddle up against <<$bname>>, not caring much for the other guy. Without even asking, one of the guys pours some vodka in a glass and hands it to you.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_mass
 		elseif fbde = 2:
-			'To the surprise of no one in the room and turned <<$bname>> quickly closed the door behind you and come to you hugged and kissed you.'
+			'You expected there to be other people in the room, but to your surprise it''s empty. <<$bname>> closes the door behind you and pulls you towards him, kissing you roughly.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_regular
 		elseif fbde = 3:
-			'The room was not familiar to you man. <<$bname>> greeted him and whispered something to him.'
+			'When you enter the room, you see an unfamiliar guy sitting on one of the beds, reading a book. <<$bname>> greets him and walks up to him, whispering something in his ear.'
 			tiprand = rand(1, 100)
 
 			if tiprand < 90:
-				'Not familiar guy changed his sneakers to boots and left the room saying goodbye.'
+				'The guy quickly puts on his shoes and says goodbye as he leaves the room with his book, giving you and <<$bname>> some privacy.'
 				dynamic $d_fbd_regular
 			elseif tiprand >= 90:
-				'Unfamiliar guy pulled out of the bag a bottle of vodka and a snack and you persistently sat on the bed, and the boys sat on both sides of you.'
+				'The guy grins as he puts his book away and introduces himself to you. Then he reaches for his bag, pulling out a bottle of vodka and some snacks. You hesitantly sit down on <<$bname>>''s bed. <<$bname>> immediately sits down next to you and wraps one arm around you, while his friend pours some vodka into glasses. He hands out the glasses before sitting down on your other side.'
 				dynamic $d_fbd_drunk
 			end
 		end
@@ -44,7 +49,7 @@ $d_fbd_dormroom = {
 }
 
 $d_fbd_regular = {
-	act 'Kiss':
+	act 'Kiss him':
 		cls
 		boy += 1
 		dick = rand(15, 25)
@@ -63,10 +68,11 @@ $d_fbd_regular = {
 		horny += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdKiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You started passionately kissing a man and he began to slowly undress you.'
+		'<<$bname>> leads you to his house, and gallantly opens the door for you. He invites you to take a seat on the couch and then sits down next to you, putting his arm around you. After you cuddle for a moment, he puts his hand on your chin as he guides your face towards his.'
+		'He''s cute! You open your mouth and kiss <<$bname>> enthusiastically, and don''t stop him when you feel his hands tugging at your clothes. He''s slowly trying to undress you, but doesn''t get very far in this position. After a while he gives up and just focuses on kissing you back, rubbing his hand over your thigh.'
 		dynamic $d_fbd_blowhim
 
-		act 'Continue kissing':
+		act 'Keep kissing him':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 10
@@ -75,13 +81,13 @@ $d_fbd_regular = {
 			tiprand = rand(1, 100)
 
 			if tiprand >= 80:
-				'<<$bname>> gently but firmly pressing on your shoulder tilt causing your face to his cock.'
+				'<<$bname>> gently but firmly puts his hand behind your neck and pushes your face down towards his groin, where his already exposed and erect cock greets you.'
 				dynamic $d_fbd_blowhim
 			elseif tiprand<80 and tiprand >= 40:
-				'<<$bname>> took you by the shoulders and put it on the back'
+				'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and pushes you back against the couch, telling you to lie down on your back and spread your legs.'
 				dynamic $d_fbd_miss
 			elseif tiprand < 40:
-				'<<$bname>> you took the waist and put the cancer'
+				'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and back. He slowly pushes you down, motioning for you to get on your hands and knees so he can fuck you from behind.'
 				dynamic $d_fbd_dog
 			end
 		end
@@ -89,7 +95,7 @@ $d_fbd_regular = {
 }
 
 $d_fbd_blowhim = {
-	act 'Take by mouth':
+	act 'Take his cock in your mouth':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		ppbj += 1
@@ -99,17 +105,17 @@ $d_fbd_blowhim = {
 		tiprand = rand(0, 1)
 
 		if tiprand = 0:
-			'<<$bname>> took you by the shoulders and put it on the back'
+			'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and pushes you back against the couch, telling you to lie down on your back and spread your legs.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_miss
 		elseif tiprand = 1:
-			'<<$bname>> you took the waist and put the cancer'
+			'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and back. He slowly pushes you down, motioning for you to get on your hands and knees so he can fuck you from behind.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_dog
 		end
 	end
 }
 
 $d_fbd_miss = {
-	act 'Lie on your back':
+	act 'Get down on your back':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
@@ -126,17 +132,17 @@ $d_fbd_miss = {
 			dynamic $sexcum
 			dynamic $d_fbd_end
 		elseif tiprand >= 50 and tiprand < 70:
-			'<<$bname>> you took the waist and put the cancer'
+			'<<$bname>> gets up and pulls you up, motioning for you to get on your hands and knees. He wants to fuck you from behind next.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_dog
 		elseif tiprand >= 70:
-			'<<$bname>> suddenly came out of you and climbed nimbly on your chest'
+			'<<$bname>> suddenly pulls out of you and moves up towards your chest, pointing his cock at your face. It''s slick with your juices, and pulsates slightly.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_face
 		end
 	end
 }
 
 $d_fbd_dog = {
-	act 'get cancer':
+	act 'Get on your hands and knees':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
@@ -154,28 +160,28 @@ $d_fbd_dog = {
 			gs 'stat'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_end
 		elseif tiprand >= 50 and tiprand < 70:
-			'<<$bname>> You went out of your way and pressed, you had to lie on his stomach'
+			'<<$bname>> decides to push his luck, and whispers for you to get down on your stomach. You turn to lie down as he says, and look back at him while you wonder what he''s going to do next.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_anal
 		elseif tiprand >= 70:
-			'<<$bname>> suddenly came out of you, put you on the back and climbed nimbly on your chest'
+			'<<$bname>> suddenly pulls out of you and moves up towards your chest, pointing his cock at your face. It''s slick with your juices, and pulsates slightly.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_face
 		end
 	end
 }
 
 $d_fbd_face = {
-	act 'lie':
+	act 'Lie back on the bed':
 		cls
 		minut += 5
 		horny += 10
 		spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+		gs 'cum_manage'
 		spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+		gs 'cum_manage'
 		facial += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdFace.jpg"></center>'
-		'<<$bname>> Fingering a member of the front of your face touching his purple head of your lips and tongue. Suddenly out of his cock flies jet of sperm and paopadaet your face, then another and another. Sharply smelling seed gets into your mouth and running down your cheeks.'
+		'<<$bname>> jerks off, while his cock is pointing at your face. You instinctively stick out your tongue, and he rubs the head of his dick against it while he''s approaching his orgasm. Suddenly a jet of sperm hits your face, covering you in cum. Several more follow, some of it getting into your mouth while the rest covers your cheeks and eye lids.'
 		dynamic $d_fbd_end
 	end
 }
@@ -192,13 +198,13 @@ $d_fbd_anal = {
 		tiprand = rand(1, 100)
 
 		if tiprand >= 70:
-			'<<$bname>> suddenly came out of you, put you on the back and climbed nimbly on your chest'
+			'<<$bname>> suddenly pulls out of you and moves up towards your chest while you turn around. His cock is pointing at your face.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_face
 		elseif tiprand < 70:
 			spafinloc = 4
-gs 'cum_manage'
+			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<<$bname>> groaned and you felt something warm as it was the seed fill your ass.'
+			'<<$bname>> groans, and you feel a warm liquid spreading inside your colon. He just came inside your ass.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_end
 		end
 	end
@@ -216,14 +222,14 @@ $d_fbd_end = {
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbhend.jpg"></center>'
-		'You began to brush up. <<$bname>> pretty dressed "I was glad to be with you even sit, but now come roommates, she know."'
+		'Once you''re finished, you quickly brush up and begin to put your clothes back on. <<$bname>> grins at you smugly, already dressed again in a clean fancy dress shirt and pants. He runs his hand through your hair and says: "Thanks for that, <<$nickname>>. My friend was right, you Pavlovsk girls are fun! My roommates can be back at any time, though... you should probably go? Unless you want to have another go with them too?"'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
 	end
 }
 
 $d_fbd_drunk = {
-	act 'drink':
+	act 'Enjoy the drink':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
 		alko += 6
@@ -231,9 +237,9 @@ $d_fbd_drunk = {
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
 		fbreath = 0
 		gs 'stat'
-		'Noisy group fun and buzzing like a disturbed hive. You order typed, although it passed most of the booze. <<$bname>> pours you a drink again and offers.'
+		'While you take sips of the vodka, you chat with the guys. They''re quite interesting, having many stories to share about where they''re from. While you drink and chat, more and more of <<$bname>>''s friends return from what they were doing in Pavlovsk, and the room fills up slowly but surely. It''s turning into quite a large group, and the room sounds like a disturbed bee hive while you continue to take sips of your drink, mostly chatting with <<$bname>>. When your glass is almost empty, <<$bname>> takes it from you and quickly refills it, offering it to you again.'
 
-		act 'another drink':
+		act 'Drink some more':
 			alko += 12
 			dormrape = 0
 			kol_man = rand(5, 16)
@@ -244,7 +250,7 @@ $d_fbd_drunk = {
 }
 
 $d_fbd_mass = {
-	act 'drink':
+	act 'Drink the booze':
 		cls
 		boy += 2
 		gang += 1
@@ -270,9 +276,10 @@ $d_fbd_mass = {
 		horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'You began to drink with the guys and quickly tipsy. <<$bname>> began to kiss you, and the second guy gently stroking your ass. <<$bname>> whispers to you "You both prefer, only me? Or maybe three poeksperementiruem?"'
+		'You quietly drink the booze while you''re leaning against <<$bname>>. He begins to kiss you, while his friend on the other side begins to gently stroke your ass cheeks through your clothes.'
+		'<<$bname>> grins at you and whispers: "Hey babe... what do you want to do next? We can go somewhere a little more private by ourselves, or maybe bring my friend along for a threesome? It''s up to you..."'
 
-		act 'Only with you':
+		act '"I only want you!"':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 10
@@ -280,12 +287,14 @@ $d_fbd_mass = {
 			pose = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdtsingle.jpg"></center>'
-			'<<$bname>> began to kiss you and you do not understand how, were already naked guy under.'
+			'<<$bname>> begins to kiss you before he takes your hand and guides you to another nearby room, where he pulls you down onto a mattress. Even though you said you wanted to be alone with <<$bname>>, his friend enters the room a few seconds later.'
+			'<<$bname>> sees your startled look and reassures you: "Relax, babe... he''s not going to do anything, he just likes to watch. Just focus on me, you do want to make me feel good, right?"'
+			'You nod meekly and close your eyes, enjoying <<$bname>>''s ministrations while he kisses you and slowly takes your clothes off. When you open your eyes again and turn your head, you see that his friend also got naked, and is slowly jerking himself off in the corner while <<$bname>> moves in to fuck you. Weird... You close your eyes again, trying to forget about the friend while you focus on <<$bname>> and his cock.'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart4
-			'You feel like something hard and hot pressed his lips to you'
+			'While <<$bname>> fucks you, you open your mouth to moan. When you do, you suddenly feel something hard against your lips.'
 
-			act 'mouth open':
+			act 'Open your mouth':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 10
@@ -294,59 +303,61 @@ $d_fbd_mass = {
 				ppbj += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdtdouble.jpg"></center>'
-				'You opened his mouth, and then in your mouth that has become something solid and warm. Opening his eyes you see curly pubic hair in front of his face. Only here before you came, that roommate decided to join you and put his cock in your mouth. You want to be troubled, but he took your head and began to stick it on his penis while yet <<$bname>> fuck you hold in your hands your feet.'
+				'You open your mouth instinctively, feeling something warm and solid pressing against your lips. You immediately feel it slip inside your mouth, and when you open your eyes you see little more than curly pubic hair. <<$bname>>''s friend obviously decided to join you anyway, and put his erect prick in your mouth while you were not paying attention. You try to object, but can''t say much with his cock still in your mouth. <<$bname>> doesn''t seem to mind sharing you anyway, and the guys ignore your muffled groans while they continue to fuck your pussy and your mouth at the same time.'
 				dynamic $sexcum
 
-				act 'suck':
+				act 'Suck on the cock in your mouth':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdtcum.jpg"></center>'
-					'Suddenly you hit on the lips warm, viscous liquid with a pungent odor and taste even sharper. The second guy started razryazhatsya your mouth. Have you tried to portray something but were too drunk and lay only blowing bubbles from his mouth, where saliva is mixed up with sperm.'
+					'While you suck on the cock in your mouth, you suddenly feel a warm liquid in your mouth. It has quite a pungent odour, and has a bitter taste to it. The second guy just came in your mouth! You try to object again, but are too drunk to say anything coherent. The guys grin when they see you mostly just blowing cum bubbles when you try to talk.'
 					dynamic $d_fbd_end
 
-					act 'helplessly lying':
+					act 'Just lie down for a moment':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
 						spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'You lie entirely from exhaustion and then suddenly <<$bname>> taking you by the shoulders sent your face to its members'
+						'You don''t have the energy to do much about what the guys did... it''s over anyway, what''s the point? You sigh and just relax on the mattress for a moment, to regain your focus. Then suddenly <<$bname>> gently takes you by the shoulders and lifts you up, putting you down on your knees. Another erect cock is pointing straight at your face... wait, where did that come from? Whose dick is that?'
 						dynamic $d_fbd_threesome
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 
-		act 'Well. may be':
+		act '"Maybe..."':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 10
 			ppsex += 1
 			pose = 0
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You started uncertainly mumble something unintelligible and <<$bname>> gently taking you by the shoulders sent your face to its members.'
+			'You''re too drunk to really think straight, and just mumble something.'
+			'<<$bname>> grins at you, interpreting that as a go sign that he and his friend can fuck you any way they want... it''s not like you can tell them otherwise. He gently pulls you up and guides you to a nearby empty room, with his friend following the two of you. When they enter the room, his friend quickly locks the door while <<$bname>> helps you get down on your knees. Both the guys drop their trousers, and <<$bname>>''s friend impatiently moves his cock towards your face, spreading his precum on your lips while he waits for you to open your mouth.'
 			dynamic $d_fbd_threesome
 		end
 	end
 }
 
 $d_fbd_threesome = {
-	act 'Take by mouth':
+	act 'Open your mouth':
 		cls
 		ppbj += 2
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdrbj.jpg"></center>'
-		'You parted his lips and took her mouth dick, taking the second term in the palm and began to masturbate. Do you sometimes change the terms in your mouth and try to iladoshke alternately serve boys. One of the guys gets up and coming to you from behind starts stroking your ass.'
+		'You part your lips obediently without giving it any thought, knowing what''s expected of you in this position. You close your lips around his friend''s cock, while <<$bname>> takes your hand and rests it on his dick, expecting you to service him as well. You service both the cocks as best as you can, even though you''re still not sure who this other guy even is.'
+		'One of the guys then gets up and positions himself behind you, while you continue sucking on the cock that''s still in front of you.'
 
-		act 'continue to suck':
+		act 'Keep sucking on it':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			horny += 10
@@ -355,12 +366,12 @@ $d_fbd_threesome = {
 			$boy = $bname
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdrsex.jpg"></center>'
-			'You continued to suck dick and feel like the back is attached <<$bname>>.'
+			'You keep sucking on the cock in front of you, as you figure the guys want you to do. You focus for a moment and realize that <<$bname>> is behind you. The dick that''s rubbing against your pussy lips is probably his... right? It must be.'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart4
-			'<<$bname>> takes the cock out of your vagina and anus caresses your light stroking fingers.'
+			'After a while, <<$bname>> pulls his cock out of your cunt and lightly caresses your puckered asshole with his fingers.'
 
-			act 'Relax and continue to suck':
+			act 'Try to relax and keep sucking':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				horny += 10
@@ -368,34 +379,35 @@ $d_fbd_threesome = {
 				pose = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdranal.jpg"></center>'
-				'You tried to relax the ass and continued to suck dick in your mouth.'
+				'You moan around his friend''s cock, while <<$bname>> keeps caressing your asshole and slowly pushes two fingers in. After a minute or so he decides you''re ready, and pulls his hand away.'
 				dynamic $analsex2
-				'<<$bname>> took the cock out of your ass and lay on his back. He grabbed you by the waist and began to put on his penis.'
+				'<<$bname>> then pulls his cock out of your ass, and slides down next to you onto the bed. He''s on his back, and motions for you to straddle him. You smile and swing your leg over his body, slowly positioning your pussy over his cock.'
 
-				act 'Sit down on the penis':
+				act 'Slide yourself down onto his penis':
 					cls
 					minut += 5
 					horny += 10
 					ppsex += 1
 					pose = 1
 					dick2 = rand(15, 18)
-					$boy2 = 'the second guy'
+					$boy2 = '<<$bname>>''s friend'
 					dp += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdrdp.jpg"></center>'
-					'You sat on a limb and try to relax, the guy who came up to you suck you from behind and began to stroke your ass..'
+					'Teasingly slowly you lower your body, feeling <<$bname>>''s dick sinking further and further into you. You lean forward and kiss him, and suddenly <<$bname>> stops moving his hips. When you try to ask him why, you suddenly feel something warm and hard press against your sphincter. Damn, they''re both going to fuck you at the same time!? You were not expecting this...'
 					dynamic $doublepenetration
-					'Of you suddenly got both members and sharply on their knees.'
+					'After a few minutes the guys are close to cumming, and <<$bname>> hoarsely says he wants to see your face covered in sperm. The guys pull their cocks out of you, and <<$bname>> tells you to get down on your knees in front of them so you can finish them off.'
 
-					act 'Kneel':
+					act 'Kneel in front of them':
 						cls
 						minut += 5
 						cumface += 2
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbdrcum.jpg"></center>'
-						'Suddenly you hit on the lips warm, viscous liquid with a pungent odor and taste even sharper. The second guy started razryazhatsya your mouth. You''re standing on my knees smeared with sperm in the face and look up at the guys.'
+						'You nod and kneel down on a towel, wrapping your hands around the two cocks. They''re still feeling slippery from your juices and the lubricant. As soon as you begin to jerk them off, a warm liquid shoots out of one of them and you close your eyes instinctively. Several warm jets of cum end up on your lips and cheeks. When you stick out your tongue testily, you wince at the strong taste. Immediately after you feel more drops coming in from the other side, the first one finding its way into your still slightly opened mouth. You quickly close your mouth again and let him shoot the rest of his cum over your tightly sealed lips. Whoever that was must have been saving up for a while, it''s quite a large load!'
+						'When you''re certain they''re finished, you carefully open your eyes and look at the guys. They have wide grins on their faces, and look proudly at your cum-covered face.'
 						dynamic $d_fbd_end
 					end
 				end

+ 11 - 10
locations/fbHouse

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 cls
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbHouse.jpg"></center>'
-'<<$bname>> led you to your house and take you to your apartment. The apartment he put you on the couch and sat down next to you. <<$bname>> tilted towards your face'
+'<<$bname>> leads you to his house, and gallantly opens the door for you. He invites you to take a seat on the couch and then sits down next to you, putting his arm around you. After you cuddle for a while, he puts his hand on your chin as he guides your face towards his.'
 
-act 'Kiss':
+act 'Kiss him':
 	cls
 	boy += 1
 	dick = rand(15, 25)
@@ -23,25 +23,26 @@ act 'Kiss':
 	horny += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbhKiss.jpg"></center>'
-	'You started kissing a man and he began to slowly undress you.'
+	'He''s cute! You open your mouth and kiss <<$bname>> enthusiastically, and don''t stop him when you feel his hands tugging at your clothes. He''s slowly trying to undress you, but doesn''t get very far in this position. After a while he gives up and just focuses on kissing you back, rubbing his slightly trembling hand over your thigh.'
 
-	act 'Take by mouth':
+	act 'Give him a blowjob':
 		cls
 		ppbj += 1
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbhBJ.jpg"></center>'
-		'You are inclined to the guy and unbuttoned his pants lowered his pants to get it <<dick>> inch dick. Play a little with him.'
+		'After a few minutes you begin to feel sorry for <<$bname>>. You can tell he wants you badly, but he''s too nervous to ask you to take off your clothes. You tell him: "Just sit back and relax, baby... I''ll make you feel good", and slowly make your way down to his groin. He nods and shifts his hips a bit so you can pull his pants down, and moans your name softly when you close your lips around his <<dick>>cm dick. You do your best to make him feel good, and tease him a little with your tongue before focusing on giving him your best blowjob.'
+		'Your eagerness to please him seems to have inspired <<$bname>>, and after a few minutes he''s no longer the nervous guy you went home with. He gently but firmly pulls his hips away from your mouth, and looks at you eagerly.'
 		tiprand = rand(0, 1)
 
 		if tiprand = 0:
 			pose = 1
-			$fbhactname = 'get cancer'
-			'<<$bname>> gently but firmly puts you on your feet and Tips'
+			$fbhactname = 'Get on your hands and knees'
+			'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and motions for you to get on your hands and knees so he can fuck you from behind.'
 		else
 			pose = 0
-			$fbhactname = 'Lie on your back'
-			'<<$bname>> gently but firmly puts you on the back'
+			$fbhactname = 'Get down on your back'
+			'<<$bname>> gets up and helps you take off your clothes, before he puts his hands on your shoulders and pushes you back against the couch, telling you to lie down on your back and spread your legs for him.'
 		end
 
 		act '<<$fbhactname>>':
@@ -68,7 +69,7 @@ act 'Kiss':
 				minut += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/fbhend.jpg"></center>'
-				'You began to brush up. <<$bname>> pretty dressed "I was glad to be with you even sit, but my business, I''m_sorry."'
+				'Once you''re finished, you quickly brush up and begin to put your clothes back on. <<$bname>> smiles at you, already dressed again in a clean fancy dress shirt and pants. You see him think for a few seconds, as if he''s not sure how to bring it up. Then he says: "Thanks <<$nickname>>, I really needed that! I''d love to spend more time with you, but I''m afraid I have to get back to work now. You should go."'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'gorodok'
 			end

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+ 268 - 241
locations/gopskver


+ 8 - 5
locations/placer_gop_orgy

@@ -4,7 +4,8 @@ cumspclnt = 2
 gs 'cum_cleanup'
 fbreath = 0
 gs 'stat'
-'You and <<$ev_name>> enter what is an otherwise abandoned apartment, everywhere is rubbish and dirt. The boys began to pour vodka and actively flirt with you and your friend. Soon you guys start to undress and clear a space for you and your girlfriend to lie down.'
+'You, <<$ev_name>> and the guys enter what seems to be an otherwise abandoned apartment. The place barely has any furniture, and there is rubbish and dirt everywhere. Are you even allowed to be in here?'
+'The boys don''t pay any attention to their surroundings, and pour out some vodka from a bottle into several cups they brought while they actively flirt with you and your friend. You soon forget about your surroundings as you''re having fun with the guys, and undress alongside <<$ev_name>>. The boys quickly clear an area of bottles and other debris, so you can lie down.'
 gang += 1
 $boy = 'Gopnik'
 ciklkm = (kol_man / 2) + 1
@@ -21,11 +22,12 @@ if Frend_num = 14:
 	KatjaOhrenet = 3
 end
 
-act 'Further':
+act 'Continue':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/gopgang2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Having laid you and your girlfriend next to each other, they start to fuck you.'
+	'The guys ogle your naked bodies greedily, you can tell that all of them want a turn on both of you. In a way it''s rather flattering, having so many guys lust over your naked bodies like that.'
+	'You willingly spread your legs and hold <<$ev_name>>''s hand, squealing as the both of you get fucked by the Gopniks.'
 	:markgopgang
 	ciklkm -= 1
 	minut += 15
@@ -38,13 +40,14 @@ act 'Further':
 		dynamic $analsexrude
 	end
 
-	if ciklkm > 0:'The space between your legs is filled by the next guy.'
+	if ciklkm > 0:'All of the guys want to fuck you or <<$ev_name>> at least once. You see one of them impatiently stroking his cock, keeping it erect while he is waiting for the Gopnik that is currently fucking you to finish. There might be more beyond your vision range though, you''re not quite sure.'
+	'Once the Gopnik finishes, his friend quickly takes his place and offers you his dick. You quietly close your fingers around it, and glance to your right to see how <<$ev_name>> is holding up. She seems to be having a blast! One of the Gopniks is fucking her roughly from behind, while she''s enthusiastically sucking another guy''s cock.'
 
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if ciklkm > 0:jump 'markgopgang'
 
-	'The guys finally are finally spent and have lost interest, the two of you get dressed and gather your stuff.'
+	'The guys are finally done with the two of you, and you feel a tad embarrassed when you look at <<$ev_name>>. You can see she feels the same way, but at the same time... that was so hot! She loved getting treated like a piece of meat, and you certainly enjoyed watching her while they did the same to you. The two of you quickly get dressed and leave the house, exchanging glances.'
 
 	act 'Leave':gt 'placer_end'
 end

+ 75 - 70
locations/placer_house

@@ -4,23 +4,23 @@ cumspclnt = 2
 gs 'cum_cleanup'
 fbreath = 0
 gs 'stat'
-'You come across a company apartment and continued there to drink and have fun.'
+'You exit the park with your friend, and follow <<$bname>> to an apartment nearby. You all go inside, and continue to drink and have fun there.'
 
 if kol_man = 1:
 	dick = rand(12, 25)
-	$boy = 'guy'
-	'You started hugging and kissing a man, <<$ev_name>> also started to kiss him.'
+	$boy = 'guy from the park'
+	'You begin to hug and kiss <<$bname>>. Soon <<$ev_name>> joins in and you''re both kissing the guy, as well as each other.'
 
-	act 'Sucking guy':
+	act 'Suck him off':
 		cls
 		bj += 1
 		guy += 1
 		gang += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/threesomeBJ.jpg"></center>'
-		'Together with a friend , in turn.'
+		'You and <<$ev_name>> both get down on your knees in front of <<$bname>> and share his cock, giving him a blowjob in turns. When you don''t have his cock in your mouth, you spend the idle time by playing with his balls, licking and sucking on them while softly whispering words of encouragement to <<$ev_name>>, challenging her to take the cock deeper down her throat.'
 
-		act 'further':
+		act 'Get on your hands and knees for him':
 			cls
 			minut += 15
 
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if kol_man = 1:
 			lesbian += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/threesome.jpg"></center>'
-			'You put cancer and parne came to your ass ready to fuck you. <<$ev_name>> sat in front of you and offered you my pussy you immediately began to lick.'
+			'When you get down on your hands and knees for him, <<$bname>> wastes no time and immediately gets behind you, ready to fuck you. Just as he slams his cock in and begins to fuck you in earnest, <<$ev_name>> is very turned on by your horny mewling and scoots over in front of you with her legs spread wide. Without a second thought, you immediately begin to lap up her pussy juices from her soaked snatch.'
 			dynamic $sexstart
 			dynamic $sexstart2
 			dynamic $sexcum
@@ -48,18 +48,18 @@ if kol_man = 1:
 	end
 elseif kol_man = 2:
 	dick = rand(12, 25)
-	$boy = 'guy'
-	'The boys began to hug and kiss you with his girlfriend, <<$ev_name>> Man began to stroke between her legs and pulled out his cock.'
+	$boy = 'guy from the park'
+	'The guys seem to each have picked their favourite girl, and <<$bname>> is all over you. While he kisses and gropes you greedily, his friend is doing the same to <<$ev_name>>. She seems to be quite into him, and happily returns him kiss and lets him touch her wherever and however he wants. Within minutes, she lowered her body and is vigorously sucking her guy''s cock. Meanwhile, <<$bname>> looks at you expectantly as he exposes his hard dick to you, expecting you to do the same.'
 
-	act 'Sucking guy':
+	act 'Suck off your guy':
 		cls
 		bj += 1
 		guy += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/foursomeBJ.jpg"></center>'
-		'You, too, leaned to the guy and started sucking his cock, <<$ev_name>> sucks the other guy.'
+		'You''re not about to let her show you up! You quickly scoot down on the bed until your mouth is near his erection. The musky and manly smell of it is impossible to ignore, and actually arouses you a quite a bit. You eagerly take his cock in your mouth and suck on the head, trying to compete with <<$ev_name>>. However, she is one step ahead of you and already has her guy''s cock all the way down her throat. The guy has his hand behind her head but realizes he doesn''t need to do anything, <<$ev_name>> is giving him the blowjob of a lifetime! You try to smile with <<$bname>>''s cock still in your mouth... guess she wins this one. Then you decide to focus solely on making <<$bname>> feel good instead, and forget about <<$ev_name>> and the other guy.'
 
-		act 'Fuck guys':
+		act 'Fuck him':
 			cls
 			minut += 15
 
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ elseif kol_man = 2:
 	end
 elseif kol_man = 3:
 	$d_dozdat = {
-		act 'wait for girlfriend':
+		act 'Wait for your friend':
 			cls
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -92,17 +92,17 @@ elseif kol_man = 3:
 
 			if Frend_num = 14:
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/katjacum.jpg"></center>'
-				'Of the room came a tired but happy with Katja smeared in white mucus face.'
+				'Eventually, Katja comes out of the room. She has cum smeared all over her face, and looks exhausted... but happy. Very happy.'
 			end
 
-			'Together with a friend you have brought each other in order and steel This collection of home.'
+			'You quickly brush up a little together with <<$ev_name>>, and get ready to leave the apartment.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt 'placer_end'
 		end
 	}
 
 	$d_girlfrend_end = {
-		act 'further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 
 			if Frend_num = 14:
@@ -116,26 +116,26 @@ elseif kol_man = 3:
 			end
 
 			gs 'stat'
-			'The boys went to the bathroom and you were alone in the room.'
+			'The boys leave to the bathroom to freshen up, leaving you by yourself.'
 			dynamic $d_dozdat
 
-			act 'Peek behind girlfriend':
+			act 'Peek at your friend':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				if Frend_num = 14:
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/katjaend.jpg"></center>'
-					'You looked in the room, on the bed lay naked Katja and clearly dosasyvala member of the guy after hot sex, the guy started to cum on your face and Katja smear sperm on her lips and cheeks.'
+					'You open the door slightly look inside the room. On the bed lies Katja, clearly flustered from getting fucked just now. She''s eagerly sucking off the boy with her, sucking his cock and pleading and begging for him to cum on her face. The guy does, and Katja happily smears the sperm over her lips and cheeks before licking some of it up.'
 				end
 
-				'You closed the door that would not interfere and wait for girlfriend.'
+				'You pull the door closed, realizing you shouldn''t be peeking on your friend. Instead, you just sit back on the bed and patiently wait for your friend to be done.'
 				dynamic $d_dozdat
 			end
 		end
 	}
 
 	$d_girlfrend_end2 = {
-		act 'further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 
 			if Frend_num = 14:
@@ -150,34 +150,34 @@ elseif kol_man = 3:
 			end
 
 			gs 'stat'
-			'The guy lay on the bed and began to snore.'
+			'The guy crashes down next to you and almost immediately falls asleep. Within minutes his snoring fills the room, and you''re not quite sure... should you feel flattered for exhausting him so effectively, or insulted that he''s no longer paying any attention to you?'
 			dynamic $d_dozdat
 
-			act 'Peek behind girlfriend':
+			act 'Peek at your friend':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				if Frend_num = 14:
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/katjaendgang.jpg"></center>'
-					'You looked into the room that Katja furiously spire on both sides two guys, Katja only grunts holding member of the mouth.'
+					'The two guys in the room have Katja spitroasted; one of them is furiously fucking her from behind, while Katja is sucking the other guy''s cock like her life depended on it. Her loud groans are clearly noticeable for you, despite her having a cock in her mouth... you can''t help but notice how cute she sounds, even during an act such as this.'
 				end
 
-				'You closed the door that would not interfere and wait for girlfriend.'
+				'You pull the door closed, realizing you shouldn''t be peeking on your friend. Instead, you just sit back on the bed and patiently wait for your friend to be done.'
 				dynamic $d_dozdat
 			end
 		end
 	}
 
-	'One of the guys suggested you uedenitsya in the room.'
+	'One of the guys suggests you and him could stay in this room, while <<$ev_name>> goes to the other room with whom she likes.'
 
-	act 'Go to guy':
+	act 'Make out with the guy':
 		cls
 		horny += 10
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You should be left alone as the guy started to kiss you and paw'
+		'You sheepishly smile at the guy as <<$ev_name>> takes the other two guys by the hand and leaves the room. Then you move in and kiss him. The guy quickly answers your kiss, and roughly paws at your body hoping to get you naked.'
 
-		act 'Take by mouth':
+		act 'Take him in your mouth':
 			cls
 			$boy = 'guy'
 			dick = rand(15, 20)
@@ -185,17 +185,17 @@ elseif kol_man = 3:
 			guy += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/bj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sat on his haunches in front of a guy and he unbuttoned his pants pulled out his penis.'
+			'You quietly slide down to your haunches, while you rub your hand over the quite noticeable bulge in his pants. Unable to withstand your teasings any longer, he unbuttons his pants and his erect penis jumps out.'
 			dynamic $dinrandbj
 
-			act 'further':
+			act 'Continue':
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				tipsexrand = rand(0, 1)
 
 				if tipsexrand = 0:
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					swallow += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/swallow2.jpg"></center>'
@@ -203,16 +203,16 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 					dynamic $d_girlfrend_end2
 				elseif tipsexrand = 1:
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/bj.jpg"></center>'
-					'The guy whispered, "I want you"'
+					'The guy whispers: "<<$nickname>>, I want you..."'
 
-					act 'redouble efforts':
+					act 'Redouble your efforts':
 						cls
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						swallow += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/swallow2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You become even more actively sucking dick, that would do blowjob.'
+						'You smile up at him with his cock still in your mouth, and redouble your efforts to give him the best blowjob you can come up with.'
 						dynamic $dinrandswallow
 						dynamic $d_girlfrend_end2
 					end
@@ -222,19 +222,20 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 						horny += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/gadukino/mitka.jpg"></center>'
-						'You lay on your back and one of the guys spread your legs, and the second came up to your face and put his penis in your mouth.'
+						'You lie down on your back and the guy quickly spreads your legs, and slams his cock inside your snatch before you can change your mind. While he fucks you vigorously, a second comes up out of nowhere and puts his cock in front of your mouth. Not giving it another thought, you open your mouth and close your lips around it.'
 						dynamic $sexstart
 						dynamic $sexstart2
 						dynamic $sexcum
 						dynamic $d_girlfrend_end2
 					end
 
-					act 'anal':
+					act 'Offer him your ass':
 						cls
 						horny += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/anal2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You suggested the guy to fuck you in the ass, he gladly accepted and you undressed got on all fours.'
+						'You tease him and whisper back: "Do you want my ass, baby? Just say the word and it''s all yours..."'
+						'He eagerly nods and nearly stutters over his words a few times, unsure whether you''re playing a prank on him or not. However, you hold true to your word and undress for him, making a little striptease out of it. Then you get on your hands and knees and wink at him.'
 						dynamic $analsexrude
 						dynamic $d_girlfrend_end2
 					end
@@ -248,7 +249,9 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 		horny += 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/swing.jpg"></center>'
-		'<<$ev_name>> whispering about something with a guy, then she went into the next room with him, leaving you with two guys. The boys sat down to you to close, one began to kiss your lips, and the second stroke your breasts.'
+		'<<$ev_name>> comes up to you and whispers: "<<$bname>> said he had something really cool to show me, in private... you''ll be fine here by yourself for a while, right?", before leaving to the next room without waiting for an answer.'
+		'You sheepishly grin at the two guys, and mutter: "Looks like it''s just us for a while, boys... what do you want to do to pass the time?"'
+		'The boys have some ideas, and sit down next to you. One of them kisses you passionately, while the other plays with your boobs through your clothes.'
 
 		act 'Stay with the guys':
 			cls
@@ -260,14 +263,15 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 			gang += 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/doublebj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You guys started to undress , and you just giggled drunkenly, you do not understand how but in your mouth proved a member of one of the guys, and the second term you held in your hand. You started to suck the guys take turns. Finally.'
+			'Well, you are feeling great right now, and these boys are kinda cute... might as well have some fun while you wait for <<$ev_name>>!'
+			'You giggle drunkenly as the boys begin to undress you. Without really realizing what is happening, you find yourself with one hard dick inside your mouth, and another in your hand. You''re idly massaging it, without even giving it any thought. You decide you might as well give the boys a good show while you wait for your friend, and begin to suck them in turns.'
 
 			act 'Lie on your back':
 				cls
 				horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/doublemiss.jpg"></center>'
-				'You lay on your back and one of the guys spread your legs, and the second came up to your face and put his penis in your mouth.'
+				'You pull away from the boys and lie back on the bed. One of them immediately notices what you want and gets between your legs, slamming his cock inside you. You make a gesture for the other guy to move his cock back to your mouth, which he happily does. Soon you find yourself on some stranger''s bed, getting roughly pounded while you''re giving another a deepthroating blowjob... is this even about waiting for <<$ev_name>> any more, or do you just enjoy being here?'
 				dynamic $sexstart
 				dynamic $sexstart2
 				dynamic $sexcum
@@ -275,26 +279,26 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 
 				if sexrand = 0:
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Suddenly a guy who sucked you became close your mouth and smeared his cock cum to you on the lips and cheeks.'
+					'Suddenly you feel the cock inside your mouth spasming, and your mouth is filled with his cum.'
 					dynamic $d_girlfrend_end
 				elseif sexrand = 1:
-					'Guys suddenly decided to change places.'
+					'Suddenly, the guys decide to change places.'
 
-					act 'further':
+					act 'Continue':
 						cls
 						horny += 10
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						dick = rand(15, 20)
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/doublemiss2.jpg"></center>'
-						'Guys swapped, and the guy from whom you suck dick spread your legs, and the guy who fucked you slipped you smeared his cock in her mouth Cum, What would you clean it.'
+						'The guys change places, and the guy who you had been sucking for the last few minutes easily slides his cock inside you. You''d done a good job drooling over his dick, and the saliva made his entry very easy. Meanwhile, the guy who had been fucking you for the last few minutes thrusts his cock at your face, and you obediently open your mouth to take it in. When you lick your own juices of him you realize... you kind of like your own taste! You don''t get long to enjoy it, however. Within the minute he groans, shooting his load all over your exposed tongue and inside your mouth. He pulls out before he is finished, shooting the last drops of his load over your face.'
 						dynamic $sexstart
 						dynamic $sexstart2
 						dynamic $sexcum
@@ -303,78 +307,79 @@ gs 'cum_manage'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'get cancer':
+			act 'Get on your hands and knees':
 				cls
 				horny += 10
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/rakom.jpg"></center>'
-				'You undressed and got cancer on the bed waiting for guys.'
+				'You quickly take off your clothes, and get down on the bed on your hands and knees.'
 
-				act 'anal':
+				act 'In your ass':
 					cls
 					dick = rand(15, 20)
 					horny += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/picKav/grupd2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You guys have offered to fuck you in the ass, they gladly agreed. One of the guys came up to your face and put his penis between your lips, you immediately started to suck.'
+					'You give the boys a sweet smile and ask them: "Boys, I would really like it if you fucked me in my ass right now, it''s been so long... could you be a dear and make a girl feel good?"'
+					'They gladly agree, and one of them impatiently rubs his cock against your tight spincter. Meanwhile, his friend moves back to your face and offers you his cock to suck on while you get fucked. You open your mouth without hesitation and obediently suck him off, while his friend fucks your ass from behind.'
 					dynamic $analsexrude
 					sexrand = rand(0, 1)
 
 					if sexrand = 0:
 						spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+						gs 'cum_manage'
 						gs 'stat'
-						'Suddenly a guy who sucked you became close your mouth and smeared his cock cum to you on the lips and cheeks.'
+						'Suddenly you feel the cock inside your mouth spasming, shooting his load all over your exposed tongue and inside your mouth. He pulls out before he is finished, shooting the last drops of his cum over your cheeks. Since it would be rude to spit out his load now, you swallow it.'
 						dynamic $d_girlfrend_end
 					elseif sexrand = 1:
-						act 'further':
+						act 'Continue':
 							cls
 							dick = rand(15, 20)
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/anal.jpg"></center>'
-							'The guy pulled out of your ass his limp dick and a guy who beat you you suck and joined up to your ass. '
+							'The first guy pulls his limp cock out of your asshole, truly spent. The guy who you were sucking off earlier is more than happy to take his place; he didn''t think he would get to fuck your ass today, and quickly makes his move before you can change your mind. He immediately pulls away from your mouth and gets behind you, pushing his cock into your already prepared butthole in one fluent motion.'
 							dynamic $analsexrude
 							dynamic $d_girlfrend_end
 						end
 					end
 				end
 
-				act 'In pussy':
+				act 'In your pussy':
 					cls
 					pose = 1
 					horny += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/doubledog.jpg"></center>'
-					'One of the guys came up to your face and put his penis between your lips, you immediately started to suck.'
+					'One of the guys moves back to your face, and offers you his cock to suck on while you get fucked. You open your mouth without hesitation and obediently suck him off, while his friend fucks your pussy from behind.'
 					dynamic $sexstart
 					dynamic $sexstart2
 					dynamic $sexcum
 					spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					spafinloc = 11
-gs 'cum_manage'
+					gs 'cum_manage'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'Suddenly a guy who sucked you became close your mouth and smeared his cock cum to you on the lips and cheeks.'
+					'Suddenly you feel the cock inside your mouth spasming, shooting his load all over your exposed tongue and inside your mouth. He pulls out before he is finished, shooting the last drops of his cum over your cheeks. Since it would be rude to spit out his load now, you swallow it.'
 					dynamic $d_girlfrend_end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
 elseif kol_man >= 4:
-	'The boys began to embrace you and girlfriend.'
+	'The boys begin to embrace you and your girlfriend, feeling emboldened by the liquor they have been drinking. Their touches soon make you want more, and you and <<$ev_name>> make out with the boys while they impatiently tug at your clothes. Two of them seem to have taken a liking to you, while the two others are focusing their efforts on <<$ev_name>>.'
 
-	act 'engaged in sex':
+	act 'Have sex with two of them':
 		cls
 		gang += 1
 		anal += 1
 		sex += 1
 		dp += 1
 		dick = rand(15, 18)
-		$boy = 'the first guy'
+		$boy = 'random guy from the park'
 		dick2 = rand(15, 18)
-		$boy2 = 'the second guy'
+		$boy2 = 'random guy from the park'
 
 		if Frend_num = 14:
 			KatjaLust += 5
@@ -392,9 +397,9 @@ elseif kol_man >= 4:
 		dynamic $doublepenetration
 		dynamic $sexcum
 		spafinloc = 3
-gs 'cum_manage'
+		gs 'cum_manage'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'The second guy started to cum inside your priests filling her with his sperm'
+		'The second guy begins to groan while his cock is still inside you and sure enough you feel a warm liquid spreading inside your ass, slowly leaking out. It is quite a large load, and you feel quite a few squirts entering you before he is finally finished.'
 		act 'Leave':gt 'placer_end'
 	end
 end

+ 16 - 15
locations/placer_house_one

@@ -4,18 +4,18 @@ cumspclnt = 2
 gs 'cum_cleanup'
 fbreath = 0
 gs 'stat'
-'A guy takes you to his house his home.'
+'<<$bname>> takes your hand and guides you away from the park, towards his apartment.'
 !!tipsexrand = rand(0, 1)
 
-'At the entrance a guy suddenly hugged you and started kissing.'
+'When you''re about to enter a building, he suddenly puts his arms around you and begins to kiss you.'
 
-act 'Kiss the man':
+act 'Kiss him back':
 	cls
 	horny += 10
 	gs 'stat'
-	'The guy unbuttons his pants and pulls out his member, then presses his hands gently on your shoulders.'
+	'You answer his kiss, and make out with him for a moment. In the meantime, he unbuttoned his pants and pulled out his raging boner, eager to get some action. He then puts his hands on your shoulders and gently but insistently begins to press downwards. You know what he wants from you next.'
 
-	act 'Squat':
+	act 'Squat before him':
 		cls
 		horny += 10
 		guy += 1
@@ -23,43 +23,44 @@ act 'Kiss the man':
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/bjdan.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kneel down in front of the guy and kiss his erect penis, then you wrap your lips around it and start sucking. After a while the man groans and you realize that he is getting close to cumming.'
+		'You kneel down in front of the guy and place a light kiss on his erect cock, giving him a questioning look. When you see the agony on his face you smirk and wrap your lips around his cock, and begin to suck him off. After a while he groans, and you can tell that he''s getting close to his orgasm.'
 
-		act 'Suck more':
+		act 'Redouble your efforts':
 			cls
 			spafinloc = 12
-gs 'cum_manage'
+			gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/cum.jpg"></center>'
-			'You increase your pace and use your tongue to stimulate his cock head, you continue sucking until the guy finishes in your mouth.'
+			'You increase the pace and use your tongue to stimulate the head of his cock, trying to coax his cum out of him. He soon rewards you, and you feel his hot jets of sperm handing at the back of your throat.'
 
-			act 'Swallow':
+			act 'Swallow it':
 				cls
 				swallow += 1
 				vaf += 1
 				sub += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/swallow.jpg"></center>'
-				'You swallow your casual acquaintances cum, a nasty aftertaste or spunk is left in your mouth. You open your mouth and stick out your tongue to show that you have swallowed everything. The man strokes your hair, "You are so fucking hot."'
-				act 'Clean up':
+				'You swallow your casual acquaintance''s cum, and smile up at him with the nasty after-taste of his spunk still left in your mouth. You obediently open your mouth and move around your tongue, to show him that you swallowed his load.'
+				'He grins down at you and softly strokes your hair as he says: "You''re so fucking hot... I wish I could keep you forever."'
+				act 'Clean him up':
 					cls
 					vaf += 1
 					sub += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/clean.jpg"></center>'
-					'You smile at him before taking hold of his penis and use your tongue to lick it clean of any remaining sperm.'
+					'You smile at him, before taking hold of his penis and using your tongue to lick it clean of any remaining sperm. Then you quietly tuck it back into his pants, and give it an endearing pat before you get back up.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt 'placer_end'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'Spit out':
+			act 'Spit it out':
 				cls
 				swallow += 1
 				dom += 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/placer/bjdan.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wrinkled and spit cum out of his mouth on the floor.'
+				'Your face contorts a bit, despite your best efforts to hide your disgust. His load tastes awful! After a few seconds you decide to give up the charade, and just spit it out on the floor right in front of him.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt 'placer_end'
 			end

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locations/zsoft_gopskverGorSlut


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