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KevinSmarts 9 years ago
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      locations/TV

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locations/TV

@@ -7,11 +7,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
 	'You turn on the TV and settled comfortably on the couch.'
 
-	if TV = 1:'Ancient TV turns on and out came the sound of hoarse advertising.'
-	if TV = 2:'Huge plasma joined and out came the sound of advertising smartly.'
+	if TV = 1:'Your ancient TV warms up and you''re greeted by adverts, the sound is terrible.'
+	if TV = 2:'Your huge plasma comes to life and you hear the crisp sound of some advert, it looks great in HD.'
 
 	if kabel = 0:
-		'You do not have cable, so shows only one channel at a constant advertising and news.'
+		'You do not have cable, so it shows only one channel that''s just constant advertising and news.'
 
 		act 'Watch TV (1:00)':gt 'TV', 'nokable'
 	elseif kabel = 1:
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		act 'Watch TV (1:00)':gt 'TV', 'kable'
 	end
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV look accidentally stops on your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch':
 		cla
 		gt 'TV', 'fin'
@@ -38,9 +38,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nokable':
 	elektro += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are viewing the central channel lying on the couch. Watch almost nothing solid and cheesy advertising program.'
+	'You watch the network channel, lying on the couch. It''s all repeats and cheesy infomercials.'
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV look accidentally stops on your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 
 	act 'Watch TV (1:00)':gt 'TV', 'nokable'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch':gt 'TV', 'fin'
@@ -57,9 +57,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kable':
 	elektro += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/pics/telek.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are viewing cable television.'
+	'You watch cable television., it''s really good these days.'
 
-	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV look accidentally stops on your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now a woman.'
+	if daystart < 10 and StoryLine = 0:'Sometimes while watching TV you catch a glimpse of your legs or chest, and every time it''s a bit shocking for you to see that your body is now that of a woman.'
 
 	act 'Watch TV (1:00)':gt 'TV', 'kable'
 	act 'Turn off the TV and get off the couch':gt 'TV', 'fin'