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  1. 58 51
      locations/katalkin
  2. 6 6
      locations/katalkinAlko
  3. 36 28
      locations/katalkinSex
  4. 7 6
      locations/kutuzka
  5. 70 66
      locations/vokdin
  6. 118 76
      locations/vokdinvera
  7. 21 17
      locations/vokzaltorg

+ 58 - 51
locations/katalkin

@@ -2,14 +2,14 @@
 gs 'stat'
 
 if hour >= 8:'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-'Little nook in which the police are sitting.'
+'The police station is a small room in the corner of the Pavlovsk station building. For some reason the windows are blinded, so people can''t see what''s happening inside.'
 
 if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
-	'Captain Katalkin handles cases.'
+	'Captain Katalkin is currently handling some cases.'
 
 	if katalkinSexOnce = 0:
 		if schtraf = 0:
-			'Katalkin looks at you with interest "Sit_down. can tea?"'
+			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with some interest. He gives you a smile and says: "Hello miss. I was just about to have a break, would you like to join me for a cup of tea?"'
 
 			act 'Drink tea':
 				cls
@@ -17,28 +17,28 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sat down at the table and poured Katalkin you some tea. Captain himself sat down next to you and also began to drink tea. He almost rummage your body your lustful eyes. And suddenly you feel like you captain put his hand on his leg and a little squeezing her feverishly began to mumble his face closer to your. "you''re cute, we police are people too."'
+				'You agree and sit down at a table near his desk, while captain Katalkin pours two cups of tea. He puts the two cups on the table and sits down next to you. While you chat about Pavlovsk, you can tell he''s practically undressing you with his eyes. Suddenly, you feel his hand resting on your thigh, gently squeezing it. You quietly begin to sputter some objections just as he moves his face closer to yours and cuts you off: "You''re cute, miss. You have to forgive me, us police officers are just people too..."'
 
 				act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt $curloc
 				act 'Do not move':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
 			end
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Captain Katalkin turned to you and said "In general you with fine <<schtraf>> rubles and you can go."'
+			'Captain Katalkin eyes you up with an uninterested look in his eyes: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> rubles, miss. Once you pay, you can go."'
 
 			if money >= schtraf:
-				act 'Pay a fine':
+				act 'Pay the fine':
 					cls
 					money -= schtraf
 					schtraf = 0
 					katalkinNoexit = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'You paid a fine police officer. He took the money and immediately lost interest to you.'
+					'You agree to pay the fine, and put the money on his desk after counting it. He swipes the money away, putting it in a box before he returns to his duties. As far as he''s concerned, you''re no longer there.'
 
-					act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+					act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'I have no money':
+				act 'You can''t pay the fine':
 					cls
 					money = 0
 					schtraf = 0
@@ -46,9 +46,11 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 					kutime = 24
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'The police searched you, and took values. He frowned and said "Then sit day in jail."'
+					'You shake your head sadly: "I''m sorry officer, I can''t afford that."'
+					'He looks at you indifferently and says in a matter-of-factly tone: "In that case, you spend the next 24 hours in jail."'
+					'He collects your possessions, and counts out the money you do have. You lose that money, but because you can''t pay the full amount you have to spend the next 24 hours in jail. He tells you to follow him and guides you to a prison cell.'
 
-					act 'In jail':gt 'kutuzka'
+					act 'Enter the prison cell':gt 'kutuzka'
 				end
 			end
 
@@ -56,24 +58,25 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 				cls
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You started to beg the police captain did not punish you. He looked around the empty room and then turned his face to you. "Well." His gaze slid over your figure and his sweaty hand fell on my knees to you.'
+				'You can''t go to jail! You try to look cute and innocent for him when you say: "Please sir, I can''t go to jail! Can''t you let me go just this once?"'
+				'He checks to make sure the room is empty, and turns his face to you. His eyes are exploring your body while he puts his sweaty hand on your knee: "Well, we might be able to arrange something..."'
 
 				if money >= schtraf:
-					'You think to yourself, may well in FIG this captain, obviously he had to something. I have enough money for a fine.'
+					'You think to yourself: "Do I really have sex with him, just to avoid a fine? I do have the money, so I could just pay..."'
 
-					act 'Pay a fine':
+					act 'Pay the fine after all':
 						cls
 						money -= schtraf
 						schtraf = 0
 						katalkinNoexit = 0
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-						'You paid a fine police officer. He took the money and immediately lost interest to you.'
+						'You tell him you will pay the fine after all, and put the money on his desk after counting it. He disappointedly swipes the money away, putting it in a box before he returns to his duties. As far as he''s concerned, you''re no longer there.'
 
-						act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+						act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 					end
 				elseif money < schtraf:
-					'You think to yourself, that out then you have no. As there is no required amount for payment of the fine.'
+					'You think to yourself: "I can''t afford to pay the fine. If I have to have sex with him to avoid going to jail, I guess that''s just the way it has to be..."'
 				end
 
 				act 'Smile at him':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
@@ -81,7 +84,8 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 		end
 	elseif katalkinSexDay < daystart:
 		if schtraf = 0:
-			'Katalkin looks at you with interest "Sit down <<$nickname>>. can tea?"'
+			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with some interest. He gives you a smile and says: "Hi there <<$nickname>>. I was just about to have a break, would you like to join me for a cup of tea?"'
+			'From your previous experience with him, you know he''s probably not just talking about tea.'
 
 			act 'Drink tea':
 				cls
@@ -89,114 +93,115 @@ if hour >= 8 and hour < 22:
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sat down at the table and poured Katalkin you some tea. Captain himself sat down next to you and also began to drink tea. He almost rummage your body your lustful eyes. Captain whispers to you grabbing you for Lyashko "Well <<$name>>, can entertain?"'
+				'You agree and sit down at a table near his desk, while captain Katalkin pours two cups of tea. He puts the two cups on the table and sits down next to you. While you chat about Pavlovsk, you can tell he''s practically undressing you with his eyes. After a few minutes Katalkin moves closer to you and cups your boobs through your clothing, and whispers: "Let''s cut the crap, <<$nickname>>... did you come here, just so you could have some fun with me again?"'
 
-				act 'Put his hand on his pants':katsexetap = 1 & gt 'katalkinSex'
+				act 'Put your hand on his groin':katsexetap = 1 & gt 'katalkinSex'
 				act 'Do not move':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
 			end
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Captain Katalkin smiling at you "Well <<$name>>, pay a fine or exhaust?"'
+			'Captain Katalkin has a greedy smile on his face when he asks: "Well <<$name>>, I see you have to pay a fine. Do you have the money, or are you going to entertain me to make it go away?"'
 
 			if money >= schtraf:
-				act 'Pay a fine':
+				act 'Give him the money':
 					cls
 					money -= schtraf
 					schtraf = 0
 					katalkinNoexit = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'You paid a fine police officer. He took the money and immediately lost interest to you.'
+					'You see a tinge of regret in his face when you give him the money. "Oh. Very well then, miss <<$surname>>. You''re free to go."'
 
-					act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+					act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act 'Work':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
+			act 'Entertain him':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
 		end
 	else
 		if schtraf = 0:
-			'Katalkin sits in his papers and that is writing.'
+			'Captain Katalkin is sitting in his chair, working on some documents. He gives you a friendly nod but keeps working, indicating that he doesn''t want to be disturbed right now.'
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Katalkin grins "I think you''re completely fulfilled its fine."'
+			'Captain Katalkin pretends he''s looking through some files, and then rips up a piece of paper while he grins at you: "Good news! It seems like your fine has been paid in full, miss <<$surname>>."'
 
-			act 'Bye now':
+			act 'Say goodbye':
 				cls
 				schtraf = 0
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You said goodbye to the police, He nodded to you "Come on, go, and then I have a lot of work".'
+				'You give him a weak smile and say: "Thank you officer, have a nice day."'
+				'Captain Katalkin nods as he shoos you away: "Same to you, miss. Now if you don''t mind... I have a lot of work to do."'
 
 				act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt $curloc
 			end
 		end
 	end
 elseif hour >= 22:
-	'Captain Katalkin sitting at a table on which lay a variety of snacks and vodka worth. Next to him sat two more police.'
+	'Captain Katalkin is sitting at a table with two of his colleagues. The table has a nice assortment of snacks, and vodka. The policemen look like they have been drinking.'
 
 	if katalkinSexOnce = 1:
 		if katGangMeet = 0:
-			'See you Katalkin captain waved his hand and you drunkenly said "Come here <<$name>>. I ''ll introduce you to fucking guys."'
+			'When Katalkin sees you walk by, he waves you over and drunkenly says: "<<$name>>! Come here, let me fuckin'' introduce you to my boys!"'
 
-			act 'Sit down':
+			act 'Sit down with them':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				katGangMeet = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sat down at a table with a drunken police campaign, you immediately poured vodka. Katalkin introduced you guys like Pasha and Sergei. "Well <<$name>>, Let''s drink to familiarity."'
+				'You join the officers at the table, who have clearly been drinking for a while already. They immediately pour you a glass of vodka. Katalkin says: "This is Pasha, and the other guy is Sergei. They''re good officers, the best Pavlovsk has to offer. Let''s have a toast, to meeting new friends!"'
 
-				act 'A toast to familiarity':alko += 2 & minut += 5 & gt 'katalkinAlko'
+				act 'Raise your glass with them and drink':alko += 2 & minut += 5 & gt 'katalkinAlko'
 			end
 		else
-			'See you Katalkin captain waved his hand and you drunkenly said "Come here <<$name>>. Come buhnem."'
+			'When Katalkin sees you walk by, he waves you over and drunkenly says: <<$name>>! Come here, have a drink with me and my boys!"'
 
-			act 'Sit down':
+			act 'Sit down with them':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				'You sat at the table with his subordinates and Katalkinym Pasha and Sergei. You immediately poured vodka.'
+				'You join the officers at the table, who clearly have been drinking for a while already. They immediately pour you a glass of vodka and have a swig from their own.'
 
-				act 'Drink a glass':alko += 2 & minut += 5 & gt 'katalkinAlko'
+				act 'Drink the vodka':alko += 2 & minut += 5 & gt 'katalkinAlko'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif katalkinSexOnce = 0:
 		'IF THIS MESSAGE climbed it BAG'
 
 		if schtraf = 0:
-			'Katalkin drunkenly looking at you "Come to us at the table! Come_Over, do not be shy, here all their."'
+			'When Katalkin sees you walk by, he waves you over and drunkenly says: <<$name>>! Come here, join me for a drink!"'
 
-			act 'Sit down':
+			act 'Sit down with him':
 				cls
 				minut += 5
 				katalkinNoexit = 0
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-				''
+				'You decline the drink, but don''t mind joining him for a chat so you take a seat next to him. Almost immediately, he scoots his chair close to yours and puts his hand on your thigh, slowly rubbing and squeezing his way upwards. He clearly didn''t invite you over to just have a chat.'
 
 				act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt $curloc
 				act 'Do not move':katsexetap = 0 & gt 'katalkinSex'
 			end
 		elseif schtraf > 0:
-			'Katalkin drunken captain turned to you and said "In short pay fines <<schtraf>> rubles and you can get out."'
+			'Captain Katalkin looks at you with a uninterested look in his eyes. Even though he''s drunk, he won''t let you off the hook: "You have to pay a fine of <<schtraf>> rubles. Once you pay, you can go."'
 
 			if money >= schtraf:
-				act 'Pay a fine':
+				act 'Pay the fine':
 					cls
 					money -= schtraf
 					schtraf = 0
 					katalkinNoexit = 0
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'You paid a fine police officer. He took the money and immediately lost interest to you.'
+					'You agree to pay the fine, and put the money on his desk after counting it. He swipes the money away, putting it in a box before he returns to his duties. As far as he''s concerned, you''re no longer there.'
 
-					act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+					act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'I have no money':
+				act 'You can''t pay the fine':
 					cls
 					money = 0
 					schtraf = 0
@@ -204,20 +209,22 @@ elseif hour >= 22:
 					kutime = 24
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'The police searched you, and took values. He frowned and said "Then sit day in jail."'
+					'You shake your head sadly: "I''m sorry captain, I can''t afford that."'
+					'He looks at you indifferently and says in a matter-of-factly tone: "In that case, you spend the next 24 hours in jail."'
+					'He collects your possessions and does an extra thorough frisk search, the alcohol giving him courage to touch you in places and in a way that would normally be considered widely inappropriate. Still, there''s no one you can complain to... it''s just you and him here. He nods contently and gives you a hard slap on the ass before he counts out the money you do have. You lose that money, but because you can''t pay the full amount you have to spend the next 24 hours in jail. He tells you to follow him and guides you to a prison cell.'
 
-					act 'In jail':gt 'kutuzka'
+					act 'Enter the prison cell':gt 'kutuzka'
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	end
 elseif hour < 8:
-	'The door is locked.'
+	'The door to the police station is locked.'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 end
 
-if katalkinNoexit = 0:act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+if katalkinNoexit = 0:act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
 --- katalkin ---------------------------------
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/katalkinAlko

@@ -2,17 +2,17 @@
 gs 'stat'
 
 if hour < 8:
-	'The police finally drunk and fell to sleep where someone.'
+	'After their drinking session, the policemen finally fell asleep right in the middle of the police station.'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Quietly get up and leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
 	exit
 end
 
 if alko < 6:
-	'You drank a glass of vodka with police. You will again pour into a glass of vodka.'
+	'You join them and take sips of your vodka, feeling it slide down your throat and warm up your stomach. As soon as your glass is empty, they refill it with a generous grin and cheer you on to keep going.'
 
-	act 'drink a glass':
+	act 'Have another drink':
 		alko += 2
 		cumspclnt = 2
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if alko < 6:
 		gt $curloc
 	end
 elseif alko >= 6:
-	'You definitely tipsy and just sit on a chair.'
+	'The world is spinning, and you don''t think you should have another drink. You politely decline and decide to not get up for a while, trying to make the world become less wobbly. You''re not very successful, despite your best attempts the world is just as wobbly a few minutes later.'
 end
 
 !'
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ elseif katGangbang > 0:
 end
 '!
 
-act 'Leave':minut += 2 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+act 'Leave the police station':minut += 2 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
 --- katalkinAlko ---------------------------------
 

+ 36 - 28
locations/katalkinSex

@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 # katalkinSex
 $d_katanal = {
-	act 'further':
+	act 'Continue':
 		cls
 		horny += 5
 		minut += 15
@@ -11,10 +11,10 @@ $d_katanal = {
 		sub += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/katAnal.jpg"></center>'
-		'Captain undressed and stood behind your back, loudly slapped his hand on your naked ass. You even gasped in surprise.'
+		'Captain Katalkin quickly takes off his uniform and neatly puts it on a hanger; you can tell he''s clearly proud of it. Then he walks over to you and tells you to kneel on the seats and lean over the table. He''s obviously used to girls taking orders from him, and he expects nothing less from you. You quickly put your knees on the seats as he says, and when your stomach is on the table he gives you a hard slap on your naked ass. He leans over and growls: "That''s a nice ass you have, girl. Maybe I should put you under arrest and have you stay for a couple of days, I bet my other boys would love to get a turn."'
 		dynamic $analsex2
 
-		act 'Further':
+		act 'Continue':
 			cls
 			minut += 3
 			anal += 1
@@ -22,7 +22,8 @@ $d_katanal = {
 gs 'cum_manage'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/after.jpg"></center>'
-			'Suddenly the captain grabbed your buttocks tight and groaned at you. Did you feel like your ass fills something warm. The captain finally got off and you become odevatsya.'
+			'Captain Katalkin enjoys the feeling of your anus squeezing around his cock for a few seconds more, before he slowly pulls his cock out. A trickle of sperm slowly comes dribbling out of your stretched asshole. When you try to get up, he stops you and pushes you back down against the table. He tells you: "In a minute, girl. Show me your used hole first."'
+			'You obey and pull your ass cheeks to the sides, showing him your glazed asshole while the cum slowly dribbles down over your pussy lips. He admires his work for a few more seconds and then slaps your ass, indicating that you can get up now.'
 
 			act 'Brush up':minut += 1 & gt 'katalkin'
 		end
@@ -36,17 +37,17 @@ $d_katsub = {
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/bend.jpg"></center>'
-		'You lay back with his eyes closed and trying to enjoy the feeling of. Suddenly the captain unfolds you back to yourself and tips.'
+		'You try to close yourself off from the world, focusing on the rough groping he''s giving you. He clearly knows his way around your body, and you quietly enjoy the feeling. After a while he roughly turns you around, and puts his hand on your back forcing you to lean over.'
 
-		act 'Stand leaning':
+		act 'Lean against the wall':
 			cls
-			horny += 5
+			horny += 10
 			minut += 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/grop.jpg"></center>'
-			'You put her hands on the wall , that would not fall and the captain pulled up her skirt and pulled your pants. You felt his fingers began to massage your ass. He hissed at you "Get up off your clothes and cancer"'
+			'You open your eyes and rapidly see the wall approaching. You quickly move your hands up against the wall and are now leaning against it, while he kicks the insides of your heels to signal you to spread your legs more. As soon as you do, his hand finds its way between your legs and crudely massages your pussy and ass crack through your clothes. He hisses at you: "Take off your clothes and get on your hands and knees over there."'
 
-			act 'Undress and get cancer':
+			act 'Undress and assume the position':
 				cls
 				horny += 5
 				minut += 3
@@ -55,21 +56,26 @@ $d_katsub = {
 				kattiperand = rand(0, 1)
 
 				if kattiperand = 0:
-					'You get undressed and stood in front of the captain cancer. "Spread bread" Captain told you tone brooked no argument and you obediently spread her poluzhopiya showing hole. Katalkin pressed his finger on the ring anus and frantically whispered "I''d rather fuck you in the ass. I do not want, What would you flew me."'
+					'For a brief second, you wonder how many girls he''s had in his office like this before you. There definitely seems to be a degree of routine in how he treats you, and the way he commands you to do things reinforce that image. Nevertheless, you can''t just say no to the captain of the Pavlovsk police department. You quickly take off your clothes and drop to your hands and knees like he told you to.'
+					'You can tell he noticed your hesitation, and his commands get more impatient and strict: "Spread your ass cheeks and show me your holes."'
+					'You quickly do as he says, and show him your tight ass and pussy. Katalkin runs his hands over your ass cheeks for a second, before he pushes two fingers against your clenched sphincter. He reaches for his dick and gives it a few strokes while he growls at you: "I think I''d rather fuck your ass today. Besides, as captain of the police department I really can''t have you getting pregnant on me."'
 					dynamic $d_katanal
 				elseif kattiperand = 1:
-					'You get undressed and stood in front of the captain cancer. "Spread bread" Captain told you tone brooked no argument and you obediently spread her poluzhopiya showing hole. Katalkin asked feverish whisper "Do you have Gandon?"'
+					'For a brief second, you wonder how many girls he''s had in his office like this before you. There definitely seems to be a degree of routine in how he treats you, and the way he commands you to do things reinforce that image. Nevertheless, you can''t just say no to the captain of the Pavlovsk police department. You quickly take off your clothes and drop to your hands and knees like he told you to.'
+					'You can tell he noticed your hesitation, and his commands get more impatient and strict: "Spread your ass cheeks and show me your holes."'
+					'You quickly do as he says, and show him your tight ass and pussy. Katalkin runs his hands over your ass cheeks for a second, and ask you in a matter-of-factly tone: "Got a condom?"'
 
 					act 'No':
 						cls
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/katBeforeAnal.jpg"></center>'
-						'You said Captain , you do not have a condom, what Katalkin answered "Then going to fuck you in the ass."'
+						'You shake your head and apologize: "I''m sorry captain, I don''t."'
+						'Katalkin grins: "It''s okay girl, I was hoping you would say that. In that case I''m going to fuck you in the ass, can''t have you getting pregnant on me."'
 						dynamic $d_katanal
 					end
 
 					if prezik > 0:
-						act 'Is_There':
+						act 'Yes':
 							cls
 							pose = 1
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -97,15 +103,15 @@ gs 'stat'
 
 if katsexetap = 0:
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/kat.jpg"></center>'
-	'Hands police captain rummage through your body trying to get here before your breasts and ass.'
+	'Since he doesn''t notice any clear objections from you, captain Katalkin''s groping grows bolder and bolder. His hands now ravage your body, roughly squeezing your <<$titsize>> boobs and pinching your nipples. Then he pulls you up and reaches behind you, pawing at your ass cheeks as he pulls your clothes to the side for better access.'
 
-	act 'Clean up his hands':
+	act 'Push his hands away':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/kat.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have become clean his hands "Well, i do not want, headache, I month." otmazyvatsya you started, but the captain seems you did not listen and continued to undress you in full.'
+		'You try to object: "Wait, please, I''m on my period and I have a headache and..." and push his hands away, but captain Katalkin doesn''t listen. If anything, he''s groping you even harder now, trying to overcome your interruptions. He''s slowly tugging and pulling at your clothes, attempting to take them off.'
 
-		act 'Stroking his pants':katsexetap = 1 & gt $curloc
+		act 'Put your hand on his groin':katsexetap = 1 & gt $curloc
 
 		dynamic $d_katsub
 	end
@@ -113,31 +119,33 @@ if katsexetap = 0:
 	dynamic $d_katsub
 
 	if horny >= 75:
-		act 'Hug him':
+		act 'Kiss him':
 			cls
 			horny += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/kat.jpg"></center>'
-			'You hugged police captain hands and kissed him.'
+			'You put your arms around him and kiss him on his lips, happy to let him grope your ass for the time being. He''s surprisingly powerful for his figure, and the way he takes control of the kiss and aggressively shoves his tongue in your mouth makes you feel like he''s used to getting his way.'
 
-			act 'Stroking his pants':katsexetap = 1 & gt $curloc
+			act 'Put your hand on his groin':katsexetap = 1 & gt $curloc
 
 			dynamic $d_katsub
 		end
 	end
 elseif katsexetap = 1:
-	'You started stroking his pants police uniform trousers and feel like there was strengthened and hardened his cock.'
+	'You don''t say anything, but simply smile as you put your hand on his groin and knead it softly with your fingers. This puts a lewd grin on his face, and he says: "I knew it! I knew you had a thing for men in uniforms as soon as you walked through that door."'
+	'Within seconds you can feel his penis grow more rigid, and before too long the outline of his erect cock is distinctly visible through his uniform pants. He encourages you further: "You know, I could get my handcuffs and we could really have some fun... nah, maybe next time. Keep going."'
 
-	act 'Kneel':
+	act 'Kneel down before him':
 		cls
 
 		if katalkinSexOnce = 0:katalkinSexOnce = 1 & guy += 1
 
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/kneel.jpg"></center>'
-		'You stood in front of a police officer on his knees and pulled his cock out of his pants.'
+		'You drop down to your knees in front of captain Katalkin, your hand never leaving his groin. You tease him a little and cutely ask him: "Captain, could you give me a hand please?" while you stare at his groin.'
+		'He''s more than happy to oblige, and quickly undoes his pants and pulls them down over his hips. His erect cock jumps out, nearly smacking you on the forehead. You close your fingers around it as you direct it towards your mouth, and run your tongue over the head.'
 
-		act 'Suck':
+		act 'Suck his dick':
 			cls
 			bj += 1
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -145,7 +153,7 @@ elseif katsexetap = 1:
 			dynamic $dinrandbj
 
 			if rand(0, 1) = 0:
-				act 'Swallow cum':
+				act 'Swallow his cum':
 					cls
 					swallow += 1
 					spafinloc = 12
@@ -158,7 +166,7 @@ elseif katsexetap = 1:
 					act 'Brush up':minut += 1 & gt 'katalkin'
 				end
 
-				act 'On the face':
+				act 'Take his load on your face':
 					cls
 					facial += 1
 					spafinloc = 11
@@ -166,12 +174,12 @@ elseif katsexetap = 1:
 					KatalkinFacial += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/kat/facial.jpg"></center>'
-					'You took out a member of his mouth and you immediately face splattered warm and strongly smelling sperm.'
+					'When he is about to orgasm, you release his cock from your mouth and give it a few quick jerks with your fingers as you aim it over your face, closing your eyes in anticipation. Soon enough you feel his warm load splattering all over your face... and wow, it''s a lot! You lick your lips to have a taste. It tastes somewhat bitter, but not necessarily unpleasant.'
 
 					act 'Brush up':minut += 1 & gt 'katalkin'
 				end
 			else
-				'Katalkin suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth and took you by the shoulders up from his knees to his feet.'
+				'You''re doing your best to give captain Katalkin a good blowjob, but after a few minutes he suddenly pulls his dick out of your mouth and pulls you up by the shoulders. He grabs you by the ass cheeks and gives you another rough kiss as he says: "That was nice, but now one of your other holes gets a turn..."'
 				dynamic $d_katsub
 			end
 		end

+ 7 - 6
locations/kutuzka

@@ -1,21 +1,22 @@
 # kutuzka
 gs 'stat'
-'You sit in a small cell, where there is no toilet, no shell, is only a wooden plank. All you have to sit <<kutime>> hours.'
+'The prison cell is not very big, and has almost nothing in it. No toilet, no sink, no bed... except for a wooden plank, there is nothing at all.'
+'You have to stay in prison for <<kutime>> more hour(s).'
 
 if kutime > 0:
-	act 'sit':
+	act 'Sit out your punishment (1:00)':
 		cls
 		minut += 60
 		kutime -= 1
 		gs 'stat'
-		'You sit on hard wooden planks.'
+		'You take a seat on the wooden plank, and have nothing else to do but just wait.'
 
-		act 'further':gt $curloc
+		act 'Continue':gt $curloc
 	end
 elseif kutime <= 0:
-	'Finally the time of his release over and you have been released.'
+	'You have finally spent enough time in the prison cell, and captain Katalkin comes to let you out.'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt $curloc
+	act 'Continue':minut += 1 & gt $curloc
 end
 
 --- kutuzka ---------------------------------

+ 70 - 66
locations/vokdin

@@ -2,80 +2,80 @@
 $din_vokzalg_kassi = {
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><h4>Cashier</h4></center>'
+	'<center><h4>Ticket office</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/kassa.jpg"></center>'
-	'A ticket to the city costs 200 rubles.
-	Long-distance trains are in 11:00-11:30 and 18:00-18:30'
+	'A ticket to the city costs 200 rubles, a ticket to Gadyukino costs 50 rubles.'
+	'The long-distance trains are at the station platforms between 11:00-11:30 and 18:00-18:30.'
 
 	if money >= 200:
-		act 'Buy a ticket to the Center (200 rubles)':
+		act 'Buy a ticket to the City (200 rubles)':
 			cls
 			money -= 200
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/electri.jpg"></center>'
-			'You paid for a ticket, and boarded the train going in Pavlovsk.'
-			'15 minutes later the train stopped at the station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+			'You pay for a ticket to the city, and board the local train waiting at the station.'
+			'15 minutes later the train stops at the station near the village of Gadyukino.'
 
-			act 'To go further':
+			act 'Continue towards the city':
 				cls
 				minut += 15
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img src="images/etogame/electri.jpg"></center>'
-				'After 15 minutes the train stopped at the station.'
+				'After 15 minutes the train stops at a small station. It''s abandoned, and there is not much activity outside.'
 
-				act 'To go further':
+				act 'Continue towards the city':
 					cls
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/etogame/electri.jpg"></center>'
-					'After 15 minutes the train stopped at the station.'
+					'After 15 minutes the train stops at another small station. It''s abandoned, and there is not much activity outside.'
 
-					act 'To go further':
+					act 'Continue towards the city':
 						cls
 						minut += 15
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/etogame/electri.jpg"></center>'
-						'After 15 minutes the train reaches it''s last stop, in the City.'
+						'After 15 minutes the train reaches its final stop, in the northern district of the City.'
 
-						act 'Leave':minut += 5 & nroad = 0 & gt 'Vokzal'
+						act 'Leave the train':minut += 5 & nroad = 0 & gt 'Vokzal'
 					end
 
-					act 'Leave':minut += 5 & nroad = 5 & gt 'road'
+					act 'Leave the train':minut += 5 & nroad = 5 & gt 'road'
 				end
 
-				act 'Leave':minut += 5 & nroad = 10 & gt 'road'
+				act 'Leave the train':minut += 5 & nroad = 10 & gt 'road'
 			end
 
-			act 'Leave':minut += 5 & nroad = 15 & gt 'road'
+			act 'Leave the train at Gadyukino':minut += 5 & nroad = 15 & gt 'road'
 		end
 	end
 
 	if money >= 50:
-		act 'Buy a ticket to Gadyukino (50 RUB)':
+		act 'Buy a ticket to Gadyukino (50 rubles)':
 			cls
 			money -= 50
 			minut += 15
 			gs'stat'
 
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/electri.jpg"></center>'
-			'You paid for a ticket, and boarded the train going to Gadyukino.'
-			'After 15 minutes, the train stopped at the station near the village of Gadyukino.'
+			'You pay for a ticket, and board the local train going to Gadyukino.'
+			'After 15 minutes, the train stops at the station near the village of Gadyukino.'
 
-			act 'Logout':minut += 5 & nroad = 15 & gt'road'
+			act 'Leave the train':minut += 5 & nroad = 15 & gt'road'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Get away from banks':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Leave the ticket office':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 }
 
 $din_vokzalg_kabinet = {
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You go to the office of the station manager. Next to the door hangs an ad:'
-	'"Cleaner wanted! 2 hours of work at any time, the salary of 250 rubles a day."'
+	'When you walk past the station manager''s office, you notice a sign next to the door:'
+	'"Cleaner wanted! 2 hours per day at any time, salary 250 rubles. Ask inside for more info."'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Return to the train station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
 	if hour >= 8 and hour <= 16:
 		act 'Enter the office':
@@ -83,19 +83,20 @@ $din_vokzalg_kabinet = {
 			gs 'stat'
 			'You knock on the door and enter the station manager''s office. An elderly man looks up from the papers on his desk and says, "Can I help you?"'
 
-			act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+			act 'Apologize and leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
 			if vokzalVork = 0:
-				act 'Apply for job':
+				act 'Apply for the cleaning job':
 					cls
 					vokzalVork = 1
 					minut += 15
 					gs 'stat'
-					'You tell the station manager that you would like to apply for the job. The station manager is obviously delighted that somebody wants to work for such meager wages.'
-					'He takes your details and explains: You''ll have to wash the station floors and clean the toilets.'
-					'You have to finish your cleaning before the end of the day and you will get 250 rubles. If you have only partially finished, you will not be paid. Then he walks to the door his office and points you where the cleaning supplies are stored.'
+					'You give him a friendly nod: "Hello sir, I would like to apply for the cleaning job."'
+					'He''s delighted, and somewhat surprised that he actually has a candidate at such low wages. "Excellent, come on in! Take a seat."'
+					'He explains what you have to do while he takes your details: "Your job would be to wash the station floor, and clean both the restrooms. You can come work on any day you like, and can skip any day you don''t want to work."'
+					'"You have to clean all three areas before the end of the day, otherwise we have to hire someone else finish it. If you have only cleaned part of the rooms, you do not get paid at all." In conclusion he shows you the maintenance closet where the cleaning supplies are stored and shakes your hand, before returning to his work.'
 
-					act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+					act 'Leave the office':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -115,29 +116,29 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 	end
 
 	if mop = 1 and kosmetica > 0:
-		act 'Apply makeup':
+		act 'Apply make-up':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/mop.jpg"></center>'
 
-			act 'Light makeup (0:03)':
+			act 'Light make-up (0:03)':
 				cla
 				minut += 3
 				kosmetica -= 1
 				mop = 2
-				'You lightly summed eyes and a little lipstick.'
+				'You quickly apply some mascara to highlight your eyes a little, and apply some lipstick.'
 
 				if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 				if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
 			end
 
 			if kosmetica >= 2:
-				act 'Normal makeup (0:05)':
+				act 'Normal make-up (0:05)':
 					cla
 					minut += 5
 					kosmetica -= 2
 					mop = 3
-					'You lipstick, summed up the eyes and eyelids.'
+					'After applying a quick foundation you put on some lipstick, and then apply some eyeshadow and mascara to highlight your eyes more.'
 
 					if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 					if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -145,13 +146,13 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 			end
 
 			if kosmetica >= 3:
-				act 'Challenging makeup (0:10)':
+				act 'Heavy make-up (0:10)':
 					cla
 					minut += 10
 					kosmetica -= 3
 					vidageday -= 1
 					mop = 4
-					'You densely nakrasili eyes, imposed shadows and mascara , nakrasili lip contour pencil and lipstick.'
+					'You put a dense layer of make-up on your skin covering all your blemishes, and take ten minutes to make yourself look as pretty as you can.'
 
 					if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 					if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -180,7 +181,7 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 			sweat -= 1
 			minut += 15
 			'<center><img src="images/pics/wash5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You gave yourself a catlick, thus removing any traces of cum.'
+			'You give yourself a quick wash, removing any trace of cum from your body.'
 
 			if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 			if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -208,7 +209,7 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 			sweat -= 1
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/facesp.jpg"></center>'
-			'You clean your face and got rid of any trace of cum.'
+			'You clean your face and get rid of any trace of cum.'
 
 			if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 			if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -223,7 +224,7 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 			gs 'cum_cleanup'
 			minut += 10
 			'<center><img src="images/etogame/frotsp.jpg"></center>'
-			'You remove traces of cum from your clothes.'
+			'You wipe the cum off your clothes and thoroughly rinse out the stains with water.'
 
 			if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 			if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -269,9 +270,9 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_deyst = {
 			horny = 0
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/Ev/mastr.jpg"></center>'
-			'You closed booth, removed the pants and sat on the toilet.'
-			'Your fingers began to caress expiring pussy juice and you started to rub your clit.'
-			'Soon pleasant wave began to spread throughout the body and you covered a very powerful orgasm.'
+			'You close the door to the toilet stall and quickly remove your clothes as you sit down on the toilet seat.'
+			'Gently caressing your pussy lips, you then thrust in two fingers while you flick your thumb over your clit.'
+			'Soon you hit a powerful orgasm, and you take a second to recover before you straighten your clothes, feeling ready to continue your day.'
 
 			if vokzalToilet = 1:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f
 			if vokzalToilet = 2:act 'Finish':dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m
@@ -285,7 +286,7 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_f = {
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4>The ladies'' room</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/PublicToilet.jpg"></center>'
-	'You opened the door to the ladies'' room and went in.'
+	'You open the door to the ladies'' room and go in.'
 
 	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet
 
@@ -298,11 +299,11 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet_m = {
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><h4>The men''s room</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/etogame/PublicToilet.jpg"></center>'
-	'You opened the door to the men''s room and went in.'
+	'You open the door to the men''s room and go in.'
 
 	if bimbolevel >= 1:
-		act 'Stand and wait adventures':gt 'vokBimbo', 'pos1'
-		act 'Go to the booth':gt 'vokBimbo', 'pos5'
+		act 'Wait and see if someone finds you':gt 'vokBimbo', 'pos1'
+		act 'Quickly enter a stall':gt 'vokBimbo', 'pos5'
 	end
 	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet
 
@@ -314,27 +315,28 @@ $din_vokzalg_toilet = {
 	vokzalToilet = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 
-	'<center><h4>Station</h4></center>'
+	'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are logged into the wing where the station to be <a href="exec:minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f">women''s</a> and <a href="exec:minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m">men''s</a> wc.'
+	'You are at the station''s restrooms, you can find the <a href="exec:minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_f">ladies'' room</a> and <a href="exec:minut += 1 & dynamic $din_vokzalg_toilet_m">men''s room</a> here.'
 
-	act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Return to the station':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 }
 
 $din_vokazalg_podbros2 = {
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You showed your money man and he said that this was the sum and not enough in his wallet. The man demanded that you returned the money.'
+	'You give back the money you took from his wallet, but he acts insulted: "That''s not all of it! I had much more in my wallet, where is it!? I want it back now or we''re going to the police station! This is your last chance!"'
 
-	act 'Money back':
+	act 'Give him your money':
 		cls
 		money = 0
 		podbros = 1
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><h4>Station</h4></center>'
+		'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
-		'You gave the man his money, that would not contrive a scandal and not to be attracted by the police for theft.'
-
+		'You don''t want a scandal. Who knows what could happen if you get arrested for theft? Hoping to placate him with a few bills of your own money, you decide to get your wallet. You pull out your own money, and start to count some of it out. Before you can finish, he pulls the entire pile out of your hands: "There it is! You''re lucky, girl... I''ll leave it at this, for just this once."'
+		'Before you can object, he walks away with all of your money.'
+		
 		act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 	end
 }
@@ -342,30 +344,32 @@ $din_vokazalg_podbros2 = {
 $din_vokzalg_podbros = {
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><h4>Station</h4></center>'
+	'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
-	'You cant raise the purse and then some sort of slim girl leans to the purse. You are catching the first to raise the purse and she offers to step aside and share the money.'
+	'As you reach for the wallet, a foot steps on it just before you can pick it up. You look up, straight into the eyes of a slim girl. She looks around quickly and then softly asks: "Want to share?"'
 
-	act 'Go with a purse':
+	act 'Keep it all for yourself':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><h4>Station</h4></center>'
+		'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
-		'You went to one side with a girl and got a purse that would share the money. You divided the money on a flat and gave half girl, thrusting the remaining money in your pocket. At this point, a man came up to you, lost wallet. He took the wallet out of your hands. He counted the money and said that the purse is not enough large sum of money. Then he asked, what would you show him your money.'
+		'You tell the girl to get lost, and quickly push her away and snag the wallet before she can protest. As you remove the money from it and stuff it in your pocket, you feel a hand firmly grasping your shoulder. It''s the man who the wallet belongs to... that girl must have ratted you out!'
+		'You sigh and give him the empty wallet back, hoping he won''t check. Unfortunately for you, he checks. He bellows: "Young lady, you have 5 seconds to give me my money back or we''re going to the police station!"'
 
-		act 'Show money':dynamic $din_vokazalg_podbros2
+		act 'Give him back the money you stole':dynamic $din_vokazalg_podbros2
 	end
 
-	act 'Giving purse and go':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+	act 'Let her have the wallet and leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 
-	act 'Step aside and share the money':
+	act 'Share the money':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><h4>Station</h4></center>'
+		'<center><h4>Pavlovsk train station interior</h4></center>'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/alter/vokzal.jpg"></center>'
-		'You walked away, together with the girl and got the purse, that would divide the money. You divided the money on a flat and give half to the girl, having put the remaining money in your pocket. At this point, lost wallet. He took the wallet out of your hands. He counted the money and said, that in your wallet is not enough large sum of money. Then he demanded, what would you show him your money.'
+		'You pick up the wallet and drag the girl off to the side. Making sure you are not being watched, you quickly split the money in two even piles and give her half. She quickly walks away while you put your share in your pocket. Suddenly, you feel a hand firmly grasping your shoulder. It''s the man who the wallet belongs to...'
+		'You sigh and give him the empty wallet back, hoping he won''t check. Unfortunately for you, he checks. He bellows: "Young lady, you have 5 seconds to give me my money back or we''re going to the police station!"'
 
-		act 'Show money':dynamic $din_vokazalg_podbros2
+		act 'Give him back the money you stole':dynamic $din_vokazalg_podbros2
 	end
 }
 

+ 118 - 76
locations/vokdinvera

@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 	verarand = rand(0, 1)
 
 	if verakassir = 3 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and verarand = 0:
-		'Near the window woman smokes in which you will learn cashier Faith.'
+		'Vera is enjoying a cigarette during a slow moment at the ticket office. She beckons you to come over and have a chat.'
 
-		act 'Chat with the cashier':
+		act 'Chat with Vera':
 			cls
 			!verakassir = 3
 			minut += 5
@@ -14,32 +14,35 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 
 			if verafrend > 0:
 				verafrend += 1
-				'You have come to faith and greeted her. Gradually.'
+				'You walk up to Vera and greet her. You talk for a few minutes about your day.'
 				veratalkrand = rand(0, 3)
 
 				if veratalkrand = 0:
-					'Suddenly your conversation smoothly flowing in no great controversy.'
+					'Suddenly she asks you: "Do you think I''m still attractive? Anatoly doesn''t seem interested in me any more. I bet it''s all those sluts in his classes, in those short school uniforms! Stupid tramps, stealing my husband from me..."'
 
-					act 'To prove his innocence':
+					act 'Come to Anatoly''s defense':
 						cls
 						dom += 1
 						minut += 5
 						verafrend -= 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-						'You rushed to prove his innocence and Faith in a few minutes Vera waved, "Oh. How do you say."'
+						'You quickly rush to Anatoly''s defense, saying you have several classes with him and that he''s not like that at all.'
+						'Vera looks at you suspiciously: "Really? That''s exactly what those school sluts would say, defending him like that..."'
+						'She shakes her head and waves you away so she can get back to work, giving you a mistrusting look as you leave.'
 
 						act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 					end
 
-					act 'Agree with Vera':
+					act 'Suck up to Vera':
 						cls
 						sub += 1
 						minut += 5
 						verafrend += 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-						'You have decided not to argue with faith and agree with it.'
+						'You can see she needs some encouragement, and decide to placate her: "You''re still very attractive, Vera! Anatoly doesn''t know what he''s missing!"'
+						'She gives you an appreciative nod. After another minute of trash-talking the girls in school just like you, she realizes she has to get back to work. She waves you goodbye as you gather your things and get ready to leave. You''re not quite sure whether she was just insulting you or not.'
 
 						act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 					end
@@ -50,10 +53,10 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 				if verafrend >= 40:
 					if veratalkrand = 1:
 						horny += 10
-						'Faith today that it sold out and began to tell about their guys, that were with her husband to.'
+						'Vera smiles, saying she sold a lot of train tickets today. Then she begins to talk about the guys she has been with, before she met her husband.'
 
 						if verafrend >= 50:
-							act 'Interesovatsya details':
+							act 'Ask for details':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								horny += 10
@@ -71,241 +74,274 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 								
 								if veraboyrand > 8:
 								 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-									'Faith shrugged, Yes, more and there is nothing to tell. I live with my husband, and I feel like virginity slowly coming back to me.'
-									act 'Escape':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
+									'Vera lets out a wistful sigh, and shrugs: "I don''t know... there''s not much to tell. I live with Anatoly now, and I slowly feel my virginity coming back to me. We never do anything together any more."'
+									act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
 								elseif veraboyrand <0:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-									'Faith shrugged, nikchemu stir up the past.'
-									act 'Escape':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
+									'Vera lets out a wistful sigh and shrugs: "I don''t know <<$name>>, I don''t feel like talking more about the past right now."'
+									act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
 								end
 
 								if veraboyrand = 0:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk0.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "The first time I was with an adult man, when I was 14 year_old. I''m born in the village, she know, on one side of the village pernesh, to hear the other, so I did not meet with the local guys. So one day in the village came one adult man, an expensive car, himself all of this yourself, in white pants. We met, he invited me to his, drink martinis. I''m a fool ears hung and went to him. He really made ​​me drunken martini. Not that I would have drunk, In those days I could calmly drink grams 300 moonshine, but then softened. In general, after which it is separated Me, began to lick his chest. It was just a fucking nice. And then suddenly bam! He sticks in my own process. It hurt, certainly bearable, but for girls who did not even really knew nothing about sex it was just a shock. I lie under what is a man, with her legs spread, he sweats and romping on me, between the legs dull, throbbing pain. Then he pulls out his hell out of me and cums on my stomach. And here I lay naked, smeared in his smelly mucus, from the blood of tortured pussy, and he says to me that I log. Well. I is the beam and failed to meet his majesty. This stupid kid did not even realize, that he had just robbed me of my innocence. In_short, I sent him to the dick and more with him not met. Well at least no one would know about it in the village of my adventure. It was terrible just to horror, was feeling after deprivation of virginity, that everything is up to date. I was hiding from people a month and did not go for a walk, I was so ashamed."'
+									'Vera nods and begins: "My first time was with an adult man, when I was only 14 years old. I grew up in Gadyukino, where basically everyone knows one another and shares everything, so I never dated the local guys. Then one guy, a handsome older man came to the village, in his expensive car. He invited me over to his place, to have some martinis.'
+									'I felt really attracted to him, so I let him take me to his place. He kept offering me more martinis until I was really drunk. He took off his shirt and I became a bit giddy, licking his chest. It was really nice. And then suddenly, bam! He threw me on my back, ripped my clothes away and stuck his cock inside me. It hurt... it wasn''t unbearable, but I had never had sex before so I was shocked!'
+									'I was just laying there with my legs spread, under his sweaty body, while he was pounding me. Then he pulls out and shoots his sperm all over my stomach. So there I was, on my back... all covered in semen, my pussy all bloody, and what do you think he said!? He said I was like a log... he complained how he had to do all the work! That jerk didn''t even realize he robbed me of my innocence!'
+									'I got angry and left immediately, and never saw him again after that. At least no one in the village found out... I was so ashamed! For a month, I hid from everyone and didn''t even go for a walk, I couldn''t look anyone in the eye after losing my virginity like that."'
 
 									act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 								elseif veraboyrand = 1:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk1.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After his first experience and I look at the guys did not want to. but 17 years. I even managed to go to college. There I met with Oleg undergraduate, all such inflated guy, just like Schwarzenegger. athlete, Master of Sports in cycling. Here I can not imagine how he was able to afford a bicycle frame pump. He invited me in a cafe, we were there having fun and drinking. Oleg suggested to go to him. Well, that he should, but as it is not believed, before that can be reached. In general, we went to him. There''s still drank champagne, started kissing. He stroked my chest and it was very nice. I myself did not understand what I was doing put her hand on his pants, stroking his cock, Then he took his first time in my life took in his mouth. I sat on his haunches, sucked his cock and caressed herself between her legs. And you know what? I was first in my life felt so good, I began to not care at all. The guy was good, I was also good, what else does it?"'
+									'Vera gets ready to continue her story: "After that first experience, I was done with guys. Until one day at college... I met Oleg there, while I was working towards my undergraduate degree. He was a very bulky and muscular guy, and great at cycling. I bet he could bend a bicycle, if he wanted to... he was that strong. To my surprise he invited me for a drink one day. We went to a local cafe, and had a great time. He was such a nice guy!'
+									'After a few drinks, he suggested going back to his place. We had such a nice time, I agreed. At his place we had some champagne, and soon after we were kissing on the sofa. He kept touching my boobs through my shirt... it made me feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside.'
+									'Before I even knew what got into me, I put my hands on his groin and was groping his cock through his pants. Then I pulled his pants down and took his dick in my mouth, for the first time in my life. I sat there, on my haunches, sucking his cock while I was caressing myself between my legs. It just felt... right, you know? He was feeling good, I was feeling good, that was all that mattered."'
 
-									act 'And what happened next?':
+									act '"What happened next?"':
 										cls
 										minut += 5
 										horny += 10
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk11.jpg"></center>'
-										'Vera continued "Oleg turned me and I leaned, He pulled off my skirt and panties and entered me. Unlike my first time it was fucking, I squealed with delight fingering ass on his cock. And here I was covered! It was such an orgasm, which I have never in my life have been, I almost fainted. When the ability to think back to me, Oleg had finished and my ass was covered with his sperm. I went on padded feet to wash. He carried me to the hostel and all. More we had not met. I tried to stick to it, but he just waved me. Other devchenok I learned, that he began to consider me whore. Allegedly went ebatsya Man, which for the first time in my life met, suck it, and then cums on his cock."'
+										'With a dreamy look in her eyes, Vera continues: "Then suddenly, Oleg turned me around and made me lean over. He took off my skirt, pulled my panties to the side and entered me. Unlike my first time, it felt so good! I squealed with delight while he fingered my ass as he was fucking me. I had an orgasm that was so strong, I almost fainted... good thing he kept me standing, my legs felt like pudding! When I finally recovered, Oleg had already came and my ass was covered with his sperm. I quickly washed up, and he took me back to the hostel like a gentleman."'
+										'Vera looks sad when she finishes the story: "However, after that he didn''t want to see me any more. I tried to ask him out again, but he always just waved me off saying he was busy. Later I learned from his friends that he thought I was a whore. I guess I can''t blame him... I sucked his cock on the first day we met, and came uncontrollably hard when he fucked me..."'
 
-										act 'You''re really the one to blame':
+										act 'Tell her she is indeed the one to blame':
 											cls
 											dom += 1
 											minut += 5
 											verafrend -= 1
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-											'You said that the Faith itself to blame, Faith on that a little testily replied "Though I do not know. She jumped on a guy dick, That ogrebla."'
+											'You can''t argue with that, and nod: "I guess that is kind of a slutty thing to do... I can see where he''s coming from."'
+											'Vera shakes her head in disappointment, still stuck in her own thoughts: "Though I don''t know... didn''t he do the exact same thing, taking me home and fucking me on the very first day we met? Why is it always the girl''s fault?"'
 
 											act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 										end
 
-										act 'Yes':
+										act 'Tell her he was wrong to ignore her':
 											cls
 											sub += 1
 											minut += 5
 											verafrend += 1
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-											'You cheered Faith saying that this kid just Oleg. She sighed sadly "Well yes, goatskins still the."'
+											'You notice Vera is sad and try to cheer her up: "He shouldn''t have treated you like that! He was just as happy to take you home the first day you met!"'
+											'She gives you a weak smile as she sighs: "I know, right? Why is the girl always at fault, when the guys do the same thing? It''s not fair..."'
 
 											act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 										end
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 2:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk2.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After I met Oleg Lehoy. Cool guy Laban guitar. Also lived in the dorm. We were not just met, walked together. He is not particularly insisted on having sex and not much molested me. Over time. Vyzhrat two boxes screwdriver. And it was all over the bed. No , and he did not even fucked me, He fought me like a cat. I just whined nails clutching the sheet. It was a strange sensation, pain and pleasure , that I simply enjoyed as a piece of meat, spit on me, but I like it. This bastard finished right at me and began to snore on my back. I barely managed to vybratsya from under his carcass. I got dressed and left a grudge against him."'
+									'Vera grimaces as she tells her next story: "After Oleg I met Leszek... he was a cool guy, playing guitar in a band. He lived in the same dorm as me. We often walked together, but he never seemed interested in me. Until we came home from a concert, late one night. He didn''t even ask, without warning he threw me down on his bed and forced my clothes off, while keeping me down on my stomach. He went straight for my ass... he was quite rough about it, too. I knew he was too strong for me to fight off, so I just lay there, clutching the sheets while he was fucking my ass mercilessly. It was a strange experience... mixing pain and pleasure. In a way it felt kind of nice to just have him treat me like a piece of meat, skewering me like that. Then the bastard finished inside me, and fell asleep... right on my back! After a while I managed to struggle my way out from underneath him, and quickly put my clothes on and left. I hated him after that."'
 
-									act 'You might like this?':
+									act '"I thought you liked it?"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "You might like this?", Faith on that a little testily replied "Well yes. I know that was his only hole, but I do not know why I have a factory."'
+										'You indignantly say: "You hated him... why? I thought you liked being treated like a piece of meat?"'
+										'Vera shakes her head wearily: "Maybe, but that doesn''t give him the right to just fuck my ass like that, with no concern for my feelings!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'Yes':
+									act '"Understandable"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying that this kid just Lech. She sighed sadly "Well yes, goatskins still the. Took advantage of a defenseless girl."'
+										'You nod understandingly, saying he had no right to treat Vera like that.'
+										'Vera sighs sadly: "You know, secretly I actually kind of liked him. But it was really wrong of him to take advantage of a defenseless girl like that. And besides... who knows how many other girls he treated like that before me?"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 3:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk3.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "I have long ignored Lech, although he molested me and here met another guy in the club. uh, I do not remember his name, I met him for the first time in my life and the last. I got drunk trying to forget Lech, but he did not go out of my head. And then turned up pretty guy. He molested me and paw . He suggested that I go with him to the toilet. I''ve wanted to call him in the face, and then I thought, a proper feature? Why not? So I went with him to the toilet and sucked him, while caressing her pussy. When he began to cum in my mouth, I covered the orgasm itself. It was nice, he had gone out of the booth, I was still sitting on the floor with his face smeared semen and depart from orgasm. Then of course was ashamed of his behavior, but what really. What do you think, I entered as a slut?"'
+									'Vera tells another story: "For a while, I ignored Leszek after he sodomized me that one night. One night soon after, I went to a night club and met another guy... I don''t remember his name. I was trying to get drunk, to forget about Leszek... but I couldn''t get him out of my mind. Until this guy came along."'
+									'Vera smiles as she continues:" He had a cute face, and he started groping and kissing me on the dance floor. Then he suggested I come with him to the restrooms and I thought... why not? So I went into a toilet stall, and sucked him off while I was fondling my pussy. When he began to cum in my mouth I orgasmed as well, it felt really good. When I opened my eyes again he had already left the stall, though. I was sitting there by myself, with his cum slowly dribbling out of my half-open mouth. Several more globs landed on my face as well, I looked like a mess! I was very ashamed when I realized what I had done."'
+									'She then gives you a serious look as she asks: "What do you think... does that make me a slut?"'
 
-									act 'Of_Course! You also vaflersha!':
+									act '"Of course!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "Of_Course! You''re not just a slut and you still vaflersha!", Faith on that a little testily replied "Well! I even finish from this, if more and caresses herself. What is wrong?"'
+										'You snark: "Of course it does! Giving some random guy you had never met until 10 minutes ago a blowjob in the toilet stalls, and letting him cum all over your face... if that''s not slutty, I don''t know what is!"'
+										'Faith tries to defend herself, unhappy you''re calling her out: "Hey come on, it''s not like I was doing it just for him! I had an orgasm as well, and I really needed that... is that so wrong?"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'Come on, you''re just having fun':
+									act '"No way, you were just having fun!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith said that she just had fun. She smiled at you "Well. Well, I even finish from this, if caresses herself. Nothing is wrong with that."'
+										'You give her a knowing smile as you shake your head: "No way! You were both consenting adults, and you both had an orgasm..."'
+										'She smiles when she notices you''re not judging her: "Exactly! We were just having some fun, not doing anyone any harm... there''s nothing wrong with that!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 4:
 									'<center><img src="images/zsoft/pod_ezd/shulgahome/bigroom/gopsex/sex/anal/dog2.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After the incident at the club . But he is such a person, until the case came to sex it is quite good-natured and funny guy, but when it comes to bed, it becomes a real pet. One day when we were fucked, and we had started doing it almost every day, he began to massage my ass. I tried to sopritivlyatsya, but he put on my resistance with the device. In general Lehoy and I lost my anal virginity. At first it hurt. But Lech pecked me in the ass every day and already I''m used to. By, is no risk to fly and I was able to relax during sex. I even began to cum during anal fondling herself between her legs."'
+									'Vera continues her sex stories: "After the incident in the club, I didn''t talk to Leszek for a while. I couldn''t stay mad at him forever, though. He''s a really good-natured and funny guy, and when it came to sex he''s an animal. He was insatiable, and soon enough we were having sex almost every day. I could tell he had a thing for my ass, he was often rubbing his fingers against my asshole, sometimes even fingering it while he was fucking me."'
+									'"One day I couldn''t stop him any longer, and he pinned me down on the bed before shoving his dick up my butt. It hurt at first, but soon enough that''s all he wanted: he''d fuck my ass every day, and I got used to it really fast. I couldn''t get pregnant that way, that helped me relax a lot. It was also a good way to keep having sex while I was on my period. Soon enough I was even having orgasms while he was fucking my ass, while I touched myself. They''re the best orgasms a girl can have, so intense!"'
 
-									act 'anal? phew! It''s disgusting!':
+									act '"Anal sex? Eww, that''s disgusting!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "anal? phew! It''s disgusting!", Faith on that a little testily replied "Come, I also found a prude."'
+										'You can''t hide your disgust, and exclaim: "Anal sex? Urgh! That''s disgusting!"'
+										'Vera just gives you a disappointed look as she grins: "Oh dear... <<$name>>, you''re such a prude!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'cool!':
+									act '"Wow, that sounds hot!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying that it ''s even fun. She smiled at you "Well. Ass stretched and took a member already without tension. I even get an orgasm, what else does it?"'
+										'You give Vera a knowing grin: "Wow, anal every day... that sounds so hot!"'
+										'She smiles at you: "After some practise, it was really easy to relax my ass enough to take his dick in without any pain. And the orgasms... wow, they were heavenly!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 5:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk5.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "Once again we Lehoy booze in his room, but this time invited Lech neighbor. I have already got used to the time to have sex and sat grim, understanding that sex today bummer, Lech suddenly invited me to suck him right in front of his friend. she know, I have my eyes on five kopecks became his offer, Lech but was not joking, He even pulled out his penis. I sighed and tried not to look at his friend began to suck him. His friend watched a bit of this and invited him to join Lech. I shoved the second term under the nose, I began to suck already have two. Strange feeling to handle two members. Then Lech put me cancer and began to fuck while I sucked his friend. After that we ''ve met mostly in Troy and I perprobyvala them all. And double penetration, and the two fuck me in the ass, and ended on my face. Leszek I said then still, Do not fight nature, understand, you whore, There is nothing wrong. This lasted until 4of course. Lech was on course older and graduated. He went to English, without saying goodbye and I never saw him again."'
+									'Vera tells another story: "So, one time I was having some drinks with Leszek in his room... except he also invited his neighbor. I was alreay anticipating to have sex with Leszek like I did every day, so I was disappointed that he invited his friend over. Then, after about half an hour, he asked me to suck his dick. Right in front of his friend! I thought he was joking, but his face was very serious... he even pulled his dick out of his pants, with his friend right there in the room."'
+									'Vera gets a slight blush on her face as she continues: "I... did what I always did for Leszek, I dropped to my knees and took it in my mouth like he wanted me to. I pretended his friend wasn''t there with us, and just focused on making Leszek feel good. His friend watched for a moment, and then asked if he could join. Leszek told him it was okay, and without even asking me his friend pulled his pants down and pushes his dick against my lips, telling me to suck him too."'
+									'"I did. It felt strange having two dicks in my mouth at once, but Leszek liked it and kept encouraging me, telling me what a great little slut I was for him. Then we did all sorts of positions... first Leszek put me on my hands and knees and fucked my ass like he always did, while I was sucking his friend... then they double penetrated me, and after that they both put their dicks in my ass at once! When they both ended on my face, Leszek told me to leave it there for a minute. He told me what a huge whore I was, and that I shouldn''t fight my true nature and just embrace it."'
+									'"They continued fucking me throughout that whole night, it was 4AM by the time they were spent. Leszek liked it so much, that he kept inviting his friend over from then on. The following years Leszek would invite him more and more often, and they''d both fuck me any way they pleased. Towards the end, they were spitroasting and double penetrating me every day."'
+									'Vera almost tears up when she says: "Then that bastard graduated! Leszek was one year ahead of me. He went to the United Kingdom, without even saying goodbye when he left the country! I haven''t seen him since. I felt so alone... Leszek was the love of my life, I couldn''t believe he would just abandon me like that."'
 
-									act 'oh my God! You really damn!':
+									act '"Two guys at once? You slut!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "oh my God! You really damn!", Faith on that a little testily replied "Well , with him was a pleasure, and his friend for me was a kind of appendage to Leshke and nothing more."'
+										'You shake your head in disbelief when you say: "Two at once!? I know you liked Leszek, but wow! That''s so slutty! And for so long, too! He must''ve just thought of you as a piece of meat, that whole time."'
+										'Vera doesn''t like your tone, and tries to defend herself: "Hey, Leszek was my boyfriend, and I know he loved me too! I really loved him... I just pretended his friend wasn''t really there, I only did it to make Leszek happy!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'cool!':
+									act '"Two guys at once? Good for you!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying that it ''s even fun. She smiled at you "Well. Two guys at the same time it is certainly a little napryazhno, but still it can not be compared with one."'
+										'You grin at Vera: "Two guys at once, whenever you wanted! Wow, that sounds like it could be fun! You''re so lucky, Vera!"'
+										'She nods at you, fondly remembering that time even though she won''t admit it: "Oh yes... two guys at once is definitely an interesting experience, but if you ask me it''s still better to be able to devote all your attention to one person."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 6:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk6.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After Leszek left me, I was not myself, I cried into my pillow at night and was ready for him to flee to the edge of the world. I myself is not understood, how do I love him really. But running was not much, I have no idea where it went. I decided to find a new guy, and found. Also named Lesco, but he was a firefighter, serious guy with great prospects. I''m cool with it screwed up. All went well, until one day I myself with a fool not invited him to anal sex and licked his cock then. Then he opened his eyes , before that I was for him a young girl, but it was, I have experience already above the roof. We parted after that not even quarreled, but I saw in his eyes."'
+									'Vera continues her story: "After Leszek left, I didn''t know what to do. I cried myself to sleep at night, and I was considering going to the UK, hoping to find him again. I''m not even sure why, but I loved him so much. Nevertheless... after a while I realized I had to move on. I decided to find a new guy, and I did. His name was Lesko, he was a firefighter... a good guy, with a nice future ahead of him. We dated for a while, but he was taking things really slow. When we finally had sex I begged him to fuck my ass already!"'
+									'"I was so used to that, it''s all Leszek ever did! With some reluctance, he did... and after he came, I enthusiastically licked his dick clean and sucked him off a little. Somehow, that scared him. He was expecting a cute young wallflower, not someone with the sexual experience that I had. It intimidated him a lot, and he wondered what the hell I had done to be that experienced already, at that point in my life. We had a talk about it, but I could already tell he did not see a future with me in it. Without ever even getting into a fight about it, that was it really. He left, and I never saw him again."'
 
-									act 'oh my God! You really damn!':
+									act '"You''re such a whore, Vera!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "oh my God! You really damn!", Faith on that a little testily replied "Well, besides fucked in all the, I just had grown accustomed to everything, and my new guy was not ready."'
+										'You listen to her story covering your mouth with your hand, and when she finishes you exclaim: "No way, that poor guy! He must''ve thought you were a huge whore, I can''t believe you did that on your first time!"'
+										'Vera just shrugs, unhappy you''re taking his side: "Hey, you don''t know what it''s like! When your former boyfriend fucked you together with his friend almost daily for years on end, you can''t just go back to boring vanilla sex! Lesko just wasn''t ready for me, I bet he regrets it now..."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'He still does not fit you':
+									act '"He just wasn''t right for you!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying what he had still not approached. She smiled at you "Well. I fucked three years with two guys at once, besides fucked in all the, I just had grown accustomed to everything, and my new guy was not ready."'
+										'You encourage her: "He doesn''t know what he''s missing, Vera! I can understand he''d be a bit surprised at first, but after a while a lot of men would love to have a girl who''s a bit more experienced and open to trying other things!"'
+										'Vera smiles at you as she nods: "It was a big step back, from getting fucked daily by two guys for several years in all my holes! I was just used to getting satisfied like that. I wonder if he regrets walking out on me now... I bet I would''ve satisfied him in more ways than any other girl ever could!"'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 7:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk7.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After I screwed up big for a firefighter, I decided not to repeat their mistakes and become acquainted with the new guy Sasha, I have carefully from itself writhes naive girl, for which something other than missionary position is a perversion. And you know? it rolled. My new boyfriend Sasha was so proud of myself when I first agreed to breaking blowjob. I honestly was funny from it all. I could swallow his segment with eggs, and comes from a girl to pose themselves and pretended to play the virgin smuschatsya. So I finished college and Sasha asked me to marry him. And you know? I refused. I tired it less bitter radish, tired of all this silly game, but to open the map and show him all what I can do and I was ashamed to just throw it."'
+									'Vera tells another chapter of her story: "After I screwed up my relationship with the firefighter, I decided to not make that mistake again. I took it slow with my new boyfriend, Sasha. I behaved like an innocent girl, who would only have sex in the missionary position. And you know what... it worked! Sasha was so pround when he finally ''convinced'' me to give him a blowjob!"'
+									'"I honestly felt like I was acting, pretending to be a naive girl who he had to convince to swallow his semen. When I finished college, Sasha asked me to marry him... and you know what? I refused. I got so tired of pretending to be a good girl. I just wanted to get fucked! I knew he wouldn''t be able to offer me that, so I broke it off."'
 
-									act 'Well! good guy':
+									act '"Wow... just when you finally met a good guy!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "Well! good guy", Faith on that a little testily replied "Well. In the bed was just a quiet horror, just lick his cock and fucking, flowed Molof Language. Thirty seconds to pull on me and all, finished. And all the licks and licks between my legs, just another hole not prolizal. I am a member inside pochuvstvovalt want, instead of licking."'
+										'You shake your head in disbelief, and say: "Wow... it sounds like you finally met a good guy. I can''t believe you let him go!"'
+										'She haughtily replied: "Hardly. In bed he never lasted long, he''d get on top of me and finish within 30 seconds! The few times I got him to lick me, he never even got close to my asshole... he pretended it wasn''t even there! There were so many times I just wanted to beg him to fuck my ass hard and make me cum! You''ll see what I mean, <<$name>>. If your man doesn''t want to try things, you''ll remember this conversation, and you''ll realize that I''m right. Life is too short to spend with a man who doesn''t satisfy you."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'He still does not fit you':
+									act '"He wasn''t right for you either!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying what he had still not approached. She smiled at you "Well. I fucked three years with two guys at once, besides fucked in all the, I just had grown accustomed to everything, and my new guy was not ready."'
+										'You nod understandingly and say: "That sounds awful! He sounds so boring... there are so many things you can do with your body, if you''re open to the idea of trying new things!"'
+										'She grins: "Exactly! With the experience I had, getting fucked by two guys at once almost daily, there''s no way I could see myself spend the rest of my days like that! And I knew he wouldn''t change... so I had to let him go."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 								elseif veraboyrand = 8:
 									'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/bvtalk8.jpg"></center>'
-									'faith tells "After I graduated from college and broke up with Sasha, I stood in front of the selection or return to their village and there is a cow tails twist to the death or how it must be in obustraivatsya. With the guys I fatally unlucky, turned away from me luck and then I made ​​a very stupid its great. I decided to be engaged in sex for money. Yeah yeah. I became a prostitute. I thought a little bit pripodymus, earn some money and then throw. Yup, right_now. I got in a good idiot trap, I took the passport and lived in a brothel where I even could not get out of cigarettes. And is served by several people a day, sometimes carried on Saturdays, where bandyuki allowed me around and had fun poking me a bottle in the ass and cunt. I would have died somewhere or they would have killed me bandyuki played enough with me. But I was lucky, ottarabanil year whore, our brothel covered cops. I sat a little in the detention center, but the court only gave me a fine and released. The accumulation of money . I went to the provincial town and bought a room here. Then he found a guy and married it to yourself."'
+									'Vera tells you the last part of her sexual history. You can tell she''s not proud of it, but nevertheless she begins: "After I graduated from college and broke up with Sasha, I had to make a choice: return to the village and tend to some boring cows until I die, or somehow make it in the city. I decided to do the one thing I was good at: have sex. For money. Yeah, you heard me right... I became a prostitute."'
+									'"I figured I would only do it for a little while, earn some money to find my own place and get a good job, and stop there. That''s not what happened though. I ended up in an illegal brothel, the owner had taken my passport and wouldn''t even let me out to buy cigarettes. Several people would come to fuck me every day. The Saturdays were the worst... he''d rent me out to a group of criminals regularly, who would fuck me all night and stick beer bottles in my pussy and anus by the end of the night, when they no longer wanted me. It was hell, <<$name>>!"'
+									'"I don''t know what would''ve happened to me if the police didn''t raid the brothel that one night, about a year after I got there. I might''ve ended up dead in a ditch somewhere. I spent a few weeks in prison, but after that the court only gave me a fine and released me. With the money I had saved up, I was able to return to Gadyukino and buy a home. Then I met Anatoly, and settled down with him. It''s not the life I had in mind for myself, but you know... it wasn''t so bad, after all I''d been through."'
 
-									act 'prostitution? It''s fucked up! How can you?':
+									act '"Prostitution!? That''s fucked up!"':
 										cls
 										dom += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend -= 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You said indignantly "prostitution? It''s fucked up! How can you?", Faith on that a little testily replied "I was just lazy fool, who thought, that his by a pussy can conquer the whole world, my life has put in place, and I''m glad, that all ended well, could be worse."'
+										'You look at Vera in disbelief, never having expected this end to her story: "Prostitution!? That''s terrible Vera, how could you!?"'
+										'She hangs her head in shame for a moment, but then rebounds: "I was just a young naive girl <<$name>>, who thought her pussy could conquer the world. It was foolish of me, but I''ve paid my dues and ended up just fine. Things could''ve been a lot worse."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
 
-									act 'Well':
+									act '"At least you ended up doing okay!"':
 										cls
 										sub += 1
 										minut += 5
 										verafrend += 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-										'You cheered Faith saying that all this is in the past. She smiled at you "Well. Yes, but I''m tied to this and will not come back."'
+										'You put your hand on her shoulder and try to cheer her up: "Hey, everyone makes mistakes! At least you ended up okay!"'
+										'Vera gives you a bittersweet smile: "Yea... I guess I did. Anatoly doesn''t satisfy me in the slightest, but life with him is still better than some of the other things I''ve seen. I guess I should be grateful for that."'
 
 										act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 									end
@@ -314,32 +350,32 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 						end
 					elseif veratalkrand = 2:
 						horny += 10
-						'Faith today that it sold out and began to tell about the lesbian experience in a hostel uni.'
+						'To your surprise, Vera told you that she also had a lesbian experience in the university hostel.'
 
 						if verafrend >= 50:
-							act 'Interesovatsya details':
+							act '"Wow, really? Tell me more!"':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								horny += 10
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/lvtalk.jpg"></center>'
-								'Vera began to tell "We have a girlfriend like that much and census began kissing, I had not realized, her head was between my legs. It was cool! I was just remember to orgasm, but when it is wet lye was I myself under the nose I felt disgusted. No . But honestly, I did not like. Women in general I do not like, they are soft, as semolina in the package. Tits fucked it all, I just turn up on the udder, and the ass, that men, sturdy little ass and that these loose sticks? No, a woman with a man in bed does not compare."'
+								'Vera smirks, noticing your sudden interest. She tells you the story without much enthusiasm: "There was a girl in college, we got along just fine. Then one night when we got a bit drunk, she started to kiss me! Before I knew it, her head was between my legs... she sure knew what she was doing. It felt nice, but I couldn''t quite reach an orgasm... the thought of having a girl between my legs was just too weird. We tried a few more times, playing with each other''s boobs and pussy, I licked her asshole too. It just wasn''t for me. Nothing beats a hard cock to ride and stretch all your holes out with <<$name>>, trust me."'
 
 								act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 							end
 						end
 					elseif veratalkrand = 3:
 						horny += 10
-						'Faith today that it sold out and began to tell of her husband, before he was ogogo, but now almost impotent'
+						'Today, Vera tells you about her sexual adventures with Anatoly.'
 
 						if verafrend >= 50:
-							act 'Interesovatsya details':
+							act 'Ask for details':
 								cls
 								minut += 5
 								horny += 10
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-								'Faith tells you "Well Muzhichi, that they take. When we were first married, he could every day, almost all night fuck, and now I''m probably so it become boring, he practically avoids sex."'
+								'You''re not sure whether you want her to tell you about your teacher''s sex life, but ask anyway. Vera doesn''t give it a second thought, and says: "I guess it''s the classic story. During the honeymoon phase, everything is great. He was always ready to go, and open to try new things. We fucked a lot, those first months. Every day, all night long, in my ass while I was on my period... we just never stopped. But now, he barely even notices me any more. I wonder if he''s fucking any of those sluts in his classes... it''s not fair <<$name>>, how do I compete with those girls?"'
 
 								act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 							end
@@ -349,21 +385,21 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 
 				act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 			elseif verafrend <= 0:
-				'You have come to faith and greeted her. But Vera turned away from you muttered to you "Leave me alone".'
+				'You approach Vera, happy to have another chat to break the monotony of the day. She''ll have none of it though, and waves you away: "Leave me alone <<$name>>, I don''t want to talk to you."'
 
-				act 'Apologize to Faith':
+				act 'Apologize to Vera':
 					cls
 					sub += 1
 					minut += 5
 					verafrend += 1
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-					'You started to apologize to Vera.'
+					'You apologize to Vera, admitting that maybe she was right after all and that you were too quick to judge.'
 
 					if verafrend <= 0:
-						'Faith did not respond to your apology and turned away.'
+						'However, Vera is not interested in your apology and tells you to get lost. Maybe she''ll be in a better mood tomorrow.'
 					elseif verafrend > 0:
-						'faith sighed "Well, perhaps forgive you."'
+						'Vera nods: "Thanks <<$name>>, I appreciate the apology. I guess I should forgive you."'
 					end
 
 					act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
@@ -373,35 +409,35 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 			end
 		end
 	elseif verakassir = 2 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and verarand = 0:
-		'Near the window woman smokes in which you will learn cashier Faith.'
+		'Vera is enjoying a cigarette during a slow moment at the ticket office. You could go and have a chat.'
 
-		act 'Chat with the cashier':
+		act 'Chat with Vera':
 			cls
 			verakassir = 3
 			minut += 5
 			verafrend += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have come to the Faith and its poprevetstvovali. Gradually, that sex with her ​​husband does not satisfy.'
+			'You put your cleaning supplies aside and go have a chat with Vera while no one is looking to buy a ticket anyway. After a while, the topic ends up being her sex life. Vera complains how her husband doesn''t satisfy her in bed.'
 
 			act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 		end
 	elseif verakassir = 1 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and verarand = 0:
-		'Near the window woman smokes in which you will learn cashier Faith.'
+		'The cashier in the ticket office is having a cigarette break, you could go have a chat. You know her name is Vera.'
 
-		act 'Chat with the cashier':
+		act 'Chat with Vera':
 			cls
 			verakassir = 2
 			minut += 5
 			verafrend += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have come to the Faith and its poprevetstvovali. Gradually, Vera is married and has a child.'
+			'You go and chat for a few minutes with Vera while she smokes her cigarette, exchanging stories of how your days have been. During your talk, you learn that Vera is married and has a child. It turns out she''s the mother of Valeria Tsarev, the girl in your class you know as Lera. That means her husband must be Anatoly E. Tsarev, one of the teachers at school.'
 
 			act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 		end
 	elseif verakassir = 0 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20:
-		'Near the window woman smokes in which you will learn the cashier.'
+		'While you''re on your way to clean the ladies'' room, you see the cashier in the ticket office look at you. She gives you a friendly nod while she smokes a cigarette, and you decide you could go for a quick break and have a chat if you feel like it.'
 
 		act 'Chat with the cashier':
 			cls
@@ -410,7 +446,13 @@ $d_vokzal_vera_talk = {
 			verafrend += 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/verasmoke.jpg"></center>'
-			'You have come to the cashier and not knowing how to start a conversation asked her how long. Gradually. She wondered why you began to work as a cleaner, what you have complained about the lack of money, Faith was surprised and told, that the station in 11 and 18 hours of long-distance trains arrive and quirky people vtyuhivat passengers all garbage, which is bought at the warehouse terminal in the regional center.'
+			'You approach the cashier and, not sure how to start the conversation, you ask her how long she''s been working at the Pavlovsk station.'
+			'She smiles as she replies: "Oh... a few years now. What about you, girl? Why are you working as a cleaner here?"'
+			'You look sad for a moment and tell her about your lack of money: "Times are tough, you know... working here doesn''t pay very well, but in this economy I have to take what I can get."'
+			'She nods, fully understanding your problem. Then her eyes light up: "Oh! You know how there are long-distance trains arriving at the station at 11:00 and 18:00 every day? The station is always packed with tourists then, I bet you could make some good money selling trinkets and baubles to them!"'
+			'When she notices your interest she continues: "There is a warehouse terminal in the northern district of the city, you can buy items there that tourists will like. You can sell them at the station for a good profit... just make sure the police don''t see you, they don''t like it when you sell things without a permit!"'
+			'This sounds interesting! You thank her: "Thanks for the tip, maybe I will! By the way, my name is <<$name>>."'
+			'She smiles as she replies: "Vera Tsarev, pleased to meet you. I have to get back to work now, I''ll be seeing you around!"'
 
 			act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 		end

+ 21 - 17
locations/vokzaltorg

@@ -20,10 +20,10 @@ TorgVokzalTimes += 1
 dom += 1
 gs 'stat'
 '<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/peron.jpg"></center>'
-'You managed vtyuhat <<tovarand>> units of product, while earning <<tovpay>> rubles.'
+'You manage to sell <<tovarand>> trinkets to passengers today, while earning <<tovpay>> rubles.'
 
 $d_kachatprava = {
-	act 'Swing right':
+	act 'Admit you have no permit':
 		cls
 		money = 0
 		tovarL = 0
@@ -32,9 +32,9 @@ $d_kachatprava = {
 		gs'stat'
 
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-		'You have decided to shake their rights, Police responded to what is to be expected, you dragged to the police, Money seized and confiscated goods. Once you promuryzhili two o`clock, you still released.'
+		'You decide to come clean to them, and admit you don''t have the required papers. The policemen do what you expected. They take you to the police station and confiscate all of your money and items, even the money that you didn''t earn by selling souvenirs. You try to object, but they don''t listen and tell you you''re lucky to not end up in jail for this. After two hours and a stern talking-to about the importance of permits, you''re free to go. You feel terrible.'
 
-		act 'Escape':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
+		act 'Leave the police station':minut += 1 & gt'vokzalGin'
 	end
 }
 
@@ -42,46 +42,50 @@ act 'Leave':
 	cls
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-	'Near the platform you are already waiting for the police. "breach? Trade without proper papers?"'
+	'Two police officers had been keeping an eye on you while you were trying to sell your goods, and when you move to leave the platform they approach you. Captain Katalkin says: "Excuse me miss, we saw you were attempting to sell items to passengers. Do you have the proper permits for that? We need to see your papers."'
 
 	if money >= 500:
-		act 'Pay (500 rubles)':
+		act 'Bribe them (500 rubles)':
 			cls
 			money -= 500
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-			'you paid 500 rubles police. He took the money and immediately lost interest to you.'
+			'You smile at them: "Permits, officer? Of course I have the permits, one moment..."'
+			'You look around and, when you''re sure the coast is clear, stick out your hand with a 500 rubles note in it.'
+			'The police officers smile at you and quickly take the money before they walk away: "I see everything''s in order. Have a nice day, miss."'
 
 			act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 		end
 	end
 
-	act 'Persuade to forgive':
+	act 'Beg him to forgive you':
 		cls
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-		'You started to persuade police captain forgive you and release.'
+		'You show him your best innocent face and say: "Please sir, times are tough! I''ll get the permit, I''m sorry! Please let me go, I promise it won''t happen again!"'
 
 		if katalkinSexOnce = 0:
 			schtraf = 500
-			'Captain grinned "Come then now the Department. there shall understand."'
+			'Captain Katalkin grins at you: "We''ll see... come with me to the police station, we''ll have to have a little chat about this."'
 
-			act 'Go to the police':minut += 5 & katalkinNoexit = 1 & gt 'katalkin'
+			act 'Go to the police station':minut += 5 & katalkinNoexit = 1 & gt 'katalkin'
 		else
 			if katalkinSexDay+7 >= daystart:
-				'The captain grinned "You again? OK, go on then, run along."'
+				'Captain Katalkin recognizes you and grins, remembering his recent adventures with you: "You again? Well okay, go on then, run along."'
 
-				act 'Leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
+				act 'Thank him and leave':minut += 1 & gt 'vokzalGin'
 			elseif katalkinSexDay + 7 < daystart:
-				'The captain frowned "You haven''t been to see me in a long time, are you avoiding me?"'
+				'Captain Katalkin suddenly recognizes you and frowns: "<<$name>>? You haven''t come to see me in a long time... I thought we had an agreement. Are you avoiding me?"'
 
-				act 'No, what do you, simply no':
+				act 'No you haven''t!':
 					cls
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/qwest/vokzal/katalkin.jpg"></center>'
-					'You started arguing opravdyvatsya, that you just do not have enough time. captain grinned "Come then now the Department. Carry out bodily searches."'
+					'You blurt out a mixture of protests and apologies: "No sir! I''ve just been busy, that''s all... I''m sorry."'
+					'Captain Katalkin''s face brightens: "We can fix that. You''re coming with me to the police station now. I think I need to perform a thorough cavity search, to make sure you''re not smuggling anything."'
+					'He firmly puts his hand on your shoulder, and begins to walk towards the police station.'
 
-					act 'Go to the police':minut += 5 & katalkinNoexit = 1 & gt 'katalkin'
+					act 'Blush and let him guide you':minut += 5 & katalkinNoexit = 1 & gt 'katalkin'
 				end
 			end
 		end